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[Deleted member 3064965]

That was also something, that I was thinking. Or he has a personal interest, maybe he had a story with Lena’s mom and she dumped/rejected him and now as he is wealthy and powerful, he wants his revenge by corrupting / destroying Lena….

Yeah, I very much doubt Seymour is Lena’s father. I think Lena states that she remembers her biological father from pictures, in which case she probably would recognize him if she met him. ORS is also more realistic than the porn fantasy based GGGB, making incest very unlikely. It would also make it problematic to release it on Steam. And most importantly it would be a gigantic dealbreaker for a lot of players if such a secret is revealed only after you’ve let Lena get involved in sexual stuff with him.

I think Eva either just added it for the general backstory without thinking about how a lot of people would interpret it (I think it’s a nice detail for the general theme of dysfunctional relationships to show how both Ian and Lena have grown up with some of those around them, adding to their own with Gillian and Axel), or she also did it to intentionally mislead just for the fun of it.

 

[AsticHam]

Having a error, pls someone can help me? Its lauch but doesnt even gets to menu


Tue Jan 4 21:06:37 2022
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.4.1439


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[Echbert]

Guys who think, Ian is a short and pathetic protagonist. Don't worry "Eva" has heard your prayers.

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New Ian will be, 6'2 Ultra Chad with monster COCK, women will act slutty and fall in love with him by just looking at him. Then He will create a perfect harem, that will include all women of 'ORS" and Even little PUSSY Lola will love new Ian.!!

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After revamping, In the new update of "ORS" Jeremy will be fucked by Sensei WEN!

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Just kidding!! guys. I know a lot of people wish that they were playing as Jeremy or Axel but personally, I have played that type of too many AVN's where the male protagonist is some Magic Cock entity and all the girls are waiting for him to conquer them or a boy who wants to fuck their you know. So for me, Ian was a breath of fresh air. I Know he is of average height and does not have a monster DIK. I was quite shocked at Ian's height first also because I am quite tall in real life and being taller helps you a lot with ladies in real life. But height is not only the factor that defines a person. The person has to have a lot of confidence and charisma, be insightful, funny, and don't be an asshole, liar and manipulative and on all those fronts Ian has all that at least compared to most males in "ORS". The game would be less fun for me if I was playing with Axel or Jeremy as protagonists or Ian with ultra-chad looks, with huge Dik, larger height, and Muscular body. He has the best personality traits at least in my opinion.

I don't hate Jeremy, that much and he used to be a nerd like Ian, in the past and something devastating must happen to him to turn his life around to become a wannabe player. I would like if path with Lena x Jeremy is more than some BBC fetish. And Lena is the one who discovers the real Jeremey, who hides behind his facade of wannabe womanizer, but I don't think we will be able to see that path. Let's see it depend on ''Eva'' I can only hope!


I don't have that much problem with seemore. Every story needs a great villain and he is the villain of this story. Even though I have a hunch that he is Lena's biological father. He is the Godfather of this game. You can like him or hate him but you can't ignore him. I play my Ian as Anti Hero, so It will be fun to see how kind of villain he turns out to be in all paths.

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Honestly don't think there's many ppl who have a problem with Ian. It's just recently that one user was going on about his height and a few others joined in(they were either a troll, or just some wierd mofo who has a need to mock dudes who are shorter than them? i dunno whole thing was wierd and out of left field). Most ppl seem to be okay with Ian, his appearance is perfect for the narrative Eva is crafting, an everyman who has the potential to be charismatic and social, or well...... a Perry. Eva is going for a more grounded nuanced narrative and she chose protagonists that suit that.

 

[mommysboiii]

hope for some holy/ian relationship but holly joints the dark side because of ivy corruption and evil plans pls eva I would cum in 2 seconds alex (aka mr.steal your gir)l is definatly the best he is a CHAD bois

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

Most ppl seem to be okay with Ian, his appearance is perfect for the narrative Eva is crafting, an everyman who has the potential to be charismatic and social, or well...... a Perry. Eva is going for a more grounded nuanced narrative and she chose protagonists that suit that.

Agreed. Everyone are obviously free to have their preferences, but there's not exactly a lack of characters with monster cocks or gigantic boobs in games like this, and the consequence is often that the attraction between the characters feels kind of mechanic. Big dick equals good and fuckworthy, smaller dick equals bad and not fuckworthy. With Ian we need to develop other personal qualities as well and make the right choices to make him interesting for parts of the female cast.

And it's not like he's extraordinarily bad-looking either. He's of completely average height, his dick is at least average sized, and he's in pretty good shape as well. He just hasn't got the same monster cock as Jeremy or the nazi propaganda poster body as Axel.

 

[Homemade]

Agreed. Everyone are obviously free to have their preferences, but there's not exactly a lack of characters with monster cocks or gigantic boobs in games like this, and the consequence is often that the attraction between the characters feels kind of mechanic. Big dick equals good and fuckworthy, smaller dick equals bad and not fuckworthy. With Ian we need to develop other personal qualities as well and make the right choices to make him interesting for parts of the female cast.

And it's not like he's extraordinarily bad-looking either. He's of completely average height, his dick is at least average sized, and he's in pretty good shape as well. He just hasn't got the same monster cock as Jeremy or the nazi propaganda poster body as Axel.

Bro, I don't reply to others' posts mostly because I don't like to write in English that much. But whenever I read your posts, I feel you always write in a way that feels as if my own thoughts are written by you in English so keep it up.! It's always intriguing and fun to read your posts and your analysis about the world and characters of "ORS". I always read your posts with enthusiasm. BloodyMares, Echbert, You, and a few others are among those people to whose posts I give a like instantly even before reading.

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

I think it’s a nice detail for the general theme of dysfunctional relationships to show how both Ian and Lena have grown up with some of those around them, adding to their own with Gillian and Axel

Now I'm quoting myself here, but considering how dysfunctional relationships seems to be a theme throughout the story, it got me thinking about what Eva has in store now that Ian and Lena could be in a relationship themselves.

Even though their starting points are similar — trying to recover from bad breakups after being cheated on — I think they handle it a bit differently. Lena's relationship ended more recently than Ian's, if I remember correctly, and she's reminded of it more often by the presence of Axel and Cherry. First and foremost she still seems angry about it, at Axel, at Cherry, and occasionally also at herself. If Ian sleeps with Holly, we can see how quick she is to judge someone if they act in a way that reminds her of Axel.

Ian somehow seems more… resigned about it, at least in some instances. He could become more of a Chad himself; sleeping around, sharing girls with Jeremy, beating up Robert, hanging out with Axel and telling Cindy to continue to cheat on Wade, in which case his history with Gillian seems less present. But if he doesn't do that, he often acts passive, like a guy who's self-esteem has taken a big hit. And to be fair his surroundings aren't always helping him either: Jeremy when he sends videos to Ian, which could be taken as a way to show that they've chosen him over Ian, or when he tells Ian that girls like Lena aren't relationship material; Perry when he sees the pictures of Axel and tells Ian it's impossible to compete with guys like that.

It will also be fun to see how a Lena/Ian relationship will affect other people they're involved with. E.g. Lena/Mike. Lena could already be dirty talking about the fact that Mike's cheating, and tease him into saying how much better she is than his girlfriend. How will that dynamic play out if Lena's cheating herself? Will Mike expect the roles to reverse, and Lena to also talk shit about Ian? Either way I'm pretty certain there will be possibilities for a lot of shitstorms and hypocritical behaviour in the coming chapters.

Bro, I don't reply to others' posts mostly because I don't like to write in English that much. But whenever I read your posts, I feel you always write in a way that feels as if my own thoughts are written by you in English so keep it up.! It's always intriguing and fun to read your posts and your analysis about the world and characters of "ORS". I always read your posts with enthusiasm. BloodyMares, Echbert, You, and a few others are among those people to whose posts I give a like instantly even before reading.

Thank you, that's kind of you to say! I'll try not to write something incredibly stupid which you end up liking without having read all of it

 

[Lord Bradley]

I really hope Holly can have some events with the bouncer at the club since it seemed to hint at the possibility. Has it been mentioned somewhere officially, can anyone let me know? Thanks

 

[JohnnySolo]

Now I'm quoting myself here, but considering how dysfunctional relationships seems to be a theme throughout the story, it got me thinking about what Eva has in store now that Ian and Lena could be in a relationship themselves.

Even though their starting points are similar — trying to recover from bad breakups after being cheated on — I think they handle it a bit differently. Lena's relationship ended more recently than Ian's, if I remember correctly, and she's reminded of it more often by the presence of Axel and Cherry. First and foremost she still seems angry about it, at Axel, at Cherry, and occasionally also at herself. If Ian sleeps with Holly, we can see how quick she is to judge someone if they act in a way that reminds her of Axel.

Ian somehow seems more… resigned about it, at least in some instances. He could become more of a Chad himself; sleeping around, sharing girls with Jeremy, beating up Robert, hanging out with Axel and telling Cindy to continue to cheat on Wade, in which case his history with Gillian seems less present. But if he doesn't do that, he often acts passive, like a guy who's self-esteem has taken a big hit. And to be fair his surroundings aren't always helping him either: Jeremy when he sends videos to Ian, which could be taken as a way to show that they've chosen him over Ian, or when he tells Ian that girls like Lena aren't relationship material; Perry when he sees the pictures of Axel and tells Ian it's impossible to compete with guys like that.

It will also be fun to see how a Lena/Ian relationship will affect other people they're involved with. E.g. Lena/Mike. Lena could already be dirty talking about the fact that Mike's cheating, and tease him into saying how much better she is than his girlfriend. How will that dynamic play out if Lena's cheating herself? Will Mike expect the roles to reverse, and Lena to also talk shit about Ian? Either way I'm pretty certain there will be possibilities for a lot of shitstorms and hypocritical behaviour in the coming chapters.



Thank you, that's kind of you to say! I'll try not to write something incredibly stupid which you end up liking without having read all of it

Some very good points her.

I was also a bit thinking on the possible up-coming scenarios in the Lena/Ian relationship, especially in my current play-trough, my favorite one. On Lena’s side I rejected Robert and Mike, but did some of the lesbian content with Louise. To Axel I said that we are done and didn’t want to meet him. I rejected the option to work with Seymour also after his blackmailing and in the photo shootings with Danny and in the stalkfap content I stayed to artistic nudes. In addition, I tried to move her towards her music talent (as far as you can). On Ian’s side I had only sex with Alison, with exception of course of Lena, but probably more as “Friend with benefit” (also here as far as you can do) and I rejected to spend the weekend with Alison. I “flirted” a bit with Cindy, accompanying her to the first photo shooting and she sent Ian the “hot” pictures, but he didn’t had sex with her. As Ian I didn’t lie to Lena and told her the truth about meeting other girls. The relationship scene was pretty much perfect (to perfect??). And was thinking what could happen to this two? Personally, I could see the following conflicts:

• As Lena is rejecting to work with Seymour, will most probably also backfire to Ian, as he is also depending of him. So maybe at some point he has to decide between his career as a writer or his love to Lena.
• The Seymour / Ian story can also be looked through the view of Lena. Mabey Lena don’t want to involve Ian, because she knows that this will also backfire to Ian’s career. This could than lead towards Ian thinking that Lena is hiding something from him.
• Lena is very hot and has a lot of admirers how will Ian handle this? Then there are the influence of Perry and Jeremy, which are not really helpful. And most probably also Axel will play I part.
• How does Ian see Lena’s modeling work, will he still be cool with it? He could already see some of the “dark” aspects…

 

[AsticHam]

My game lauches and closes without reaching the main menu, what can i do?

 

[CoalPhelps]

Guys who think, Ian is a short and pathetic protagonist. Don't worry "Eva" has heard your prayers.

View attachment 1579004

New Ian will be, 6'2 Ultra Chad with monster COCK, women will act slutty and fall in love with him by just looking at him. Then He will create a perfect harem, that will include all women of 'ORS" and Even little PUSSY Lola will love new Ian.!!

View attachment 1579030


After revamping, In the new update of "ORS" Jeremy will be fucked by Sensei WEN!

View attachment 1579048

Just kidding!! guys. I know a lot of people wish that they were playing as Jeremy or Axel but personally, I have played that type of too many AVN's where the male protagonist is some Magic Cock entity and all the girls are waiting for him to conquer them or a boy who wants to fuck their you know. So for me, Ian was a breath of fresh air. I Know he is of average height and does not have a monster DIK. I was quite shocked at Ian's height first also because I am quite tall in real life and being taller helps you a lot with ladies in real life. But height is not only the factor that defines a person. The person has to have a lot of confidence and charisma, be insightful, funny, and don't be an asshole, liar and manipulative and on all those fronts Ian has all that at least compared to most males in "ORS". The game would be less fun for me if I was playing with Axel or Jeremy as protagonists or Ian with ultra-chad looks, with huge Dik, larger height, and Muscular body. He has the best personality traits at least in my opinion.

I don't hate Jeremy, that much and he used to be a nerd like Ian, in the past and something devastating must happen to him to turn his life around to become a wannabe player. I would like if path with Lena x Jeremy is more than some BBC fetish. And Lena is the one who discovers the real Jeremey, who hides behind his facade of wannabe womanizer, but I don't think we will be able to see that path. Let's see it depend on ''Eva'' I can only hope!


I don't have that much problem with seemore. Every story needs a great villain and he is the villain of this story. Even though I have a hunch that he is Lena's biological father. He is the Godfather of this game. You can like him or hate him but you can't ignore him. I play my Ian as Anti Hero, so It will be fun to see how kind of villain he turns out to be in all paths.

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You always have hilarious pictures. Thank you for being in our community.

 

[HNH1985]

Did v 0.9 is the final v. of the game of this is final upgrade to v0. 9 and there further update

 

[Wallsfalldown]

Did v 0.9 is the final v. of the game of this is final upgrade to v0. 9 and there further update

0.9 Final is the final version of 0.9. The game is not complete so there will be more updates, but there is no current release date known for the next one at this time. Check back in about two months and see what's up then. Welcome to F95!

 

[jollyjoker27]

Did v 0.9 is the final v. of the game of this is final upgrade to v0. 9 and there further update

It means the final version of this update only, not the entire game. Releases go 0.xxalpha, 0.xxbeta, 0.xxfinal usually.
In this specific case for version 0.9 there is currently a revision/rewrite (also for early chapters) so we will get a new 0.9 final version - maybe by the end of the month or next.
Overall storywise it feels like we are at about the midway point of the game. Initially dev said to expect around 20 chapters.
With updates now coming about every 4 months (3 if we are lucky) the game shouldl be complete in about 2-3 years I suppose.

 

[Tulrek]

Sorry guys a quick help.
I wwant the scene with Ivy Holly and Lena but it seems that I cannot achieve to be on Holly path. Does that mean the I don't have to be in relashionship with Ian to achieve that ?

 

[Solomon Grundy]

Sorry guys a quick help.
I wwant the scene with Ivy Holly and Lena but it seems that I cannot achieve to be on Holly path. Does that mean the I don't have to be in relashionship with Ian to achieve that ?

At this time, as I understand things, for Lena and Holly to have sex, Lena must be not dating Ian, and Ian and Holly cannot have had sex on the book tour.

 

[CoalPhelps]

Sorry guys a quick help.
I wwant the scene with Ivy Holly and Lena but it seems that I cannot achieve to be on Holly path. Does that mean the I don't have to be in relashionship with Ian to achieve that ?

Yes, even if both refer to this relationship as just a hook-up, it completely blocks this possibility. So is the relationship between Ian and Holly.

 

[Benzombie]

so anyone knows when the next update gonna come out?

 

[Stephanie98]

so anyone knows when the next update gonna come out?

when the dev finished the updates

 

[SchrodingerCat]

I'm kinda sad game doesn't allow you to have theeway with Lena and Holly. There's enough chemistry between the three of them to make it work and be realistic enough.
But apart from that, I liked it. Definitely much better than the author's previous game.