VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Xupuzulla]

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

Tell that to the people who think Ivy and Ian should be married and having babies by now.

 

[Reaurt]

It depends on how they are done and also on your expectations. Four might be enough or 8 might not be. At this point it's just a number, not all the chapters are the same lenght or the same "content density".

Agreed. Chapters also tend to vary depending on to what degree the chapter is setting up the premise for situations or letting said situations play out. If it's a lot of the former, the chapters can feel pretty boring, as it can seem like nothing is actually happening, just a lot of possibilities or rehashing. There's only so much edging I can take!

Just occurs to me, Eva's been working at ORS for 3+ years now. She hasn't done herself any favors with the difficult premise of the game and her own standards, but burnout is practically inevitable if you work on one single project for 3+ years.

 

[lucadiadis]

There are thousands of games on here in which the girl goes from innocent to super-slut within a day or two. So if you like those kind of games you have plenty to choose from. Please leave us enjoyers of a somewhat realistic corruption a handful of games as well. I really hope Eva doesn't go overboard and instead continues with her slowburn and comparatively natural writing

Well I am not a big fan overnight corruption either, however in medio stat virtus.

 

[Socrambus]

Agreed. Chapters also tend to vary depending on to what degree the chapter is setting up the premise for situations or letting said situations play out. If it's a lot of the former, the chapters can feel pretty boring, as it can seem like nothing is actually happening, just a lot of possibilities or rehashing. There's only so much edging I can take!

Just occurs to me, Eva's been working at ORS for 3+ years now. She hasn't done herself any favors with the difficult premise of the game and her own standards, but burnout is practically inevitable if you work on one single project for 3+ years.

And to develop something while receiving all kinds of feedback that you can't completely ignore because your monthly paid depends on keeping some of those people happy enough to subscribe. That has to be crazy, I've been on some long developments (2+ years counting post release updates) and you end up tired and annoyed. And I only had to keep maybe 4 or 5 guys happy with my work!.

 

[SerHawkes]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

Depends on how much she adds to the chapters and focuses on the story. If the chapter is full of progression and forwards the story instead of mainly focusing on appeasement, then maybe. But we won't know till Chapter 12 drops to see how much is there.

 

[jduk]

More slowburn stuff while we are still waiting for Lena's first DP or full cuckold scene after eleven chapters => thanks but no thanks.

cuckold ian coming sooner or later

 

[jduk]

Pure NTR is unlikely, as Alison is smitten by Ian to the point of obession.
Closest you can get is underperforming and asking her to share herself with Jeremy for your own desire. Date her, arrange a threesome with Jeremy, get limp and choose the sad smiley (=cuck) option to demand a second threesome. She is a bit confused by it, but does it to make Ian happy.

Which isn't Netorare but Netorase and totally different if you ask all NTR connosouirs:

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perfect, though Alison likes Jeremy's cock too imo

 

[nevt2050ptr]

I think that ending ORS on 15/16 makes sense considering state of game as of ch.11. Both Ian and Lena can have 8/10 in main stats, and 4,5 chapters to go is good way to max those. For Ian book constest is ending, and mma tournament is starting so it's not like he has lot things to do now. Lena will have music contest soon, and need to resolve Seymor situation, wchich regardless of choices kinda feels for me like a drag.

Even when I think about Ian's main love interests there's feeling that there is not a lot more to say :
- Ian and Lena are now fully in love and commited; They need to resolve things staded above and start living together
- Ian and Cherry are now ready to start their relationship
- Ian and Cindy after she decided to take a break from Wade probably by ch.13 will start date Ian openly
- Ian and Emma; This is the only main Li where we don't how if it will end as simple hookup or something more
- Alison is ready for Ian from ch.1 so there's nothing else to add
- Holly is now a lot more sociable person and just waiting for Ian to fully commit
As of additional Li only bad Jess have chance to have more advanced relations with Ian. Gillian, good Jess, Nat and Ivy will probably get one scene like Louise or nothing at all.

Most of chapter 13 will take place at beach house, which I think will be cumulative point of the story. Relations like Ian/Lena/Holly throuple, Ian/Cindy affair, Ian/Emma will be resolved. Ian will move out of Perry's apartament (in Cherry route he states that he's ready to find his own place) on his own or will be forced because of his close relations to Emma/Cindy. After that EK will start to wrap things up.

In the end Perry will be finally free to give Wade priceless relationship advice after Cindy dumps him, and of course to fantasize about his one true love .

 

[ffive]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

Ahem, last i checked, 16 - 11 = 5, given Ch.12 is but a twinkle in Eva's eye yet.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I think that ending ORS on 15/16 makes sense considering state of game as of ch.11. Both Ian and Lena can have 8/10 in main stats, and 4,5 chapters to go is good way to max those. For Ian book constest is ending, and mma tournament is starting so it's not like he has lot things to do now. Lena will have music contest soon, and need to resolve Seymor situation, wchich regardless of choices kinda feels for me like a drag.

Even when I think about Ian's main love interests there's feeling that there is not a lot more to say :
- Ian and Lena are now fully in love and commited; They need to resolve things staded above and start living together
- Ian and Cherry are now ready to start their relationship
- Ian and Cindy after she decided to take a break from Wade probably by ch.13 will start date Ian openly
- Ian and Emma; This is the only main Li where we don't how if it will end as simple hookup or something more
- Alison is ready for Ian from ch.1 so there's nothing else to add
- Holly is now a lot more sociable person and just waiting for Ian to fully commit
As of additional Li only bad Jess have chance to have more advanced relations with Ian. Gillian, good Jess, Nat and Ivy will probably get one scene like Louise or nothing at all.

Most of chapter 13 will take place at beach house, which I think will be cumulative point of the story. Relations like Ian/Lena/Holly throuple, Ian/Cindy affair, Ian/Emma will be resolved. Ian will move out of Perry's apartament (in Cherry route he states that he's ready to find his own place) on his own or will be forced because of his close relations to Emma/Cindy. After that EK will start to wrap things up.

In the end Perry will be finally free to give Wade priceless relationship advice after Cindy dumps him, and of course to fantasize about his one true love .
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Nah,bro,the game has to be 20 chapters because of Ivy
Who cares if Evakiss is burnout.
Who cares if 20 chapters would take too many years.
Who cares if the story is dragging like Seymour plot.
Ivy needs more content

 

[nevt2050ptr]

Nah,bro,the game has to be 20 chapters because of Ivy
Who cares if Evakiss is burnout.
Who cares if 20 chapters would take too many years.
Who cares if the story is dragging like Seymour plot.
Ivy needs more content

Ivy will give Ian 10 second handy in grand finale of their romance route

 

[yuvce]

In the end Perry will be finally free to give Wade priceless relationship advice after Cindy dumps him, and of course to fantasize about his one true love .
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I need my eyes bleached.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Nah,bro,the game has to be 20 chapters because of Ivy
Who cares if Evakiss is burnout.
Who cares if 20 chapters would take too many years.
Who cares if the story is dragging like Seymour plot.
Ivy needs more content

To advocate for mommysboiii , 16 chapters is also not nearly enough time to get Ian cucked and humiliated by all 11 female characters in the game.

 

[| Vee |]

Ivy will give Ian 10 second handy in grand finale of their romance route

*Correction*
"Ivy will start with handy in grand finale of their romance route and will end up with her holes drenched with sperm of IAN!!!" Ian will last long till end.

 

[MF_DOOM]

I hope EK will drop the hole Ian-Ivy route just to make people lose their shit here while I munch on some popcorn.

 

[fatpussy123]

Ivy this Ivy that. I vreally just want that epilogue man.

 

[jaybae01]

in this game, can you choose which character you play as or do you have to play as both?

 

[MF_DOOM]

in this game, can you choose which character you play as or do you have to play as both?

You have to play both

 

[IkarusWestwood]

in this game, can you choose which character you play as or do you have to play as both?

Play as both

 

[rj677]

Love the votes of confidence here... you guys certainly make the authors feel appreciated. /s
Also... " already below average story "? Dude, have you *seen* the other stuff around here? This is orders of magnitude better than most other stuff. Average? <insert Inigo Montoya gif here>

Im gonna tell you a personal experience: Before joining F95, I was subscribed to the Patreon/Discord of a pretty famous AVN because I wanted to help that dev. I was a lurker for the most part until I decided to do a constructive criticism..... I was banned from both discord and patreon almost immediately after posting .

Then I found F95... A place where you can criticize a dev as much as you want without the mods deleting your posts (if you dont do anything against the rules of course ). The funny thing was learning here that what happened to me had happened to a lot of other people in a lot of other games discord and patreon.

Of course F95 isnt perfect, but its the best place for a dev to get peoples REAL opinions of their game and legit contructive criticism like we do here on this thread... Problem is that devs egos sometimes have them read only the "mILkInG" "gAMe suX" posts and they leave.

Now to answer you post specifically:
-Sometimes we have people kissing Evas ass here, but if you want to see more of that just go on the discord .

-Story: IF its rushed from now on, YES it will be below average... Because Im not comparing Eva to anyone else but her own potential in writing and choices. Comparing Eva to all devs would be like comparing a Bugatti to a Prius in 95% of those comparisons . All the clues point to rushing unfortunately, but we have to wait and see