VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[SerHawkes]

Lena is lezzing in my every path. Ivy is obvious. I would go for Emma now too. Male NPC's for Lena are just trash.

Aside for Ian, all the other dudes are assholes. Robert Blackmailing lena for a waistress job? Fuck off dude, go suck a fat dick. Jeremy one pump chump bbc? eh... he can choke on his own dick for all i care, he need EK help to get laid.

Preach.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Jeremy one pump chump bbc? eh... he can choke on his own dick for all i care, he need EK help to get laid.

Well, technically he can, according to my calculations..

 

[| Vee |]

Well, technically he can, according to my calculations..

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[MixQQ]

Robert Blackmailing lena for a waitress job? Fuck off dude, go suck a fat dick.

Bye Robert, no drinks for u

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[PilotLara]

In my Chad Ian playthrough where Ian and Lena are couple and Ivy told Lena that Ian messed around with Cindy and Lena reflects on those thoughts(IanxCindy) but when epilogue ends the last check was about ian_cindy_sex or holly_kiss but here Lena totally omits IanxCindy(might be due to or) but reflects upon Holly kiss only when she should be reflecting upon both IanxCindy and Holly too. I guess it's another bug. PilotLara can you check. View attachment 2987202
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I can't find anything wrong with this. The game checks most definitely for ian_cindy_sex.

 

[Birdnman993]

Who do you guys have for Lenas path on the save where Ian is with Holly. I want it to be semi-wholesome to match Ian's story vibes, but both decent options from Lena are gone on that save. I tried a late Mark path for Lena, but the chapter 10 blowjob needs 8 lust for Lena who's not on drugs?? And 7 lust for him to be allowed to film. Stan is the only other romance option for Lena but he sucks and would drag down the save file

Sorry, but for me the only viable option for Lena is Holly, you just have to read the dialogue to realize that they have a very special connection almost like with Ian, but without the power of the script on his side, Stan is just a bag of money, what can be helped to have more confidence and improve your life? Of course, but it's still just for jokes, money and nothing more, Louise's natural state is to be a good submissive bitch unless she finds someone who can put up with her, Mark is just a quick fuck in Lena's whore route of no importance , I know it, you know it, we all know it.

As for Ian, the healthiest relationship he could have would be with Cherry fits perfectly with what he would need, but I like drama, so we'll go for Cindy and seeing that her relationship with Wade is more doomed I'm doing them a favor Putting him out of his misery will probably go wrong, but trust him, Ian will turn out like a Chad.

 

[ffive]

So far, minimum: Lena and Holly are 'locked'. Cinders? Probably not unless cheating on Wade with Ian so 20/80 on that. Emma? I'd say 50/50. Ivy? Knowing EK and her bullshit? .0001% chance. Cherry? Unlikely since Lena will be there and that could start a war there.

I think Lena can potentially turn the beach thing down if she's broken up with Ian. Which could open a way for Cherry to show up instead, i guess. Cindy will be on the photo session cruise. Emma was buying a swimsuit in the epilogue and is part of the Scooby gang so pretty sure she will show up. Only question is whether this ends up with Emma/Perry or some Lena/Emma or Ian/Emma or a threesome.

edit: i wonder if Alison finds a moment to show up unannounced at some point. She was talking about needing a vacation for a while, and this could get... interesting if Ian cheated on Lena with her in Ch.11.

 

[ffive]

Sorry, but for me the only viable option for Lena is Holly, you just have to read the dialogue to realize that they have a very special connection almost like with Ian

Nonsense, it's obviously Seymour. Lena can be completely smitten with him, and recognizes he can lead her to heights no other character in the game can

 

[ffive]

JDMOD is causing issue report in the JDMOD's thread.

That's not JDMOD (happens in unmodded game, too) it's a bug that slipped in the beta while fixing bug from alpha. It'll be patched in the next update.

 

[yuvce]

Aside for Ian, all the other dudes are assholes. Robert Blackmailing lena for a waitress job? Fuck off dude, go suck a fat dick. Jeremy one pump chump bbc? eh... he can choke on his own dick for all i care, he need EK help to get laid.

Assholes, losers, or perverts. Most are 2 out of 3.

Stan - Loser and pervert
Perry - Loser and pervert
Wade - Loser
Jeremy - Asshole and pervert
Seymour - Asshole and pervert
Robert - Asshole and loser
Mike - Asshole
Axel - Scum of the earth
Ed - Was intended to be a pervert but content was cut.

 

[Bishop Robert]

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Assholes, losers, or perverts. Most are 2 out of 3.

Stan - Loser and pervert
Perry - Loser and pervert
Wade - Loser
Jeremy - Asshole and pervert
Seymour - Asshole and pervert
Robert - Asshole and loser
Mike - Asshole
Axel - Scum of the earth
Ed - Was intended to be a pervert but content was cut.

Wait don’t tell me they cut Uncle Eddies path out.


Wtf they cut out someone who’s different (middle aged married) for another fuckboy (whats-his-face from GGGB)?

 

[Bishop Robert]

I don’t mind Jeremy but it feels too much like nothing bad could happen to him and he’s too much on the “haha bbc go brrrr on dat pussy”.

 

[GifMeMore1987]

Assholes, losers, or perverts. Most are 2 out of 3.

Stan - Loser and pervert
Perry - Loser and pervert
Wade - Loser
Jeremy - Asshole and pervert
Seymour - Asshole and pervert
Robert - Asshole and loser
Mike - Asshole
Axel - Scum of the earth
Ed - Was intended to be a pervert but content was cut.

Perry a pervert? Did I miss something? I'm also not sure about Jeremy but I guess taking pictures/videos during sex and showing them to your friend can qualify as it.

 

[Birdnman993]

Assholes, losers, or perverts. Most are 2 out of 3.
Stan - Loser and pervert
Perry - Loser and pervert
Wade - Loser
Jeremy - Asshole and pervert
Seymour - Asshole and pervert
Robert - Asshole and loser
Mike - Asshole
Axel - Scum of the earth
Ed - Was intended to be a pervert but content was cut.

Hahahahaha good summary, although to be honest Mike doesn't seem so bad compared to others, except that he cheats on his girlfriend it doesn't seem like the worst thing there is, but Lena doesn't go into other people's houses, so that's ruled out.

Nonsense, it's obviously Seymour. Lena can be completely smitten with him, and recognizes he can lead her to heights no other character in the game can

Sorry, but watching old men fuck is not my cup of tea.

Perry a pervert? Did I miss something?

It is, it is summarized in that he watches a lot of porn, for example girls with penises and it is something that is mentioned a lot and that he should interact with girls, but you have to put a gun to his head for him to interact with the opposite sex, like this His self-esteem is low.

 

[Blurpee69]

I think Lena can potentially turn the beach thing down if she's broken up with Ian. Which could open a way for Cherry to show up instead, i guess. Cindy will be on the photo session cruise. Emma was buying a swimsuit in the epilogue and is part of the Scooby gang so pretty sure she will show up. Only question is whether this ends up with Emma/Perry or some Lena/Emma or Ian/Emma or a threesome.

edit: i wonder if Alison finds a moment to show up unannounced at some point. She was talking about needing a vacation for a while, and this could get... interesting if Ian cheated on Lena with her in Ch.11.

I'm pretty sure that Lena and Ian are always going to be at the beach house. In the real world it would make sense for her to back out, considering she very likely hasn't developed strong bonds of friendship with the rest of the scooby gang, aside from possibly Emma, but since this this is a game and Eva would have to write an entirely different chapter with entirely different scenes, characters, and dialogue. This beach house trip is one of the big three events we're expecting to wrap up the story, so it would be weird to not include Lena at all in it.

I personally have always been under the assumption that Cindy will be going and this will be where her and Wade's relationship storyline will reach it's conclussion. Cindy and Wades "couple weeks apart" should be done, so if Cindy has been unfaithfull with either Ian or Axel and Lena and Ian haven't encouraged Wade to keep trying... it all just feels like a point of culmination. Cindy also creates a lot of drama with her jealousy / rivalry with Lena, the aforemention Wade story arc, and if her and Ian have been together.

Emma seems like the next threesome option depending on Lena and Ian's relationship. If they agreed to experiment and be open then this will be a scene. Otherwise she is likely there to be a partner to Lena, Perry, or Ian, because I don't think Holly has actually been invited. I, and I think some others, have always assumed that Holly would be there because she is the third MC at this point even if she isn't a PC. But I can't actually remember her getting a direct invite from Perry, so there might be an actual possibility of a chapter we don't see much of Holly. Depending on how she has been encouraged by Lena and Ivy, Holly could undergo a very fun off screen change, having spent a week with no buffer between her and Ivy.

If Perry is in a relationship with Cherry I could also see her getting an invite, and perhaps have a chance to reconcile with Lena. Additionally the added drama of having another Axel ex interacting with Cindy can make for a spicy narrative moment.

Excluding Holly for now, the only other two characters I can reasonably see making an appearance would be Jeremy and Allison. However, both of them I see maybe only showing up as like a three day weekend appearance, depending on relationship variables, meaning they might only be around for about half the chapter instead of being there the whole week.

So to wrap up my thoughts I think this is going to be a more intimate chapter with a smaller cast of characters and I strongly believe that this is a great event for the culmination of many of Cindy's storylines. We might get a phone or text conversation between Lena and her half of the cast, same for Ian if he's with Allison or Holly if they don't actually show up to the event.

 

[Dom Toretto]

What the hell is there never going to be a android version of this update

 

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What the hell is there never going to be a android version of this update

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[Bishop Robert]

Sorry, but watching old men fuck is not my cup of tea.

Now now, it's not necessarily "watching old men fuck" but it's "watch a young hot woman slut herself to fuck an older dude".

Which is why I was on board with her and Uncle Eddie.

 

[Socrambus]

I'm pretty sure that Lena and Ian are always going to be at the beach house. In the real world it would make sense for her to back out, considering she very likely hasn't developed strong bonds of friendship with the rest of the scooby gang, aside from possibly Emma, but since this this is a game and Eva would have to write an entirely different chapter with entirely different scenes, characters, and dialogue. This beach house trip is one of the big three events we're expecting to wrap up the story, so it would be weird to not include Lena at all in it.

I personally have always been under the assumption that Cindy will be going and this will be where her and Wade's relationship storyline will reach it's conclussion. Cindy and Wades "couple weeks apart" should be done, so if Cindy has been unfaithfull with either Ian or Axel and Lena and Ian haven't encouraged Wade to keep trying... it all just feels like a point of culmination. Cindy also creates a lot of drama with her jealousy / rivalry with Lena, the aforemention Wade story arc, and if her and Ian have been together.

Emma seems like the next threesome option depending on Lena and Ian's relationship. If they agreed to experiment and be open then this will be a scene. Otherwise she is likely there to be a partner to Lena, Perry, or Ian, because I don't think Holly has actually been invited. I, and I think some others, have always assumed that Holly would be there because she is the third MC at this point even if she isn't a PC. But I can't actually remember her getting a direct invite from Perry, so there might be an actual possibility of a chapter we don't see much of Holly. Depending on how she has been encouraged by Lena and Ivy, Holly could undergo a very fun off screen change, having spent a week with no buffer between her and Ivy.

If Perry is in a relationship with Cherry I could also see her getting an invite, and perhaps have a chance to reconcile with Lena. Additionally the added drama of having another Axel ex interacting with Cindy can make for a spicy narrative moment.

Excluding Holly for now, the only other two characters I can reasonably see making an appearance would be Jeremy and Allison. However, both of them I see maybe only showing up as like a three day weekend appearance, depending on relationship variables, meaning they might only be around for about half the chapter instead of being there the whole week.

So to wrap up my thoughts I think this is going to be a more intimate chapter with a smaller cast of characters and I strongly believe that this is a great event for the culmination of many of Cindy's storylines. We might get a phone or text conversation between Lena and her half of the cast, same for Ian if he's with Allison or Holly if they don't actually show up to the event.

Holly is invited by Perry when he announces the thing. And Lena seems to be convinced by Emma (if she hasn't already accepted), no matter what relationship she has with Ian or your choices as a player. So those two for sure, plus Perry, Wade, Emma and Ian. The rest I agree with you, I hope you are right and we get a more intimate chapter with better writing and plots advanced. But I think there will be also options for a slutty Lena, so probably Jeremy and Ivy (also for the extra drama) and maybe some random guy in the beach for Lena to fuck and potentially cheat on Ian.

 

[yuvce]

If Perry is in a relationship with Cherry I could also see her getting an invite, and perhaps have a chance to reconcile with Lena. Additionally the added drama of having another Axel ex interacting with Cindy can make for a spicy narrative moment.

Lena strikes me as someone who holds a grudge. She won't care how remorseful Cherry may or may not be, she only sees her as the girl Axel cheated on her with.