Diconica

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Perry is necessary in order to tie up all the loose ends connected with Cindy, Alison, Louise, Ivy, and Gillian .
Perry isn't necessary at all.
There is nothing that Perry brings to the story that can't be done better other ways other than being the annoying shit he is.
The connections can be built through jobs, events, locations. The conflicts and jealousies discovery of betrayal and cheating can all be found better ways.
Having the MC roommate with such a character is absorbed. It would be worse than living with Newman from Seinfeld.
 

Andrea9999

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Perry isn't necessary at all.
There is nothing that Perry brings to the story that can't be done better other ways other than being the annoying shit he is.
The connections can be built through jobs, events, locations. The conflicts and jealousies discovery of betrayal and cheating can all be found better ways.
Having the MC roommate with such a character is absorbed. It would be worse than living with Newman from Seinfeld.
Perhaps, but that would take yet more lengthening and branching of the plot tree than my ....well... shall we say.... "pruning" procedure.
 

Diconica

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Perhaps, but that would take yet more lengthening and branching of the plot tree than my ....well... shall we say.... "pruning" procedure.
Not true at all. You have to go to those location anyway. You have to meet those people they do their jobs and have events.
All it takes is something like one person seeing another or double booking...
Take Ian fucking Cindy in the street. Ivy comes out who is to say Ivy doesn't snitch and tell Lena?
Or one of them shows up at the house to surprise the other one while they are cheating...
You already have the scenes in place a few lines of dialog is the only added change needed.
For that matter it might not just turn into them being upset it could turn into them peeping or wanting to join in...
They already have the scenes and character dolls for building all the dialog events.
As I said Perry is completely unnecessary.
 

Diconica

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Basically because that asshole perry invited a drug addict to ian's party at his parents' house and the bastard destroyed the bathroom. That's why ian lives with perry, because thanks to him his parents kicked him out of the house. :HideThePain:
That would be reason to mess Perry up or drag him to court, not live with him.
O yeah I am going to live with the guy who caused me problems and f-d me over so he can cause me more headaches and problems.
Totally buying that story.
 
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