BlandChili

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Could be that she got the idea while working on how to resolve the different beach house branches and made the art then. Just because the pics are in now doesn't mean she's ready to use them from a story perspective. I'd expect 2 chapters before they're used if ever.
Indeed. I was actually considering speculating on the names of the images cindy_phone, rather than cindy_selfie or cindy_texting, which might give the impression that these are images we'd find on her phone if we ever got an option to look through it. Of course that's just grasping at a detail that might be redundant.

Though given Cindy's typical sexual attitudes I wouldn't expect her to be the kind of girl who has images of herself sucking cocks just taking up space on her phone o_O
 
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Andrea9999

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Perry isn't necessary at all.
There is nothing that Perry brings to the story that can't be done better other ways other than being the annoying shit he is.
The connections can be built through jobs, events, locations. The conflicts and jealousies discovery of betrayal and cheating can all be found better ways.
Having the MC roommate with such a character is absorbed. It would be worse than living with Newman from Seinfeld.
But my way: Perry digs five holes, fills them up, and then enrolls in medical school in France, leaving the story. How can you improve on that brevity?
 

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