VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[lucadiadis]

I do not understand: the front page says we are at chapter 11 beta version, but the most recent update I have downloaded still stops just before chapter 11, with absolutely no new content from the recent "prologue" update. Can someone please explain ?

 

[sevendustkorn1008]

I do not understand: the front page says we are at chapter 11 beta version, but the most recent update I have downloaded still stops just before chapter 11, with absolutely no new content from the recent "prologue" update. Can someone please explain ?

It was labeled wrong here. The last release was Ch 11 Prologue Alpha. This is Ch 11 Prologue Beta. Then there is one more that will release soon, Ch 11 Prologue Full (or Final). But yes, this is just a more refined/cleaned version of the last release.

 

[RolandG.]

I do not understand: the front page says we are at chapter 11 beta version, but the most recent update I have downloaded still stops just before chapter 11, with absolutely no new content from the recent "prologue" update. Can someone please explain ?

revised version, new scenes.

 

[dolfe67]

Can someone share the changelog of ch11 prologue beta?

 

[dundun]

Right now, both Gillian and Mike's GF are a mystery. We don't know too much about them and because of that we try to form some connections based on what we know.
Gillian:

• not as tall as Allison
• cheated on Ian, but it looks like only Ian knows what really happened
• it's been a year since Ian last saw her
• dream - we don't know if anything is real, but it's probably based on a real discussion
  • moved outside of town
  • wants to pursue a job abroad, she might move back in town if she finds something good

Mike's GF:

• small breast
• she's into anal sex
• one year old relationship, but they live in the same place for about a 3 months - the place is situated outside town
• busy with a new job

Some details match - the one year gap and the fact that they don't live inside the city. It is also possible that Gillian cheated with someone else and that is why Ian has no knowledge about Mike. But I think there is also another possibility. Why not subvert expectations and find out that Nat is Mike's GF. We already know from GGGB that she likes anal and we just find out that she is coordinating a department inside Hierofant. An entire department is not an easy task, hence she's busy.

Anyway, based on the chapter 11 title, I assume that we'll find out what happened. Wounds - could cover a lot of things

• the wounds of the heart
  • what caused them: the entire chapter could be a flash back.
  • what will heal them: Ian discussing with Gillian, Lena having a cup of coffee with Axel
  • how to move on: Ian discussing with Lena
• physical wounds
  • Lena's parents, if we get to see them
  • Ian and Jeremy during the boxing tournament
  • Ian after Wade kicks his ass for sleeping with Cindy
  • Ian after Perry kicks his ass for sleeping with Emma
  • Axel after Ivy kicks his ass for choosing Cindy or Lena over her ... maybe I went too far

First, thanks for making a list of all information. Second, some corrections
A year ago Gillian left for her hometown planning to finding a job here (in Baluart) and then return. She cheated on Ian after leaving, or at least he only found out then. He and Alison talk about it in chapter 5:
a "She went back to her hometown after finishing her master's degree, right?"
i "Yeah... She was supposed to find a job here and come back, but then, that happened..."

Mike and his girlfriend live here, they moved to Baluart 3 months ago as Mike told Lena in chapter 9:
l "How long have you been with her?"
mk "About a year... And we moved here like three months ago or so."

About the theory that Gillian is Mike’s girlfriend: Isn’t it too unlikely that neither Ian nor Mike have any idea who the other one is?

The timeline in itself fits decently. I vaguely remember Ian mentioning early in the game that it’s almost a year since he and Gillian split up, and also Mike mentions that he’s been together with his girlfriend for about a year. Apart from that we also know that Gillian's breast size fits with how Mike describes his girlfriend.

But if your girlfriend doesn’t just cheat on you as a one night stand, but actually meets someone else who they end up dumping you for; wouldn't you at the very least have checked their social media to see who the person is? And if you're the other guy, wouldn't you do the same to see who the person whose girlfriend you stole is? After Ivy's birthday party it seems clear that they haven't seen each other before.

If it still turns out to be true, I agree that it’s a bit lazy. Some of the earlier coincidences worked really well: Like Jeremy turning out to be both Ian's friend and Louise's "boyfriend" (it's introduced early in the story when all the connections are being established), and Cindy's photographer who's also Lena's ex (we're aware of it from the beginning even if the characters aren't, and as a hotshot photographer it makes sense that Axel has a lot of connections). The revelation about Cherry and Axel felt a bit more far-fetched—like something that's forced into the story to make things add up. Gillian being Mike's girlfriend would be in the same category for me. That's both because of the total amount of coincidences and the fact that those coincidences are more eye-catching later on in the story when the universe is established and we assume we know all the connections between the characters.

Still I wouldn't consider it a big issue if we're being pragmatic. From a narrative point of view there's a lot you can do with that connection, and with how Lena's cheating with Mike mirrors Gillian's cheating and Axel's cheating. And for the moral dilemma of Lena's affair with Mike to be as effectful as possible, I think his girlfriend should be introduced at some point—if it actually turns out to be Gillian, Eva won't have to introduce yet another character for it to happen.

Either way the prologue confirms that Eva has changed her mind from her earlier comments about Gillian's role in the game. I assume that means she has some clear plans for what she wants to add to the story. Regardless of whether Gillian is Mike's girlfriend or not, I think this is a good moment to do that: A surprisingly big part of chapter 10 dealt with Ian's and Lena's feelings about Lena's possible sexual involvement with other guys. Gillian's return is a very natural ingredient in that mix.

I don't have the exact quote but I remember vaguely that Ian doesn't know with whom Gillian cheated. Also it is not clear how he found out. That makes sense if Gillian was back at her hometown and just confessed to Ian.

What other earlier comments of EvaKiss about Gillian are you referring? In the 3 Q&As all she wrote was that 'Gilllian has a role to play'.

I don't see it being narratively interesting. Yes, Lena getting Mike to cheat as she has been cheated on is interesting but for that it doesn't matter that his girlfriend is Ian's ex. Why would she care about that? Ian would be cuckolded twice by Mike, but he doesn't know Mike at all so why would he care who his girlfriends cheat with? There are no emotions connected to it, it makes no difference to Lena or Ian if Mike's girlfriend is Gillian or not. It would just be a weird coincidence.

Also, sorry about going on about this, but in the last Q&A EvaKiss wrote about Mike's girlfriend:
I'd like to develop that side of Mike's story more, but right now the focus is elsewhere.
But she wrote about Gillian:
Gillian still has a role to play in all of this
That doesn't sound like she is talking about the same girl. Ten days later she announced the prologue with the writing 75% done. I doubt she decided that Gillian should appear now in this 10 days, after all having a cliffhanger was the whole idea.

The timing of Gillian's appearance makes sense. Chapter 10 spend a lot of time developing Lena and Ian's relationship (there are a whooping 5 sex scenes beween them!) but Lena isn't yet such a big part of Ian as Gillian was.

Indeed, what is supposed to happen? Bitchfight? (You can always dream ) Is she going to become one of Ian's love interests? (He is already lagging behind Lena, after all) Or will it be like the cliffhanger of chapter 7, a whole bunch of nothing?

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

I get the opinion that Cidny would cheat on Wade with or without Ian. I felt a little bit Guilty for Ian to cheat with his Friends GF, but after learning how shitty of person cidny is, I wouldn't doubt that either axel or some other guy would have banged her.

I prefer Alison to cidny, but CHAD Ian decided to break up with her insted having her as a fling( Big mistake), I only banged her because I love blondes. but every encounter between Ian and Cidny makes me cringe hard, they are soo diffrent from each other, literally pollar extreams, Wade as a man better looking then Ian(Though Ian is taking care of himself, goes to the gym, displays confidence and is winning both as a writer(Though I think he will lose if he is with Lena since Seymur defintly won't give him a pass).

Im in the opinion that this game deserves a better blonde thicc chick to replace Cidny.

 

[tchooi86]

Seems like Stan is going to hang with lena and holly

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Seems like Stan is going to hang with lena and holly

Seems like Stan is going to commit a mass shooting and turn Lena in to a lamp shade.

 

[negeb18]

y? no chapter 11 gallery

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

I get the opinion that Cidny would cheat on Wade with or without Ian. I felt a little bit Guilty for Ian to cheat with his Friends GF, but after learning how shitty of person cidny is, I wouldn't doubt that either axel or some other guy would have banged her.

I prefer Alison to cidny, but CHAD Ian decided to break up with her insted having her as a fling( Big mistake), I only banged her because I love blondes. but every encounter between Ian and Cidny makes me cringe hard, they are soo diffrent from each other, literally pollar extreams, Wade as a man better looking then Ian(Though Ian is taking care of himself, goes to the gym, displays confidence and is winning both as a writer(Though I think he will lose if he is with Lena since Seymur defintly won't give him a pass).

Im in the opinion that this game deserves a better blonde thicc chick to replace Cidny.

Bro hates Cindy so much he doesn't even bother to write her name properly lmao.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

First, thanks for making a list of all information. Second, some corrections
A year ago Gillian left for her hometown planning to finding a job here (in Baluart) and then return. She cheated on Ian after leaving, or at least he only found out then. He and Alison talk about it in chapter 5:
a "She went back to her hometown after finishing her master's degree, right?"
i "Yeah... She was supposed to find a job here and come back, but then, that happened..."

Hol up, I'm confused.

So Gillian left her hometown to find work at Baluart, then she returned to her hometown again. Presumably, Ian found out about her affair after she's already back at her hometown.

Is that correct?

 

[fishbrain]

When Lena says she needs time to Stan, she mentions hanging out next week. Is it reading into it too much to say that there won't be stan content in full chapter 11? Since this prologue is part of ch 11?

Not necessarily, I don't know the likelihood of a shoot in consecutive updates but they do live together so at least some good conversation hopefully. As I mentioned in my play she's hasn't been with any other guys and getting antsy.. I can envision her sneaking into Stan's room for a little nighttime fun. A little sleep sex role reversal compared to every other game here. LOL

No I don't expect that to happen.. Yet.

 

[kishanth1234]

Gonna quote myself, but:



To get this branch Lena also has to invite Stan to do the photoshoot for her, in Ch.10

i have done all that and nothing happens broski

 

[jollyjoker27]

Just a pity that the Goddess Cindy was missing in this episode.

True, but at least we got this little info re: Wildcat Models to look forward to. Haven`t seen it mentioned, yet.

 

[Oliver Wendell Homely]

I get the opinion that Cidny would cheat on Wade with or without Ian. I felt a little bit Guilty for Ian to cheat with his Friends GF, but after learning how shitty of person cidny is, I wouldn't doubt that either axel or some other guy would have banged her.

I prefer Alison to cidny, but CHAD Ian decided to break up with her insted having her as a fling( Big mistake), I only banged her because I love blondes. but every encounter between Ian and Cidny makes me cringe hard, they are soo diffrent from each other, literally pollar extreams, Wade as a man better looking then Ian(Though Ian is taking care of himself, goes to the gym, displays confidence and is winning both as a writer(Though I think he will lose if he is with Lena since Seymur defintly won't give him a pass).

Im in the opinion that this game deserves a better blonde thicc chick to replace Cidny.

Cindy seems to be having a mid-life crisis, despite her being only 25 or whatever she is. Unhappy with her job, disappointed by her live-in boyfriend, and looking for something in her life that can offer her excitement and an outlet for her creative "passion," she would probably be tempted to cheat on Wade with anyone who provided those things. Ian and Axel happen to be well-placed to deliver some thrills and their artistic/creative activities appeal to her. I don't think any of that makes Cindy a "shitty" person, or at least no shittier than Wade or Ian or Axel. Wade clearly has zero interest in sustaining a successful adult life and partnership with Cindy--witness his year-long jobless stint in which his only ambition is to compete in unpaid gaming tournaments, and he begrudgingly joins Cindy in nights out.

Ian's affair with Cindy is particularly sad because if discovered, it will not only destroy Wade and Cindy's relationship, it threatens to torpedo the whole friend group. But Wade and Cindy are sabotaging their own relationship, which appears doomed regardless of what Ian does. Given how young Wade and Cindy are and the fact that they've only been together a few years, the fact that they are struggling so much signifies that they are a bad match and that a breakup would be best for both of them.

 

[Doppelgang]

What other earlier comments of EvaKiss about Gillian are you referring? In the 3 Q&As all she wrote was that 'Gilllian has a role to play'.

i just have a memory that she at one point suggested that Gillian was unlikely to turn up in person, but I can't say if that was in another Patreon post, on Discord, or if it was just some vague quote that I and/or someone else might have misinterpreted. So maybe I'm wrong. Anyway I guess that existing or non-existing comment is of less importance now.

I don't see it being narratively interesting. Yes, Lena getting Mike to cheat as she has been cheated on is interesting but for that it doesn't matter that his girlfriend is Ian's ex. Why would she care about that? Ian would be cuckolded twice by Mike, but he doesn't know Mike at all so why would he care who his girlfriends cheat with? There are no emotions connected to it, it makes no difference to Lena or Ian if Mike's girlfriend is Gillian or not. It would just be a weird coincidence.

I don't think Lena cares about Ian's girlfriend or Mike's ex, regardless of whether they're the same person or not. But with the strong emotions both Ian and Lena have about the cheating they've experienced, I definitely think Gillian being Mike's girlfriend would add another layer to it all, which Eva could use in a number of ways.

Lena is good at justifying it to herself when she does something she knows she shouldn't do, like cheating on Ian with Mike. But if Gillian turns out to be Mike's girlfriend, it would make it impossible to ignore that what Lena's doing is comically identical to what Gillian did. And she knows how much and how long he has struggled because of that. If she still continues the affair with Mike, how would it play out? Lena's already thashtalking Mike's girlfriend to spice things up in the bedroom—would Ian get the same role? After all, they now have "proof" that he's so inferior to Mike that no less than two of his girlfriends have cheated with him.

And maybe Ian wouldn't care about who his girlfriends cheat with if he was completely rational and confident in himself, but he's not. Let's say Gillian is Mike's girlfriend; that Lena and Ian are in a relationship; that Lena gave Mike a blowjob at Ivy's birthday party; and that Ian and Gillian have a talk in chapter 11 about what happened between them. In that scenario Ian is bound to find out who Mike is sooner or later … and maybe also remember him as the same guy Lena came out from the club with, after Ian had left her horny on the dance floor. I think that's more than enough to make Ian's mind start to wander. (Does Lena know him too? If so, how? Did she dance with him like she did with me moments before? Has she ever had sex with him, now or in the past? Should I ask her about all of this the next time she's giving me a handjob?)

Ian's already stressing himself out (or turning himself on) by comparing himself to other guys and worrying about falling short. Jeremy is easy-going and doesn't make a big deal about anything relating to women, and he's also got a monster cock. Axel is the übermensch ex-boyfriend he for obvious reasons feels inferior to. There's also the "threat" that the Stalkfap horndogs represent. Hell, he's even worried about the useless piece of shit that is Robert. It could be similar with Mike even if Gillian isn't his girlfriend, but it would add significantly more fuel to it if it was the case.

Also, sorry about going on about this, but in the last Q&A EvaKiss wrote about Mike's girlfriend:
I'd like to develop that side of Mike's story more, but right now the focus is elsewhere.
But she wrote about Gillian:
Gillian still has a role to play in all of this
That doesn't sound like she is talking about the same girl. Ten days later she announced the prologue with the writing 75% done. I doubt she decided that Gillian should appear now in this 10 days, after all having a cliffhanger was the whole idea.

Well, this we agree on, because I still don't think Gillian is Mike's girlfriend, I was just writing about it as a "what if". And you're right that it doesn't sound like she's talking about the same girl here.

 

[bauman]

I hope Eva plans to give the option for Ian to beat up Wade and tell Perry that he fucked Emma in the ass. It would be perfect for an asshole run. PERFECT.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

I don't think any of that makes Cindy a "shitty" person, or at least no shittier than Wade or Ian or Axel.

Many call her shitty because she's selfish and unbelievably petty when things don't go her way. This has been discussed several times on why Cindy is in the wrong more than Wade. You can look it up if you want, but it'll take some digging.

Given how young Wade and Cindy are and the fact that they've only been together a few years, the fact that they are struggling so much signifies that they are a bad match and that a breakup would be best for both of them.

I think they're just separated if wade_cindy is 2 points, but yeah, it'll be hard for them to patch things up when both are unwilling to meet halfway.

 

[ffive]

I don't see it being narratively interesting. Yes, Lena getting Mike to cheat as she has been cheated on is interesting but for that it doesn't matter that his girlfriend is Ian's ex. Why would she care about that?

Lena might potentially care that her dream guy turns out to be someone who has harmed her friend. Much like she can potentially care that Jeremy is being a shit "boyfriend" to her friend Louise. The identity of Mike's girlfriend isn't the focus here, but discovering new aspect of Mike's personality is.

Ian would be cuckolded twice by Mike, but he doesn't know Mike at all so why would he care who his girlfriends cheat with? There are no emotions connected to it, it makes no difference to Lena or Ian if Mike's girlfriend is Gillian or not. It would just be a weird coincidence.

I disagree; it's in human nature to look for patterns and find significance in them, so learning that not one but two of his girlfriends both cheated on him and/or left him for the same guy can compound already high emotions of learning the person you've trusted betrayed this trust.

 

[Chuck_Bass]

I hope Eva plans to give the option for Ian to beat up Wade and tell Perry that he fucked Emma in the ass. It would be perfect for an asshole run. PERFECT.

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