VN - Ren'Py - Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    marspig

    Not surprisingly, the supporting role (Cindy) is more beautiful than the heroine (Lena), haha...
    I hope Cindy will have more plots in the future...So far, only nude photos have been taken.

    What I don't like about this game is the dual perspective, I only like the only MC perspective.
    This kind of gameplay that can control other characters does not have a good sense of substitution, and it feels like you are playing with yourself...Think about the male lead is you, and the female lead is also you. Actually, the person you want to fuck is yourself?

    I also hate the heroine's perspective. I don't like the erotic game where MC is a woman...The reason should be understood by many people...be fucked.
    Although I don't let Lena be fucked by men other than MC in this game, I still don't like this kind of NTR.

    According to my feelings, I should give 3 stars, but I am so obsessed with Cindy, she is so charming, I give 1 more star for a total of 4 stars.
    Likes: zebze
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    Peter020

    Quality stuff and deserves a rating from me. Absolutely love the graphics in the game, dashboard is slick, just like the gameplay and options. Music fit the scenes well and no annoying SFX. Just a game I actually do play. The game does not feel rushed like most games on this website. well done developers!
  3. 3.00 star(s)

    libertypics

    This is a weird one, it's a bit personal preference, if it was a 10 point scale it'd be a 7 not a 6.
    I do really like the art in this game and the plot and the rest, it's got good qualities. I get the higher ratings.
    My main issue is it's going for a level of complexity and effort that's higher than I think makes a game with fap'ing as a significant goal fun. I do greatly appreciate the walkthrough but at some point it still starts to feel like work to play and track.
    Definitely a YMMV though. Me, I'll just hold out for a convenient cg rip.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    sukasukasubur

    the story of all characters must be further extended because it is interesting to make the MC and FMC a harem, the storyline is good, but it will be even more interesting if the supporting characters are added to make the fans curious of Our Red String. however, it's a good game and i loved it
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    akenedy

    A linear narrative adult dating sim VN with plenty of choices regarding relationships and character development accompanied by an excellently drawn art style.

    The story follows two male and female main characters whose stories are intertwined through their lives and the relationships they form and develop in a true to a real-life setting. The writing and dialogue are very well written but have a slow pace with its slow build-up and character development as well as its realistic approach to depicting and featuring everyday life situations, romance, and simple daily city-life interaction in general.

    Overall a quality adult VN, but it might not suit people who are looking for an overexaggerated quick gratification VN with plenty of pornographic content or simply uninterested in a slow real life-like dating sim visual novel.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    Pointything

    Excellent really enjoyed it. Loved the artwork, the writing, fell in love with very character. Wished there were a little more animations, not just for the sex but during flirting/dancing. Even with all the saves, I still end up choosing to play from the start(4th playthrough now).
    Really loved it(sincerely) waiting for next updates.
    P.s Please don't end the game anytime soon.
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    Sh4ark

    Rated this as good, only because it's not yet finished. If the updates continue to come regularly at such quality it will undoubtedly deserve the excellent mark as much as any other excellent rated game on this site.

    A visual novel for western audiences, with western art and heart. I especially enjoy the dynamic at play between the different characters and how their paths intersect and often intertwine in sometimes predictable but always interesting and exciting fashion.

    A game to follow and a game developer who, i hope, will give us such goodness for a long time to come. Highly recommened. If you are looking for quality content, look no further than EvaKiss' works.
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    EPrometheus

    I did everything in the game before doing this review. (version 0.7 beta)

    I think the differential of Our Red String is the system with two protagonists living at the same time, it ends up providing the same scene sometimes, but in different points of view and honestly I liked this mechanics, The graphics are good and the game adopts the description of movements or situations for the economy of an even greater versatility of images, perhaps this last factor bothers you, but it is not exactly a problem, the protagonists are interesting, as well as their choices have medium consequences, obviously still maintaining some unchanging points . The game performs well the rest of the things it proposes to do and mainly practically has no bugs.

    Below are my grades for each category, where 10 is the highest grade:

    Graphics:
    10;
    History: 10;
    Plot: 9;
    Character development: 10;

    Verdict: It is worth playing, the good work in the execution outweighs the negative points.


    Note: I don't speak English natively, so the text may contain connotation errors.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    echilog

    The last game, has been the only Female protag game I have ever enjoyed, I had alot of choice.
    This game has both, and it really works well. this game again has alot of choice, and great art. this is an actual story and not a quick fuck anything that moves (though you can;D).
    There is quality in this game, even if the genre isn't your style.
  10. 1.00 star(s)

    edit99

    normie tier

    Very slow start, many dumb stereotypes and full of drama that you find in real life. Its like watching a fucking 18+ soap opera. We play these games because we want something different, not the same bullshit we deal with irl.
  11. 4.00 star(s)

    ajsimps

    Played the 0.4 version.

    Gotta say, it feels like a slight step back from GGGB. First the improvements:
    Art and presentation - huge improvement. Looks professional, in-line with actual indie studios that make VN's. I especially like the vibrancy of the colors, and the general aesthetics - very sleek. And of course the character designs are lovely, oozing personality.

    The "Good // Bad // Money" stat system from GGGB has been tweaked and expanded slightly with additional stats, and an extra "spendable" resource called Will - think hero points from RPG's. The system is utilized quite frequently, and helps with immersing yourself as the two playable characters.

    Now, the other half of what makes a good VN - the story I feel is weaker.
    Its still miles better than most of the trash that is found on this site, but measuring ORS against GGGB is unavoidable.
    In ORS the premise is: you (the player) takes the role of two characters, and either guide them into a romantic relationship, or have them hook up with the rest of the cast - or both..?
    As things stand, the story feels very tilted towards the "romance" option, which also means it is a slow burn until things get spicy.

    Trying to play any other ways almost feels as if the game is chastising you. This is especially true for the female character, where you have the option to hook up early with her waiter coworker. The game tries its best (and succeeds) to portray him as a chode, endearing as a sack of potatoes. Then proceeds to lay it on pretty thick, overtly and subversively, that you MADE THE WRONG CHOICE should you pursue that storyline.

    Anyway, the story itself I find is not nearly as interesting as GGGB - which explored trashy D-list celebrity lifestyle, Street gangs, even terrorist groups in third world countries. Subtly critical, poignant, curiously believable?
    In contrast, ORS is about the lives of artsy young adults, and uh... the economy is bad. They're also all either writers, painters, musicians or photographers working low-wage jobs.
    Well, maybe if all of the city's youth didn't end up studying fine arts maybe the economy wouldn't be so bad? We'll probably never know.
    Anyway, Eva Kiss is capable of better.

    I have a feeling the story will pick up as development continues, so I'll definitely revisit my rating once the game nears completion.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    bosp

    I thoroughly enjoyed playing Evas GGGB before this one but... ORS falls into a completely different category.
    ORS by far has the most innovative and exciting approach to VN I have ever seen.
    You are actually playing two opposite characters which, let's say, are on their way to developing very deep intellectual, emotional, and physical relations.
    I have been an alpha male all my life and thanks to my wits and charm I usually always got what I wanted. Years of experience, I hope, gave me a pretty good insight into women's psychology but... playing a woman or actually dating myself, as the game puts me in the two opposing roles, is a real challenge and so far (V 0.4) I really love it.
    Supporting NPCs are well developed and feel like real-life people you can love or hate or just be friends with and the main story progression so far has been very exciting and exquisitely written.
    The visual art style used is far better than in GGGB and right up my alley.
    In the end, once it's finished, I expect ORS to become a new standard for quality VNs.
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    Shakril

    This is one of the best made Stories ever seen on this site. Very fleshed out characters and dialogues. Its probably the first time, i did not try to create a harem and actually help my Friends. This only happens, when you actually care for the characters. So all of you, who are only here for the sex, you will be disappointet. Everybody else will have a avery good Novel at hand.
  14. 5.00 star(s)

    GunnyHighway17

    Love your style. GGGB was excellently written and so is this so far. Love to see that there’s effort put into characters and backstories. Actually makes them seem believable instead of just standard tropes. Glad to see art improve, and looking forward to more!
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Renonymous

    V0.7 update: The story has been tightened up some, in my opinion. There are still moments when the narrative feels a little exposition-dumpy, but overall I'm eagerly awaiting every update and sucked into every character's story. 5/5

    (This review is very early, at v0.3) Tags: Vanilla, slow burn, dating/life sim.

    I'm going to begin with the con because it does stand out. First, when I say this is a slow burn, I mean SLOW. Not only does Our Red String make an effort to establish every character's backstory and current situation before any plot point, sexual or otherwise, takes place, but the establishment itself is excessively wordy. It's not so much a matter of purple prose as it is a matter of showing more than the tip of iceberg, and explaining things that were already adequately implied. However, this will probably be tightened up in later versions.

    With that out of the way, Our Red String does something really cool with its dual protagonists. Each protagonist has their own stats, which means each protagonist develops a unique personality based on those stats. I'm really excited about this because it looks like the player's choices will shape not only whether the characters' actions lead them together, but their compatibility and the type of relationship they'll have.

    In addition to that, there's an awesome story in here about pursuing dreams and falling in love during a delicate time of disillusionment--both institutional and personal. There are deep, established friendships you'll actually care about. Yes, the sex looks pretty vanilla so far, and its kinks and sexual situations feel very similar to Good Girl Gone Bad, but Our Red String has a hell of a story in the works for anyone seeking some legit erotica.
  16. 5.00 star(s)

    pmmephatasses

    Evakiss is doing it again! The art in this game is really well done and the writing is what separates it from every other game. Cringiness is rare and the connections feel realistic. Probably the best part is the endless options and trees available for the player to choose from. It's definitely not easy to write those much less to write them so well. Looking forward for more content
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    BarbeChenue

    **Here's the 0.7 ALPHA Update to my review.**
    If you wish to read my earlier writeups, do so, but I need to make something clear: 5/5 doesn't cut it. I rated this game a perfect note early on, but I can't revise it higher... Chapter 7 is too much of a gamechanger. To keep this review spoiler free: I'll just say the payoff for the narrative buildups is very significant.

    After a few years trying different H-games / VNs / Sex mods, you get jaded by the overused tropes: 1) H-JRPGs (Kagura, etc.) that are essentially variations on the same concepts (the heroine will invariably work in a tavern at some point, seems like); 2) RenPy "harem" VNs full of MILFs / "How I Met My Mother?"; 3) "Trainers" that are reaching for ideas on how to sluttify the female secondary "protag" after they exhausted their initial pitch...

    I don't want to insult other genres too much (to each their kinks), but H-games afficionados become extremely cautious about trying new titles. I played GGGB when it was still in mid development, and I thought it was one of the best. I tried replaying it recently, and it pales in comparison to Our Red String. I expect some of the better elements of GGGB to eventually come to ORS (tattoos, piercings, more clothing options, perhaps haircuts/), but on it's own, ORS is a much more solid foundation, and a much more original take on the genre. To this day, it is the only H-game I recommend to my friends shamelessly, regardless of gender. I talked about it to both my ex and to my best friend who teaches in university, both women.

    The downside with great games, is that they make it hard to go back to other titles. There a quite a few other good VNs out there, but none of them do it for me like ORS does. It is a mature game for people who enjoy their porn with interesting drama. EvaKiss deserves my utmost respect.

    Older reviews:
    While this review is done based on v0.3 ALPHA, this game is bound to become one of my Top 10 favorite H-games (based on 300+ games tried). I was already enamored with GGGB, the art is much better in this one, and while I am not a huge fan of male protagonist games in general (I play mostly female protag.), this one is really stimulating. ;) Playing both sides of a linked story is something I haven't seen that much before.

    I'll update the review based on future releases. :)

    v0.5 ALPHA Update: I'll definitely have to try and add more to my review of this game. I find myself coming back to look for updates of this title more frequently than I usually look for. I've played so many games, yet this is the only one in which I have legitimately had such strong emotional reactions to the characters. It's partly a matter of taste, because while I like un-relatable bimboification stories where people get slutified by cosmic rays or space parasites, it's fun to read a story that *could happen* to people around you.
  18. 4.00 star(s)

    SteelyDan14

    It's still early to give this 5 stars, but I did anyway because this VN is really good. While I liked EvaKiss's other game, I was not a huge fan of the character. The characters in this game, however, have drawn me in. For example, I normally can take or leave the NTRish aspects in games and am not usually bothered when a female character breaks from their love interest, but man, I found myself really feeling all angsty when Lana was with other dudes. It will be interesting moving forward to see how I play it.

    The writing is as good as her other game and the story is solid. I like that the women have brains as well as looks and you can direct them according. Not all the guys are cocky bastards, but they are not all perfect gentlemen either.

    My only cons are that the BBC characters always seem to be players and hung up on their size and think all women will swoon over them yada yada yada. I like BBC scenes, but the portrayal of the guys just seems stereotypical and easy. There are couple other things I have issues with, but it is too early to make judgements on them as the story needs to develop more.

    If you are into story driven games/VNs then this is a good one. There are plenty of paths; if you want to avoid NTR, you can. If you don't mind a little, you can do that as well. If you want to be pure as the driven snow, you have that option as well. It will be interesting to see how the story plays out.

    UPDATE: As of version 0.6, I am dropping a star. SPOILERS TO FOLLOW.

    Lena has obviously been kinky in the past. Some of the things she hinted at with Alex leads one to believe she was a submissive and into some form of BDSM so we know there more there than the girl next door. At the same time, she seems to have "seen the light" so to speak and is obviously looking for something more than the shallow relationship she had with Alex. So it's odd to me that she can go from having a flirty, sexting with Ian and immediately go into thinking about Mike, Robert and Alex (if she kept the photos) all in the same scene.

    The whole Mike thing bothers me anyway. I like that Lena can opt out because she was on the other end of the cheating previously, but if she opts in, she seriously opts in and basically is belittling the GF. While this makes for a hot scene, it does not fit the character of Lena.

    For my money, if she is seeing Ian regularly, then her desire/thoughts for the other guys should be going down. At the very least, there should be some impact to her dialogue where she start questioning all the guys. There should be some drama there. Should she continue seeing other guys? How does she really feel about Ian?

    Up until that point, it seemed to be fine, but suddenly Lena turns into supper slut. Just dissapointed.
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    1st

    O.R.S. is really a bread&butter of EvaKiss - great art style, high attention to details, almost perfect narration and of course involving story full of kinks.
    Those familiar with previous EvaKiss projects will surely find many similiarities because the influence is strong. However, there's also a lot of new stuff - new game offers more complex character advancement (by stats and skills) and multiple protagonist system.
    I truly recommend this one, it's very addictive! ;)
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    deluges

    Already has the potential to be way better than Eva's previous game, GGGB.

    Pros

    Very well written characters. There's eight female characters (so far), excluding one of the protagonists and they all feel unique. There's individual quirks and personality to all of them. The same goes for the men. There's nuance here which is greatly appreciated.

    The female protagonist doesn't start the game off as a prude or a slut, but rather someone who is very liberal in how she views sex and her body. With her insecurities shed it makes her potential corruption far more believable because she never really had that many hangups to begin with, it's more like reconciling with the fact that "Hey, maybe I'm a slut now and that's okay."

    It feels like a story of normal people. Most of the women are gorgeous but the characters are relatable and seem like people that one might have in their circle of friends.

    I'm a fan of this art style, and at first I thought this was a knock-off of GGGB until I saw who the developer was and got instantly excited.

    A very believable at work sexual harassment subplot. This is par for the course with corruption games but it's handled very tactfully here where her boss uses his power to his advantage, in a subtle way, so our heroine going along with it makes absolute sense from a self-preservation standpoint. It's not blackmail, but leveraging, which is a thing that definitely happens in real life.

    Quite a bit of gameplay for it only being in chapter two.

    RPG-esque skill unlocks. Choosing specific responses increases ones aptitude in something such as Charisma, Wit, Athletics and Lust. So far I'm not really sure how these factor in, though, but it's a foundation for... something.

    Your choices absolutely do have consequences.

    *The two protag approach is interesting.

    Limbo

    Definitely seeds here for some heavy ntr despite that not being included among the tags. It seems avoidable but it depends on your choices. For instance, if you choose not to pursue one girl, your friend will, but if you pursue her how will that affect your relationship with the other protagonist? It feels like a slippery slope. Be forewarned if ntr takes you to your sad place.

    Cons

    *The game is really pushing for the two protags to be involved romantically. Even if you try to pick the worst responses when interacting with the other character they'll still think about the missed opportunity or whatever and it took me awhile before the female protag was like "Maybe I don't care about this guy at all."

    I'm not really a fan of male protag games because so many seem like wish-fulfillment more than anything else, while this game isn't that since it's far more grounded in reality, I still find myself not caring about the male character in this game even if he seems fine enough. If I have the option to make his life miserable though, I will relish in that and turn this con into a pro. I do, oddly enough, like his camaraderie with his friends as it feels really organic.

    Depending on how you play there's not a whole lot of sexual content so far. I chose stupid things for the guy and slutty options for the girl and there were two scenes for her, both of which were with the same character.

    Summation

    Very, very strong potential. Excellent writing, which is great since there's not much sex! The two character system is a nice concept, though I wish they weren't so dependent upon each other. Can't wait for the next update and honestly, I'll probably go be a Patron of this game because I believe in it, and the developer.