lipe2410

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Dec 23, 2018
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Hi guys,
a quick update this time. I've been juggling several tasks this week, mainly drawing and writing.
I already have many of Lena's side of the episode illustrations done, but there are still a few scenes that need to be done. I'm adding a special emphasis on visual customisation for some of those, so they're taking extra work to create all possible variations, but it's something new I haven't done before, not to this extent at least, so I think it'll be cool.
I've also been working on writing and structuring the plot and scenes for this chapter. It's always tricky to set in order all the different scenes and possible variations, and sometimes I need to go back and add or tweak paths that I forgot or that cause internal contradiction. Other than that, I've been struggling a lot with a particular scene, the last one of Ian's part, but I think I finally have it.

Also, Dashole, who won the has surprised me with a new set of renders, this time inspired in GGGB, and he depicted and expanded on the Ashley+Arthur ending. You can check them out !
Oh yeah, this what i wanna see in this game: Ian and Lena more and more naughty to each other. Will be perfect if the end of this scene is they record themselfs in a hot fuck
 

dontcarewhateverno

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Jan 25, 2021
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Hi guys,
a quick update this time. I've been juggling several tasks this week, mainly drawing and writing.
I already have many of Lena's side of the episode illustrations done, but there are still a few scenes that need to be done. I'm adding a special emphasis on visual customisation for some of those, so they're taking extra work to create all possible variations, but it's something new I haven't done before, not to this extent at least, so I think it'll be cool.
I've also been working on writing and structuring the plot and scenes for this chapter. It's always tricky to set in order all the different scenes and possible variations, and sometimes I need to go back and add or tweak paths that I forgot or that cause internal contradiction. Other than that, I've been struggling a lot with a particular scene, the last one of Ian's part, but I think I finally have it.

Also, Dashole, who won the has surprised me with a new set of renders, this time inspired in GGGB, and he depicted and expanded on the Ashley+Arthur ending. You can check them out !
Thanks for the update!

I loved Dashole's previous ORS work and think the renders are generally really good here too. But is it just me, or does the Das model for Ash here look wrecked compared to 2d GGGB Ash. Looks 20 years older and pretty bland compared to whatever model Eva was tracing for Ashley. Though admittedly, I've never seen the IRL character Ash was based on.
 

Doppelgang

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Hi guys,
a quick update this time. I've been juggling several tasks this week, mainly drawing and writing.
I already have many of Lena's side of the episode illustrations done, but there are still a few scenes that need to be done. I'm adding a special emphasis on visual customisation for some of those, so they're taking extra work to create all possible variations, but it's something new I haven't done before, not to this extent at least, so I think it'll be cool.
I've also been working on writing and structuring the plot and scenes for this chapter. It's always tricky to set in order all the different scenes and possible variations, and sometimes I need to go back and add or tweak paths that I forgot or that cause internal contradiction. Other than that, I've been struggling a lot with a particular scene, the last one of Ian's part, but I think I finally have it.

Also, Dashole, who won the has surprised me with a new set of renders, this time inspired in GGGB, and he depicted and expanded on the Ashley+Arthur ending. You can check them out !
Really love that image, Lena looks fantastic. I don’t know if it’s Ian helping Lena out with Stalkfap content or just some sexy photos between the two of them for fun, but I think that scene could have an interesting impact on their story no matter what their relationship status is.

A couple of thoughts: As Eva is done with the art for Ian’s part, this sketch is most likely from Lena’s point of view. So maybe we’ll have two Ian+Lena scenes; one from Ian’s POV (the one she shared a finished picture from a couple of weeks ago) and this one from Lena’s?

I checked the images of their rooms, and I think that's Lena's bed. So if that picture is from Lena's POV and it's in her room, I guess it could also be one of the scenes where she can choose who she invites over—with Mike, Robert and Stan as the most likely alternative options.
 
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Hey, so ever since I've heard ORS's main theme/"that music that plays whenever Ian & Lena kiss/cuddle" I've been trying to find its name and - if possible - add it to my personal musical treasure chest, but can't find any info on it (maybe I'm just blind - happens a lot) and tbh this is really frustrating me :HideThePain: so if a kind soul here (I know there are) could help me I'd really appreciate it.
 

King Tommen

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May 26, 2021
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Hey, so ever since I've heard ORS's main theme/"that music that plays whenever Ian & Lena kiss/cuddle" I've been trying to find its name and - if possible - add it to my personal musical treasure chest, but can't find any info on it (maybe I'm just blind - happens a lot) and tbh this is really frustrating me :HideThePain: so if a kind soul here (I know there are) could help me I'd really appreciate it.
Our Red String uses its own music. You can find it in the music folder. You'll have to unren it first.
 

Yokanzo

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May 19, 2022
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Still find it super amusing they integrated the jazz music that plays when you're on hold with some customer service lines.
 

dontcarewhateverno

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Jan 25, 2021
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Our Red String uses its own music. You can find it in the music folder. You'll have to unren it first.
Sound advice on unren with music folder. But I think ORS has only one or two commissioned tracks. All the rest are generic, free-use, royalty-free songs you hear in the same VNs throughout this site and itch.io

I hate them all. lol. Especially "Chillin at Ian's Place" or "Jeremy's Jive" whatever the real name is when the Ian gang is doing a livingroom hangout. But at least they're appropriate for the scenes.
 

King Tommen

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May 26, 2021
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Sound advice on unren with music folder. But I think ORS has only one or two commissioned tracks. All the rest are generic, free-use, royalty-free songs you hear in the same VNs throughout this site and itch.io

I hate them all. lol. Especially "Chillin at Ian's Place" or "Jeremy's Jive" whatever the real name is when the Ian gang is doing a livingroom hangout. But at least they're appropriate for the scenes.
That's called 'perrys_theme'. It's supposed to be anoying :D
And, yes you're right. When playing the very first track 'calm' I recognized it from a documentary (it's called Isolated by Kevin MacLeod ). In my defence I immediately disable music when I start any game.
But generally the music is pretty nice. Just listen to the main theme, 'hollys_theme' or aforementioned 'calm'.
 
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dontcarewhateverno

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But generally the music is pretty nice.
Agree with all but this part. lol. Imagine paying $10+ bucks to see a band and they kick it off with "Rock Theme". Well, I'd laugh my ass off and clap for the inside joke of it, but if Eva's game never existed you've basically gone in for on-hold/elevator music. Then the headliner Lowest Common Denominator hits the stage with their hit Irreverant, Guitar-Led Dance Theme With Synthetic Hint Of Urban Appeal. "Shut up! - And Get Down" - *record starts to scratch for watered-down hip-hop cross-marketing*.
 
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Bom969

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The only issue is: in order to have a cliffhanger for Ian, you must play with him before the end of the chapter. Looking at the way the development was done until now, we can assume that in chapter 10 you will play with Ian first and after that with Lena. Sure, Eva could mix Ian and Lena story or she could simply add one more scene at the end, but I hope she won't go on that route. Changing the story or adding even more stuff than it was initially planned will only drag the development for a longer period of time.


I think it is too soon for Allison to get pregnant. We know that she took the plan B after the last date. Even if you sleep with her again in this chapter, there should be at least 2-3 weeks between that point and the one where she thinks about a pregnancy test. Also, we don't know if there will still be a time skip in the story. If it is, I doubt that Eva will want Ian to have a kid with Allison after the time skip. The story will end there for Ian.

Gillian could be this chapter plot twist, but even if she is Mike gf, why would she go back to Ian that fast? I also don't think there is any reason for Ivy to blackmail Ian. There is nothing that she can gain from that.
It can be something like Allison saying she has missed her periods and that she might be pregnant. Ian reacts surprised to it and then Alison says she was just joking...
 

RonWeasleyJr

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Jesus Christ, Dashole is involved with this game now?

For those who don't know, Dashole is a guy who's spent thousands of dollars paying noted digital comic artists like Studio Pirrate and Abrossis to draw Danger Girl and Spider-Man fan comics where the women in those titles (Abbey Chase and Sydney Savage in Danger Girl, and Mary Jane Watson in Spider-Man) end up having to have sex with gross men and end up pregnant.

He's fairly notorious in the adult fan comics community. He's not as bad as Pegasus777, who draws self-insert comics where he rapes and brainwashes Marvel comics babes, or the late Jim Robert Bader who wrote anime fan fiction where every female character wanted to be mind-broke and enslaved, but Dashole is pretty close to those two guys.

Good luck, Eva, you'll need it. *rolls eyes*
 
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