VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Leongen43]

The only thing I hope is that in the update there will be very hot scenes on the beach with Emma and if I could do a threesome that includes Holly/Emma/Ian or I would also like sex scenes with Cindy/Axel in a photo shoot where Lena I discover them and we have the option for her to get excited where she masturbates while they have intense and dominant sex that brings back more memories for Lena. Will it be interesting?

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[CreativeCritic2]

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[JohnnyKiss]

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If you really want things to "go animal" it might be better to have Axel fucking Ian in front of Lena to establish his dominance over Ian, making himself more primitively attractive to Lena. Such an act is not strictly homosexuality as it is more a function of putting the competition in its place. I suppose Axel would then "finish" in Lena to give her a taste of the overall sordidness.

So far, it sounds like the creation of a small scale Hugh Hefner-like Playboy club. If yacht parties get introduced, it may ramp up....listen carefully for screams heard across the sea on a still night.


This would be difficult to address. Situations like this require the depravity to build up gradually with surprises injected that once digested leaves the reader longing for more and trying to anticipate the next step.

I like the actual interludes of Seymour with Lena, although as I have mentioned before, I was disappointed with the retooling of the mirror scene; I thought the original was more exciting. The scenes are too slow in coming; probably because they are the most difficult to construct. By comparison, in my view, all of the other arcs are quite mundane, dominated by small talk and stock porn scenes. EK needs to draw out the LSD arc much more carefully. In addition to Lena exhibiting herself to Seymour's "watch parties" I think he will at some point lend Lena to Agnes forming a side plot in which Agnes has some private sessions with Lena, exhibiting herself to Lena

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and having a joining between her bottom half with Lena's upper half

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Lena will eventually be lured to Dubai by the poshness characteristic, leading to escorted shopping trips during the day for the most expensive and revealing outfits which, at night, she will display and parade in front of a new and much more predatory audience, than the ones to which she catered back in Spain. I think the real depravity of the Dubai nights will begin with Lena sitting on the laps of the Emirs; they will probe and caress her suggestively while watching the more ferocious acts perpetuated on less exotic slaves. I also do not expect any explicit scat, but when EK breaks this arc off from ORS into a nonregulated forum, some of the Emirs' more outlandish tastes may be indulged. Lena may be instructed to drop her lingerie in front of a... well... different type of audience

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and then prepared for a new experience

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With the Emirs fully aroused, it will be time:

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. Hopefully their hunger will not lead them to a one-off

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Just my two cents.

If anyone is going to cuck Ian with Lena it's going to be Jeremy. He already cucked him with Allison. Axel seems more like the BDSM type.

 

[ffive]

If anyone is going to cuck Ian with Lena it's going to be Jeremy. He already cucked him with Allison. Axel seems more like the BDSM type.

Axel already potentially fucks Lena who is in relationship with Ian. Meantime Lena/Jeremy is largely mutually exclusive with Lena/Ian.

 

[Leongen43]

Axel already potentially fucks Lena who is in relationship with Ian. Meantime Lena/Jeremy is largely mutually exclusive with Lena/Ian.

It's true there is no NTR route if Lena has sex with Jeremy but Lena can have sex with the rest of the boys so I don't know if it's a great consolation for Ian that she doesn't have sex with Jeremy, right?

 

[ffive]

It's true there is no NTR route if Lena has sex with Jeremy but Lena can have sex with the rest of the boys so I don't know if it's a great consolation for Ethan that she doesn't have sex with Jeremy, right?

I guess it can be some consolation if it's doesn't involve his good friend, since that'd be even worse. Of course, for Ian who fucks Cindy it'd also be pure hypocrisy to complain about it

 

[Leongen43]

I guess it can be some consolation if it's doesn't involve his good friend, since that'd be even worse. Of course, for Ian who fucks Cindy it'd also be pure hypocrisy to complain about it:sneaks:

I always see that there are too many temptations among them to be able to avoid them all, that's why Ian/Lena should have a swinger or free relationship for their relationship to work because otherwise we lose a lot of sex content in the game if we are faithful to both

 

[obolocreo17]

The last update was that the writing was challenging and the illustrations are 50% done. That was 3 days ago. Make of that what you will.

Great update in September

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Axel already potentially fucks Lena who is in relationship with Ian. Meantime Lena/Jeremy is largely mutually exclusive with Lena/Ian.

Cheating and Cucking isn't the same. I thought from all of the discussions about the topic on here this would've been obvious by now. There is a cuck route for Ian where he seemingly enjoys listening to Lena talk about all the guys she has had sex with and considering Ian can watch Jeremy fuck Allison in front of him, I think the natural evolution of this storyline would be Ian watching Jeremy fuck Lena.

 

[ffive]

Cheating and Cucking isn't the same. I thought from all of the discussions about the topic on here this would've been obvious by now.

I'm sadly not an expert in cuckology, so i read it in the common way used around this forum (cheating when MC fucks people other than their partner, cucking when it's MC's partner getting fucked by someone else). But you're right, i could see Jeremy getting involved in the context you describe.

Although, i'd argue that if Ian is on explicit cuck route, then having Lena's former boyfriend of all people fuck Lena in front of him could also be something he'd be willing to go for and a huge turn on for him, given he can potentially find it hot when he has dream of Gillian getting fucked by her current boyfriend and telling him how pathetic lover he was. This might actually be one of outcomes of the current crisis at beach house, if Ian was told by Jeremy that Lena is cheating on him with Axel.

 

[DeemLeem12]

EK will have a faster time in development if the illustrations are made first. Ideas for writing can more easily flow with all the illustrations and more can be done on development time. Less headache, more art. Even just drawing random sex scenes can make this faster.

 

[varpep]

I am an expert in Cuckology and the only one that deserves to cuck Ian is Lola. Thank you.

 

[Krysis_here]

I am an expert in Cuckology and the only one that deserves to cuck Ian is Lola. Thank you.

I guess you are Right. Looking at the Facts Lola hissed at Potato Head Robert and she kept an eye on Lena , Sure she could make Ian Cuck and give a Love bite on his Ass and Ian can't do anything because She is Pretty **MEOWW**

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[BlandChili]

Cheating and Cucking isn't the same. I thought from all of the discussions about the topic on here this would've been obvious by now.

I'm sadly not an expert in cuckology, so i read it in the common way used around this forum (cheating when MC fucks people other than their partner, cucking when it's MC's partner getting fucked by someone else). But you're right, i could see Jeremy getting involved in the context you describe.

A cuckold is a man whose partner is sexually active with another individual. The victims enjoyment or participation in said sexual activity does not play a role in the definition for the term.

As for Jeremy I do not see why his content with Lena and hers with Ian couldn't intersect down the line.

 

[Leongen43]

A cuckold is a man whose partner is sexually active with another individual. The victims enjoyment or participation in said sexual activity does not play a role in the definition for the term.

As for Jeremy I do not see why his content with Lena and hers with Ian couldn't intersect down the line.

That is true but in Lena's NTR route I would not rule out that in the future she will have a meeting with Jeremy in even a BBC threesome of Jeremy/Marcel/Lena knowing how EK likes to do it, difficult but not impossible in a route where everything is crazy for Lena, right?

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[Zara Scarlet]

Cheating and Cucking isn't the same. I thought from all of the discussions about the topic on here this would've been obvious by now. There is a cuck route for Ian where he seemingly enjoys listening to Lena talk about all the guys she has had sex with and considering Ian can watch Jeremy fuck Allison in front of him, I think the natural evolution of this storyline would be Ian watching Jeremy fuck Lena.

On the open route, Jeremy is almost certainly going to be the other male, for Lena's probable MMF threesome. I mean who else would Ian choose? But that's more sharing than cucking. Cucks watch, they don't actually take part. In any case, the cuck route isn't part of the open route. You have to be on the relationship route, where Ian and Lena decided not to open things up, and then subsequently Lena starts cheating on him. On that route, Lena doesn't allow Ian to fuck her at all. He has to settle for handjobs, footjobs and the occasional blowjob if he's really lucky. She's basically training him to accept whatever she decides. My guess is, Lena's cheating/cuck path will eventually have Ian choosing whether to stay with Lena and become a willing fullblown cuck or ending the relationship. On the open path, they'll probably end up as swingers and/or allow each other to sleep independently with other characters. I think Mike, Jeremy, Mark, Jack, Ivy, Emma , Jessica and possibly Louise and Holly ( bad girl mode) are characters who would very likely go along with that scenario.

 

[KevAnand7]

need more jeremy and big black bouncer content, i love his game

 

[KevAnand7]

Holly path is the only path worth playing. Bad taste friend

I hope Holly turns into a hot stripper, and I want that big black bouncer dude too. Like holly goes to the club but forgets her id or something. bbc for everyone!!!

 

[JohnnyKiss]

On the open route, Jeremy is almost certainly going to be the other male, for Lena's probable MMF threesome. I mean who else would Ian choose? But that's more sharing than cucking. Cucks watch, they don't actually take part. In any case, the cuck route isn't part of the open route. You have to be on the relationship route, where Ian and Lena decided not to open things up, and then subsequently Lena starts cheating on him. On that route, Lena doesn't allow Ian to fuck her at all. He has to settle for handjobs, footjobs and the occasional blowjob if he's really lucky. She's basically training him to accept whatever she decides. My guess is, Lena's cheating/cuck path will eventually have Ian choosing whether to stay with Lena and become a willing fullblown cuck or ending the relationship. On the open path, they'll probably end up as swingers and/or allow each other to sleep independently with other characters. I think Mike, Jeremy, Mark, Jack, Ivy, Emma , Jessica and possibly Louise and Holly ( bad girl mode) are characters who would very likely go along with that scenario.

Okay, but consider this: Lena can have the BBC obsession on the "Couple Route" with Ian as long as she only sucks Jeremy's cock and not sleep with him. She can later cheat on Ian with another BBC wielder that is the bouncer (can't remember his name right now). So, it's far from impossible for Ian to ask Jeremy to fuck his girlfriend.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

A cuckold is a man whose partner is sexually active with another individual.

In part, but this could also be a thing for multiple other things like "open relationship" and simple "cheating".

The victims enjoyment or participation in said sexual activity does not play a role in the definition for the term.

Yes it does.