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VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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_Zebra_

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Does anyone else feels like Lena part of the story is lacking friends?

Ian always meets with Wade, Perry, Jerremy, Cindy, Allison and Emma. Or ok, not all of them but at least 2. They play games, they talk about different stuff and they can help each other out: get a GF for Perry, help Wade with his request regarding Cindy, go with Cindy when she asks you - normal and non-sexual activities. You can also go out with Cherry or Holly and just be friends. Even when he goes to the gym he has another 2 character that he can talk too.

Lena on the other hand has way less friends: a cat, Louise - but you don't spend nearly as much time with her, Holly and Ivy. Stan, he is in the game too, I guess. Maybe he will start to be more important from now on, because Seymour can't buy him and Lena still needs a photographer. Robert can either be a 'bad' sexual partner or a waste of 'ink'. Mike is the same. Axel, well, we've seen this update how he got over the relationship and wants just to stay friends. There is also Ed and Molly, but I see them more like a mother and father / creepy uncle.
 
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-DarkHorizon- said:
I would have liked for Ian, Holly & Lena to enter a polygamous relationship but it looks like that isn't gonna be in the cards, except for maybe a hookup down the line.
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I see it happening in the future, I just think that kind of relationship will be milked as a possible lategame goal.
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Reasoon said:
Okay wow this is really getting complicated:ROFLMAO: The IanxLena Thing seems really difficult because I think this is the one Relationship that is affected by every other one so maybe there are few glitches with it. If you find something out please let me know! I want to be prepared for my Alison Endgame in the best way possible :D
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well of course as a fellow alison fan we've to support each other lol
 
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Reasoon said:
Quick Question if you don't mind. Since I don't play this Scenario why does Alison call Ian right before she is about to have sex with Jeremy and another Guy and what is she telling him? For me this doesn't make sense at all and seems kind of out of Character for her espescially when she doesn't even want to make him jealous.
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She talks about how she's sorry for the situation Ian and Jeremy were in when they had to deal with her stalker earlier. All that while Jeremy is at her place and only seconds away from banging her. Then Ian gets the video of both dudes nailing her and that's it.
I think Alison should have feelings for Ian whether they are dating or not. Those feelings don't just vanish because she has sex with someone. Can they turn into disgust or even hate? Sure. Who in their twenties is mature enough to let go that easily though? It's a possibility that Alison knows what Jeremy does with the videos but no hints were given so far.
 
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StarKid

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Update is a bit on the short side but i like how it moved the story forward alot and had the bigggest relationship development weve seen yet (IanxLena and IanxCindy). The Cindy scenes alones makes this update more than worth the wait, best girl.
 
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Skylark21

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Amansas said:
What do you think guys? Is this game finally nearing completion? I've been wanting to play this for a while now, but I'm a sucker for completed games.

I did read the post above me.
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Game still has long way to go before it's compl
dond1 said:
If I had to bet, I would say the story could be wrapped up in ~2-3 episodes easily. The Book Ian is working on is almost finished, tournament is most likely in next update or so.

The pieces for endings are already there and locking in place, since you can "Lock" relationships with different characters.

If you think about it, her earlier game was not that much longer and I doubt there will be not much room for new characters or major storylines.
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You do realise this game isn't only about Ian right and he's not the only protagonist? Almost half of the routes on Lena side of story are yet to begin or are on Intial phase I.e Holly, Jeremy, Billy, Modeling,Singer, Ed etc and not to forget Stan.

If I had to say we're only halfway through at this point considering someone pointed out that Eva's planned at least 20+ Episodes for it.
 
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gambit87 said:
I hope Lena and Louise make up again. And I hope Lena could try to reconcile Ivy and Louise. And Holly could help with that too;)
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When did they fight? It looks like louise is upset with lena because she left to look after her sick mother - verypoor story telling.
 
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yggdral said:
well of course as a fellow alison fan we've to support each other lol
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slightchance said:
She talks about how she's sorry for the situation Ian and Jeremy were in when they had to deal with her stalker earlier. All that while Jeremy is at her place and only seconds away from banging her. Then Ian gets the video of both dudes nailing her and that's it.
I think Alison should have feelings for Ian whether they are dating or not. Those feelings don't just vanish because she has sex with someone. Can they turn into disgust or even hate? Sure. Who in their twenties is mature enough to let go that easily though? It's a possibility that Alison knows what Jeremy does with the videos but no hints were given so far.
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Thank you for the breakdown of this Scenario :) But yeah I really don't like that it still feels off, like Alison is two different People depending how you play the Game and her whole Character becomes just some Blacked-Voyeur Tool because well every Game needs one. I will continue to avoid this! :D
 
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LochRaven said:
Has Eva given any indication as to how many chapters the game is going to be in total? Some parts of chapter 9 feel close to end game material, while other parts feel like they are just getting started. Also with development time steadily increasing it seems like this thing could keep going for years unless Eva plans to wrap it up soon.
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No indication, but based on GGGB's development and Eva Kiss' goals with this title, I think we're roughly at the halfway mark.
 
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Thanks for the great update.

I found some Bugs -- which is expected in an Alpha relase.

There are some missplaced overlay pictures when Stan picks up Lena and in the Axel scene withour Ian:
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I also get an exception error, when Lena starts the photoshot with Axel
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Hope that helps with debugging.

Thanks for a great game.
 
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I unfortunately find the artwork took a severe turn for the worse for this update, several of the Alison and Cindy illustrations are way worse then previous standard,some off the Aluson lingerie ones are just jacked :/ not the whole world obv but given the 5+ month cycle it stings a bit extra, some of those illustrations shouldn't have gotten past first draft tbh... story wise a decent update, would be a good size for a two month cycle though..
 
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balvenie1401 said:
I unfortunately find the artwork took a severe turn for the worse for this update, several of the Alison and Cindy illustrations are way worse then previous standard,some off the Aluson lingerie ones are just jacked :/ not the whole world obv but given the 5+ month cycle it stings a bit extra, some of those illustrations shouldn't have gotten past first draft tbh... story wise a decent update, would be a good size for a two month cycle though..
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I think it shows eva really had hard time with this chapter. I can see her struggles
 
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