VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Deleted member 3064965]

I'd have to replay through it to recall exactly, but I'm fairly certain Lena's reaction to Jeremy's cock, assuming you don't choose any of the "fantasizing about bbc" options, is just a general suprise at the size, which I find kind of realistic, would probably have that reaction myself if some guy pulled a dick out bigger than my forearm.

Only complaint/change I'd really like for that scene, is some way for it to smack her in the face when she pulls it out, instead of her pulling away at the last second

I can't remember how the scene plays out if she hasn't seen his cock before, so you're probably right about her reaction. The porn-esque part I talked about, and which BlandChili commented on first, was rather the hand-/blowjob scene afterwards. It was porn-esque, but well executed porn-esque, in my view.

And yes, with the way his dick pops out of his pants, you kind of expect it to smack her face. Lena showing up at the cafe on the next workday with a difficult to explain black eye?

Tbh it doesn't bother me to an extreme amount, at least not when there's alternative options presented for those who don't enjoy that tone of pornography. I have certainly known other women that were oddly explicit about their size-preferences for cocks. You'd be surprised at the foul ways women sometimes refer to male genetalia when they think they're in an agreeable crowd.

Certainly one thing that I've liked is that they aren't all over each other just for existing, like how Tyrone will act towards Ashley if you let him drive you home in gggb.

Yeah, I wouldn't say it bothers me either. Maybe this is just me gradually adjusting my point, but it’s just as fair to like big dicks as prefering other physical traits. The problem for me, story wise, would be if Lena immediately threw herself upon Jeremy because she just doesn’t have the willpower to hold back once she sees a big cock. The BBC trope is usually someone fucking a big dick; a LenaxJeremy scene in the next episode would be Lena fucking a person with a big dick.

I am interested in the idea that Jeremy feels insecure about Lena because she's a different type to who he'd normally pursue? Ivy is promiscuous and outgoing while Louise wants attention. I was also interested in how utterly disinterested he seemed in regards to Holly, not even bothering to really get to know her name. Looking forward to seeing how that plays out further too.

Agreed. I can’t immediately point out any particular scenes to back up this, but my general impression is that Jeremy struggles to maintain that player/bro act in front of Lena. There’s a lot about Jeremy I don’t like as well (I can’t remember that disinterest towards Holly, but that would be one of those things), but there’s something about their interactions I find intriguing. I still think it’s realistic that we’ll see an option for a romantic relationship between them at some point. Story wise I find the idea of a romantic relationship evolving from a completely non-romantic starting point interesting. (And peeking at someone’s dick while they fuck your room mate definitely counts as non-romantic.)

 

[BlandChili]

Agreed. I can’t immediately point out any particular scenes to back up this, but my general impression is that Jeremy struggles to maintain that player/bro act in front of Lena.

I think it goes a bit further than just with Lena though, I've mentioned before that I feel like both he and Ivy aren't completely comitted to their lifestyle yet and that their directions will depend on Ian and Lena. Lena of course is the character that we most clearly see his barrier break down with and Ian is the one he tries to prove himself to (or against).

We'll see if I'm right

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

I think it goes a bit further than just with Lena though, I've mentioned before that I feel like both he and Ivy aren't completely comitted to their lifestyle yet and that their directions will depend on Ian and Lena. Lena of course is the character that we most clearly see his barrier break down with and Ian is the one he tries to prove himself to (or against).

We'll see if I'm right

I think that makes a lot of sense, also in comparison to GGGB. The part I’m most unsure about, is how Ian’s potential influence on Ivy will be, but maybe we’ll see some further interactions between them in the coming chapter.

 

[cognu]

My impression was that the different attitude from Jeremy comes more from him being with Louise and Lena is known by Ian / Ivy as well... so even if he want to act like his usual player attitude, he thinks that he mightl lose something if he openly pursuit Lena (Louise, chances with Ivy, or even Ian friendship depending of the route).
Kind of like he assumes that Lena is out of the field, for the moment, if he wants to keep things going with his other conquests.
The party might as well open a way for him to pursue her more agressively due to her being open of what she wants in that path.

Lena attitude towards Jeremy is purely sexual, if you compare the times that she fantasizes about someone (Taking for example Axel, which with him is all about his attiude and her role, and Jeremy is just the dick), seems that its written that way un purpose, on personal level they have no chemistry besides the fetishes, like him being Louise boyfriend or having a huge dick.

Their interactions outside the party are quite "cordial" or passive/agressive (Again, depending on which path are you), so it seems that the path for both of them needs a lot of work yet (Like... having some common ground besides sex) or go towards the usual rabbit hole and have a purely sexual relationship.

It give me vibes of GGGB that his role will be closely tied to Ivy and Louise in sharing / swapping / cheating scenarios more than a romantic interest due to his personality (for the moment) being something that Lena starts the game not being fond of.

I think that makes a lot of sense, also in comparison to GGGB. The part I’m most unsure about, is how Ian’s potential influence on Ivy will be, but maybe we’ll see some further interactions between them in the coming chapter.

I suppose that this chapter we might see more of this, because for "new" relationships only Ivy and Louise are left to determine which kind of interaction will Ian have with them.
I hope for Ian/Ivy interaction had the possibility on going both ways; ian delving in Ivy's world due to him being drawn by her and he being "corrupted" in a way ; and the other way, the opposite, like Ian being the kind of guy that was teased at the start of the game that might rock her world hard and make her root for a long relationship (Lena will have this role as well in other path, for sure, i hope)

 

[Massi89]

The problem for me, story wise, would be if Lena immediately threw herself upon Jeremy because she just doesn’t have the willpower to hold back once she sees a big cock. The BBC trope is usually someone fucking a big dick; a LenaxJeremy scene in the next episode would be Lena fucking a person with a big dick.

The way I see it, in the bottle game you can make her actively insist on sucking his dick (Jeremy is the one hesitating), so rather than lacking the willpower to hold back (I wouldn't particularly like that either), I think it will take the direction of her actively wanting BBC. Also because technically she is not engaged or married with anyone yet, so from her point of view the idea of having fun with multiple guys at the same time makes clearly more sense than if she were engaged.

But I also guess there will be new opportunities to make Lena take more of the molly drug, that will definitely become a significant factor in her future behaviours.

I heard that Lena is based off of an actualy pornstar. Is Holly the same? If so, what is her name?

Don't know if Holly is based on a real woman, but she gives me the vibe of a very casual type of quiet girl. If I meet a Holly IRL I might fall in love

 

[TamaMountain]

I think fight tournament will start in chapter 8 and will finish in chapter 9

What makes you think that? I think it's a bit soon for the tournament to take place in ch 8 .

If it does happen I'd expect a sparring session with mma rules where Ian fights Yuri or Jeremy using the fighting mechanic introduced in ch 7.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

I have certainly known other women that were oddly explicit about their size-preferences for cocks

This is why it's not a big deal to me. Along with it being optional anyway of course. I've come across many women irl who were "size queens" and really liked big dicks.

 

[Massi89]

While I never do Ian/Lena or Lena/Jeremycock I have played through committing to more sexual onlyfans where I felt like there was a stark change in tone. At first she was fumbling slightly, trying to figure out a good way to approach the platform, the next she's pulled Stan into her room and twerking in front of him, almost naked and surrendering completely to the screen. While I understand the eroticism in it, I did feel like the development of this story point ended up running away from me. Since then I never do anything but post the nudes from her other work.

"Almost naked"? In that scene you can make her go completely naked and twerk with her asshole and pussy in plain view, you can just remove her panties before making her twerk. I won't say that I didn't enjoy it, but when I watched that scene it made me wonder if Lena was still under the effects of the drug or what, there's even a line where she says "I was feeling very bold" or something along those lines. But the drug (provided that you made her take it) supposedly wore off the previous night after the drinking game still an arousing scene though

Aside from that, I do want to try out any lesbian route other than Lena/Louise at some point, I really enjoyed the kiss scene between Lena and Holly in Ivy's room.

This is why it's not a big deal to me. Along with it being optional anyway of course. I've come across many women irl who were "size queens" and really liked big dicks.

Absolutely, women can be perverts just like us men. They just express it in a different way.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

I think fight tournament will start in chapter 8 and will finish in chapter 9

Now that is the story i am least looking forward to. I get the feeling it will be a bunch of " dude bros" full of unintentional innuendos (like Jeremy sending dick picks to Ian and Ian jerking off to it).

No offense intended. I just find it very funny considering the developer's stance on gay content.

 

[D00MD1CK]

I won't say that I didn't enjoy it, but when I watched that scene it made me wonder if Lena was still under the effects of the drug or what, there's even a line where she says "I was feeling very bold" or something along those lines. But the drug (provided that you made her take it) supposedly wore off the previous night after the drinking game

The effects of molly only lasts 3-4 hours my dude lol. The bold line is always there, even if you don't take the drug and don't go to Ivy's place.

 

[knightoflisbon]

Where does that scene take place? Do Ian and Robert still fight at the cafe if Lena didn't fuck Robert?

Yeah if he rejects him I'm pretty sure he comes back and is like yo gimme another chance. Perhaps there is a scenario where Robert doesn't appear at the cafe at all. Maybe it's in Mares's walkthrough.

 

[knightoflisbon]

Now that is the story i am least looking forward to. I get the feeling it will be a bunch of " dude bros" full of unintentional innuendos (like Jeremy sending dick picks to Ian and Ian jerking off to it).

No offense intended. I just find it very funny considering the developer's stance on gay content.

Maybe it'll be something where you meet a bunch of new people and one of the fighters has a super hot girlfriend and if you kick his ass and hit on her she gets the Ian special.

Like there would prob be 2 kinds of rewards for doing well in the tournament given that this is a porn game, money and pussy. And like I've said before hopefully Eva uses this as an opportunity to add an Asian female character.

 

[Hasshasshin]

why a game like this dont goes on onlyfans she would prob make huge money

If evaKiss make her onlyfans probably

 

[Massi89]

The effects of molly only lasts 3-4 hours my dude lol. The bold line is always there, even if you don't take the drug and don't go to Ivy's place.

Yeah it can last 5 or 6 hours at most, that's why I say it. In that twerking scene Lena's character kinda felt to me as if she was still in drugged mode. While it is a fun scene I don't know if it makes any sense plotwise, even more so if you avoid the drug and the drinking game.

 

[Deleted member 40068]

How different would the alpha and beta be?

 

[Petro28]

How different would the alpha and beta be?

Beta usually has bug fixes if needed and spelling mistakes fixes. Sometimes a scene slitly changed.

 

[ntrnar]

Yeah it can last 5 or 6 hours at most, that's why I say it. In that twerking scene Lena's character kinda felt to me as if she was still in drugged mode. While it is a fun scene I don't know if it makes any sense plotwise, even more so if you avoid the drug and the drinking game.

Is it really that much of a stretch? Ivy spoke to her the night before about making the most of the app and she has already posted full nudes already on there if you are doing the full strip. She needs money and thus is thinking that she needs to follow Ivy's advice.

She also has Ivy's videos of doing something very similar. The Stan stuff will only happen if you already show an interest in showing off for him so I avoided that in my run. Personally I think Lena can very much see it as a good avenue for some cash, she has already shown that she sees the human body as art so making some cash off of it isn't a huge stretch

 

[mommysboiii]

Maybe it'll be something where you meet a bunch of new people and one of the fighters has a super hot girlfriend and if you kick his ass and hit on her she gets the Ian special.

Like there would prob be 2 kinds of rewards for doing well in the tournament given that this is a porn game, money and pussy. And like I've said before hopefully Eva uses this as an opportunity to add an Asian female character.

I will def lose intentionally because i play nerdy guy ,so lets hope that the enemys will bone my girlfriend

 

[Massi89]

Is it really that much of a stretch? Ivy spoke to her the night before about making the most of the app and she has already posted full nudes already on there if you are doing the full strip. She needs money and thus is thinking that she needs to follow Ivy's advice.

She also has Ivy's videos of doing something very similar. The Stan stuff will only happen if you already show an interest in showing off for him so I avoided that in my run. Personally I think Lena can very much see it as a good avenue for some cash, she has already shown that she sees the human body as art so making some cash off of it isn't a huge stretch

I guess it isn't too much of a stretch and all in all I'm okay with it, but in my run Lena took the drug and we can see very well what changes in her when the effects start to show (blowjob in a public place). I couldn't sense as clearly the point where the effects wear off in her character though. That's why it confused me a bit in terms of character consistency, but it might just be me. But as you explain yourself, there is definitely still plot consistency to a certain extent.
Eva is trying to create plotlines in various shades, and this scene can make a lot of sense for a reader who wants to make Lena's lust points as high as possible.

 

[ParkerMets86]

If evaKiss make her onlyfans probably

Is she making an onlyfans?