VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[CassieBare]

Since, I guess, it's fair to assume that release periods of future chapters won't significantly shorten... -- where does this lead to? ORS 2030+x? (Anyone else getting "Star Citizen" vibes here?)

I mean, honestly, EK needs to find a way to hire/include more people in the process and focus her efforts / Project Manage. It's the only way with a high-quality and branching story to be able to keep updates in a timely fashion.

Especially if she wants to work on anything *other* than ORS.

 

[ghost_terror]

Shit, I'd be interested in a bimbo path for holly.

 

[Shadowndev99]

How many chapters are planned for this game?

Around 20... That's what Eva kiss said in the interview

 

[Hahn1900]

I just played chapter 9... only one route so far, honestly, i dont see the point for now to play more than two routes until the game is nearly finished, wouldnt remeber them all anyways until than...
(will make another playthrough going for cindy with ian, try a lesbian relationship between lena and holly, adding maybe ivy if possible and sign the seymour contract to see how that goes)

so far i did the Lena/Ian route and rejected seymours contract in the last chapter

Well it was of course obvious that seymour ward is a bad guy from the start, but well, no harm for a nude model to get shootings with him, so i went for it... until it was clear seymour just want to "posess" her and everything around him.

I learned an interesting fact about Lena... her Dad isnt her real dad... and than it was crystal clear to me (come on, just look at hers and his eyes)... my bet, Seymour ward is her real father. (its really obvious isnt it?)

well, we have to wait and see... but yeah iam sure Seymour Ward is her father, why else mention that her dad is not her real dad? No reason for this, only reason to do so.. her real father has a bigger meaning further down...

Lets see how this unfold... i read that Eva Kiss planned about 18 chapters? Well this game will get huge... it already is.

 

[Hahn1900]

what is your problem facepalm trolls? sometimes i dont get it what is it with you? at least react to the post and tell what you think is so stupid hm? To much effort?

 

[Hahn1900]

BECAUSE MAYBE HER STEP DAD LIKE LENA? THEN WHY ELSE DOES IANS COMMENT ABOUT LENAS REALATIONSHIO WITH HER ADOPTED FATHER HAS A SMILEY FACE?

your posting doesnt make any sense related to mine... and writing in big letters doesnt add anything to it.

 

[lipe2410]

I just played chapter 9... only one route so far, honestly, i dont see the point for now to play more than two routes until the game is nearly finished, wouldnt remeber them all anyways until than...
(will make another playthrough going for cindy with ian, try a lesbian relationship between lena and holly, adding maybe ivy if possible and sign the seymour contract to see how that goes)

so far i did the Lena/Ian route and rejected seymours contract in the last chapter

Well it was of course obvious that seymour ward is a bad guy from the start, but well, no harm for a nude model to get shootings with him, so i went for it... until it was clear seymour just want to "posess" her and everything around him.

I learned an interesting fact about Lena... her Dad isnt her real dad... and than it was crystal clear to me (come on, just look at hers and his eyes)... my bet, Seymour ward is her real father. (its really obvious isnt it?)

well, we have to wait and see... but yeah iam sure Seymour Ward is her father, why else mention that her dad is not her real dad? No reason for this, only reason to do so.. her real father has a bigger meaning further down...

Lets see how this unfold... i read that Eva Kiss planned about 18 chapters? Well this game will get huge... it already is.

Very unlikely because this will make patreon suspend Eva's page

 

[Hahn1900]

ok,why do you think her father is not her real father?,she supports her father whit his cancer,just different eyes??there are so many fathers and daughters with different eyes,and why would you think seymour her real father is??there is no proof whatsoever and in the art gallery she didn't even know who he was.

i dont "think" so, it is a stated fact in the game... there is a dialogue between Ian and Lena where she tells him her "dad" adopted her, and that her biological father abondoned them before.

So why shoudl eva kiss set up such dialogue in the game when the biological father will not play a role later on in the game? no point in that. Of course Lenas real father will be discovered later on and play a role... and looking at her and seymours eyes, i dont think its a coincidence that they hafe the very same eyes.

 

[Hahn1900]

Very unlikely because this will make patreon suspend Eva's page

Not really, there are ways to prevent that... EK could just hide the fact that seymour is her real father until the very end of the game. And besides... in GGGB there was a clear incest route too (even with getting a child from her own father)... and her patreon site is still up with GGGB on it.

 

[JoJoPool]

i dont "think" so, it is a stated fact in the game... there is a dialogue between Ian and Lena where she tells him her "dad" adopted her, and that her biological father abondoned them before.

So why shoudl eva kiss set up such dialogue in the game when the biological father will not play a role later on in the game? no point in that. Of course Lenas real father will be discovered later on and play a role... and looking at her and seymours eyes, i dont think its a coincidence that they hafe the very same eyes.

It's an interesting topic, I said the exact same thing a year ago when chapter 9 first released. The matching eyes and the dialogue about her dad are the two hints we have so far. If we're right on the money i think it will be Eva's "big reveal" in the later stages of the game. But, when you think about it why wouldn't Lena know who her biological dad is ? her mom didn't tell her ? Why ? maybe because she wanted to keep Lena away from him (because he is evil ?).... and why didn't Lena investigate to seek the truth ? wasn't she curious ? maybe she just doesn't care, or maybe she knows who her real dad is and it's someone we don't know/haven't met yet.... There is also another character i am very curious about and that is the homeless man, i think he will play a major role in Seymour's path later on.

 

[BloodyMares]

So why shoudl eva kiss set up such dialogue in the game when the biological father will not play a role later on in the game? no point in that. Of course Lenas real father will be discovered later on and play a role... and looking at her and seymours eyes, i dont think its a coincidence that they hafe the very same eyes.

Well, revealing that Lena is not related to her dad doesn't have to make her biological father relevant (Axel also has "piercing cold blue eyes" but he's not Seymour's son), but might hint at certain Patreon-safe opportunities later. Also, the game early on mentioned Lena's brother who so far didn't make an appearance but might play a role later into the story, and if it turns out he's only her step-brother (being the son of her not-father before he married her mother), then, well, implications are clear. It could go either way and depends on what Eva plans to do with that. But yeah, this chekhov's gun is hanging on a wall to be used later.

 

[jojogeo]

BECAUSE MAYBE HER STEP DAD LIKE LENA? THEN WHY ELSE DOES IANS COMMENT ABOUT LENAS REALATIONSHIO WITH HER ADOPTED FATHER HAS A SMILEY FACE?

Whose step-dad ?

 

[pavlogrk]

Whose step-dad ?

only one step dad in the game bruh....... Lena's !

 

[dolfe67]

So why shoudl eva kiss set up such dialogue in the game when the biological father will not play a role later on in the game? no point in that.

Maybe the point is just to challenge you if you want to keep helping your *now* stepdad or not and nothing else

 

[Hahn1900]

Well, revealing that Lena is not related to her dad doesn't have to make her biological father relevant (Axel also has "piercing cold blue eyes" but he's not Seymour's son), but might hint at certain Patreon-safe opportunities later. Also, the game early on mentioned Lena's brother who so far didn't make an appearance but might play a role later into the story, and if it turns out he's only her step-brother (being the son of her not-father before he married her mother), then, well, implications are clear. It could go either way and depends on what Eva plans to do with that. But yeah, this chekhov's gun is hanging on a wall to be used later.

of course, it doesnt HAVE to be relevant, but lets face it... i dont know about you, but i cant remeber any story, novel, book, movie, series, game or whatever where its mentioned that a main protag knows about the fact that ( at least one part) of the parents are not their biological ones without being relevant later on. There is just no point in it to mention that, doesnt add anything to the character of Lena.

and yeah, as you said "this gun will be used later" iam absolutely sure about it, same goes for the troublesome brother... he will play a role too.

 

[pavlogrk]

Just because Lena has a stepfather, it doesn't mean that Mr. Ward is the biological one ffs!

 

[Hahn1900]

It's an interesting topic, I said the exact same thing a year ago when chapter 9 first released. The matching eyes and the dialogue about her dad are the two hints we have so far. If we're right on the money i think it will be Eva's "big reveal" in the later stages of the game. But, when you think about it why wouldn't Lena know who her biological dad is ? her mom didn't tell her ? Why ? maybe because she wanted to keep Lena away from him (because he is evil ?).... and why didn't Lena investigate to seek the truth ? wasn't she curious ? maybe she just doesn't care, or maybe she knows who her real dad is and it's someone we don't know/haven't met yet.... There is also another character i am very curious about and that is the homeless man, i think he will play a major role in Seymour's path later on.

Well Lena said herself she doesnt care for her "real" dad cause to her... her adoptive father was always her dad, no matter what... she loves him, he loves her, no point in being curious about a biological father who vanished out of her lifes and abondoned her and her mother...

Maybe there is more to it than Lena knows (in fact i think there is more to it) but to her, everything was fine like it is and no point in questioneing her relationship with her parents... so far. I think this will change, late ron in the game Eva Kiss will reval who her real father is, and i think its a more than sure bet its seymour... MAYBE seymour even knows this. Wouldnt surprise me...

But yeah, enough said about it... we dont know, i think its very obvious, but we will know for sure late ron... MUCH later on. The game is planned out to get 18-20 chapters as far as i know. And if her real father will be relevant, i think it will be revealed about chapter 15 or so. At least to the audience.

 

[Hahn1900]

JUSt because lena has a step father that doen't mena tha mr Ward is he biological one ffs!

yadda yadda yadda, yeah i got it, you cant think straight for one second, just let it be... you obviously cant get your head around the fact that this game is a soap opera and what a soap opera is all about (social character drama btw)... just throw facepalms and thats it, your postings doesnt make any sense anyway... god (if there is one) bless the ignore button. *wave*

 

[Doppelgang]

I doubt Seymour is Lena's father.

First of all, I think it's too big a cliché. It's such a cheap soap opera trope, and I think and hope Eva won't go for so obvious (and in my view lazy) narrative choices.

Secondly, Lena points out to Ian that she's seen pictures of him. Those are old, but still. I think it would be very unrealistic that she wouldn't have recognized him, at least by now.

Third: GGGB was to a large extent based on porn fantasies, ORS is more realistic. For obvious reasons incest is among the porn fantasies that don't work as well in a realistic scenario.

Aaand fourth: There's already been quite a bit of sexualised content between Lena and Seymour. To then reveal later that he is her biological father, would be a pretty big turn-off for those who don't like incest content.

Still, I admit there's a Chekhov's gun lying around that I assume Eva will use in some way. (Do I have any alternative theories about how? Nope, none at all.)

if lena's current father is a step father, and we don't know who her biological dad is... and dashole is involved in the game... then it means there is a possibility lena will get double penetrated by her two daddy's; her real dad and her step dad.

how do you top what happened in good girl gone bad? with 1 dad?

easy... two dads at the same time.

Dashole isn't involved in the game. They just made some fan art.

 

[Arata20]

if lena's current father is a step father, and we don't know who her biological dad is... and dashole is involved in the game... then it means there is a possibility lena will get double penetrated by her two daddy's; her real dad and her step dad.

how do you top what happened in good girl gone bad? with 1 dad?

easy... two dads at the same time.

I think you are wishful thinking. It is in this game EK will never go for it.