VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 BETA] [Eva Kiss]

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magicuser007

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Our Red String Chapter 7 BETA Release!

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It's finally here! Chapter 7: Heavenly Sins is finished. The Beta corrects a few minor bugs and spelling mistakes present in the Alpha and adds a few tweaks to some scenes that I felt needed to be modified, but it's subtle stuff. Updates to the Agenda section are still needed and will be implemented in the Final version, which will also contain a new sex scene, so stay tuned for that!

This has probably been the most challenging update I've pushed out so far, and it took me longer than I anticipated, but I think it'll be worth it. Thank you so much for your patience and support, and I hope you really enjoy this one!





This update is packed with the most amount of content I've ever crammed in a single episode, it has 80+ full-screen, full-color illustrations, 20.000+ lines of narrative code and sex scenes with over 10 characters. Be mindful, to see all possible events you'll have to go over the chapter at least two separate times, and a lot of what will happen is dependant on your previous choices.

Did you Lena tell Louise about Jeremy's games, causing them to break up, or are they still together? Did Lena sleep with Robert or rejected him right away? What's Ian relationship to Emma, Alison, and the other female cast? Try different choices to discover wildly different scenes.

Be sure to check
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to have a comprehensible list of all the scenes and character interactions included in this new chapter!

And as always, I'll be thankful if you write down on the comments any weird bugs you might find, and also I want to read your feelings about this new update!

I hope you enjoy it!
 
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magicuser007 said:
Our Red String Chapter 7 BETA Release!

PC:Mega

Mac:Mega


It's finally here! Chapter 7: Heavenly Sins is finished. The Beta corrects a few minor bugs and spelling mistakes present in the Alpha and adds a few tweaks to some scenes that I felt needed to be modified, but it's subtle stuff. Updates to the Agenda section are still needed and will be implemented in the Final version, which will also contain a new sex scene, so stay tuned for that!

This has probably been the most challenging update I've pushed out so far, and it took me longer than I anticipated, but I think it'll be worth it. Thank you so much for your patience and support, and I hope you really enjoy this one!





This update is packed with the most amount of content I've ever crammed in a single episode, it has 80+ full-screen, full-color illustrations, 20.000+ lines of narrative code and sex scenes with over 10 characters. Be mindful, to see all possible events you'll have to go over the chapter at least two separate times, and a lot of what will happen is dependant on your previous choices.

Did you Lena tell Louise about Jeremy's games, causing them to break up, or are they still together? Did Lena sleep with Robert or rejected him right away? What's Ian relationship to Emma, Alison, and the other female cast? Try different choices to discover wildly different scenes.

Be sure to check
You must be registered to see the links
to have a comprehensible list of all the scenes and character interactions included in this new chapter!

And as always, I'll be thankful if you write down on the comments any weird bugs you might find, and also I want to read your feelings about this new update!

I hope you enjoy it!
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Oooh, new scene for the Final version. Eva usually doesn't add content for non-alpha versions. I'm excited.
 
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magicuser007 said:
Our Red String Chapter 7 BETA Release!

PC:Mega

Mac:Mega


It's finally here! Chapter 7: Heavenly Sins is finished. The Beta corrects a few minor bugs and spelling mistakes present in the Alpha and adds a few tweaks to some scenes that I felt needed to be modified, but it's subtle stuff. Updates to the Agenda section are still needed and will be implemented in the Final version, which will also contain a new sex scene, so stay tuned for that!

This has probably been the most challenging update I've pushed out so far, and it took me longer than I anticipated, but I think it'll be worth it. Thank you so much for your patience and support, and I hope you really enjoy this one!





This update is packed with the most amount of content I've ever crammed in a single episode, it has 80+ full-screen, full-color illustrations, 20.000+ lines of narrative code and sex scenes with over 10 characters. Be mindful, to see all possible events you'll have to go over the chapter at least two separate times, and a lot of what will happen is dependant on your previous choices.

Did you Lena tell Louise about Jeremy's games, causing them to break up, or are they still together? Did Lena sleep with Robert or rejected him right away? What's Ian relationship to Emma, Alison, and the other female cast? Try different choices to discover wildly different scenes.

Be sure to check
You must be registered to see the links
to have a comprehensible list of all the scenes and character interactions included in this new chapter!

And as always, I'll be thankful if you write down on the comments any weird bugs you might find, and also I want to read your feelings about this new update!

I hope you enjoy it!
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I'm gonna put my money on.....it'll be a stan scene something about that teasing.....makes me feel she'll spy on him afterwards to see what he's doing
 
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ahat long said:
Till now all of Lena's choices have been basically fuckboys . So how about a new character who is actually a good person and actually loves her . Someone with a stable job , apartment maybe a car . Someone who is with her and only her and forces her to choose between Ian and this new guy .
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While i don't think it would need to go that far, Lena is definitely behind Ian when it comes to relationships. She and Holly had zero progress this time for instance, Louise is clingy as glue plus Lena doesn't really seem to like her that much.
And the only males she can start something with are a slimebag (Roberts) and someone who already has a girlfriend, Mike.

BlandChili said:
It does feel like Billy is a bit of an obvious setup for a porn route, but I'd like to see more before making any concrete judgements.
I'm sort of hoping that Lena can also make an independent modeling career for herself by finessing Danny, Seymour and Billy, therefore not becoming too dependent on any of them.

There is one thing about him that I was curious about: His vague source of money.
I can't help but feel like Ivy introducing hard drugs right as you meet him might be a hint that he's involved in smuggling.
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To me he seems like at the same time the setup up for the porn route and the criminal route. Wanting to hire a bunch of women to make a "model agency" (which he doesn't know how to create by the way) and all paid by his also very vague "cash from other ventures".

But what bothered more about it was how Ivy simply decided to fall head in into this without even trying to see if everything is legitimate. She was always a person with a head over her shoulders in previous chapters but in this one she decided to dive straight into the likely corruption route? :WaitWhat: :unsure:


magicuser007 said:
Our Red String Chapter 7 BETA Release!

PC:Mega

Mac:Mega


It's finally here! Chapter 7: Heavenly Sins is finished. The Beta corrects a few minor bugs and spelling mistakes present in the Alpha and adds a few tweaks to some scenes that I felt needed to be modified, but it's subtle stuff. Updates to the Agenda section are still needed and will be implemented in the Final version, which will also contain a new sex scene, so stay tuned for that!

This has probably been the most challenging update I've pushed out so far, and it took me longer than I anticipated, but I think it'll be worth it. Thank you so much for your patience and support, and I hope you really enjoy this one!





This update is packed with the most amount of content I've ever crammed in a single episode, it has 80+ full-screen, full-color illustrations, 20.000+ lines of narrative code and sex scenes with over 10 characters. Be mindful, to see all possible events you'll have to go over the chapter at least two separate times, and a lot of what will happen is dependant on your previous choices.

Did you Lena tell Louise about Jeremy's games, causing them to break up, or are they still together? Did Lena sleep with Robert or rejected him right away? What's Ian relationship to Emma, Alison, and the other female cast? Try different choices to discover wildly different scenes.

Be sure to check
You must be registered to see the links
to have a comprehensible list of all the scenes and character interactions included in this new chapter!

And as always, I'll be thankful if you write down on the comments any weird bugs you might find, and also I want to read your feelings about this new update!

I hope you enjoy it!
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Interesting. Hope the new sex scene if for Lena this update.
 
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Lady Sansa said:
Personally I like the sexual interactions of Ian and Cherry, there is no racial stereotype, no comments about their skin color, not a black girl who loves white cock , they just have sex and that's it.



I can't say the same for Jeremy, his whole character is being the black guy with the big black cock that will fuck white girls.
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yeah some kind of "racism" always is around everytime a black person has sex with a white person. Especially with black guys, it's like they aren't even individuals, just bbc providers. I think it's kinda problematic in general, but it's a porn game, people like this kind of fetish and i am against pc shit and moral bs popping up everywhere, CENSORSHIP SUCKS ALWAYS.


Princess Groundhog said:
Freak the hell out.
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Don't forget Ian cummed inside her fertile pussy raw.

redraw said:
I think in all of the discussion of Wade that I have seen, I haven't observed much addressing the notion that he is suffering from severe depression.



He is also notably wearing dogtags, and I can't recall if military service was explicitly mentioned, but I've developed a vague soeculation that he has experienced severe trauma that he will not discuss and it has affected him drastically, given that his friends repeatedly make a point about his change.



Which makes me generally feel pretty bad about his storyline and wonder if there's going to be some reall heavy consequences on that path ..
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don't say that i now feel shit for having Ian tear Cindy's pussy at public place.

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Just one dark joke as an afterthought of today's discussion:



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I will laugh so hard if this happens hahaahah


Brazilian Engrish said:
Sooo, Alisson was fucking Jeremy just to make Ian jealous??? If thats the case, i m deadlyblind. For me, her thought was like "ok, if you dont want me theres plenty fish on the sea (i think this is the term)". She wants him so much if Ians score is high with her. she even change her dress code if Ian praise Cherrys style (at first i thought this was creepy. but in the end, she just wants to get Ians attention).
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If she fucked Jeremy just to have Ian jealous, she is super stupid imo. What kind of guy, would consider a girl relationship material after she was videotaped by his friend fucking her while they had a connection. Regardless of this, it's a stupid move to have a guy interested in serious relationship. I like to think, she just wanted dick, and Jeremy was there to provide plenty of it for her.


BlandChili said:
Maybe this is a bit far out there, but I'd almost not be surprised if Eva came up with a fffmm fivesome involving Lena, Ivy, Louise, Ian and Jeremy. I feel like Eva's made point of allowing Ian to desire Louise quite a lot and he has slowly had quite a few opportunities to grow a friendship to Ivy.
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Ian and Jeremy can be really open bros about sex, Jeremy already fancies Louise, Lena and Ivy and has played with them, Ian likes all of them too, so this is very possible in the future. I like to see Ian fucking Louise and Ivy, especially gothic slut Louise.

I don't know if someone comment about it, but it seems like Ivy has a guy set up to fuck Holly, let's see...
Also, i think it's implied that Billy is a drug dealer...
 
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So, havig tried everything I could possibly think of, it can be concluded that Lena has a grand total of zero decent lesbian LI's.

Damn but that was a depressing find.

Louise got clingy whatever way I played it and Lena all but dismissed everything they had done. Ivy is going down crack whore central regardless. Holly is hung up over Ian and that leaves Emma as a very vague possibility but not very likely.

IT deff seems like this is more focused on Ian's side of things for the romance and Lena for the corruption. The only depth on her side is the utter dipshit Robert, following Ivy down to cumdumpsville, going back to abusive Axel or Ian himself. Out of all the LI's avaialble to Ian, Lena is the worst choice.

Think i'll put this on the backburner, try again near the end of the year and see if Lena's route has got any better.

I was so looking forward to her stuff a few updates ago but as of this update her whole route is just meh. I can't even think of a better word than meh to describe it, that's all that came to mind when i'd gone through it all .... meh.

I just really don't understand how we got from an awesome character like Ash in GGGB ..... to this.

Ah well.

Least Ian's route has some fun stuff.

Lena's needs a milf. It's missing a Minerva.
 
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Avaron1974 said:
The only depth on her side is the utter dipshit Robert, following Ivy down to cumdumpsville, going back to abusive Axel or Ian himself.
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Cumdumpsville's not a bad place. It gets a nasty reputation due to the name, but the schools are great and the tax rate is second to none. Try The Crab Shack when you're down there. (It's fantastic). They're pretty well-hated by the folks over at Incelton though. Never understood the rivalry.
 
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