SearingFive

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Cheating path, what I did for Lena is to have sex with Jack and that was enough to trigger this scene. I also did a run where both Ian and Lena cheated on each other but then decided to commit to each other in ch 12, you'll still get this scene. For Ian to cheat I just did bimbo Alison after the painting gallery scene.
 

dontcarewhateverno

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I'm not an heroic fantasy lad, I'm more into classic literature, BUT each of Martin's update is like a hundred billion times more substantial than EK's updates, all paths included and that's a conservative estimation.
She's pulled off a masterstroke every now & again :KEK: , but in no way am I comparing EvaKiss' writing to George RR Martin's. I'm just joking about wait-time.
 

GokutheG

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I want to know who Mike's girlfriend is and who Gillian's boyfriend is. If one day Ian meets Gillian's boyfriend, I hope there will be a street fight
Getting into a fight with his ex's new boyfriend would make Ian be as pathetic as Alison's old boyfriend and just as deranged as Axel.

It's best for Lena and Ian to completely get over their exes.
 

camube

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Lena/Ian relationship can blow up in like three possible ways, Ian/Holly gets its resolution one way or another, and Lena/Ian/Holly can become an actual thing. I wonder what's your idea of escalation if these are "holiday and chilling" in your eyes..?
By "holiday and chilling" I meant in the context that I don't think 4 more chapters is anywhere near enough to close out ORS because in the chapter 12 we've got, plot lines just started escalating. The escalation being the things you've wrote.
There are many other plot lines that are still ramping up and hasn't explode yet. 4 chapters of ramping up, climax and cooling off sounds like a rush to me.

I think 1 to 9 in general was good. But after 9, i think 10 to 12 the pacing is pretty slow. I think to wrap up everything, ORS at least would need at least to Ch 17 or 18, and that is if Ch 13 pick up the pace. So really, maybe even Ch 20 is more realistic
 

fatpussy123

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Ian and Louise suddenly being in love, while meeting irl only once in the bar, feels completely unbelievable, wtf is that?
Ian is not in love with Louise, he is interested in her since she slid into his dms and seems desperate, but not in love. Louise you can say is in love, but she has always gotten attached fast. Happened with both Jeremy and Lena. Personally I'd say she is in love with the idea of a guy like Ian giving her attention, especially over Lena.
 

Socrambus

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Ian is not in love with Louise, he is interested in her since she slid into his dms and seems desperate, but not in love. Louise you can say is in love, but she has always gotten attached fast. Happened with both Jeremy and Lena. Personally I'd say she is in love with the idea of a guy like Ian giving her attention, especially over Lena.
Even so, I think the threesome should be a requirement. That Ian only has to tell her that he likes her style and her favourite shitty movies it's kind of crazy. Maybe the threesome with Jeremy if Lena hogs his cock to establish some motivation or Louise peeking at Lena and Ian fucking, Stan style. As it is now, it feels unrealistic even for someone as clingy as Louise to shamelessly flirt with her best friend's boyfriend (specially if she is submissive to Lena).
 

Xupuzulla

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Even so, I think the threesome should be a requirement. That Ian only has to tell her that he likes her style and her favourite shitty movies it's kind of crazy. Maybe the threesome with Jeremy if Lena hogs his cock to establish some motivation or Louise peeking at Lena and Ian fucking, Stan style. As it is now, it feels unrealistic even for someone as clingy as Louise to shamelessly flirt with her best friend's boyfriend (specially if she is submissive to Lena).
I agree the threesome should be a requirement,it does feels like EK is trying to speedrun a Ian-Louise pairing.
Im not complaining through:p
 
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