I agree in general with rest of the post, but this does get a variant if Lena is present in the scene and able to comment:
Python:
show v12_axelpg1
//...
if lena_axel_desire:
$ flena = "drama"
else:
$ flena = "worried"
//...
p "What an a--{w=0.5}asshole... What is he doing, posting this? It's like he's t--{w=0.5}trying to rub it on Wade's face."
if seymour_desire == False and v12_ian_lena_breakup == False and lena_axel_desire:
$ flena = "mad"
l "In everyone's faces."
$ flena = "serious"
elif seymour_desire == False and v12_ian_lena_breakup == False:
$ flena = "serious"
l "Axel's like that... He likes to boast, always trying to prove something to the world, always wanting to come out on top."
$ flena = "sad"
Yes, I meant that it doesn't affect to Axel's post happening or to how it happens. Which I don't mean as a criticism, Axel not giving a fuck and ready to bullshit Lena about it is in character. My expectations for the complexity of the eplilogue just were higher because of Eva's posts
i think after the shopping Lena & Emma , everyone also expected some action between them.
Yes, we surely still do. But I didn't expect anything in this latest update, I expected it in one of the previous larger ones.
I guess the follow up to the Wade and Perry situations with Lena are going to come with chapter 13 wich is going to be mostly about her.
The whole Gillian thing is kinda weird to me,EK went all in this chapter about it.
Sure, again I didn't mean all those points as criticisms of things that should have been there but aren't. It's just that I had higher expectations giving the alleged writing difficulties. Not necessarily that Eva got totally into it, but maybe just taken into account those variables to add some extra flavour to the writing, as she did with some other variables.