VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[raja28]

Mac link please

 

[camube]

Someone pass it to Eva Kiss and tell her to stick to her vision of ORS not her patron's, don't put them on pedestal bcz by doing this you are only restricting ORS to reach it's potential. You are a great writer that's why I love playing your game despite the fact that I don't play FMC games just bcz of your story writing but you are just wasting your potential by doing these thing's. And you know exactly what you are doing and why you are doing it. Please be true to your vision, we want the story YOU wanted to tell not your Patron's Hope you take this seriously and not as an insult!

just pay $5 for her patreon and dm her

 

[Slick Bean]

The thing is, by this time, the game has been all about Lena day to day life,
with her very interesting and absolutely social media army of fans worthy hobbies,
her evident chops at writing and performing music, her divine body ...

It was very entertaining watching Lena deal with her day to day life

Why make her steal Jeremy thunder in the club? Why make her become the next toy for club VIP cameos?
Remember that Jeremy had girls lapping his body up like infatuated virgins?
How impotent do you have to make Lena for her to simp about any other VIP asshat thrown into the club???
Practically every cameo acts and talks exactly like Axxel - absolutely disgusting subhuman garbage.

Seeing Lena finally manage to put a stop to such abusive toxxic degrading relations all throughout the game,
only to have her become just another mouth hole for evident loosers to use is a disgrace to this game.

Sure, enjoy this decadent deconstruction of all that ever made Lena fabulous.

In the meantime, it's good to see that being wants to improve both personally and professionally with what I'll be willing to help and that I can benefit from this accordingly

Lena has come to terms with her inner most beautiful self through her magically attractive hobbies:
writing poetry, playing the guitar, writing and singing vocals with guitar music.

She is the total package - tailor swift/milei cirus would eat their heart out for becoming such talented as Lena.

How annoying is it to see players simp for a bartender life style Jeremy has been living all throughout the game?
There is nothing interesting about being a whore some VIP assholes EXPECT HER TO SERVICE THEM IN THE WC/VIP.
We already got the manwhore Jeremy living that life style, no need to turn Lena into a mindless cock sleeve.
Alas, enjoy your game.

Cindy is a character I like and empathize with for not knowing what she is passionate about and wanting to have more than just a comfortable life, but her childish attitude and thinking she is a professional model overnight is a pretty stupid aptitude plus not listening to warnings that Axel is not a legit guy, her as a Louise 2

Cindy is loving the club night life, every so often wanting to go have at it with Ian.
That is a very much alive and human socially accepted hobby and a respected pass time.
What do you mean she is misguided? She knows what she like, she likes clubbing.

On the other hand, she does not know anything about courtship or human relations,
so she will be taken advantage of all throughout the game. You can mend her with your player choices.
There is no need to have her be abused by every asshole the game throws at her. Be brave!

Now what I liked the least were more cameos

The cast is already huge as it is, those scare encounters with even more Axxels or Jeremies are uncalled for.
Pitty once you get Lena outta the woods, you get to steer her back into sex object life style with those asshats.

 

[JoJoPool]

Hugo isn't a party dude and Tyrone would enrage the anti BBC brigande entirely, considering we already have Jeremy and Marcel in the epilogue.

At this point you think Eva cares about that ? If she did then why did she force a scene with Marcel ?? That one had zero build up and was so out of nowhere i thought it was a prank...
Let's face it, what we saw in the epilogue is simply the effects of the polls on the game.

 

[JoJoPool]

Cindy is a character I like and empathize with for not knowing what she is passionate about and wanting to have more than just a comfortable life, but her childish attitude and thinking she is a professional model overnight is a pretty stupid aptitude plus not listening to warnings that Axel is not a legit guy, her as a Louise 2. 0 we can only get the popcorn ready and watch her crash, as for Axel almost the same as Cindy his attempts to mess with Lena are so obvious it's pitiful, because my Lena may be a big bitch, but she's not stupid.

Cindy is also a hypocrite, She dissed Ian for seeing Lena and Alisson while here she is having the time of her life with Axel

 

[dengl]

The cast is already huge as it is, those scare encounters with even more Axxels or Jeremies are uncalled for.
Pitty once you get Lena outta the woods, you get to steer her back into sex object life style with those asshats.

Cameos was fun enough if they just show up for a few dialogues, we definitely no need anymore screen time for them. All the npcs are barely getting enough screen time imagine wasting more time to produce scenes with Jack omg.

Cindy is also a hypocrite, She dissed Ian for seeing Lena and Alisson while here she is having the time of her life with Axel

Reason why I mentioned early that I put a cindy_love play through on hold now till I see what happens in next chapter.
Axel getting all handsy on her during shooting even when Ian is present, I would be surprised if they 2 haven't fucked yet.

I get people hating Jeremy because bbc fetish and his shitty sneaky personality but seriously Axel? A complete package of subhuman garbage for me. And of course I don't find it surprised when comments in patreon are loving the Axel Lena scenes in the epilogue.

I don't mind the Lena being with bbc and all that but at least Jeremy had a build up, if player makes Lena not to interact with Jeremy Lena doesn't have any scene time with Jeremy at all but Marcel is simply forced into this epilogue because of the poll. Cindy still winning the best female npc and Jeremy is still in the lead as best male npc.

 

[camube]

in a playthrough without BBC Fetish, does Marcel still offer himself to Lena?

 

[Xupuzulla]

Cindy is also a hypocrite, She dissed Ian for seeing Lena and Alisson while here she is having the time of her life with Axel

To be fair to Cindy,her loving the night life and being horny around Alex is not something new.
I agree shes a hypocrite throught but who inst in this game?

 

[triumvirate]

Is there anyone else hoping for something like a tense Lena&Cindy sensual photoshoot that could start some passion between them?

 

[lucadiadis]

Is it just me who finds that both epilogues/prologues were better than the chapters themselves ?

 

[jimul18]

Another option complete out of left field. Kill off Ian, since most players prefer to play Lena anyway. And go all in on fetish and depravity driven content. Some of the relationships in Lena's storyline already lend themselves to this:

• Stan -> cuck
• Louise/Holly/Ivy -> femdom
• Axel/Mike -> maledom
• Seymour -> powerplay (maybe porn/escorting in the future)
• Jessica -> porn
• Jeremy/Marcel -> BBC (with the potential on a retcon of Billy)

Cindy, Wade, Alison, Minerva, Perry and Wade are harder to place since they are mostly on the Ian storyline. But since now fans are being catered to, Ed is back in the game

 

[Xupuzulla]

Is there anyone else hoping for something like a tense Lena&Cindy sensual photoshoot that could start some passion between them?

I was hoping for this but after the epilogue im losing all hope about Lena-Cindy happening...

 

[BlandChili]

Yeah, I've proclaimed the wonders of bitchy sex with Cindy, but the way Lena and hers relationship is entirely railroaded doesn't make me very confident that there will come anything interesting for them.

 

[rgnar62]

Generally, I've liked this epilogue.

There was more content than expected even. I really liked the Lena+Emma shopping trip and the litte tease we got, which could lead to a great threesome with Ian, or Jeremy, or even all of them hooking up in a foursome. The dress and bikini options are really hot(wonder how the white bikini fares with water...)

Stan is hiring a personal trainer and trying to get in shape after Lena told him to in my playthrough. Could be an interesting transformation. (Small bug: Lena comments on his clothes, but he's still wearing his everyday stuff).

Now the bartending night, I've liked the small scene we got with Jeremy. Lena mentioning that she may post pictures of that on her Stalkfap has some interesting implications, if Ian is a subscriber and has seen that dick with Allison and/or Emma previously.

Mark now may also update Lena directly on Hollys corruption which is nice and Robert has her number now (I may need to start a save where Lena still keeps him around to see if there are gonna be threesomes).

Ivy and Jeremy are banging real soon if both Ian and Lena give their approval.

Don't care about the Cindy and Axel drama.

What I didn't like:
Marcel. He got kinda wasted here, personality-wise. I wanted to see more of him, but hoped he'd be more than Bubba 2.0.
A guy with more depth. Maybe circumventing expectations by making him a romantic softy at heart, who likes to read books in his free time (and a potential LI for a pure/not fully corrupted Holly later on). Wasted opportunity.

Jack. Felt like a completely redundant cameo so far. I understand Eva not wanting to bring in Tyrone (bbc overload) but maybe Hugo would have been a better choice in regard to GGGB endings.

Ian/Lena pathing. In my original playthrough, I'm pushing for them to be in a stag & vixen relationship, where Ian likes seeing Lena fucked but is not humiliated or denied. Some teasing is good (especially if it goes both ways with Ian also sleeping around) but right now it's railroading into Sub or Dom with no middle ground or switch. Previous scenes where executed a bit better in that regard.
I hope that it doesn't end with full Cuck-Ian, because that would also feel disconnected from his other scenes if he fucks Allison, Emma, etc.

Can I follow a path where Ian is a Stag for Lena and Alison ?

 

[| Vee |]

just pay $5 for her patreon and dm her

She has 2,575 patron's as of now, so by polls alone and given trend, you can guess how much Voice someone will have.

 

[Turret]

She has 2,575 patron's as of now, so by polls alone and given trend, you can guess how much Voice someone will have.

Yes, but the main problem are not the patrons per se, but that EK listens too much to them!
Storytelling is like making an acidic meal. You need a bit of sugar in it to enhance the taste, but letting the patrons push you into flooding the dish with sugar is the worng thing.
I viscerally hate polls who give the patrons the power to influence the story big time! Wherever that happen, be it e.g. here in ORS, Misfits or AWAM to name a few, the story and/or realism take a nosedive soon after. Too many patrons have zero experience how to create a story and it shows. Normally you can rest assure that one of the worst options will be chosen, not the fitting one!

 

[dengl]

in a playthrough without BBC Fetish, does Marcel still offer himself to Lena?

Nope. If lena_fty_bbc is false the entire Marcel sequence won't trigger.

Apparently It's implied to be a BJ scene with Jack as 3 variables are taken into account route v11bbc/lena_jack>2/v11Axel(if Lena gives Axel a blowjob in WC) in cheating Lena route when Lena gives bj to Ian.

If the code is readied to serve its purpose we can safely assume it will happen. Because Eva did said that epilogue beta/final will have an extra scene so.....

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I wonder if they will bring Jasmine to cross out the trans of pending fetishes.

I hope no. Enough of this in GGGB, where the scene of meeting Jasmine in the shower was forced.

All these cameos seem like a disaster due to Eve's writing problems. Fan service, or as the Romans would say - bread and circuses. The only original NPC in this add-on is the girl from the store. I don't mind cameos when they are successful and fit into the atmosphere and narrative, but now it feels like the entire cast from GGGB has moved to ORS.

 

[vgbestly]

Another option complete out of left field. Kill off Ian, since most players prefer to play Lena anyway. And go all in on fetish and depravity driven content. Some of the relationships in Lena's storyline already lend themselves to this:

• Stan -> cuck
• Louise/Holly/Ivy -> femdom
• Axel/Mike -> maledom
• Seymour -> powerplay (maybe porn/escorting in the future)
• Jessica -> porn
• Jeremy/Marcel -> BBC (with the potential on a retcon of Billy)

Cindy, Wade, Alison, Minerva, Perry and Wade are harder to place since they are mostly on the Ian storyline. But since now fans are being catered to, Ed is back in the game

 

[LoneWaker59]

Cindy is also a hypocrite, She dissed Ian for seeing Lena and Alisson while here she is having the time of her life with Axel

Tbh, Cindy for me is the worst character in the game, she's spoiled, annoying, even in the +18 scenes you have to do what she wants or you'll lose points like the "slap harder" option, she seems like those girls who if any little thing doesn't go her way she'll punish you by cheating.

But she needs to be in the spotlight since she came first in the voting and they dictate the course of the game.
Ian helping Cindy/Wade sort out their relationship is the best option.