VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 ALPHA] [Eva Kiss]

[Baka!]

I suppose that not everyone will agree with me but despite the fact that this version 0.1 is very well structured and is very enjoyable, this hardly lets the player take the course of the story, the game forces the thoughts of Ian and Lena without you can decide what their thoughts are, it is very simple, for example, in the scene where Lena asks Ian if he likes that book, the player should choose how he/she wants Lena to think about Ian, however Lena has established thoughts :/

 

[SpikeZg]

Was disappointed Ash wasn't a virgin. Now this girl Lena is a stripper/pornstar? WTF? Why can't we have a nun as MC?

wut?

 

[Master Duck79]

when do you think the next update will be out ... i cant wait to play the next one

 

[Brickman]

Was disappointed Ash wasn't a virgin. Now this girl Lena is a stripper/pornstar? WTF? Why can't we have a nun as MC?

I hope you were being sarcastic lol I personally hate those games where the girl acts like a nun, where she knows nothing about sex and is constantly worried about showing a bit too much thigh or cleavage. Maybe it has it's appeal if you're into games like DMD but seeing a MILF acting like a 12 year old virgin in just absurd. In this case I find it interesting that Lena is a young girl who embraces her sexuality without being depicted as a slut (until we get a say on that hehe). She just feels like a real 23 year old girl

 

[Brickman]

when do you think the next update will be out ... i cant wait to play the next one

GGGB had monthly updates so I'd expect the same for ORS

 

[Lord Nux]

This is Ivy right?
Jeremy is one lucky SOB

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I think so, too, but where is her tattoo?

 

[Baka!]

By the way, am I the only one who thinks that this game maybe could have cuckquean? I mean, Mr. Van Dyke has always wanted to have a son, Mrs. Van Dyke seems very submissive and motherly but cannot have babies... Would that woman be willing to accept that her husband has a lover? would she allow her husband to have a baby with another woman? Maybe not, damn, my Lena is probably going to destroy that marriage

 

[DatBoit]

I hope you were being sarcastic lol I personally hate those games where the girl acts like a nun, where she knows nothing about sex and is constantly worried about showing a bit too much thigh or cleavage. Maybe it has it's appeal if you're into games like DMD but seeing a MILF acting like a 12 year old virgin in just absurd. In this case I find it interesting that Lena is a young girl who embraces her sexuality without being depicted as a slut (until we get a say on that hehe). She just feels like a real 23 year old girl

Completely agree. That Lena starts off as she does is probably what I liked the most from this first version. Nude model, friends with Ivy, you can already imagine all the hot action that could happen.

As you say, while and innocent virgin can work in some game, I just find that type of character so much more unappealing. It's something about their insecurity and lack of confidence that make them less likable.

 

[Brickman]

I think so, too, but where is her tattoo?

The picture is taken in front of a mirror, so her tattoo is in the other arm I'd say

 

[21ohiokid]

I know it's not for everyone but I do hope Eva introduces an incest subplot at some point (Chapter 1 mentions Lena's father and set up some antagonism between Lena and her mother). Even if she doesn't though, this game looks great so far. Exciting cast of new characters.

As for the 2 protagonists thing, I thought it was interesting and fun, but I'm curious to see how it will work when you get into the different branching paths. It looks like the too protagonists are sort of destined to be together, but the way as I was playing it I was setting them each up with different people. If you send each of them down a different route, I wonder how the Ian-Lena interactions will be handled in the future. It seems like it would create two totally separate games.

 

[SpikeZg]

I think so, too, but where is her tattoo?

i guess other arm & she also has a tattoo on her leg

This slutty hoe Lena already decided to pose nude for money without consulting the player. What's next? Maybe in version 0.2 she will become a callgirl without my permission?

so you were serious about your post after all
Lena is 23, girls her age do stuff nowdays, they work, fuck, go out, have fun, it's a normal life

I am happy that both MC's had previous relationships and they know what sex is, the game becomes more realistic and it doesn't treat a player like some stupid horny kid who is used to games that have a MC that looks like he is 10 and has a dick like a horse and fucks everything that moves, including his whole family

Am i happy that she does nude photoshoots and let 15+ people draw her naked for money? Fuck NO!
i would like if i had the option to choose but i didn't...
We the player are thrown at a stage of their life with the choices they already made so this is just a beginning of their story

 

[trippleK]

Isn't this dev like super fast with updates?

 

[SpikeZg]

Isn't this dev like super fast with updates?

once a month

 

[Windowsigh]

In regards to Lena posing naked, there is a line between being body positive and being a slut. "Good" Ash was much the same way before too long in GGGB, and she was 4-ish years Lena's junior.

Given the fact that Lena already has the option to be too embarrassed do admit to the nude modeling to Dad-boss Van Dyke, sacrificing a potential charisma skill buff in the process, it may be possible to play her as comfy with tasteful nudes, but compartmentalizing that part of her life like a regular person.

 

[SpikeZg]

If Lena works two jobs and has two other side gigs to earn extra money to pay for her father's medical bills, that's OK i guess
also, she lives in a flat with two other people that pay rent, she doesn't have to work two jobs or strip just to pay her rent

 

[Princess Groundhog]

The only pretty unrealistic thing for me was a seeings two beautiful and sexy girls sharing a place with a guy. Sure, he keeps mostly to himself in his room and works from home, but then in one scene he's walking around in his underwear! And Lana is walking in her underwear with him around too. And it doesn't sound like they're super close friends. A little weird, but hey it's just a story.

 

[Brickman]

The only pretty unrealistic thing for me was a seeings two beautiful and sexy girls sharing a place with a guy. Sure, he keeps mostly to himself in his room and works from home, but then in one scene he's walking around in his underwear! And Lana is walking in her underwear with him around too. And it doesn't sound like they're super close friends. A little weird, but hey it's just a story.

Well she does nude photo shoots so I guess walking around the house with panties and a tshirt is no big deal for her, maybe the morals vary from country to country but considering how many girls show ass pictures on instagram nowadays I don't find it hard to believe at all

 

[SpikeZg]

we live in a f*** weird world man, you can be a good looking girl and make millions and never leave your house/flat
one of the girls who is on onlyfans platform made 200k $ just in february this year, and the girl is just 20 years old, crazy stuff

 

[Xill]

I think Lena being able to go nude this early is one of those new things Eva wanted to try. I mean, why go the Ashley route? So I guess, having two protagonists and the female protagonist having low inhibition is a new approach. Maybe in her next game we will have a male protagonist that starts as a mafia boss that fucks multiple times a day and you will get the option to make him a "good" guy. That certainly counts as trying something new.

 

[Xill]

we live in a f*** weird world man, you can be a good looking girl and make millions and never leave your house/flat
one of the girls who is on onlyfans platform made 200k $ just in february this year, and the girl is just 20 years old, crazy stuff

600 years ago that would get you a nice date with the hangman/trip to the pyre.