VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

[SearingFive]

Alison is a shit tier wife:

Alison = Ex wife within 3 years.

The moment you look away from her for 3 seconds jumps on a big black cock who is also supposed to be your friend. For how much of a slut she is; She is too whiny when it comes to anal. She is too open to open relationships. She is too interested in threesomes. She won't let you creampie if dating her. She will let you cream pie if not dating her. She way too easily gets jealous if you are seeing other girls like Lena.

She is too much of a slut to be a good wife.

If I were going to go for one of the sluts to put in the wife camp I would go for Emma. At least she knows her spirit animal is a cockroach, and she has a lot of moxie standing up to a guy like Seymour. On top of being very passionate and free spirited. Plus, she won't hook up with your guy friend unless you give the okay.

Holly, on the other hand is much more classy. She is much smarter, and more reserved. She is good at conversation and has interesting things to talk about. She is shy and respectful. On top of that a very creative and artistic free spirit like Emma, but without the trashiness.

Holly... That's the kind of girl you could marry and live a happy 50 years with.

She went for Jeremy because Ian didn't show any interest towards her(player choice). If you go for vanilla Alison path she's as faithful as the other girls on vanilla path. Why would she wait for a man who shows no interest towards her? Also she's still recovering from her breakup, people look for validation from others when they go through this phase, hence she was very receptive towards simple flirting.

Though I agree, her behaviour is pretty shitty when she wants Ian's attention, non Alison path is tryharding slutty Alison which is pitiful.

Jeremy's flirting game is so trash that he got shit on by both version of Jessica . So, you can understand how needy was Alison because she liked his flirting.

 

[seaoflove]

She went for Jeremy because Ian didn't show any interest towards her(player choice). If you go for vanilla Alison path she's as faithful as the other girls on vanilla path. Why would she wait for a man who shows no interest towards her? Also she's still recovering from her breakup, people look for validation from others when they go through this phase, hence she was very receptive towards simple flirting.

Though I agree, her behaviour is pretty shitty when she wants Ian's attention, non Alison path is tryharding slutty Alison which is pitiful.

Jeremy's flirting game is so trash that he got shit on by both version of Jessica . So, you can understand how needy was Alison because she liked his flirting.

Good Jessica will shoot anyone down. She is not a cheater. Ashley is the person who brought her some stability during a time of chaos, and she will be loyal to the end.

Bad Jessica is a good woman that has made a lot of bad decisions and she was corrupted by modernity, and the partygirl lifestyle. She knows that she has "Hit the wall" so to say, and wants to be good. I think she has been hurt a lot by acting like a slut, and doing drugs. She wants to be a good girl / trad wife deep down. However, her emotional damage may be beyond repair at this point. She has been pumped and dumped one too many times. She got into porn. She started to realize that her body was all she was good for... Unlike other "Happy Variants" of Jessica. Such as when she ends up with Dave, they both like that drawing stuff and get along great. She may have some "Bad Boyfriend" at this point as well, but it's unclear who. She did have a busted lip, and she did need a place to stay. So, she may be shacking up with some abusive dude.

Honestly, Jessica could have her own entire game with her as the protagonist. A sort of "Bad girl gone good." Try to be more innocent, and pure, but she has already seen the evils of this world.

Is it too late to save Jessica?

 

[SearingFive]

Bad Jess was living with a girl and had a nasty fallout in ORS, that's why she needed a place to crash to cool herself off. There's a stark contrast on how good Jess behaves to flirting. She knew both of them were hitting on her but Jeremy doing Jeremy things is laughable, no wonder his charm only works on needy girls like Louise and Alison. I have no idea how bad Jess fits in Ian's story but the love is onesided according to the game code. Ian loves or likes Jess and not the other way around. Bad girl gone good sounds promising.

 

[rainnnnnn]

Can you creampie Alisson in chapter 12?

 

[Gicoo]

Can you creampie Alisson in chapter 12?

Speaking of, that scene still isn't complete and lacks the reward for giving her the present.
Maybe its done this update.

 

[seaoflove]

Bad Jess was living with a girl and had a nasty fallout in ORS, that's why she needed a place to crash to cool herself off. There's a stark contrast on how good Jess behaves to flirting. She knew both of them were hitting on her but Jeremy doing Jeremy things is laughable, no wonder his charm only works on needy girls like Louise and Alison. I have no idea how bad Jess fits in Ian's story but the love is onesided according to the game code. Ian loves or likes Jess and not the other way around. Bad girl gone good sounds promising.

Lesbian relationships do have a high rate of domestic violence. Interesting... Who though? Lets find one from the cast of GGGB.

"Bad Ashley"? Would a max evil Ashley be beating up on Jessica? Possibly... She can bully her father, and Eva to death. I mean she is really bad. So, maybe... but she is kinda too much caught up in her own bullshit.

"Eva" There was no path to get those two together, although there could be a chance to have both in a threesome on bad jess path. I don't think she would be it. Because in that route Eva is subby, and Jessica is the one acting Domme to her.

"Iris" Iris is no angel, but I just don't see her beating up on Jessica. Plus, they never get together.

"Natasha" The cute redhead that is not Ashley... I just don't see her being mean to anyone. She is too... "Laid back".

"Ashley's Mom" I mean, she is a cruel bitch, but I don't really see those two hooking up. There is no line where they get anywhere near each other, but a remote possibility.

"Fat Bitch" That fat bitch from the club that is always a Karen... What is her name? I can not ever remember her name without looking it up. I think maybe "Rosa"? Yea, I could 100% see her being abusive. Plus she did make an appearance at the same club that Jessica has been to in both games. Possible? Having that hippo sitting on her face every night could why Jessica is in such a shit mood. It would make some sense too because she would have money. As she can get that good job if ash is not a good girl.

"Jasmine" The t-girl from GGGB. She is kinda tough, and likes it rough. She hasn't been seen in ORS yet, and her and Jessica never interacted much in GGGB. However Jessica was kinda close friends with Jack and Jasmine worked at the same place as Jack so I am sure they must know each other.

So assuming the abuser is a girl Jasmine & Rosa are my top two theories when it comes to returns from GGGB, but it could be some new character, or possibly someone else like Joline, or that seemingly nice shop attendent that will take a pic for Lena / Emma and can flirt with her as Lena later. I don't see it being a main cast female form ORS.

Possibly "Agnes" that old woman that is wealthy? I mean... It's possible. What if Jessica fresh out of porn went to try to be a model. Agnes then made her do some lewd stuff, and treated her like a whore. Her having tons of $$$ like Seymour level could put her as a "Mean Sugar Mommy".

So... Agnes (Rich Old Bitch), Jasmine (Aggressive T-girl) or Rosa (Fat Cow) all could get a kick out of pissing on Jessica's face and treating her like a whore.

 

[Gicoo]

Alison is a shit tier wife:

Alison = Ex wife within 3 years.

The moment you look away from her for 3 seconds jumps on a big black cock who is also supposed to be your friend. For how much of a slut she is; She is too whiny when it comes to anal. She is too open to open relationships. She is too interested in threesomes. She won't let you creampie if dating her. She will let you cream pie if not dating her. She way too easily gets jealous if you are seeing other girls like Lena.

She is too much of a slut to be a good wife.

If I were going to go for one of the sluts to put in the wife camp I would go for Emma. At least she knows her spirit animal is a cockroach, and she has a lot of moxie standing up to a guy like Seymour. On top of being very passionate and free spirited. Plus, she won't hook up with your guy friend unless you give the okay.

Holly, on the other hand is much more classy. She is much smarter, and more reserved. She is good at conversation and has interesting things to talk about. She is shy and respectful. On top of that a very creative and artistic free spirit like Emma, but without the trashiness.

Holly... That's the kind of girl you could marry and live a happy 50 years with.

As already said, she only goes for Jeremy if Ian shows no interest in her. How dare she dates guys other then me! In particular, she jumps on Jeremy right after she sees Ian kissing Emma. If you/Ian expects her to be faithful while you/Ian can fuck around, you are beyond hope.
Anal: She even gives it a try and it doesn't work physically. She is only pushing for open relationships and threesomes because she thinks its what Ian wants and she wants to be as exciting for him as possible. If you deny those options, she is happy to carry on.

Emma doesn't need Ians permission. Ian just recommends her to Jeremy because he had good experience with her and is a bro to Jeremy. Jeremy got curious, asks her and she simply agrees.

Holly is the best wife material out of all these terrible options in this game (Our Red Flag), because she barely has meaningful flaws and is sort of perfect and a favorit of Eva. She wants to please and has issues with men, both very convenient flaws that the player is very happy to correct. I tend to prefer other girls because they have flaws, issues and aren't at Ians whim every second, but have their own ambitions and ideas of a good relationship. Threat them like trash and they call you out on it, defend themselves and may even break up. With Holly, you are on easy mode. I'd like her second book to fail and see how she takes that loss, but considering how well she is liked by everyone, it probably won't happen and she stays successfull in every playthrough.

 

[BlandChili]

Lesbian relationships do have a high rate of domestic violence.

Actually the statistic that's most often quoted when making this reference doesn't say that "lesbian relationships have high rate of domestic violence" it says "women in lesbian relationships have the highest rate of domestic violence at some point in their lives."

Women are often the subject of rape, physical violence and stalking; for example over 60 percent of bisexual women having experienced one of the three is a specifically high number. Go figure that relationships with two women involved have a higher rate of having known a history of domestic violence.

 

[Gicoo]

Jessica living with a girl is news to me, much more so a female partner abusing her.

My memory is: She lives with her parents, but rarely is home and crashes by other people. She crashed by a guy and he demanded sex while she wasn't in the mood, so she called on Ashley and potentially staid there.
Later on, she rents a flat and can share it with Ashley.

 

[ffive]

The moment you look away from her for 3 seconds jumps on a big black cock who is also supposed to be your friend. For how much of a slut she is; She is too whiny when it comes to anal. She is too open to open relationships. She is too interested in threesomes. She won't let you creampie if dating her. She will let you cream pie if not dating her. She way too easily gets jealous if you are seeing other girls like Lena.

I have to confess all these things are actual reasons why i kind of like Alison as character -- because they make her as real as it gets.

Holly meantime is pure self-insert fantasy.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Alison is realistic and beautiful,Holly is how how incels think a woman should be.
I would always choose the sexy baby maker than the dick biting geek.

 

[Chemish]

Alison has a super hot body.

 

[varpep]

Lesbian relationships do have a high rate of domestic violence. Interesting... Who though? Lets find one from the cast of GGGB.

"Bad Ashley"? Would a max evil Ashley be beating up on Jessica? Possibly... She can bully her father, and Eva to death. I mean she is really bad. So, maybe... but she is kinda too much caught up in her own bullshit.

"Eva" There was no path to get those two together, although there could be a chance to have both in a threesome on bad jess path. I don't think she would be it. Because in that route Eva is subby, and Jessica is the one acting Domme to her.

"Iris" Iris is no angel, but I just don't see her beating up on Jessica. Plus, they never get together.

"Natasha" The cute redhead that is not Ashley... I just don't see her being mean to anyone. She is too... "Laid back".

"Ashley's Mom" I mean, she is a cruel bitch, but I don't really see those two hooking up. There is no line where they get anywhere near each other, but a remote possibility.

"Fat Bitch" That fat bitch from the club that is always a Karen... What is her name? I can not ever remember her name without looking it up. I think maybe "Rosa"? Yea, I could 100% see her being abusive. Plus she did make an appearance at the same club that Jessica has been to in both games. Possible? Having that hippo sitting on her face every night could why Jessica is in such a shit mood. It would make some sense too because she would have money. As she can get that good job if ash is not a good girl.

"Jasmine" The t-girl from GGGB. She is kinda tough, and likes it rough. She hasn't been seen in ORS yet, and her and Jessica never interacted much in GGGB. However Jessica was kinda close friends with Jack and Jasmine worked at the same place as Jack so I am sure they must know each other.

So assuming the abuser is a girl Jasmine & Rosa are my top two theories when it comes to returns from GGGB, but it could be some new character, or possibly someone else like Joline, or that seemingly nice shop attendent that will take a pic for Lena / Emma and can flirt with her as Lena later. I don't see it being a main cast female form ORS.

Possibly "Agnes" that old woman that is wealthy? I mean... It's possible. What if Jessica fresh out of porn went to try to be a model. Agnes then made her do some lewd stuff, and treated her like a whore. Her having tons of $$$ like Seymour level could put her as a "Mean Sugar Mommy".

So... Agnes (Rich Old Bitch), Jasmine (Aggressive T-girl) or Rosa (Fat Cow) all could get a kick out of pissing on Jessica's face and treating her like a whore.

I'd like to have what you're having

 

[Xupuzulla]

Imagine having to wait 7 chapters of Ian acting like Holly is a dog.
Imagine having to wait 7 chapters for a shitty sex scene where Holly almost bites Ian dick off.
Imagine having to wait 12 chapters to see Holly being sexy in a bikini.
Being a Holly fan is worse fate than death.

 

[ffive]

Ivy fans wishing she bit their dicks off 7 chapters in.

 

[fatpussy123]

Imagine having to wait 7 chapters of Ian acting like Holly is a dog.
Imagine having to wait 7 chapters for a shitty sex scene where Holly almost bites Ian dick off.
Imagine having to wait 12 chapters to see Holly being sexy in a bikini.
Being a Holly fan is worse fate than death.

Rent free

 

[Xupuzulla]

Ivy fans wishing she bit their dicks off 7 chapters in.

Dont get me started on Ivy fans,12 chapters of nothing but this being her only heterosexual sex scene

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[DZE]

Was there any comment from EvaKiss if theres gonna be any sort of scenes or continuation for Lena's storyline?

 

[BlandChili]

Was there any comment from EvaKiss if theres gonna be any sort of scenes or continuation for Lena's storyline?

You can read the last update here

She's working on Lena's part and it will follow Ian's later. How long that will take is anyone's guess.

 

[rainnnnnn]

How do I get Perry’s interest in Emma to zero?
Even after getting all the scenes with Ian and her, I still get the convo with wade where Ian encourages perry to go for her