VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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MisterABC

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Man, first Seymour, then a Stan and Robert tease. And now we revive Ed from the cemetery of discarded plotlines. What's up with Lena recently?

And if you do a Ed route, you develop it from the beginning, when Ed learned about her model career, slightly pushed her boundaries as an effect of it and just got closer with Lena over the course of the cafes restoration. Wouldn't be that hard of a rewrite to be honest, but I want Eva to move forward, not trying to fix what is already done.

If its implemented in chapter 13 forward, one of them has to magically make an aggressive move on the other one and suddenly ignore Mollys presence. The latter could be solved by having her die, but that would be drastic to put it mildly.

Ideally, Lena would get a normal decent love interest aside Ian and Holly, but that wasn't possible due to Evas incomprehensible writing choices ("Stan is supposed to be a nicer option", yeah hell no).
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I see your point and I agree, that if EvaKiss decides to bring back Ed on a table, the earlier episodes should be lightly rewritten. Lena's slutmaxxing would not make sense. Like you said making it agressive move on next chapter kind of breaks the story. And yes Molly's presence should not be ignored.

Personally me, I'd see Lena x Ed playout in these scenarios:
1) Lena having major daddy issues and getting kindness from older guy makes hell fall for him.
2) Ed getting inspired by Lena and she becomes his muse. He paints her, subscribes to her stalkfap etc.
3) Molly dies and Lena "consoles" him.

I don't see Ed as Arthur 2.0 and if Eva decides to bring him back I hope it won't be another overly creepy old man. And if she won't, I hope we would get Ed dlc ^^
 
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MisterABC said:
I see your point and I agree, that if EvaKiss decides to bring back Ed on a table, the earlier episodes should be lightly rewritten. Lena's slutmaxxing would not make sense. Like you said making it agressive move on next chapter kind of breaks the story. And yes Molly's presence should not be ignored.

Personally me, I'd see Lena x Ed playout in these scenarios:
1) Lena having major daddy issues and getting kindness from older guy makes hell fall for him.
2) Ed getting inspired by Lena and she becomes his muse. He paints her, subscribes to her stalkfap etc.
3) Molly dies and Lena "consoles" him.

I don't see Ed as Arthur 2.0 and if Eva decides to bring him back I hope it won't be another overly creepy old man. And if she won't, I hope we would get Ed dlc ^^
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4) Molly become cuckquean and Ed is free to fuck Lena whenever he wants :cool: - no drama, no jelly. Go Go Ed!
 
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3b) Lena "consoles" him about his failing business or wife stuff. Seymour helps Lena with money (because sugar daddy)>Lena helps Ed with money (because aww, sweet old ex-boss man who just lost business or wife>??>profit.
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varpep

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My Lena has amassed quite the collection of outfits lingerie and toys with the support of Seymour. All that is missing now is the horse dildo, Stan's cock prison and a strap-on to fuck Seymour and Perry with :devilish:
 
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Eet_Fuk said:
What about Lena?
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More a fan of

-Nerdy shy holly /shy ian couple
-ian/alison couple
-ian/cindy couple
-ian/gillian couple
- shy milkshake soy ian / bad jess couple(cute together) hope for drama with drugs (lena ivy influance) or past gang members

So I hope more of drama/ antagonist in that direction not fan of ian lena paring :cry:
 
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mommysboiii said:
More a fan of

-Nerdy shy holly /shy ian couple
-ian/alison couple
-ian/cindy couple
-ian/gillian couple
- shy milkshake soy ian / bad jess couple(cute together) hope form drama with drugs (lena ivy influance) or past gang members

So I hope more of drama/ antagonist in that direction not fan of ian lena paring :cry:
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OH I'm with you on that. My Lena cheats and hopefully will cuck Ian in the future
 
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