VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Leongen43]

Alison is plain, its just that porn characters are sexualized, so even the plain girls are looking like 10s.
She only manages to turn heads if she displays her boobs and wears a slutty dress.
Emma doesn't even get attention from Ian and Jeremy for years until she dresses up/down.

Lena, Cindy and Cherry are in another league by comparison and those girls are the ones the "alphas" go for. They are above picking up wallflowers, they leave that to Jeremy.

Wait!! You're putting Cindy in a higher category than Alison, I wonder what it's going to be like when Xupuzulla sees your post, something like that?

 

[anonx5]

I don't go for my subjective opinion about how hot I find Alison (in that case almost all girls there are 10s), but what the game indicates and tells us. Several characters get far more compliments and attention, Ians and Lenas descriptions and thoughts about their partners is also a good indicator.
Alison never got much attention. She was a nerd and teased about her tits, indicating just having big tits doesn't make you a ten if it doesn't fit with the rest with your body aesthetically.

All she manages to get is a loser like her ex, Jeremy who doesn't have exceeding standards and Ian by players choice.

Hence Axel didn't gave her one look when she introduced herself to him.

I get what you mean. You are going off how other characters in game see Allison, but I objectively see Allison as very sexy. Is she pretty in the face? She's kinda plain there and I admit Cindy has her beat there.

But I really don't care how ingame characters feel about Allison I like how she looks. I have always liked tall gorgeous women.


Allison is the female version of tall dark and handsome, only instead of muscles she's has curves as the day as long.


The only thing the game is missing is a female bodybuilder who still looks feminine, although Ivy and Lena both come closer to that than anyone else.


Never was much attracted to Lena though, the weird gray hair and the black cat make her seem like a witch with amnesia who does not know who she is.

 

[anonx5]

I am also more attracted to Louise than Holly because she's a redhead and she is more curvy too. She has that bloodrayne look. And maybe Ian and her can be a couple who won't cheat on each other since she seems really pissed at Jeremy for cheating on her.

Then again I dunno, even when romantically involved with Lena she still tries to take Ian from her, so maybe cheating is OK so long it's her doing it in her mind?

 

[Gicoo]

Wait!! You're putting Cindy in a higher category than Alison,

Technically I didn't. That was merely what I gathered from Axel.

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To remind you what the discussion was initially about, it was me pointing out that Axel goes after models and ignores plain girls, two categories that the game manages to distinguish over its course. Whether you find Alison hotter or not, is entirely your thing

 

[anonx5]

Technically I didn't. That was merely what I gathered from Axel.


To remind you what the discussion was initially about, it was me pointing out that Axel goes after models and ignores plain girls, two categories that the game manages to distinguish over its course. Whether you find Alison hotter or not, is entirely your thing

True... I still think Allison could be a model ingame, she is more than stacked enough, only Ivy and Jess approach how stacked Allison is.

Jessica is basically a better looking Ivy because gray hair on a 20-30 year old looks weird.

 

[Skylark21]

And that's understandable. Imagine to have inspiration to draw and write a sex scene with fat, ugly neckbeard dude with a small dick and anti-social behaviour.
Look at Perry/Emma scored, it's just one terrible pic to close their arc. He is a similar to Stan, just more social active.
My opinion that Eva should remove at all Stan from the game and focused on the story, if she doesn't happy with his character.

I don't really care about Stan but he's the second most popular male NPC on Eva's Patreon after Jeremy,
So I don't think he's gonna disappear anytime soon and will probably have lot more content in the future.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I don't really care about Stan but he's the second most popular male NPC on Eva's Patreon after Jeremy,
So I don't think he's gonna disappear anytime soon and will probably have lot more content in the future.

I know. Eva's Patreon subscribers are malware that infects her and allows her to influence development decisions. They focused on kinks, not the story quality.
And if I'm sure you're right about Jeremy, we'll see a lot of content with him (and I'm not against Jeremy, he's just poorly written), then I have my doubts about Stan, after several years of development we have a picture with a kiss and that's it, as if Eva did it without enthusiasm.
The strategy when you completely ignore the audience's cries and follow your vision in development 100% is more effective, although not without drawbacks.

 

[Deleted member 5513179]

So are we going to get a roofie/date rape scene in this game like when the dead boyfreind's father roofies the MC in Good Girl Gone Bad?


Billy: "Hey Lena, killer party so far! Here, this is a 'special drink' I made just for you, and then how about you join us in the main bedroom?"

 

[Xupuzulla]

Well I disagree about Allison obviously. She is tall and has curves up and down. Cindy fits the typical idea of a blonde supermodel. Allison is just more of everything as far as a man could desire of a woman's body. Wide hips but still thin, huge breasts, and big buttocks as well.

She has everything Cindy and Lena have only more so and not quite as atheletic because she does not work out at the gym.

Alison is wife material,she can feed twin babies with those big titties.

 

[anonx5]

Alison is wife material,she can feed twin babies with those big titties.

Essentially... she does need to learn how to cook better, but given the fact that she was willing to change her looks just to attract Ian, I think so long they stay in a good relationship she would be happy to study spaghetti recipes until she makes a great bowl of spaghetti.

 

[theolin]

do we have a guide for Ian, Holly and Lena path???

 

[Socrambus]

Will have to say i used to look forward to Stan finally getting with her but now after this latest update.... I'm not so sure anymore, his dick is not even half the size of every other dick in the game, so she isn't getting any pleasure from it sadly after everything she has done up to the point that her and Stan FINALLY kiss. When the female mc and the male mc have both fucked everyone 5 times over (favorite female for me with the Mc is Emma). I fell its become a wasted opportunity now which sucks because he was the one I've always been rooting for till this dawned on me.

His dick size is the least of his problems, he's a fat social retard with a huge complex and non existant self-steem and confidence. And he's also a virgin. All of that is what makes it impossible for him to get a girl like Lena and be able to satisfy her. I'm not going to say that size doesn't matter, it matters to a point but unless we are talking about extreme cases like a micropenis it's more a fetish for these games and something we men tend to obsess over rather than a real issue IRL.

I don't find it weird that Eva struggles with Stan. Eva usually write male characters who are confident or cuck bait, Stan is neither.

He's a soft, flabby guy without the leering perversion to prop up his lack of a spine like Arthur, and he doesn't really work as a cuck since he's not in a relationship with anyone. He's that level of pathetic that even teasing him with Stalkfap-Lena is boring.

Perry works as that type of character, the beaten down type, because he's a supporting NPC to the male lead and not an implied romantic/sexual interest to the female lead.

IMO he could have worked as a simp. For all his faults, he has a good IT job which probably means more than decent income and money to spare. My idea was trying to roleplay Lena as someone who is aware of how Stan feels about her and only sees him as an easy to manipulate money source. Basically what many female streamers do with their audience but at a smaller and more personal level. But the writing hasn't gone this way and now Stan only could work as a deranged pyscho threatening Lena and/or Louise for Ian (or another LI) to beat or the utterly unrealistic love path with Lena.

The only thing the game is missing is a female bodybuilder who still looks feminine, although Ivy and Lena both come closer to that than anyone else.

The game is also missing an asian girl to cover everybody's preferences.

So are we going to get a roofie/date rape scene in this game like when the dead boyfreind's father roofies the MC in Good Girl Gone Bad?


Billy: "Hey Lena, killer party so far! Here, this is a 'special drink' I made just for you, and then how about you join us in the main bedroom?"

I think that the plot hints at something like that, but I'm not sure what Patreon and Stream policies are regarding rape content. So probably something lighter like drugs involved to lower girls' inhibitions but also showing clear consent. More similar to alcohol than roofies.

 

[anonx5]

Jeremy wife, maybe?
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Do you actually read what Allison says about Jeremy? She said she would never want him as s husband, he is just hot enough to have sex with. That's it. Ian on the other hand... she told him if he ever wants a girlfriend or wife she's available.

 

[ffive]

And he's also a virgin.

Don't be so sure.

There may be a traumatized sheep out there in the countryside.

 

[anonx5]

His dick size is the least of his problems, he's a fat social retard with a huge complex and non existant self-steem and confidence. And he's also a virgin. All of that is what makes it impossible for him to get a girl like Lena and be able to satisfy her. I'm not going to say that size doesn't matter, it matters to a point but unless we are talking about extreme cases like a micropenis it's more a fetish for these games and something we men tend to obsess over rather than a real issue IRL.



IMO he could have worked as a simp. For all his faults, he has a good IT job which probably means more than decent income and money to spare. My idea was trying to roleplay Lena as someone who is aware of how Stan feels about her and only sees him as an easy to manipulate money source. Basically what many female streamers do with their audience but at a smaller and more personal level. But the writing hasn't gone this way and now Stan only could work as a deranged pyscho threatening Lena and/or Louise for Ian (or another LI) to beat or the utterly unrealistic love path with Lena.



The game is also missing an asian girl to cover everybody's preferences.



I think that the plot hints at something like that, but I'm not sure what Patreon and Stream policies are regarding rape content. So probably something lighter like drugs involved to lower girls' inhibitions but also showing clear consent. More similar to alcohol than roofies.

I guess... I never have been attracted to asian gals... to me out of all races they look the most... different than the rest. The few I have been attracted to always was because of features they had that were not typically Asian (normal or big eyes rather than thin slanted eyes and big breasts as opposed to small).

That said, personality can win me over in spite of looks, but in this game, none of the gals, not even holly, really has much about them that draws me other than their body.

For games where each female has distinct personality and you have to at least put effort into the relationship or even understanding them well enough for them to agree to mate with you... try Leaving DNA.

You click fast through that game and you won't get sex scenes unless you already know what to do.

 

[anonx5]

Holly's lack of confidence makes her unattractive to me, since even when you try to bolster it she still doubts herself.

She is like a lot of work for a gal who has underage features.

You have to practically coddle her all the time while Cindy expects you to be a yes man who she can walk over and will make a fuss if you disagree with her.

If Emma was not so wild she would easily be a good pick for a mate.

Which is why I am considering Louise since she is hotter than holly and could easily compete with Emma since she is not as loose or wild sexually if you don't want that.

 

[ffive]

Holly's lack of confidence makes her unattractive to me, since even when you try to bolster it she still doubts herself.

Slutty Holly gets plenty of confidence. Just have Ivy groom her for you.

 

[anonx5]

Slutty Holly gets plenty of confidence. Just have Ivy groom her for you.

Yeah I am aware of that... I would rather have a Holly who grow her confidence without having been ran through 3 guys and two women.

Only issue is it takes longer that way.

 

[Gicoo]

Louise is clingy and also mentally damaged. She never managed to have a proper relationship and it was shown how quickly she got furious about Jeremy (justified, the two had entirely different views about this relationship) and Lena (not justified).

Got the impression she is a bit of Robert-like in the regard that Eva goes out of her way to make Lena and Ian not wanting her. Its clear with Lena, she can't have strong feelings for her. With Ian its open for now. Him developing feelings towards her is rushed, otherwise he seems to play with her and Louise throws a tantrum if he ignores her just once, so this doesn't look promising for now. Even romancing Holly is less challenging.

 

[anonx5]

Louise is clingy and also mentally damaged. She never managed to have a proper relationship and it was shown how quickly she got furious about Jeremy (justified, the two had entirely different views about this relationship) and Lena (not justified).

Got the impression she is a bit of Robert-like in the regard that Eva goes out of her way to make Lena and Ian not wanting her. Its clear with Lena, she can't have strong feelings for her. With Ian its open for now. Him developing feelings towards her is rushed, otherwise he seems to play with her and Louise throws a tantrum if he ignores her just once, so this doesn't look promising for now. Even romancing Holly is less challenging.

Louise is basically the kind of the pretty gal who is kind of broken but you think you can fix her. That is the appeal. The clinginess means (I hope) that she will be loyal and won't cheat.

I don't need to play the field if I have a committed relationship ingame. Lena although a main character really does not do it for me so it is always challenging to have her as the main love interest. With Louise that would be less of an issue because she has that broken but I can fix her girl vibe and she is clingy enough that if I treat her right I don't have to worry (as Ian often does) about her cheating as he does with Cindy and Lena.


If she is mentally damaged she is still book smart enough to get her bacherlor's degree, and Lena does not have any degree I am aware of.

Hopefully the author will display or tap into Louise's smart mind someday since she obviously has it.