VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[dontcarewhateverno]

Meh. I'm really just kidding around and I highly doubt Cindy will be boarding the SS BBC in chapter 12 or probably in the game at all. Though Axel may be another matter entirely if you make the wrong decisions. It's a game of lots of multi-paths and you can easily avoid the ones that aren't for you. The fact that a path exists shouldn't bother anyone when they can ignore it. After all, paths any of us play might not be someone else's thing either and what right would they have to cancel the one you're into.

If paths narrowed to the extent that no-matter-what you choose on that path it turns into a bad (for you) outcome, that would be different. But I haven't really seen Eva go that way yet. Am I personally disappointed in the way a sub-path or two are turning out? Sure. But there are still other decent main paths in those same relationships even if the exact specifics aren't to my liking and there are just way too many possibilities to please us all completely. One of the tensions of having such a broadly-focused game.

 

[yuvce]

I just don't really see Axel as the type to tolerate even a thought of another guy fucking "his" girl, much less an actual BBC gang-bang in his presence.

The girl he considers as "his" girl is Lena. He either won't move on from her or can't. Idk which it is at this point. I think Cindy and Cherry are nothing to him, even though I do think he does want to fuck Cindy and probably will regardless (...thanks Eva). But you're right about Axel not tolerating someone fucking 'his" girl, hence why he loses his shit if Ian comes clean.

 

[Blurpee69]

I feel like I'm blanking on an event somewhere. We know that the major events for three of the next four chapters are mostly going to include the vacation to Perry's beach house, Billy's photoshoot, and the MMA tournament. Since the photoshoot is basically exclusive to Lena and the MMA tournament is pretty exclusive to Ian I could see these two happening in the same chapter. We're still waiting on the results of Ian's writting competition, and recently introduced is Lena's music competition, which again these two could probably be combined to form a chapter's worth of plot.

Smaller subplots that can be resolved or sprinkled in throughout these upcoming chapters: anything involving wildcats, Lena dancing at the club, another civic center event, the results of Ian's recommendations for publication, the mystery surrounding the homeless man, potentially Holly and Robert.

So what am I forgetting that can fill in chapter 15? Assuming that chapter 16 will be the wrap-up chapter now.

 

[ffive]

The girl he considers as "his" girl is Lena.

It's not as if guys ever get possessive about only single girl, especially the self-proclaimed chads. He shows enough interest in Cindy to safely presume he'd be writing angry diatribes in this thread about EK cucking him if anything remotely sexual happened between Cindy and some other guy, especially in his presence.

 

[ffive]

So what am I forgetting that can fill in chapter 15?

A BBC orgy, obviously, the thing that everyone wants -- GGGB fans for reasons, and haters to complain about how low EK has fallen. /s

More seriously though, some of these events (like the MMA tournament) probably won't be resolved in one go. IIRC it's mentioned it's just regional preliminaries at first, so there most likely will be some followup.

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

and I highly doubt Cindy will be boarding the SS BBC in chapter 12 or probably in the game at all. Though Axel may be another matter entirely if you make the wrong decisions.

BBC Ship is Billy's brainchild meanwhile(from what I understand) blondie's trip is from corporate.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Billy is so sketchy,i think hes full of shit.
The fact Ivy is all in on his project makes everything more sketchy.
Some BS is going to happen in that photoshoot.

 

[Socrambus]

How do you think we are going to watch the Wildcats thing as players?. Lena is not going and Ian going with Cindy doesn't seem very likely. So, will Eva continue to play with rumours and hearsay from Axel and Ivy and us as players not knowking exactly was going on with Cindy?. Or will we see some video/photos (maybe Axel send them to Ian to hurt him in case of being enemies)?.

 

[lorkdubo]

How do you think we are going to watch the Wildcats thing as players?. Lena is not going and Ian going with Cindy doesn't seem very likely. So, will Eva continue to play with rumours and hearsay from Axel and Ivy and us as players not knowking exactly was going on with Cindy?. Or will we see some video/photos (maybe Axel send them to Ian to hurt him in case of being enemies)?.

Maybe from Ivy? It's going to be a huge fuck up. 100% guarantee. Cindy is way too basic and amateurish and the whole event and company smells like shit. The same as billy's event.

 

[| Vee |]

How do you think we are going to watch the Wildcats thing as players?. Lena is not going and Ian going with Cindy doesn't seem very likely. So, will Eva continue to play with rumours and hearsay from Axel and Ivy and us as players not knowking exactly was going on with Cindy?. Or will we see some video/photos (maybe Axel send them to Ian to hurt him in case of being enemies)?.

IF THAT HAPPENS than Ivy can be one, Axel will avoid any evidence as not to piss off Lena especially after he told Lena "But I don't want Cindy" bullshit otherwise I don't see a way.

 

[| Vee |]

Billy is so sketchy,i think hes full of shit.
The fact Ivy is all in on his project makes everything more sketchy.
Some BS is going to happen in that photoshoot.

The reason of Ivy being on-board is believable as Ivy is pissed on Cindy and Axel and Billy is proposing a "Potentially beneficial deal" But knowing EK things are going to get messy. Makes me wonder how much messy.

 

[Socrambus]

Maybe from Ivy? It's going to be a huge fuck up. 100% guarantee. Cindy is way too basic and amateurish and the whole event and company smells like shit. The same as billy's event.

But Ivy is not going to be there either. If we hear from her it would be rumour and speculation like all we have heard from her on Cindy and Axel relationship. And Wildcats is shown in the game as the already established company with tons of contacts and influence. It seems less sketchy than Billy's thing, which doesn't mean that if you put young attractive people on a luxury yatch, beautiful beaches and all that, there's not going to be fooling around.

 

[Socrambus]

The reason of Ivy being on-board is believable as Ivy is pissed on Cindy and Axel and Billy is proposing a "Potentially beneficial deal" But knowing EK things are going to get messy. Makes me wonder how much messy.

At the very least, Billy will try to fuck both Lena and Ivy. There will probably be plenty of drugs and maybe Jeremy will also be there (he's Billy's friend).

 

[Gladheim]

About Cindy,if shes still one of your main girls after that epilogue any dissapoinment you get in the future is on you.
Is not too late to hop on to a better love story,the Alison route.

Blonde Alison is one of the best

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[Gicoo]

Game reduced from 20 to 16 chapters some plot was cut or burning out?
Now it feels kinda a mess with lena side of the story

The 20 chapter estimation was a good while ago, its possible Eva recently considered all open events and plans and gave it a new estimation. The chapters got bigger and bigger, so its likely a couple of plot-threads that would've been in later chapters are already done, hence fewer chapters left.
Also, Eva doesn't plan everything and tends to write on the spot, so estimating the games lenght is even more unreliable.

 

[| Vee |]

Blonde Alison is one of the best

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I've beef with her So NO!

 

[rj677]

About Cindy,if shes still one of your main girls after that epilogue any dissapoinment you get in the future is on you.
Is not too late to hop on to a better love story,the Alison route.

Well... I wouldnt fully agree with you about Alison having a better "love story". But i guess it depends on what you look for in a story

For me, Alison is essentially "too easy to get" for Ian. Theres nothing wrong with that and one thing Eva does really well with that is the fact that Alison already likes Ian BEFORE seeing him for the first time in the story... So many AVNs just make the women wet their panties just by seeing a dude for the first time .

With Alison, theres no "conquest". If you want Alison and like her, you will get her and as soon as chapter 2 you can fuck her. So for me, as a "love story", I would take Cindys one. Yes, even if it ends in you getting cucked from now on .

If you really want a "love story" though, Holly would be the best choice by far... Even though its similar to Alisons in the sense that she has a crush on Ian already, you still have to put in the work to open her up so its just a natural progression of events so, its a true journey and not just a speedrun to sex.

Thats also what I like about the Ivy and Emma paths... They are both a challenge in very different ways, with Emma its more the "getting out of the strictly friends zone" while Ivy is a sort of "going after the most popular girl" kind of thing. Maybe its just my preference to go after these kind of characters (IN THIS GAME IN PARTICULAR! Dont judge me too much on my preferences for women in other games because I have my reasons )

 

[Blurpee69]

A BBC orgy, obviously, the thing that everyone wants -- GGGB fans for reasons, and haters to complain about how low EK has fallen. /s

How could I have forgotten the BBC orgy? Ian's chapter will be so awesome with him standing in a corner alongside Axel, Perry, Eric (from GGGB) and Wade, discussing amongst themselves how inferior they all are. Meanwhile Lena, Holly, Ivy, and Louise all stare worshipfully up at Stan, who obviously has the biggest and blackest cock, as he rails Cindy while she gets bukaked by Jeremy, Marcel, Tyronne, Jacob, and Tyronne's possy. The finally practically writes itself.

Was their a trigger I missed?

 

[Gladheim]

A BBC orgy, obviously, the thing that everyone wants -- GGGB fans for reasons, and haters to complain about how low EK has fallen. /s

More seriously though, some of these events (like the MMA tournament) probably won't be resolved in one go. IIRC it's mentioned it's just regional preliminaries at first, so there most likely will be some followup.

BBC orgy, disgusting...

 

[JoJoPool]

How could I have forgotten the BBC orgy? Ian's chapter will be so awesome with him standing in a corner alongside Axel, Perry, Eric (from GGGB) and Wade, discussing amongst themselves how inferior they all are. Meanwhile Lena, Holly, Ivy, and Louise all stare worshipfully up at Stan, who obviously has the biggest and blackest cock, as he rails Cindy while she gets bukaked by Jeremy, Marcel, Tyronne, Jacob, and Tyronne's possy. The finally practically writes itself.

Was their a trigger I missed?