VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.2 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[Gicoo]

Don't really understand why some people complain about Louise's personality saying it doesn't fit her. Being an attention starved girl with daddy issues seems for fitting for a goth chick with dyed hair. All she's missing is tattoos.

The first problem is that Louise always makes a move on Ian, regardless if he or she is in a relationship. She can still be with Jeremy and Ian can date several girls, including her own roommate. Weirdly enough, she only doesn't post if Ian dates Holly. I don't see a plausible in-game reason, its likely that Eva doesn't want Ian cheating on Holly (its currently impossible IIRC, he would break up with her if he is dating others on the side), so every girl is removed clumsily.

Her profile text states that she is a loyal friend. She also shows this by wanting serious relationships with her partners (Jeremy, Lena) and demands commitment, she is immediatly jealous and insecure if they don't do that. So her making a move on her roommates boyfriend is flat out out of character. You may argue that she could be angry with Lena, which can be true on some routes, but not all.

The second issue is Ians inconsistent behaviour. At first he is extremely smug and dismissive about it, toying with her, regardless of his behaviour throughout the game, regardless if you didn't make him a chad asshole. It can be very uncharacteristic. Then suddenly, just after multiple texting, he feels to be in love with her, is all romantic with her and may consider her as his anchor if he breaks up with Lena. Its very rushed, Ian and Louise barely interacted within 12 chapters and seems to be written on the spot, with no proper foreshadowing, backstory or previously development (Louise can like the threesome, I guess that could count, its entirely optional though).


Wouldn't be surprised if throwing in Arthur and Lena magically wanting to flirt with him to start a new route this late in the game was a similar take.

 

[Takkatakka]

Her profile text states that she is a loyal friend. She also shows this by wanting serious relationships with her partners (Jeremy, Lena) and demands commitment, she is immediatly jealous and insecure if they don't do that. So her making a move on her roommates boyfriend is flat out out of character.

I think that depends on the situation. In my game Lena essentially (from Louise's pov) dumped her for Ian. So Louise trying to sabotage Lena's relationship with Ian as either revenge and/or to get Lena away from Ian so Louise can get back with her made perfect sense in my playthrough.

 

[Gicoo]

I think that depends on the situation. In my game Lena essentially (from Louise's pov) dumped her for Ian. So Louise trying to sabotage Lena's relationship with Ian as either revenge and/or to get Lena away from Ian so Louise can get back with her made perfect sense in my playthrough.

Maybe, but not in all the other playthroughs in which Louise makes a move on Ian. So its not a specific act of revenge like you proposed, but her making a move on Ian in general, which is highly questionable, given her character.

 

[Nicksondickson]

Are there any other places other than here where people discuss this game? Really love the game and thought I'd wanna read discussions about it.

 

[Takkatakka]

Maybe, but not in all the other playthroughs in which Louise makes a move on Ian. So its not a specific act of revenge like you proposed, but her making a move on Ian in general, which is highly questionable, given her character.

That's what I mean with "depends on the situation". In other cases it seems to be more a case of "the male MC needs to be able to fuck all decent looking female characters in the game eventually", which isn't a good way to write a character obviously.

 

[johnsman]

Are there any other places other than here where people discuss this game? Really love the game and thought I'd wanna read discussions about it.

There's a discord server that you can go to. I believe there's also a reddit sub for it, but it didn't have a lot of members last time I checked, so I don't know how active it'd be.

 

[Nicksondickson]

There's a discord server that you can go to. I believe there's also a reddit sub for it, but it didn't have a lot of members last time I checked, so I don't know how active it'd be.

Got it, thanks.

 

[Duty black]

When Holly and Stan are going to start dating?
Those geeks are going to be so happy together.

That's never gonna happen Ever Stan is a fool a Fucking nerd

 

[Duty black]

you need a special tool for that...i think it is used on cars.... what was it?...oh yes.... An axel would make stan do it...even louise. Stan would hire Axel for lessons in photography.

Interesting idea

 

[Duty black]

Louise being super into Ian all of a sudden when she barely interacted with the guy is weird. Then again Louise isn't exactly mentally stable.

Yes maybe your wright but I think she's attracted to Lan fast when lan want to take shower in her bedroom

 

[Duty black]

The first problem is that Louise always makes a move on Ian, regardless if he or she is in a relationship. She can still be with Jeremy and Ian can date several girls, including her own roommate. Weirdly enough, she only doesn't post if Ian dates Holly. I don't see a plausible in-game reason, its likely that Eva doesn't want Ian cheating on Holly (its currently impossible IIRC, he would break up with her if he is dating others on the side), so every girl is removed clumsily.

Her profile text states that she is a loyal friend. She also shows this by wanting serious relationships with her partners (Jeremy, Lena) and demands commitment, she is immediatly jealous and insecure if they don't do that. So her making a move on her roommates boyfriend is flat out out of character. You may argue that she could be angry with Lena, which can be true on some routes, but not all.

The second issue is Ians inconsistent behaviour. At first he is extremely smug and dismissive about it, toying with her, regardless of his behaviour throughout the game, regardless if you didn't make him a chad asshole. It can be very uncharacteristic. Then suddenly, just after multiple texting, he feels to be in love with her, is all romantic with her and may consider her as his anchor if he breaks up with Lena. Its very rushed, Ian and Louise barely interacted within 12 chapters and seems to be written on the spot, with no proper foreshadowing, backstory or previously development (Louise can like the threesome, I guess that could count, its entirely optional though).


Wouldn't be surprised if throwing in Arthur and Lena magically wanting to flirt with him to start a new route this late in the game was a similar take.

I personally want Arthur and Lena storyline with Louis involved and good Holly because Author is a master of manipulation

 

[Andrea9999]

I personally want Arthur and Lena storyline with Louis involved and good Holly because Author is a master of manipulation

I think that would be quite possible at this point...perhaps with Agnes (and Axel?) involved as well. Who is Louis? Do you mean Louise? That could also be path. Arthur and Agnes showing Lena the extremes they have in store for her.....by first visiting them on Louise in a terrorizing exhibition.

 

[Skylark21]

That's never gonna happen Ever Stan is a fool a Fucking nerd

Just because you don't like him doesn't mean it's not gonna happen, Holly/Stan route is set in stone, but a best thing about this game is that you can simply avoid it.

 

[Xupuzulla]

The new disagree like is perfect

 

[Takkatakka]

Just because you don't like him doesn't mean it's not gonna happen, Holly/Stan route is set in stone, but a best thing about this game is that you can simply avoid it.

Generally: If stuff like this gets set-up in a game like this, it gets set-up for a reason.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Also Holly fucked even Robert,the pure train left a while ago for her

 

[Takkatakka]

Also Holly fucked even Robert,the pure train left a while ago for her

But that depends on how you guide her, doesn't it? I would expect that she might hook-up with Stan on her Nerd path and not on her slut path.

 

[varpep]

The new disagree like is perfect

The OG profile pic. Lesgooooo!!! Vintage Xuzu is back

 

[Lord Bradley]

Perry being hostile towards Ian about Cindy situation even if he does not know the details is pretty rich considering he did not mind lotioning Lena's tits at the beach on Ian's cuck route. Also Perry did not mind Lena dropping the towel in his appartment earlier in the story. Then his morals were unaffected and justified even. What a hypocrite, typical politicians son.

 

[Xupuzulla]

The OG profile pic. Lesgooooo!!! Vintage Xuzu is back

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