VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[dolfe67]

I dislike Lena, while Ian does, so in my gaming experience I can't stand the two of them being together, Ian I chose two other variants as a couple, but Lena for me always remains the slut of the game, also because she is designated in every way to cheat, then you might as well make her act like a slut directly, hahah, I hope the next updates are more prolific for Ian and more slutty for Lena, I look forward to it.

Oh because Ian is not designed to cheat? Keep your double standard to yourself

 

[Andrea9999]

If she goes to Dubai and there is no scat content I'd be extremely disappointed

*sigh* The slow progression from the exquisite elegance of submission to the demanding filth of the sheik. Of course they would keep her dressed elegantly at the beginning of each session....perhaps even during the animal phase.

 

[| Vee |]

Game provides complete choice to players how they want both MC's to be in certain paths. Lena can be a cheating slut so can Ian be. Only difference might be in no. of lis that's all. So stop bullshitting that certain MC is this and that. If you don't like Lena COOL, If you don't like Ian Cool too. BUT DON'T whine that game doesn't give player's authority to make MC behave in certain paths. That's on player A.K.A YOU!
PERIOD!

 

[| Vee |]

My plan is to release a sort of Prologue, that will finally cover the anticipated MMA tournament, aside from moving the plot forward with several character relationships, and will also have a scene you might not be expecting. My goal is to release this update before December.

Didn't see this one coming!
I didn't expect that Prologue will cover tournament. Does it mean that tournament will be a short one or prologue will cover just some part of it and than at a later date will have more important matches? If anyone know do tell plz or share your opinions!
SerHawkes was right about about it.

 

[I-No]

Lena might not actually return...sexual slavery can go on for a while.

As much as I would enjoy such a development I don't think Seymour would give up Lena that easily. And why should he? For money or wealth? Probably not.

 

[Socrambus]

Didn't see this one coming!
I didn't expect that Prologue will cover tournament. Does it mean that tournament will be a short one or prologue will cover just some part of it and than at a later date will have more important matches? If anyone know do tell plz or share your opinions!
SerHawkes was right about about it.

wen "This summer, several gyms in the city area are hosting an amateur MMA tournament."
$ fjeremy = "happy"
j "That sounds awesome!"
i "What's the tournament like?"
yuri "You fight once a month against someone in your weight class from a different gym. You fight in a bracket, so even if you lose a fight, you can make it to the top three if you win the other ones."
yuri "There's a small money prize for the winner and finalists."

So it seems there will be only one fight in the coming prologue. And there won't be a fight against Jeremy until maybe a possible playoff with the top 3 of each bracket.

 

[ffive]

This is just being in circles. In that case, this is you being presumptuous that you are attributing this to my mindset.

There's no presumption here -- i have presented my reasoning and you didn't say a single word that'd actually refute it. There's no facts for you to base your claim on, and no facts which you'd cite to support your point, so opinion is the only alternative that's left. If you think differently, feel free to state what you think you're basing your statements on. Because you have yet to do it.

You could make an opinion that Earth is flat. Whatever I say to make my observation that it's in fact spherical would just be my presumption, my own "perception".

The shape of earth can be observed and measured with devices which don't have presumptions or perceptions. Both "flat" and "sphere" are also clearly defined. This is not matter of opinion, but facts. It's disingenuous for you to put yourself in the role of the reasonable person in this analogy, when your observations in our discussion were of completely different nature.

Let's go over to Ian in a sec. Can you say that Minerva solo path is equally catered to a Cindy solo path? It must be my "presumption" that more effort and content are done more on one side than the other.

In terms of content, fun fact. There's 4 sex scenes for Ian/Minerva and also 4 sex scenes for Ian/Cindy. In terms of player satisfaction, there's many more voices expressing dissatisfaction with Cindy's (lack of) appearances in the game as of late, than about limited presence of Minerva. So, one could make a point that Cindy's fans actually feel less catered to, than Minerva's fans.

And herein lies the crux of the issue: you have yet to define what you actually consider as "being catered to". So, instead of asking me this question and shifting the burden on me, how about you make your point in full first and describe precisely how you evaluate this "catering to" Minerva's and Cindy's paths? Then we will have something tangible to apply to the rest of the discussion, instead of apparently expecting me to just somehow know what you think, when you can't be bothered to articulate it.

Yet another one of those, "you can't say that cuz you're not making" As if people can't speak their own minds on the matter. People can make their own reviews. No matter what you say, it won't shut people up.

Absolutely not what i said. If you want to fight strawmen then don't bother. It's a pure waste of both your and mine time.

For the record, what i actually meant wasn't "you can't say that" but "what you're saying is unrealistic [and thus naive and/or stupid]". This doesn't mean you can't say it. By all means, knock yourself out.

 

[Andrea9999]

As much as I would enjoy such a development I don't think Seymour would give up Lena that easily. And why should he? For money or wealth? Probably not.

He might... in order to go on living...after all....some sheiks will simply not be denied and he will have scant means to prevent them from fulfilling their desires in Dubai. EK can take this arc into a truly deepening erotic adventure. Especially if an incongruous elegance/filth motif is maintained.

Your avatar shows the intense depth of your lust.

I have only played one instance of the game. I would like to try another where Lena chooses the lust decisions but still stays away from actual sex except where Seymour is concerned. And a second where given the same except surrendering to a photoshoot done by Seymour with she and Axel. I saw a gallery with the latter title but did not open it to avoid spoilers.

I can just begin to visualize....

 

[Leongen43]

Beautiful image that you shared but she is missing it lacks a couple of accessories such as nipple piercings hooked to a chain so I can wear it lest it gets lost, right?

The photo session with Seymour and Axel has three ways. I'll tell you, it depends on whether you were negative or positive with Axel and a third party gave positive responses and some negative ones with both Seymour and Axel.

 

[Andrea9999]

Beautiful image that you shared but she is missing it lacks a couple of accessories such as nipple piercings hooked to a chain so I can wear it lest it gets lost, right?

The photo session with Seymour and Axel has three ways. I'll tell you, it depends on whether you were negative or positive with Axel and a third party gave positive responses and some negative ones with both Seymour and Axel.

I am ok with piercings, but I have eschewed tattoos; there is nothing more erotic in my view, than our smooth, pale ivory white flesh...accentuating our core deep vulnerability.

And thank you for the cryptic tips on an Axel-Seymour combination arc.
(Does doing that preclude accepting Seymour's proposal?)

 

[Leongen43]

You depend on the tattoo but you are right, there is nothing more erotic than the skin of a woman completely naked and with a bottle of oil to pass over her entire body while I test her limits, I like that a lot

 

[Andrea9999]

You depend on the tattoo but you are right, there is nothing more erotic than the skin of a woman completely naked and with a bottle of oil to pass over her entire body while I test her limits, I like that a lot

"depend" on the tattoo? I never had Lena get one. Which probably precludes her interacting with Jessica.

 

[Leongen43]

You can interact with her when you buy adult toys or in the club also when you meet, you also have to remember that there are two versions of Jessica that depends on Lena's lust

 

[SerHawkes]

You can interact with her when you buy adult toys or in the club also when you meet, you also have to remember that there are two versions of Jessica that depends on Lena's lust

Depends on Lena's lust? No. Depends on if the player is that desperate to slut up Lena with either Dildo Boy Robert or Cheating Dildo Mark or not to fuck either because you have better standards.

 

[Leongen43]

That depends on your tastes SerHawkes, if you see them that way, that's your problem. I would never see an individual, even if they were a character in a game, as an object. Furthermore, the lust bar appears in Lena's statistics, not in mine, as far as I know, or Maybe I have a hidden lust bar and I never realized it?

 

[Andrea9999]

Depends on Lena's lust? No. Depends on if the player is that desperate to slut up Lena with either Dildo Boy Robert or Cheating Dildo Mark or not to fuck either because you have better standards.

SerHawkes! You are bringing a prudish sense of morality to a porn game. One would think you were affronted at the lack of a church picnic arc!

 

[SerHawkes]

wen "This summer, several gyms in the city area are hosting an amateur MMA tournament."
$ fjeremy = "happy"
j "That sounds awesome!"
i "What's the tournament like?"
yuri "You fight once a month against someone in your weight class from a different gym. You fight in a bracket, so even if you lose a fight, you can make it to the top three if you win the other ones."
yuri "There's a small money prize for the winner and finalists."

So it seems there will be only one fight in the coming prologue. And there won't be a fight against Jeremy until maybe a possible playoff with the top 3 of each bracket.

I think in all likelyhood Jeremy and Ian are going to be finals fighters, 1 vs 2 for the big money prize fight when all said and done.

Which will probably be in Chapter 16 maybe? Or 20 if EK wants to drag shit out with pointless crap and drama.

 

[SerHawkes]

SerHawkes! You are bringing a prudish sense of morality to a porn game. One would think you were affronted at the lack of a church picnic arc!

I'm more affronted by the lack of Ian hooking up or even hanging out with Ivy than being a prude.

Not to mention both Robert and Mark don't add anything to the story or game other than to be used as a dildo. Not my cup of tea.

 

[Andrea9999]

I think in all likelyhood Jeremy and Ian are going to be finals fighters, 1 vs 2 for the big money prize fight when all said and done.

Which will probably be in Chapter 16 maybe? Or 20 if EK wants to drag shit out with pointless crap and drama.

One thing I did not realize in this game was the need for money management for the unforeseen. I meant Ian to participate, but he lacked the funds when the time came to pay to enter the MMA.

 

[Leongen43]

We would all like to see more material from Avi, especially a threesome with Jeremy and Ian. Mike does have a good story if you read it and he is a good couple option if Lena manages to break up the relationship he has.