VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[Dom Toretto]

So chapter 12 won't be out till next year really

 

[Xupuzulla]

And less Stan content with anyone. You've played yourself.

Jeremy and/or Marcel making that boring geek Holly a BLACKED member is a win in my book so is all cool.

 

[mommysboiii]

EvaKiss Is a dude?!
That's a very hairy hand lol

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who cares??? I mean there are women that have hands like this and even lets imagine she is a man or trans

who cares???? the game is all that I care about and the drawings,erotic writting ,kinks ,story,cheracters are all 10/10 just need more kinkynes and corruption down the line but the game is almost perfect depends on the later chapters

I dont care how he/she looks or lifes or any of that thing so I never understand why so many people are obsessed with that LOL

F the cat

 

[SerHawkes]

Jeremy and/or Marcel making that boring geek Holly a BLACKED member is a win in my book so is all cool.

Yeah... cause that totally going to happen... Chances of that being Ed's content getting restored and cheating on Molly with Lena, which are zero.

 

[-DarkHorizon-]

Holly hooking up with Marcel is probably gonna happen if she's not in a relationship with Ian/Lena or has been corrupted, although it's way off in the future.

 

[mommysboiii]

Jeremy and/or Marcel making that boring geek Holly a BLACKED member is a win in my book so is all cool.

fuck holly or cindy in blacked.com WOW but how would cindy end in a bbc gangbang or holly would be interesting especilly if they are in a relationship with ian

but they would be very corrupted at that point in the story

 

[BlandChili]

There is literally no other reason for Marcel to continue to exist in the story, if it's not to have content with Holly. His only reference material is with her, right? Correct me if I'm wrong but I don't think Lena even, a female player character, has an option to have as much as a passing thought about him sexually.

Not that I'd be entirely opposed to getting something like that. Since almost all Lena's male options have baggage of one kind or another it'd almost be refreshing to pursue Marcel, assuming he won't have any baggage of his own. Knowing Eva the only Lena/Marcel content would probably be to cuck Holly horribly or something like that...

Mark still being available to Holly even when you do the romantic route with Lena has me curious to see if that's intentional though.

 

[ffive]

Mark still being available to Holly even when you do the romantic route with Lena has me curious to see if that's intentional though.

That's one of a few bugs which affected Holly's routes, iirc. Is it still present in the most recent version of the update?

 

[mommysboiii]

Holly hooking up with Marcel is probably gonna happen if she's not in a relationship with Ian/Lena or has been corrupted, although it's way off in the future.

no no no in a relationship fully corrupted and than goes in the disco toilet with bbc

 

[MF_DOOM]

EvaKiss Is a dude?!
That's a very hairy hand lol

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Did you just assume her gender you bigot?

 

[Alphaeboy]

Ian/Minerva at the hotel
Ian/Alison on the trip
Ian/Alison/Jeremy threesome
Ian/Cindy at her place
Ian/Cindy at his place
Lena/Louise/Jeremy threesome
Ian/Lena footjob and denial
Ian/Cherry at her place
Ian/Emma when Perry calls
Ian/Holly Chapter 11

Not directly. Maybe someone got knoched up but it isn't confirmed. Lena, Holly and Cindy briefly mention taking the pill and doing it raw.
The most likeliest contender is Alison who very likely got impregnated either unwillingly or willingly.


10 are a bit much, most scenes are pretty basic.

Ian/Cindy Blazer due to the build-up and tension.
Lena/Axel for similar reasons and Lena's reaction at getting dominated and relapsing. Bonus points if she is in love with Ian.
Chapter 11 Alison if Ian never dated her and is with Lena/Holly. The cheating aspect and Alisons willingness to seduce Ian is ramping up high, especially with the implied impregnation.
Ian/Holly Hotel for my occasional need for wholesomeness (and even then I can Ian threat Holly like a fuckdoll).
Gillian dream, mostly for what's more to come.

Here are some which I can remember at the moment:

1. IanxIvy will be here when we get it!
2. Alley sex with Cindy(1st one)
3. Emma's blowjob while Perry was on phone call
4. Cindy CH11 sex scene
5. Lena CH11 sex scene (Dom Ian + footjob)
6. Emma's WC tease while Perry was banging on door(" IAN, YOU DONE DUDE! Don't tell me you're constipated!")
7. Holly's CH11 sex scene (That tongue game she learned from Ivy!)
8. Lena's WC blowjob on Ivy's birthday
9. Minerva's phone call sex scene (it's 2nd one with her in her office iirc)
10. Minerva's Hotel sex scene
11. Holly's 1st sex scene in Hotel (I love romantic scenes too)

alison/jeremy/ian in a relationship with ian agrees to a threesome and dosent get it up and the gillian his love of his life nightmare dream by FARRRR no competition for this 2 at all hope we see way more kinkier and more corruption in the future especially for relationships gillian,cindy,aslion,holly this scenes are way better and so HOT

holly corruption is hot too but dosent scratch the itch for me because she is until now always single so not really hot for me its just a single women has fun but would be way better if a lucky couple person that is like ian is the best turns in a long run into a brainless slut would be way hotter downfall

All the cindy scenes are 10/10

Don't feel like listing all of them out, but any lesbian scenes with Lena would be my top picks followed by anything with Cindy or Cherry. My favourites are the ones with Lena and Holly in private, the Ivy and Louise scenes are good too, but I prefer the intimacy between those two.

Hard to say since I like them all. Least favorites or least interest in ig would be Lena/Ian vanilla and anything to do with Stan

Thank you all who answered me here's my list and my thoughts:

10. Ian and Alison: I don't know they never got me off or turned me on that much.
9. Lena and Stan
8. Lena Blowing on Ivy's Birthday, it's hotter with the detail of the outfit you wear when you're wearing different outfits the guys in the bathroom comment on each different one.
7. All Emma Scenes want more of her and her thick ass.
6. Ian and Boss
5. Lena and Louise: The Dom and Sub are hot as hell, but damn Louise is so thirsty for some affection. Even rejecting or not she's always like "You probably won't care if I leave" I'm like girl it's not always about your shit.
4. Lena, Holly, and Ivy scenes
3. Lena and Jeremy- I think it's because I'm black and it turns me to seeing her thrust BBC. The first scene was hot as fuck but damn that sex scene when he took her to Poundtown was fucking 100/10.
2. Lena and Holly scenes: It's more passionate when Lena has sex with Holly than Louise.
1. Ian and Cindy on Wade's Birthday- I'm not ashamed and not the only one to admit that I got off too many times on this scene.

 

[lucadiadis]

Keep on mind you don't have to confess this fantasy in Ch.7 -- you get another opportunity in Ch.8 during "girl's night out" with Ivy and Holly, at Ivy's apartment.

Oh ok I will try that, many thanks.

 

[lucadiadis]

Louise can break up with Jeremy after that party at which point I think you get a second try to initiate Lena/Louise. I haven't played that particular route myself, so I am unsure if there are other requirements for it to happen.

Many thanks. Does anyone know how to reach that route by any chance ?

 

[Doppelgang]

There is literally no other reason for Marcel to continue to exist in the story, if it's not to have content with Holly. His only reference material is with her, right? Correct me if I'm wrong but I don't think Lena even, a female player character, has an option to have as much as a passing thought about him sexually.

Not that I'd be entirely opposed to getting something like that. Since almost all Lena's male options have baggage of one kind or another it'd almost be refreshing to pursue Marcel, assuming he won't have any baggage of his own. Knowing Eva the only Lena/Marcel content would probably be to cuck Holly horribly or something like that...

Mark still being available to Holly even when you do the romantic route with Lena has me curious to see if that's intentional though.

I think you’re right about Lena not thinking about him at any point. But when she goes to Blazer with Louise around Chapter 5, their interaction with him leads to Louise afterwards saying something like “Was he really flirting with you?” During that brief encounter he definitely shows Lena more interest than Louise, but then again he’s shown Holly more interest than Lena ever since.

Eva also confirmed that we’ll be interacting “quite a bit” with him in the Epilogue. And considering the Epilogue covers the day Lena will be working there, I’m guessing Holly might not be present. But the interaction could still be about Holly, of course.

 

[jimul18]

Have some shame buddy.

I acknowledged and totally get that it is painful to lose a pet. This was not my point, my point is that there has been mostly radio silence about progress for over a month, "weekly updates" as the thumbnail of the post suggest are to update, let's ignore the "weekly" aspect going back for the majority of the year and beyond. If you want, I am suggesting that this pattern of long stretches before updates of the game, interspersed with...let's call the excuses is problematic and discouraging.

Nice one. You just had to ignore the part about the writing being 80 % done, the art almost done, and be a total dickhead to get across the predictable and not-based-on-reality point that EvA iS a LaZy MiLkEr. Keep up the good work!

I did not ignore that part but if you want to celebrate and get excited about writing being 80% done and art being (vaguely) almost done, for an epiloge of an episode that was release in its core parts over two month ago, by all means. Mind you that the epilogue was supposed to contain one day from one of the main characters p.o.v. (Friday for Lena). Following that logic the one, maybe two episode per year cycle is the new benchmark.

About the "be a total dickhead" and "EK is a milker" insinuation, you might be projecting there, I did not suggest anything of the sort. Pateron is for patronizing the art, I have been a patron of EK before, I stopped because I didn't like the direction of the workflow/process because I felt it would not be sustainable to the expectations of the early parts of ORS (let alone GGGB) as far as actual artistic output is concerned. It delivers in terms of giving endless oportunity for speculation and discussions about characters, there backstories and future storylines here.

 

[BlandChili]

Eva also confirmed that we’ll be interacting “quite a bit” with him in the Epilogue. And considering the Epilogue covers the day Lena will be working there, I’m guessing Holly might not be present. But the interaction could still be about Holly, of course.

Given that Lena can go for Mark herself, under certain circumstances, it seems almost given that she could have a go at Marcel. I'm all for it personally, more casual hookups are nice, just wish there'd be a female option of that nature in there too. That chick with the short hair really threw my hopes into a spin, before I knew she was a cameo.

That's one of a few bugs which affected Holly's routes, iirc. Is it still present in the most recent version of the update?

In my save it is, but I can't recall if it was an alpha save I reloaded or if I played through the whole game when I got the final version again.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

EvaKiss Is a dude?!
That's a very hairy hand lol

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Gotta admit, I downloaded to zoom in. (Then googled: hair female hands).

Who knows, though. Even women have peach fuzz to varying degrees & it's not like it makes a difference in the game.

One thing's for sure. When I start my GirlDev Patreon under SamanthaSmooches, I won't be posting any undoctored hand photos to be trolled by you all in the comments.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

I did another playthrough with Ian going full scumbag, sleeping with wade's girl, perry's crush, slut shaming Lena sleeping with allison for the hell of it, pure chaos

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

I did another playthrough with Ian going full scumbag, sleeping with wade's girl, perry's crush, slut shaming Lena sleeping with allison for the hell of it, pure chaos

Huh? Is there any other way?

 

[rev33]

Many thanks. Does anyone know how to reach that route by any chance ?

Don't let Lena jerk Jeremy off (need 1 willpoint iirc)
Ivy will do it instead, and they will have a big fight over it