VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[manscout]

I don't think Seymour seeks purely sexual release, he is well read and seems to occupy himself with a wide variety of hobbies and businesses to challenge himself. He is a man that seemingly has achieved everything in life and I think he is looking for new peaks to conquer. Maybe it's out of boredom, I still think there is something to be revealed with him and his motivations. He becomes interested in Lena when she challenges and compliments him and I think he sees her as something to conquer as well.

Yes, i'm talking only about "older" character simularity. An older male character with whom the female MC can build a relationship. Arthur is a psychopath, manipulator, pervert who fucks his daughter, despises his son. Deprived of a sense of empathy. Has no interests in life, except for hedonism. I wouldn't be surprised to learn that he is actually a pedophile. I want to go through the GGGB again and in the end put Arthur in jail (though I don't know how, but I heard that this ending is real)
Seymour at this time looks like a serious, mature man who lives by art. I think it is possible to build a much more adequate relationship with him.

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To me Seymour is just as much of a scumbag as Arthur, but a much more crafty and dangerous opponent. In GGGB Arthur could easily be deceived for some extra money early in the game or completely avoided with no consequences, and the one time he tried to act out without being encouraged (the drug rape) you could throw him in jail for it, I do not think getting the best out of Seymour will be quite as easy and one should be very careful on how much they let him have over Ian and Lena (spicy photos, a book deal, etc).

 

[BlandChili]

To me Seymour is just as much of a scumbag as Arthur, but a much more crafty and dangerous opponent. In GGGB Arthur could easily be deceived for some extra money early in the game or completely avoided with no consequences, and the one time he tried to act out without being encouraged (the drug rape) you could throw him in jail for it, I do not think getting the best out of Seymour will be quite as easy and one should be very careful on how much they let him have over Ian and Lena (spicy photos, a book deal, etc).

There is no doubt to me that Seymour is nasty too.

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I suppose the main difference is that we don't have a full picture of Seymour yet so it is harder for me to say in definite terms that he too is a psycho, I feel more comfortable rendering concrete judgement on Arthur just now.

 

[FugginDamaged]

Yes, i'm talking only about "older" character simularity. An older male character with whom the female MC can build a relationship. Arthur is a psychopath, manipulator, pervert who fucks his daughter, despises his son. Deprived of a sense of empathy. Has no interests in life, except for hedonism. I wouldn't be surprised to learn that he is actually a pedophile. I want to go through the GGGB again and in the end put Arthur in jail (though I don't know how, but I heard that this ending is real)
Seymour at this time looks like a serious, mature man who lives by art. I think it is possible to build a much more adequate relationship with him.

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[Leonardovisk]

Well, I dont know who Seymour remembers from GoodGirl but im really impressed with the high quality of his text and the relationship with Lena. Especially at the restaurant meeting and the first photo shoot. Its real amazing. The dialogues are very, very well constructed and depth. I didnt expect to find a so well build dialogues in a fap game (please im not trying to offend anyone i just really impressed with the quality of the text)

I look forward to see where the relationship goes. I myself am a Nietzsche guy and maybe im just transporting my passion for the old german guy to Lena's arc. She took my heart in that restaurant lol. I cheers the devs for that!!!

For me Ian arc it dosent have 10% of the depth than Lena have.

(sorry my english its not my main language)

EDIT: BTW its funny for me Ivy as Lena friend because Ivy is most like the "amor fati" Nietzsche concept and maybe, maybe (im not drunk i swear) Lena is on her way to become the uberman (superhuman)

 

[BlandChili]

I didnt expect to find a so well build dialogues in a fap game (please im not trying to offend anyone i just really impressed with the quality of the text)

I don't think you have to worry about offending! I doubt anyone who attends this forum are under any illusions as to the nature of the game we are playing.

I've never really been able to get off satisfyingly on pornography alone, I think Evakiss is proof that erotica can have some substance to it too, something to which I feel the character of Lena is also a reflection on. Both her and Ashley from GGGB promote a positive image of female sexuality.

 

[Leonardovisk]

I don't think you have to worry about offending! I doubt anyone who attends this forum are under any illusions as to the nature of the game we are playing.

I've never really been able to get off satisfyingly on pornography alone, I think Evakiss is proof that erotica can have some substance to it too, something to which I feel the character of Lena is also a reflection on. Both her and Ashley from GGGB promote a positive image of female sexuality.

I totally agree with you. And i like play as female chars. As a man, its a perspective twist!

 

[Master5043]

To me Seymour is just as much of a scumbag as Arthur, but a much more crafty and dangerous opponent. In GGGB Arthur could easily be deceived for some extra money early in the game or completely avoided with no consequences, and the one time he tried to act out without being encouraged (the drug rape) you could throw him in jail for it, I do not think getting the best out of Seymour will be quite as easy and one should be very careful on how much they let him have over Ian and Lena (spicy photos, a book deal, etc).

We will see about that. He didn't do something weird or creepy for this time. And his colleague (that woman from 0.6, I don't remember her name) from the photo session with Axel is really creepy.

 

[dundun]

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And how convincingly he feigns igorance when you tell him that you work there. Also, how convenient that Lena gets fired from her job at his restaurant right after he meets her . I think his plans started with the evening Axel met Lena, else he wouldn't have been there
Arthur, of course, was entirely avoidable. Even in the good girl path you have at least half a dozen chances to get rid of him. Seymour not so much. He is also in Ian's path and who knows where else he has his fingers in.

 

[lumilipad]

Any recommendation for other games with this art style? Thanks.

 

[Why are you gae?]

Any recommendation for other games with this art style? Thanks.

Good Girl Gone Bad.

 

[xgrotesc]

Good Girl Gone Bad.

Yeah, GGGB is the author's previous game. Graphics are not as good as on this one, but they're somewaht similar. You can also try Lust Campus, a game being developed by two friends of the author of this one. It's still in early development phase, but the graphics are top notch, although they're not as good of storytellers as EvaKiss is.

 

[bigmoneywill]

Yeah, GGGB is the author's previous game. Graphics are not as good as on this one, but they're somewaht similar. You can also try Lust Campus, a game being developed by two friends of the author of this one. It's still in early development phase, but the graphics are top notch, although they're not as good of storytellers as EvaKiss is.

I dream of them all one day doing a project together. Lust Campus' developers combined with Eva's storytelling would make for an amazing game.

 

[balvenie1401]

A little worried waiting for those previews that were supposed to drop this week, Eva is usually very timely.. 2-3 days left til supposed alpha release this weekend doesn't leave much of a window..

 

[Cicica]

A little worried waiting for those previews that were supposed to drop this week, Eva is usually very timely.. 2-3 days left til supposed alpha release this weekend doesn't leave much of a window..

Yeah I thought the same, but who knows, maybe she'll drop two, one today, one tomorrow and then the alpha.

 

[DDDIsReal]

A little worried waiting for those previews that were supposed to drop this week, Eva is usually very timely.. 2-3 days left til supposed alpha release this weekend doesn't leave much of a window..

Same thoughts, i can’t wait anymore

 

[Cicica]

Same thoughts, i can’t wait anymore

I like your profile picture, remembers me of one of the big reasons I am waiting for this update!

 

[Master5043]

A little worried waiting for those previews that were supposed to drop this week, Eva is usually very timely.. 2-3 days left til supposed alpha release this weekend doesn't leave much of a window..

We arleady have sneak peeks - 4 Lena's new clothes, Cindy, and a new location peek. Maybe Eva will release alpha without new previous

 

[Cicica]

We arleady have sneak peeks - 4 Lena's new clothes, Cindy, and a new location peek. Maybe Eva will release alpha without new previous

She said that she'll release some additional teasers before the Alpha this week, though if she decided that she'll just release the Alpha without them it's fine by me

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

She said that she'll release some additional teasers before the Alpha this week, though if she decided that she'll just release the Alpha without them it's fine by me

It's not like her to say that she'll do something and then not do it, so my guess would be that there's been some issues making her fall behind schedule and there's been no time to post the teasers. If that's the case, I definitely agree that it's better to prioritise getting the Alpha done as fast as possible rather than making Patreon posts throughout the week.

 

[dundun]

I dream of them all one day doing a project together. Lust Campus' developers combined with Eva's storytelling would make for an amazing game.

It's not that easy. The art in Lust Campus looks awesome, for sure. But there is just a handfull unique images in an update. As fas as I understand, their artist already works full time on it and he is experienced so this won't become more. If you look at other games with handdrawn art (eg Seeds of Chaos) that seem common. Handpainted art takes time.
EvaKiss can put out 50+ images in an update. That allows her to have a big branching story with lots of characters in the first place.