VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.3] [Eva Kiss]

[JoJoPool]

Since we aren't getting the update any time soon I decided to do some "Scene Bingo" and see how many new scenes can I predict happening. Feel free to add your ideas.

Scene 1: Ian/Allison/Jeremy Threesome
This is a sure one as we already saw a teaser for it during the

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but I think there will be few variations on the scene.
Scene 1a: Ian and Jeremy just fuck Allison (Spit-roast) ending with that high-five we see.
Scene 1b: Ian is unable to get it up again and ends up just watching Jeremy fuck Allison. If Ian asked Jeremy for the videos previously he will start jerking-off and enjoying the live performance, feeding more into his cuck/voyeur fetish.

Scene 2: Lena x Jeremy
We haven't had any Jeremy content with Lena since Chapter 8 so I feel like we are bound to get something with them. I think we will have 2 different scenes that depend on your previous interactions with Jeremy.
Scene 2a: Lena continues her "affair" with Jeremy after sneaking into Louise's room and having sex with him. This also means Lena and Ian are NOT officially dating as Lena refuses Ian's offer. This time, the sex is more explicit with possible creampie ending and Anal sex. Also, there is a chance Jeremy takes pictures/videos of Lena as he usually does with his women that he can send to Ian in the future (with Lena's face being obscured) depending if Ian was dick to Jeremy previously.
Bonus Idea: Depending on how many times Ian and Lena had sex, Ian might notice it's her. If they didn't have sex or done it once then Ian doesn't notice anything. If they did it few times then Ian thinks the body seems familiar. If they have done it plenty of time then Ian notices it's Lena but is in denial ("Nah... that can't be her... right?").
Scene 2b: Lena and Ian are officially dating and are celebrating with the whole friend group at the club (Blazers?). Jeremy and Lena talk about the blowjob she gave him and the subsequent sexting and Lena ends up cheating on Ian with Jeremy in the club's bathroom.

Scene 3: Ian/Cindy/Axel Photoshoot 3
As Cindy is moving up in the modeling world another photoshoot is bound to happen, regardless of your relationship with Cindy (Friend, Boyfriend, Cheater). This time, Axel is posing naked alongside Cindy just how he did with Lena and Ian will be given an option to either allow it or let it happen, further feeding into his cuck/voyeur fetish.

Scene 4: Lena/Ian x Holly

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gave us an image of Holly, indicating she will have a scene in the update. Judging by how timid/shy she looks in it I think it's a scene between her and Lena as there would be no Ivy corruption involved and she is already pretty open with Ian. This only happens if Lena and Ian are not in a relationship. However, considering Eva hasn't started working on Lena's part yet this is likely a scene between Ian and Holly.

Scene 5: Ian x Minerva/Holly

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talks about a "complicated" scene involving Ian at his job. It also mentions Minerva, and various other characters, that are involved and that it has 2 different premises.
Scene 5a: Is the first premise that involves another sex scene with Minerva and Ian, if you previously had sex with her. Since the last scene involved her talking on the phone with her husband as she sucks off Ian, I think one of the character will be her husband. Ian and Minerva will have sex at the office behind her husband's back.
Scene 5b: Second premise does not involved Minerva and is about Ian and Holly having sex at the office (The image we see in Status Report 7).

Scene 6: Emma Sex Scene

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teases a new image of Emma leaning over a pool table. I think this is pretty straight forward. Ian is probably going out with his friends group and depending if you hooked up with Emma before you can do it again.
Scene 6a: Ian and Emma have sex.
Scene 6b: If both Ian and Jeremy have had sex with Emma, they can end up having a threesome with her (wishful thinking but either way, someone is fucking her).
Scene 6c: You cuck Perry after he hooks up with Emma

Scene 7: Lena Threesome
Since Lena's part of the story often parallels Ian's, it's very likely she gets a threesome of her own. During the scene between Ivy, Holly and Lena, Ivy asks Lena what other fetishes she is into and one of the options (that still hasn't been done) was a threesome. Depending if Lena answers "with two girls" or "with two guys" I think we'll get 2 variations of the scene.
Scene 7a: FFM Threesome
I can see this happening between Ian/Lena/Holly since they all know each other and would be the most natural one to happen since both Ian and Lena can have something going on with Holly.
Scene 7b: MMF Threesome
I don't see this threesome happening with Ian's involvement as I don't know how willing he would be to share Lena with Jeremy (definitely in the future)/Robert (no way)/Mike (maybe), at least not yet, but I do see this happening with Rober/Mike/Lena since both of these guys already have a lot of sex scenes with Lena so a natural next step of escalation would be a threesome.
Scene 7c: MMF/FFM Threesome with Stan
No, Stan doesn't get to fuck anyone (or get fucked) he just spies as it goes on and jerks off like the creep he is. He's done it before but this time it's more explicit.

Scene 8: Cindy x Ian
A lot of possible variation here depending if you are dating Lena or not and if Cindy is still with Lade or cheating behind his back but I think it all ends up being similar.
Scene 8a: Ian is officially with Lena and the whole friend group is out at the club celebrating. If he hooked up with Cindy behind Lade's back and she didn't break-up with him, they can sneak off and have sex in the restroom.
Scene 8b: Everything is the same except Cindy is no longer with Lade but you still end up having sex in the restroom behind Lena's back.

Scene 9: Stan x Lena
Lena has another spicy photoshoot with Stan but this time she decides to take it further... Teasing him about that time she caught him spying on her, asks him if he liked what he saw while she gets close to him and grabs him by the balls..... Stan faints immediately and Lena calls an ambulance.
But i also love scene 2

 

[Mr. Muscles]

Just to be safe, the only "rejection of the blackmail" moment is at the restaurant, right? The restaurant scene happens no matter what. You can't reject him during the phone call, I believe.

 

[lipe2410]

Just to be safe, the only "rejection of the blackmail" moment is at the restaurant, right? The restaurant scene happens no matter what. You can't reject him during the phone call, I believe.

Yes

 

[Mr. Muscles]

Yes

Thanks for the help, you have all been really helpful.

Did you reject or accept the blackmail (if it came to it)?

 

[lipe2410]

Thanks for the help, you have all been really helpful.

Did you reject or accept the blackmail (if it came to it)?

Rejected without a doubt. My principle in this game is "No pussy for Seymour and Axel as far as i could make it"

 

[Mr. Muscles]

Rejected without a doubt. My principle in this game is "No pussy for Seymour and Axel as far as i could make it"

Did you reject him because you, as the player, is calling his bluff, or do you expect to eventually put him down in another way? I just wonder what could happen to the people Lena cares about.

 

[lipe2410]

Did you reject him because you, as the player, is calling his bluff, or do you expect to eventually put him down in another way? I just wonder what could happen to the people Lena cares about.

No, he is not bluffing but i really expect take him down and make Lena succeed in her musical career or artistic/erotic model in stalkfap

 

[Varrilete]

i hope next update has at least 4000 new images....

 

[CoalPhelps]

Scene 9: Stan x Lena
Lena has another spicy photoshoot with Stan but this time she decides to take it further... Teasing him about that time she caught him spying on her, asks him if he liked what he saw while she gets close to him and grabs him by the balls..... Stan faints immediately and Lena calls an ambulance.
But i also love scene 2

No-no-no, you're wrong. Stan, after Lena takes him by the balls, like a dedicated Trumpist by his mold grabs her by the pussy and then he faints and Lena calls an ambulance.

 

[z3z3]

Not really, beside her looks she is very high-maintainance and her problems, compared to some other characters in game, self-imagined or very tame. I find it baffling how so many players consider Cindy so great. One of Einstein´s bonmots come to mind.
Alison, Holly, Lena, even Ivy are well ahead of Cindy, IMHO. But then again, that is all in the eye of the beholder.

i get what you are saying , but for me cindy is the best caz of the writing and the buildup in her story with ian and the fact she is wade girlfriend gives her the forbidden fruit perk which makes it more desirable its a little bit sick but that what makes her character for me most desirable

 

[Dromedari]

In the last two chapters it has been Lena who has suffered the final plot twist. The first with her mother's injury and the second with Seymour's contract.

I think in this chapter it will be Ian who will be hit by the plot twist. I predict 3 possibilities:

- Allison: My period doesn't come...Perhaps I'm pregnant.

- Gillian: I've broken up with Mike, I need a place to stay this night... pleaseeee.

- Ivy: I saw what you and that little blonde bitch were doing in that dark alley... we going to have fun like never before my dear slave. Or do you prefer Lena to know the truth?

What would be the perfect ending of chapter 10 for you?

 

[BlandChili]

In the last two chapters it has been Lena who has suffered the final plot twist. The first with her mother's injury and the second with Seymour's contract.

I think in this chapter it will be Ian who will be hit by the plot twist. I predict 3 possibilities:

- Allison: My period doesn't come...Perhaps I'm pregnant.

- Gillian: I've broken up with Mike, I need a place to stay this night... pleaseeee.

- Ivy: I saw what you and that little blonde bitch were doing in that dark alley... we going to have fun like never before my dear slave. Or do you prefer Lena to know the truth?

What would be the perfect ending of chapter 10 for you?

All of those depend on Ian's choices though. I suppose Alison could happen regardless, as she bangs Jeremy if not Ian?
Gillian could perhaps happen, that might introduce some real stakes to Ian's story, but you'd have to have picked for Ian to still care for her/miss her, right?

So, say Ian isn't with anyone and don't give a crap about Gillian, how'd you get some drama into his route? There's his friends of course, but Ian can be rather ambivalent towards them anyway.

I guess if I were to pick something out for Ian to up the ante a bit I'd do it with his book? Somehow there is interest and some choice or other is introduced or suggested for Ian to pursue his dream that compromises with something related to Lena, Holly or any of his other loves?
Not sure how you'd make that happen in a way that'd work a both a unified plot-point and a significant development in its own right though, since the player can choose to focus on fighting or just try to wilfully screw over his life anyway.

Perhaps the right way is to just start making it difficult for Ian to manipulate his many love options. If the player chooses to not give him any, should he be subject to dramatic developments anyway?

 

[_Zebra_]

In the last two chapters it has been Lena who has suffered the final plot twist. The first with her mother's injury and the second with Seymour's contract.

The only issue is: in order to have a cliffhanger for Ian, you must play with him before the end of the chapter. Looking at the way the development was done until now, we can assume that in chapter 10 you will play with Ian first and after that with Lena. Sure, Eva could mix Ian and Lena story or she could simply add one more scene at the end, but I hope she won't go on that route. Changing the story or adding even more stuff than it was initially planned will only drag the development for a longer period of time.

I think in this chapter it will be Ian who will be hit by the plot twist. I predict 3 possibilities:

- Allison: My period doesn't come...Perhaps I'm pregnant.

- Gillian: I've broken up with Mike, I need a place to stay this night... pleaseeee.

- Ivy: I saw what you and that little blonde bitch were doing in that dark alley... we going to have fun like never before my dear slave. Or do you prefer Lena to know the truth?

I think it is too soon for Allison to get pregnant. We know that she took the plan B after the last date. Even if you sleep with her again in this chapter, there should be at least 2-3 weeks between that point and the one where she thinks about a pregnancy test. Also, we don't know if there will still be a time skip in the story. If it is, I doubt that Eva will want Ian to have a kid with Allison after the time skip. The story will end there for Ian.

Gillian could be this chapter plot twist, but even if she is Mike gf, why would she go back to Ian that fast? I also don't think there is any reason for Ivy to blackmail Ian. There is nothing that she can gain from that.

 

[punisher33]

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Hi guys,
a quick update this time. I've been juggling several tasks this week, mainly drawing and writing.
I already have many of Lena's side of the episode illustrations done, but there are still a few scenes that need to be done. I'm adding a special emphasis on visual customisation for some of those, so they're taking extra work to create all possible variations, but it's something new I haven't done before, not to this extent at least, so I think it'll be cool.
I've also been working on writing and structuring the plot and scenes for this chapter. It's always tricky to set in order all the different scenes and possible variations, and sometimes I need to go back and add or tweak paths that I forgot or that cause internal contradiction. Other than that, I've been struggling a lot with a particular scene, the last one of Ian's part, but I think I finally have it.

Also, Dashole, who won the

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has surprised me with a new set of renders, this time inspired in GGGB, and he depicted and expanded on the Ashley+Arthur ending. You can check them out

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!

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

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Hi guys,
a quick update this time. I've been juggling several tasks this week, mainly drawing and writing.
I already have many of Lena's side of the episode illustrations done, but there are still a few scenes that need to be done. I'm adding a special emphasis on visual customisation for some of those, so they're taking extra work to create all possible variations, but it's something new I haven't done before, not to this extent at least, so I think it'll be cool.
I've also been working on writing and structuring the plot and scenes for this chapter. It's always tricky to set in order all the different scenes and possible variations, and sometimes I need to go back and add or tweak paths that I forgot or that cause internal contradiction. Other than that, I've been struggling a lot with a particular scene, the last one of Ian's part, but I think I finally have it.

Also, Dashole, who won the

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has surprised me with a new set of renders, this time inspired in GGGB, and he depicted and expanded on the Ashley+Arthur ending. You can check them out

You must be registered to see the links

!

> I already have many of Lena's side of the episode illustrations done, but there are still a few scenes that need to be done.

These words give hope that we won't have to wait very long.

And this art...damn, it's just TierS I wonder what it means? Just a more spicy sex scene with a photo shoot.. Or did Ian decide to become Lena's photographer after Seymour blocked her prospects?

 

[John Doe Jr.]

the fact she is wade girlfriend gives her the forbidden fruit perk which makes it more desirable

There's other reasons for sure but this is the main one I think. As humans we all have this instinct for wanting things we can't or shouldn't have

 

[punisher33]

Or did Ian decide to become Lena's photographer

ı dreamed that scene will me optional, ı mean we choose the who will take a pictures Mike Robert Stan Ian maybe Jeremy ?

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

ı dreamed that scene will me optional, ı mean we choose the who will take a pictures Mike Robert Stan Ian maybe Jeremy ?

I can rule out Robert entirely as an option. He is busy, he has more serious and urgent work:

 

[SpyderArachnid]

And this art...damn, it's just TierS I wonder what it means? Just a more spicy sex scene with a photo shoot.. Or did Ian decide to become Lena's photographer after Seymour blocked her prospects?

I'm thinking it's Ian helping Lena with her StalkFap. Probably had a conversation about it after he jerked off to it, told her he was fine with it, and decided to help her out with it now by taking pictures for her. Just an idea is all.

 

[fortuna95]

Other than that, I've been struggling a lot with a particular scene, the last one of Ian's part, but I think I finally have it.

Wow, Eva is still struggling on Ian's part