VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.3] [Eva Kiss]

[HardKuki]

In my playthrough Ian never scored with anyone besides slutty Holly in the later stages of the game. Perry never scored either. Maybe they should both try tinder or something? It could be called "Stringer" or something and maybe Ian could go on a few dates that will turn him bitter or something and while frustrated he keeps googling wierd shit and connects more and more with Perry and his kinks

Also, Stan is kinda crazy just like Louise said, he threatened to call the cops on poor Jeremy for helping Lena with her plumming.

I hope to see Holly feeling really bad about what happened but still letting Ivy call the shots so she can remain in the cool gang I think these 7 wieners along with the 5 previous makes Holly the most used in the game so far, by large margin.

Bummed Seymour closed Lenas Stalkfap, that was a jelly move, how is Ian gonna get off now ?

 

[Xupuzulla]

Meh, after Seymour's update, I was kinda bummed out by his villain tag. For me, he's like Stan - now just richer, fitter and older.
Underneath they both are the same - "Muh Queen!"

Evakiss is making Seymour ass hungry to make him popular

 

[Geigi]

Bummed Seymour closed Lenas Stalkfap, that was a jelly move, how is Ian gonna get off now ?

Holly could write erotica/porn based on her experience.

 

[fatpussy123]

A lot of the dialogue between characters was added so that it wasn't just sex scenes. Which is nice.

Is there any new dialogue besides the Emma/Charles stuff?

 

[slavebenji]

Hi, just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the game. Especially the art of the girls and the few NTR/Female dominant/Feet pic scenes. Good story too, they are very relateable. Keep up the good work!

 

[Molmer]

I'll be honest people, I couldn't give less of a fuck about Lena or her story, I just want my CHAD Ian to get knee deep in all that pussy.

Kind of curious about the possibility of him getting back together with Gillian though, didn't think I would be, but there's something quite captivating with the heartache.

 

[MaliPizdek]

no Cindy, no fun... see ya all next time

 

[ffive]

A lot of the dialogue between characters was added so that it wasn't just sex scenes. Which is nice.

Wait, what? I ran a diff between beta and alpha build of this chapter, and (other than Emma scene) there's like, literally 4 lines changed if that, and it was script conditionals not dialogue.

Could you clarify what added dialogue do you mean..? (i'm now irrationally concerned that maybe i overlooked those additions somehow and missed out ;/

 

[Xupuzulla]

no Cindy, no fun... see ya all next time

Shes having fun with Axel

 

[Leongen43]

Shes having fun with Axel

Surely Axel/Cindy would make a great couple where she would be loyal and he would stop being a jealous toxic possessive who always thinks about Lena, right? I don't think anyone this

 

[esh93]

any news in beta? i didn't see any new scene in beta

 

[saltynip]

I suppose there are still some bugs and more scenes waiting to be added in the final version, since Lena is saying hello into the void with her crazy nympho eyes and staring at the hobo with thirst for no reason.

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[Xupuzulla]

Surely Axel/Cindy would make a great couple where she would be loyal and he would stop being a jealous toxic possessive who always thinks about Lena, right? I don't think anyone this

Both are toxic cheaters,they are perfect for each other.

 

[Blurpee69]

Is there any new dialogue besides the Emma/Charles stuff?

Wait, what? I ran a diff between beta and alpha build of this chapter, and (other than Emma scene) there's like, literally 4 lines changed if that, and it was script conditionals not dialogue.

Could you clarify what added dialogue do you mean..? (i'm now irrationally concerned that maybe i overlooked those additions somehow and missed out ;/

Well perhaps a bunch of dialogue wasn't added, but bugs that was causing the dialogue to be skipped was cleaned up? Alpha for me was basically only sex scenes, which is why I was fairly disappointed with the alpha release. But playing through the Beta I got a bunch of dialogue between Ian and Lena, Stan made some appearances outside of yelling about Jeremy, Holly reflected more on her relationship with Ian, Ivy called a loving Lena a prude when talking about the Holly Hole scene which I didn't get the first time.

Also, and this is less likely to be noticed. But Ian's opening thoughts at the start of the game when before he gets chewed out by Minerva has been altered. There were also some changes to dialogue between Lena and Seymour from the previous update. And, as usual I'm sure several other small changes to conversations and thoughts have been changed throughout several chapters.

This entire scene from the opening is new to me, I didn't have it during my 13.1 playthrough.


Edit: Actually, holy cow! So much of chapter 1 has been changed. Cindy arrives after Ian to the apartment now, and has a much more engaged conversation with Ian. Perry immediately comes across as more prissy and entitled. There is an entire scene of Ian walking home from his internship with his thoughts.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Well perhaps a bunch of dialogue wasn't added, but bugs that was causing the dialogue to be skipped was cleaned up? Alpha for me was basically only sex scenes, which is why I was fairly disappointed with the alpha release. But playing through the Beta I got a bunch of dialogue between Ian and Lena, Stan made some appearances outside of yelling about Jeremy, Holly reflected more on her relationship with Ian, Ivy called a loving Lena a prude when talking about the Holly Hole scene which I didn't get the first time.

Also, and this is less likely to be noticed. But Ian's opening thoughts at the start of the game when before he gets chewed out by Minerva has been altered. There were also some changes to dialogue between Lena and Seymour from the previous update. And, as usual I'm sure several other small changes to conversations and thoughts have been changed throughout several chapters.

This entire scene from the opening is new to me, I didn't have it during my 13.1 playthrough.
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Edit: Actually, holy cow! So much of chapter 1 has been changed. Cindy arrives after Ian to the apartment now, and has a much more engaged conversation with Ian. Perry immediately comes across as more prissy and entitled. There is an entire scene of Ian walking home from his internship with his thoughts.

Im sure some people will disagree with this but for me this is the negative part of playing this game now,EK is always changing things,adding new dialogue,new music,new texts with images,etc...makes you feel like you are missing out if you are not starting new saves all the time.
Im jealous of all the people who are going to play this game for the first time when is completed

 

[Blurpee69]

Im sure some people will disagree with this but for me this is the negative part of playing this game now,EK is always changing things,adding new dialogue,new music,new texts with images,etc...makes you feel like you are missing out if you are not starting new saves all the time.
Im jealous of all the people who are going to play this game for the first time when is completed

I wouldn't expect anybody to start fresh as often as I do, I don't actually make saves at decisions, instead I start fresh every time. But I do think it's worth it to at least start a fresh play-through every couple of chapters at least to see all of these types of changes that EK does put in throughout. It does show the amount of effort being put into the game, and that even if it might not be readily apparent if, for example, you only played the Seymour update last time; that a lot has changed in the earlier chapters, even if the Seymour update is pretty regarded on this site as very short and disappointing.

 

[AndreDA]

So... what do you guys consider to be the ultimate/canon playthrough? Ian and Lena 100% loyal to each other? Ian, Lena and Holly? Ian and Lena sleeping with max possible amount of characters? Setting up relationships and hookups between other characters as much as possible?

 

[Nifferman]

So... what do you guys consider to be the ultimate/canon playthrough? Ian and Lena 100% loyal to each other? Ian, Lena and Holly? Ian and Lena sleeping with max possible amount of characters? Setting up relationships and hookups between other characters as much as possible?

Def. Ian x Lena staying 100% loyal.

 

[Gicoo]

So... what do you guys consider to be the ultimate/canon playthrough? Ian and Lena 100% loyal to each other? Ian, Lena and Holly? Ian and Lena sleeping with max possible amount of characters? Setting up relationships and hookups between other characters as much as possible?

Ian and Lena definitely together, considering how much the narrative pushes them. Holly as the connecting inofficial third main character is likely best served to be together with them as well, her other options are lacking.

Chad Ian, Slut Lena and Slut Holly may be a novelity, but there are too many variations of it. Is Slut Lena focusing on Axel, Seymour or BBC? Stalkfap and potential porn star conflict with Seymours posh route etc.

 

[Rickster82]

I'm looking forward to future content as the topic of "Lena" has been covered enough in the last 2 updates and hopefully it will be Ian's turn next time. Ian with various ladies (Ivy, Louise, Jessica etc.).