VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.2 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[Xupuzulla]

Same applies to your small dick fantasy of Stan and Holly, long with Holly getting blacked in one chapter.
Certainly one to talk.

Most of my posts about Holly are jokes,anyone who isnt dense can notice that.
I never derail the thread crying about Holly or asking for more content for Stan like you do with Ivy throught.

 

[JoJoPool]

That added to an increasingly difficult ambition to release updates somewhat regularly, perhaps she just figures she should wrap it up and move on to bigger and better things? It's a pity because I also feel like the climax of the story has barely been hinted at yet.

Isn't that always the case ? She stated in her Q&A that she wants to take on new challenges and try new things with every new project as a way to keep herself motivated and boost her creativity ( also ORS was the "bigger and better thing" at the end of GGGB )... She then gets herself entangled in a mess of workload she can barely handle, she gets writer's block, the updates take a whole year, she gets exhausted and wants to wrap up and move on to something else..... New game - repeat cycle.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Okay, I was quite a lot. I'm not a radical simp of anyone. I am a guy who is interested in the game and where the story will lead. But I understand people's irritation and support the dissatisfaction.
Game has interesting characters - Ivy and Emma, who are not given much attention.
In return, Robert (the leg dildo for sex in the early game) continues to receive content. Why?
Stan is useless and he is a reflection of the people who see themselves in him. And don't tell me he's a fan favorite and came in "second place." This is a group of people who are interested in creepy Stan to amuse their fragile it. They don't interested in the game and story.
Jeremy is just an interracial fetish for now, although he may get a development arc.
Gillian - why was it necessary to return her if Eva, apparently, doesn't understand what to do with her. She can write for her a good redemption arc.
This game and many of the characters deserve better, but Eva makes the wrong decisions time and time again.
You may not like SerHawkes' harsh speech, he is an emotional guy, but he is right.

 

[Xupuzulla]

"Im not a simp of anyone"
"Female characters i like=GOOD"
"Characters i dont like=VERY BAD"
LMAO at least be honest with yourself,bro.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Game has interesting characters - Ivy and Emma, who are not given much attention.

Emma got enough attention for someone so fat and communist.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

"Im not a simp of anyone"
"Female characters i like=GOOD"
"Characters i dont like=VERY BAD"
LMAO at least be honest with yourself,bro.

You're distorted everything I wrote to suit your ideas.
These characters are simply NPCs, without their own personality, who display stereotypical type of people. To fill the game with kinky content and satisfy certain groups of people.
This is not called "good writing". This is called "fan service".
Fan service is a bad sign. Its purpose is to distract the audience from existing problems in the games.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Emma got enough attention for someone so fat and communist.

I listened to your point of view. Now go to the field.

 

[MF_DOOM]

I never derail the thread crying about Holly or asking for more content for Stan

Thats a lie, especially that last part.

 

[bauman]

It doesn't make sense to correlate ORS with GGGB. Mind you, GGGB is not some mindless sick fetish game either because THERE is a good Ashley path where you can end up be married with Eric, Dave, Jess, or even Jack. You want ORS to be realistic, play it that way! There is paths where Lena being lovey dovey with either Ian or Holly. There is a choice where Lena tells her friends what her desire is and we have so many options to choose (sex with a girl, exhibitionism, dominated, bbc, etc).

ORS correlates with GGGB quite nicely. It mirrors the previous game development problems and offers similar situations, characters, and fetishes. The narrative is more focused, and the sex scenes have been more vanilla so far, but the similarities are more than the differences. Early on, Eva Kiss wrote how ORS would be a more in-depth GGGB, expanding on half-baked themes from the first game, like corruption, social media, power, temptation, lust, love, etc. It was the original plan behind the game.

 

[Da¥e]

Yeah it's disappointing as fuck to see how only 11 chapters in Ian and Ivy are just fucking now starting to hang out and actually flirt, even though in the OOG we had Ivy kiss Ian on the cheek, to then have a flirty moment, to the shitty current state. Eva's fucked up big time and continues to cater to the fetishists than actually stay true to her story. Sure, fetishists are nice once in a fucking while, but to have them in over and over again while glossing over your own story or even neglect certain characters, specially ones who have had zero content? Yeah, EK gets F on that regard.


"Down the line..." So likely fucking never. Way to completely fucking screw over the fans who have been waiting since the first release EK. Round of a fucking applause. Welp, looks likely I'll be drop kicking this game then and going nuclear on her discord then.

Just accept that EvaKiss games are not your cup of tea and leave.

 

[| Vee |]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

 

[Chartog]

Why a slut like Ivy would have the dates with Ian?LMAO
Like i said,your headcanon and reality are different.

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

 

[Socrambus]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

It depends on how they are done and also on your expectations. Four might be enough or 8 might not be. At this point it's just a number, not all the chapters are the same lenght or the same "content density".

 

[| Vee |]

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

Ivy is like "Massage" you don't know how much you need it, until you get it!

 

[Xupuzulla]

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

Tell that to the people who think Ivy and Ian should be married and having babies by now.

 

[Reaurt]

It depends on how they are done and also on your expectations. Four might be enough or 8 might not be. At this point it's just a number, not all the chapters are the same lenght or the same "content density".

Agreed. Chapters also tend to vary depending on to what degree the chapter is setting up the premise for situations or letting said situations play out. If it's a lot of the former, the chapters can feel pretty boring, as it can seem like nothing is actually happening, just a lot of possibilities or rehashing. There's only so much edging I can take!

Just occurs to me, Eva's been working at ORS for 3+ years now. She hasn't done herself any favors with the difficult premise of the game and her own standards, but burnout is practically inevitable if you work on one single project for 3+ years.

 

[lucadiadis]

There are thousands of games on here in which the girl goes from innocent to super-slut within a day or two. So if you like those kind of games you have plenty to choose from. Please leave us enjoyers of a somewhat realistic corruption a handful of games as well. I really hope Eva doesn't go overboard and instead continues with her slowburn and comparatively natural writing

Well I am not a big fan overnight corruption either, however in medio stat virtus.

 

[Socrambus]

Agreed. Chapters also tend to vary depending on to what degree the chapter is setting up the premise for situations or letting said situations play out. If it's a lot of the former, the chapters can feel pretty boring, as it can seem like nothing is actually happening, just a lot of possibilities or rehashing. There's only so much edging I can take!

Just occurs to me, Eva's been working at ORS for 3+ years now. She hasn't done herself any favors with the difficult premise of the game and her own standards, but burnout is practically inevitable if you work on one single project for 3+ years.

And to develop something while receiving all kinds of feedback that you can't completely ignore because your monthly paid depends on keeping some of those people happy enough to subscribe. That has to be crazy, I've been on some long developments (2+ years counting post release updates) and you end up tired and annoyed. And I only had to keep maybe 4 or 5 guys happy with my work!.

 

[SerHawkes]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

Depends on how much she adds to the chapters and focuses on the story. If the chapter is full of progression and forwards the story instead of mainly focusing on appeasement, then maybe. But we won't know till Chapter 12 drops to see how much is there.

 

[jduk]

More slowburn stuff while we are still waiting for Lena's first DP or full cuckold scene after eleven chapters => thanks but no thanks.

cuckold ian coming sooner or later