VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[dontcarewhateverno]

Our Red String uses its own music. You can find it in the music folder. You'll have to unren it first.

Sound advice on unren with music folder. But I think ORS has only one or two commissioned tracks. All the rest are generic, free-use, royalty-free songs you hear in the same VNs throughout this site and itch.io

I hate them all. lol. Especially "Chillin at Ian's Place" or "Jeremy's Jive" whatever the real name is when the Ian gang is doing a livingroom hangout. But at least they're appropriate for the scenes.

 

[King Tommen]

Sound advice on unren with music folder. But I think ORS has only one or two commissioned tracks. All the rest are generic, free-use, royalty-free songs you hear in the same VNs throughout this site and itch.io

I hate them all. lol. Especially "Chillin at Ian's Place" or "Jeremy's Jive" whatever the real name is when the Ian gang is doing a livingroom hangout. But at least they're appropriate for the scenes.

That's called 'perrys_theme'. It's supposed to be anoying
And, yes you're right. When playing the very first track 'calm' I recognized it from a documentary (it's called Isolated by Kevin MacLeod ). In my defence I immediately disable music when I start any game.
But generally the music is pretty nice. Just listen to the main theme, 'hollys_theme' or aforementioned 'calm'.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

But generally the music is pretty nice.

Agree with all but this part. lol. Imagine paying $10+ bucks to see a band and they kick it off with "Rock Theme". Well, I'd laugh my ass off and clap for the inside joke of it, but if Eva's game never existed you've basically gone in for on-hold/elevator music. Then the headliner Lowest Common Denominator hits the stage with their hit Irreverant, Guitar-Led Dance Theme With Synthetic Hint Of Urban Appeal. "Shut up! - And Get Down" - *record starts to scratch for watered-down hip-hop cross-marketing*.

 

[Bom969]

The only issue is: in order to have a cliffhanger for Ian, you must play with him before the end of the chapter. Looking at the way the development was done until now, we can assume that in chapter 10 you will play with Ian first and after that with Lena. Sure, Eva could mix Ian and Lena story or she could simply add one more scene at the end, but I hope she won't go on that route. Changing the story or adding even more stuff than it was initially planned will only drag the development for a longer period of time.


I think it is too soon for Allison to get pregnant. We know that she took the plan B after the last date. Even if you sleep with her again in this chapter, there should be at least 2-3 weeks between that point and the one where she thinks about a pregnancy test. Also, we don't know if there will still be a time skip in the story. If it is, I doubt that Eva will want Ian to have a kid with Allison after the time skip. The story will end there for Ian.

Gillian could be this chapter plot twist, but even if she is Mike gf, why would she go back to Ian that fast? I also don't think there is any reason for Ivy to blackmail Ian. There is nothing that she can gain from that.

It can be something like Allison saying she has missed her periods and that she might be pregnant. Ian reacts surprised to it and then Alison says she was just joking...

 

[RonWeasleyJr]

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*

 

[BloodyMares]

It can be something like Allison saying she has missed her periods and that she might be pregnant. Ian reacts surprised to it and then Alison says she was just joking...

Well, cliffhanger for Ian is possible even if his part comes before Lena's. If you remember correctly, Chapter 1 had a sort of cliffhanger where he saw Lena naked for the first time in the gallery, and Chapter 2 picked up right from that moment.

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

What do you mean by "involved"? He simply participated in a fan-art contest and Eva loved his renders based on the game. Not sure if tribute counts as being involved.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*

Yeah I checked the renders he made and they give off some bad vibes but I don't think he is involved in the game.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*

I still don’t understand what the problem is and what Eva should be afraid of.

 

[phantomz]

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*

So what !?
You know porn is all about sexual fantasy ?

 

[KristopheH]

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*

You do realize he's not actually involved in the game's development, right? Eva's just sharing some of his GGGB fanart.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*

Oh nO!?!?!? You mean to tell me some guy spent his own money supporting artists he enjoyed, in order to create content he also enjoyed?!? And through an honest exchange of currency!?!?!

DONE! He's D.O.N.E. And so are YOU Eva, if you're reading this. (She's been known to get paid to draw things people like, too).

Seriously, though. People with your attitude are one of the reasons culture sucks so bad right now. Do you feel some sort of self-worth or power trying to cancel others, or is it the rush and pats on the back from the grandstanding?

 

[JohnnyKiss]

So what !?
You know porn is all about sexual fantasy ?

Yes, we know that but the renders in question are about drugging and raping someone which, as far as I am aware, was never part of either GGGB or ORS so I can see why people would be off-put by it or by the idea of this person being involved with the game.

Luckily, this person isn't involved so there is nothing to worry about.

 

[dolfe67]

Yes, we know that but the renders in question are about drugging and raping someone which, as far as I am aware, was never part of either GGGB or ORS so I can see why people would be off-put by it or by the idea of this person being involved with the game.

Luckily, this person isn't involved so there is nothing to worry about.

Never played the drug/thug route in GGGB? It's not straight-up rape but it's borderline content

 

[phantomz]

Yes, we know that but the renders in question are about drugging and raping someone which, as far as I am aware, was never part of either GGGB or ORS so I can see why people would be off-put by it or by the idea of this person being involved with the game.

Luckily, this person isn't involved so there is nothing to worry about.

You already answered yourself , those things are just bunch of renders .
In GGGB she does drug and works with drug dealers . So you shouldn't play that game .

There's million of game about killing other ppl like call of duty , flashpoint , ghost recon.

Or game like tencho you can chop off your enemies head or GTA you can kill all those innocent npc .

But No one cares about those things bcuz this is just a game , no one going to do that to other ppl in reality bcuz he played those game.

Of course there are some crazy ppl out there who might do this , but the games or renders should not be blamed.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

You already answered yourself , those things are just bunch of renders .
In GGGB she does drug and works with drug dealers . So you shouldn't play that game .

There's million of game about killing other ppl like call of duty , flashpoint , ghost recon.

Or game like tencho you can chop off your enemies head or GTA you can kill all those innocent npc .

But No one cares about those things bcuz this is just a game , no one going to do that to other ppl in reality bcuz he played those game.

Of course there are some crazy ppl out there who might do this , but the games or renders should not be blamed.

Are you guys not reading what I wrote, lol?

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Never played the drug/thug route in GGGB? It's not straight-up rape but it's borderline content

Neither games have "Rape" tag so I don't think there is a point in indulging this debate.

 

[Tulrek]

Yes, we know that but the renders in question are about drugging and raping someone which, as far as I am aware, was never part of either GGGB or ORS so I can see why people would be off-put by it or by the idea of this person being involved with the game.

Luckily, this person isn't involved so there is nothing to worry about.

Yes, Arthur drugged Ashley that night and had sex with her, which can be linked to rape.
When the drug dealer blackmailed her to hurt Eric if she didn't come and he had sex with him, that can be tied to rape.

And there is drugs all over GGGB, she can be addicted or even the head of a gang dealing drug so...

Finally, I think Eva would have objected first, but no, she advertised it, so it should be fine.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Yes, Arthur drugged Ashley that night and had sex with her, which can be linked to rape.
When the drug dealer blackmailed her to hurt Eric if she didn't come and he had sex with him, that can be tied to rape.

And there is drugs all over GGGB, she can be addicted or even the head of a gang dealing drug so...

Finally, I think Eva would have objected first, but no, she advertised it, so it should be fine.

Again, neither games have "Rape" tag so I don't know why you are trying to argue for it. None of those situations are even similar to what happens in the renders.

 

[helioss555]

When did this happen?! I think you have him confused with someone else.

I think that was before the remastered version, you can either tell him off and he will leave immediately or just let him watch for a bit, he jerks off and disappears. and then he leaves some of his jizz on the floor, I haven't played the remastered version just yet so I didn't know they changed it. but I'm 100% sure I'm not making this up

 

[helioss555]

Cross Jeremy and Mike off this list and I can agree with you. I do not condemn people for cheating, this is their own business.
But you're right that a lot of the characters are annoying. I think the reason is that Evea made them real and living people with their own shortcomings and personality traits. It's better if she made them perfect stereotypical collective images. Then we would have nothing to discuss here.
The characters are controversial and that's good - I can draw conclusions about Eva's high writing talent.
As for Perry - he is very annoying and often acts like an asshole, I can criticize his behavior a lot. See now? Thanks to Eva's quality work, we all have different opinions about the characters and have a lot to talk about.

it's a very solid game for sure.