VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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Xupuzulla

Xupuzulla

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SerHawkes said:
Show me on the doll where she touched you.

I find it comical how people are trying to keep this narrative of Ivy as 'Manipulator/Corruptor' when AGAIN the true manipulator and corruptor is non other than Lena and the player. Ivy is the idea woman, suggestor of suggestions, but ultimately it's boils down to Lena either agreeing for Holly to hook up with Mark, or let Ivy have her way, or steer Holly away from Mark and other things.

But sure, lets continually slander the best girl of the game (who is the virgin fucking mary at this point) with your own choices that yall CHOSE to do. Not a great joke. -420/10 would not tell again.
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Ivy belongs in the streets.
I hope in the future you can make Ian pay to have sex with her.
 
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dontcarewhateverno said:
I assume it was a bunch of loose ends, where the writing hasn't yet accounted for that specific path and is using text from other paths. Though honestly there are enough cheating-on-ian paths with other significant-others as-is. From a utility sense, with so many paths to manage, it may be wise to make Mark a lock-out in a Holly+Ian path. (I know I'm going to get some hate for that. Just an opinion). There are other scenarios to fulfill that fetish/need & it defies logic that a Lena who was in all cases railroaded into being protective of Holly's feelings earlier in the game would now be encouraging her to get into that sort of cheating drama involving another person. (Lena going for Holly makes more sense in that scenario though, since our own selfish emotions can be harder to control).
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I dont agree with this there are many poeple that love innocent holly corruption and would like to
make little holly into a gillian with ivys help :devilish: :devilish:

and this scenes with mark,robert ,bouncer and lena and ivy will take her probably on partys with drugs in the future will happen ANYWAY eva will already draw and write this scenes

so it should not be this hard for eva to figure out to make it work because its not much work because this SCENES WILL EXIST ANYWAY

and you can engourage holly as slutty/mean lena and ivy so eva should firgue something out

so i really dont understand the no cheating police in a CORRUPTION GAME on cheracters like cindy,alison and holly because they all will have corruption ROUTES ANYWAY

this scens will exist thats my whole point
 
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mommysboiii said:
I dont agree with this there are many poeple that love innocent holly corruption and would like to
make little holly into a gillian with ivys help :devilish: :devilish:

and this scenes with mark,robert ,bouncer and lena and ivy will take her probably on partys with drugs in the future will happen ANYWAY eva will already draw and write this scenes

so it should not be this hard for eva to figure out to make it work because its not much work because this SCENES WILL EXIST ANYWAY

and you can engourage holly as slutty/mean lena and ivy so eva should firgue something out

so i really dont understand the no cheating police in a CORRUPTION GAME on cheracters like cindy,alison and holly because they all will have corruption ROUTES ANYWAY

this scens will exist thats my whole point
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I don't mind Holly being corrupted and cheating, but if it is implemented it should be done well. ORS doesn't need half-assed routes that break the game's logic. I'm cool with a Holly cheating route, but whatever it looks like in the end should not look like what we got in chapter 11.
 
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I admire your passion for Ivy. She is a popular character and here is the 'but', some of us mere mortals can indeed resist nasty manipulative people like Ivy. I'm being polite, I have other names for her. I wouldn't want to be in the same room as someone like her in RL. No time for people like her at all. Lena needs better 'friends,' hence why I like Ian for her, much better friend circle for Lena. Ivy's character is fantastic as a story device though.
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When the time comes for an Ian/Ivy scene, he needs to give her the ol' hit it and quit it. The ol' cum 'n' go. The ol' pump and dump. The shoot and scoot. The slam and scram. The smash and dash. The skeet and yeet. The nail and bail. The penetrate and defenestrate. The impregnate and vacate. The ejaculate and evacuate. The drip and dip. The jab and dab. Give her his DNA and then pretend to be gay. Give her his genetic information then flee the nation. Blow his load then hit the road. Hump her then lose her number. Give her the splatter and then scatter. Give her the jizz then out he is. Give her the D and then flee. Fill the crack then leave the shack. Shoot his goo then say adieu.
 
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bonerland said:
When the time comes for an Ian/Ivy scene, he needs to give her the ol' hit it and quit it. The ol' cum 'n' go. The ol' pump and dump. The shoot and scoot. The slam and scram. The smash and dash. The skeet and yeet. The nail and bail. The penetrate and defenestrate. The impregnate and vacate. The ejaculate and evacuate. The drip and dip. The jab and dab. Give her his DNA and then pretend to be gay. Give her his genetic information then flee the nation. Blow his load then hit the road. Hump her then lose her number. Give her the splatter and then scatter. Give her the jizz then out he is. Give her the D and then flee. Fill the crack then leave the shack. Shoot his goo then say adieu.
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randomguy26

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Can someone please help me with this?
It's not on an old save. I tried finding the variable cindycry as well. it's not there in the script.
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mommysboiii said:

so i really dont understand the no cheating police in a CORRUPTION GAME on cheracters like cindy,alison and holly because they all will have corruption ROUTES ANYWAY

this scens will exist thats my whole point
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That's a different department. You've reached the Script Issues and Eva's Likely Fixes bureau. :whistle:

I've never been against cheating in the game.
 
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SerHawkes

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bonerland said:
When the time comes for an Ian/Ivy scene, he needs to give her the ol' hit it and quit it. The ol' cum 'n' go. The ol' pump and dump. The shoot and scoot. The slam and scram. The smash and dash. The skeet and yeet. The nail and bail. The penetrate and defenestrate. The impregnate and vacate. The ejaculate and evacuate. The drip and dip. The jab and dab. Give her his DNA and then pretend to be gay. Give her his genetic information then flee the nation. Blow his load then hit the road. Hump her then lose her number. Give her the splatter and then scatter. Give her the jizz then out he is. Give her the D and then flee. Fill the crack then leave the shack. Shoot his goo then say adieu.
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No chance in Hell. I'm putting a ring on that gals fingers and marrying her, while 100% going 'IN YOUR FUCKING FACE JEREMY!'.
 
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bonerland said:
When the time comes for an Ian/Ivy scene, he needs to give her the ol' hit it and quit it. The ol' cum 'n' go. The ol' pump and dump. The shoot and scoot. The slam and scram. The smash and dash. The skeet and yeet. The nail and bail. The penetrate and defenestrate. The impregnate and vacate. The ejaculate and evacuate. The drip and dip. The jab and dab. Give her his DNA and then pretend to be gay. Give her his genetic information then flee the nation. Blow his load then hit the road. Hump her then lose her number. Give her the splatter and then scatter. Give her the jizz then out he is. Give her the D and then flee. Fill the crack then leave the shack. Shoot his goo then say adieu.
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This sketch was better when done by Monty Python and about a dead parrot.
 
SerHawkes

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dontcarewhateverno said:
With you on that point, at least. Though it would be kind of hard getting that one past the lawyers. :unsure:
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Considering he owes us for being a douche of a friend for not mentioning out ex is back, it's the least he could do if he wanted us to put in a good word with Ivy. Too bad for him, I didn't and will never, likely causing Ivy to reject every advance the dumbass continually tries with her, to the point where she will likely have enough and either kick him squarely in the balls or taser him...
 
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