VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Zedire]

Is this game vanilla? I noticed that there is a corruption tag, but most reviews are praising the game for it's writing and that's just not my thing.

There are two main characters and depending on your choices you will be able to corrupt them or keep things more vanilla, just like in GGGB. It's totally up to the player. There are some female characters besides the MC you can 'lead' one way or the other, too.
Also, you can play the game just dating one character and focus on a more committed relationship, or you can play the field and be a chad/slut.
I'm not exactly sure what you're saying you don't like, but I'd say give it a try - it's a very good game so far.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

most reviews are praising the game for it's writing and that's just not my thing

You like games poorly written by teenagers?

 

[tarzan999]

You like games poorly written by teenagers?

I read the story in "kinky" games like Witch Trainer or Bad Bobby Saga. If a game tries too hard to be mundane and vanilla like Being a Dik, for example, it doesn't hold my attention. I am kind of surprised that so many people like them, tbh. I don't see the appeal.

 

[BlandChili]

I read the story in "kinky" games like Witch Trainer or Bad Bobby Saga. If a game tries too hard to be mundane and vanilla like Being a Dik, for example, it doesn't hold my attention. I am kind of surprised that so many people like them, tbh. I don't see the appeal.

We all like different things.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Beautifully said, I couldn't agree more! I completely get it and it's something we rarely see in these games. Or in any media, for that matter.

I absolutely want Louise to be molded into Lena's sex pet, but for it to be hot and realistic, it should be done with full consent and love. Real BDSM is all about deep love and trust, not abuse and degradation (even if a degradation kink is involved). Aftercare is also almost never shown.

Quoting myself here but just to continue on this conversation, I feel like this area really gets so little attention. Here’s is a great Q&A from one of my favorite kinky PH couples in a relationship I could see for Lena and Louise:

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And about the importance of aftercare:

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[Brickman]

Revised Wits outfit for Ian

I've elaborated in the concept of the new wits outfit, developing the idea from the basic long-sleeve suede shirt.
I'm torn between the simpler design and the one with the under-shirt, and also the color scheme. What's your opinion? 1, 2, 3, 4 or none?

 

[DDDIsReal]

Revised Wits outfit for Ian

I've elaborated in the concept of the new wits outfit, developing the idea from the basic long-sleeve suede shirt.
I'm torn between the simpler design and the one with the under-shirt, and also the color scheme. What's your opinion? 1, 2, 3, 4 or none?

3-4 are the best imho

 

[BlandChili]

Not a fan of the elbow pads myself, but the two last options look nice. The style fits wits too I think.

 

[godoff95]

3-4 are the best imho

I like 4 best. I feel she should target Magnus Carlsen's wardrobe for wits.

 

[Mrsubtle]

There are other ways to dress sharp without tight shirts though, though I personally try to be a bit sharp with a mix of nonchalance. No need to try that hard.

 

[Zedire]

Not a fan of the elbow pads myself, but the two last options look nice. The style fits wits too I think.

The elbow pads, if that's what they are, are weird tbh. It makes no sense for elbow pads to look like that if his sleeves are pushed up - instead they'd make some of the folds stick out more due to the added material, and wouldn't take up that whole elbow area since some of those folds are from the material below the elbow that's been pushed up.
My guess is Eva just put them in there because the folds at the elbow made the arms looked weird without some kind of extra detail there to break them up, or something like that.
But I do agree that 3 and 4 are an improvement on the original design.

 

[Zedire]

There are other ways to dress sharp without tight shirts though, though I personally try to be a bit sharp with a mix of nonchalance. No need to try that hard.

Undoubtedly, but the tight look is more for the benefit of the player, really. No sense in Ian having a hot bod if he's not gonna show it off a bit. Same with Lena, I'm guessing very few people would want an outfit that conceals her form too much - one of the reasons why her existing Atheltic outfit doesn't seem to be too popular.

 

[BloodyMares]

Happy that my suggestion (4th option) made it into the poll.
But I gotta admit, with proper coloring, even the basic version doesn't look as bad. Though he looks more Athletic than Witty with it.

Sorry, not sorry.

 

[Reasoon]

Happy that my suggestion (4th option) made it into the poll.
But I gotta admit, with proper coloring, even the basic version doesn't look as bad. Though he looks more Athletic than Witty with it.

Sorry, not sorry.
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The Devil of Perry's Kitchen By the way does the Town/City where ORS is set has a Name? I think I've never read anything in the Game about it.

 

[☆Jonathan Wick♤]

Revised Wits outfit for Ian

I've elaborated in the concept of the new wits outfit, developing the idea from the basic long-sleeve suede shirt.
I'm torn between the simpler design and the one with the under-shirt, and also the color scheme. What's your opinion? 1, 2, 3, 4 or none?

The best at least for me would be the third or fourth option, they seem more stylized outfits and somewhat different from those created previously. In terms of colors, they both fit well with Ian so I don't have much preference in that regard.

The first and second options are somewhat simplistic versions of Ian's lust outfit without the "famous" turtleneck.

 

[BloodyMares]

The Devil of Perry's Kitchen By the way does the Town/City where ORS is set has a Name? I think I've never read anything in the Game about it.

Nope, Eva chose to go the ambiguous route and never named locations. I think the only location she named in both of her games was Somalia where Eric went. The main towns/cities are nameless, and it's intentional so that the players could fill in the blanks with their imagination.

 

[Barkus]

I don't like the 3 and 4 options because of the undershirt. They look too geeky in my opinion. Witty doesn't necessarily mean geeky. Also the rolled sleeves are better suited to Lust or Charisma. The best choice is the first one, nice simple and elegant, suitable to a charming and smart young man.

 

[sevensham]

what date new update release?

 

[scor099]

Happy that my suggestion (4th option) made it into the poll.
But I gotta admit, with proper coloring, even the basic version doesn't look as bad. Though he looks more Athletic than Witty with it.

Sorry, not sorry.
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Daredevil?

 

[BloodyMares]

Daredevil?

Indeed. Inspired by how Ian's body looks in a tight shirt without the turtleneck.