VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[yuvce]

Arthur is next

Only if it's his rotting corpse in prison.

 

[Leonardovisk]

I like it for the reason you do not. What I like is the contrast it makes with her regular, kind of intelligent face. In fact my main save maximizes her intelligence and keeps her celibate except with Holly and Ivy. I also have one where she is with Ian (hoping for Seymour to use them as two puppets...with Ian ordered to exploit Lena). I want her as intelligent and charismatic as possible....but not able to hold it together when climaxing during Seymour's sessions and those of his later designated handlers.

I understand and agree with you but my point is: That's expression on her face is just a idiot internet thing. Doesn't mean desire or lust and, for me, don't fit in Lena's personality.

 

[BlandChili]

I understand and agree with you but my point is: That's expression on her face is just a idiot internet thing. Doesn't mean desire or lust and, for me, don't fit in Lena's personality.

You would prefer realistic reactions. It is kinda interesting that Eva has decided to add these exaggerated sexual reactions in these specific cases in contrast to her proclaiming to want ORS to be a more realistic take on the sexual adventure compared to GGGB.

 

[SearingFive]

I understand and agree with you but my point is: That's expression on her face is just a idiot internet thing. Doesn't mean desire or lust and, for me, don't fit in Lena's personality.

Well, I'll tell you the back story of Ahegao faces or commonly called the O-face in Japanese porno scene.

Ahegao is a popular facial expression that originated from Japanese erotica written by a man who fantasized about assaulting children. It plays off and reinforces the stereotypes that Japanese women are submissive, easily overpowered/manipulated, and that they want/deserve abusive treatment.

It was later used by other artists to portray lust, submission and desire. Something dark that started from a twisted sinister mind, took a lighter note down the line.

What you saw in shit-tok is just a Gen Z version.

 

[Leonardovisk]

You would prefer realistic reactions. It is kinda interesting that Eva has decided to add these exaggerated sexual reactions in these specific cases in contrast to her proclaiming to want ORS to be a more realistic take on the sexual adventure compared to GGGB.

Yeah I like realistic stuff. Im old!

Im afraid of Lena wearing fox ears, inside a refrigerator, using a octopus tentacle as buttplug and doing "ahegao" faces for selfies in next chapters!

 

[Leonardovisk]

Well, I'll tell you the back story of Ahegao faces or commonly called the O-face in Japanese porno scene.

Ahegao, is a popular facial expression that originated from Japanese erotica written by a man who fantasized about assaulting children. It plays off and reinforces the stereotypes that Japanese women are submissive, easily overpowered/manipulated, and that they want/deserve abusive treatment.

It was later used by other artists to portray lust, submission and desire.

What you saw in shit-tok is just a gen z version.

Thanks for explaining. If they tried show some submission that's fine I guess.


Hope they don't go too asian in this game....

 

[SearingFive]

Thanks for explaining. If they tried show some submission that's fine I guess.


Hope they don't go too eastern in this game....

Lena is submitting to Seymour but as you know the ahegao face is pretty popular. Think about that face as 'letting go' of all your emotions and worries and accept the highest desires that come with it. Financial and social stability with the freedom to do what you want on the surface level but bound mentally and emotionally in chains with Seymour. That is Seymour's path in a nutshell.

It won't go eastern don't worry about it.

 

[Blurpee69]

I guess it wouldn't be impossible that Iris could show up on the Billy route though.

Somewhere in the world, someone just ran outside, screamed with happiness and doesn't know why. It's all because you spoke this into existence.

It is kinda interesting that Eva has decided to add these exaggerated sexual reactions in these specific cases in contrast to her proclaiming to want ORS to be a more realistic take on the sexual adventure compared to GGGB.

They're heightened reactions, certainly can be interpreted as exaggerated. But something I try to be mindful of is that we're seeing what is essentially photos of candid moments. As an example pull up any YouTube video of a real person and just randomly pause it every few seconds. You'll find some really interesting facial expressions as people transition through emotions and speech patterns. Ones that you normally wouldn't even process during a regular viewing. That's how I picture some of the exaggerated images; such as Ivy's tongue, some of Lena's orgasms, etc.

Ian's O-face that Searingfive posted is just a silly rush job by the artist in all liklihood, and I'm sure there are several other examples of that if anyone truly cared to go digging.

 

[SearingFive]

Ian's O-face that Searingfive posted is just a silly rush job by the artist in all likelihood.

That is some rushed and half-assed job, no doubt about it. Reminds me of Arieth from BADIK making those O-faces at the Thanksgiving party.

 

[BlandChili]

Somewhere in the world, someone just ran outside, screamed with happiness and doesn't know why. It's all because you spoke this into existence.

Well, it was probably me. I never got why Ash didn't get a shot at claiming the sister of her ex for herself.

They're heightened reactions, certainly can be interpreted as exaggerated. But something I try to be mindful of is that we're seeing what is essentially photos of candid moments. As an example pull up any YouTube video of a real person and just randomly pause it every few seconds. You'll find some really interesting facial expressions as people transition through emotions and speech patterns. Ones that you normally wouldn't even process during a regular viewing. That's how I picture some of the exaggerated images; such as Ivy's tongue, some of Lena's orgasms, etc.

Well, I would buy that if it was more generally applied. Since it only shows up it's pretty clear that it's the kink for those specific routes that play a role and not an effort to show realistic motion.

 

[Blurpee69]

That is some rushed and half-assed job, no doubt about it. Reminds me of Arieth from BADIK making those O-faces at the Thanksgiving party.

In fairness, if I remember the scene Ian's face is about middle distance from the camera, it's not really supposed to be seen from an extreme close up, so why bother making sure his eyes are looking the exact right way?

 

[Xupuzulla]

Hope they don't go too asian in this game....

I hope she does,i need a scene where my boy Stan makes Lena use the Asuka plugsuit

 

[SearingFive]

In fairness, if I remember the scene Ian's face is about middle distance from the camera, it's not really supposed to be seen from an extreme close up, so why bother making sure his eyes are looking the exact right way?

Yeah, there are some scenes which are ruined by extreme close-ups.

 

[Blurpee69]

Well, it was probably me. I never got why Ash didn't get a shot at claiming the sister of her ex for herself.

I agree, Iris wasn't used to her full potential in GGGB. Wish Eva went back and added Iris content rather than shoehorn in Jasmine. I like Jasmine for what it's worth, but it's pretty obvious those scenes weren't part of the original story and were a Patreon addition.

 

[SearingFive]

I hope she does,i need a scene where my boy Stan makes Lena use the Asuka plugsuit

 

[BlandChili]

I agree, Iris wasn't used to her full potential in GGGB. Wish Eva went back and added Iris content[...]

I'd sign that petition.

 

[Leonardovisk]

I hope she does,i need a scene where my boy Stan makes Lena use the Asuka plugsuit

No way! The hell will be colder as nothpole before Stan put his filthy fat hands in my beloved goddness Lena!

 

[Xupuzulla]

No way! The hell will be colder as nothpole before Stan put his filthy fat hands in my beloved goddness Lena!

Your "godness" already used the bunny cosplay with Stan,now is time for him to actually make her wear some anime shit.
DO IT,EVAKISS!

 

[dolfe67]

They're heightened reactions, certainly can be interpreted as exaggerated. But something I try to be mindful of is that we're seeing what is essentially photos of candid moments. As an example pull up any YouTube video of a real person and just randomly pause it every few seconds. You'll find some really interesting facial expressions as people transition through emotions and speech patterns. Ones that you normally wouldn't even process during a regular viewing. That's how I picture some of the exaggerated images; such as Ivy's tongue, some of Lena's orgasms, etc.

Yes that. Try drawing an orgasm face without drawing an ahegao face. The latter convey well the ecstasy of it

 

[jimul18]

Probably she stuck again with a plot and heavy branching.
Eva is having more and more difficulty with the plot, which is why she broke the new update into several parts so that people wouldn't wait a whole year.

Just kill off one MC (Ian based on popularity) and be done with it. Unfortunately there is no financial pressure to tighten up the release schedule, like it or not this give credence or at least fodder to the millking accusations. Nevertheless the communication is bordering on farcical.