VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[JohnnyKiss]

Yes! Why can't all the characters in be mature, monogamous, responsible, sensitive souls? I too am shocked about all the promiscuous fantasy sex in this promiscuous fantasy sex game!

I cannot accept that there is a guy cheating on his girlfriend. And he's black! Of course all the others guys can cheat - that's fine. For some reason. Apparently.

Say, why are you holding Jeremy to a different standard than Ian, Axel, Mike etc.?

Don't indulge them. Some people on here are beyond silly. They complain that porn game characters that are created to fulfill certain character archetype/sexual fetish follow that archetype/fetish.

Yes, Jeremy is meant to be that guy that sleeps around. Yes, Axel is supposed to be "Mister steal your girl". Yes, Stan is supposed to be the weirdo, virgin loser who likes to watch you have sex.

 

[SerHawkes]

Yes! Why can't all the characters in be mature, monogamous, responsible, sensitive souls? I too am shocked about all the promiscuous fantasy sex in this promiscuous fantasy sex game!

I cannot accept that there is a guy cheating on his girlfriend. And he's black! Of course all the others guys can cheat - that's fine. For some reason. Apparently.

Say, why are you holding Jeremy to a different standard than Ian, Axel, Mike etc.?

Because Jeremy is the worst written and managed. But by all means, try to make it out that the only reason I am complaining about Jeremy is that he is black. -Good job, good effort there kiddo- Can we get a big round of applause for his guy here folks?

Ian has some little to few hiccups and could do with some better writing I'll admit, Axel has issues as well (mainly that he is a possible rapist and is coincidentally involved with apparently everything), Mike has no issues other than if you let Lena chase after him, as to which is entirely optional and doesn't affect the story that much.

How Jeremy is the most flawed and gets the least amount of punishment compared to say Ian. Jeremy fucks around, get caught lying, and what are the consequences? Either you stay mum and have Lena tell him to talk it out with Louise or they break up. Now, does that talk ever happen or get mentioned? Not at all. It's glossed over in place of the imfamous drinking game and of course if we decide to not take part, of course Jeremy rather than play it safe and smart (drunk or buzzed) he decides to be the horn dog dumbass and sticks to the stereotypical black guy player kink in all of porn.

Ian on the other hand: If you just so happen to kiss Holly while also being interested in Lena, oh yeah Lena grills you and goes overtop with her rage. Chase after Cindy and get caught by your "bro" Jeremy? Oh yeah the dumbass has the audacity to say "we need to come clean to Wade" if he too just so happens to still be with Louise. Like excuse me hypocrite who is fucking Alison and is still trying to hook up with Ivy while you still kinda in a relationship with another girl...

 

[SerHawkes]

Don't indulge them. Some people on here are beyond silly. They complain that porn game characters that are created to fulfill certain character archetype/sexual fetish follow that archetype/fetish.

Yes, Jeremy is meant to be that guy that sleeps around. Yes, Axel is supposed to be "Mister steal your girl". Yes, Stan is supposed to be the weirdo, virgin loser who likes to watch you have sex.

Too late, already did. And to be fair, some arch types can be decent, yet at the same time we ALREADY had theses to a degree with her first game. Adding a variety or atleast some measure of originality can actually do wonders. But to have every game have the same arch type, over and over again, while maintaining the constant porn portrayal of certain things isn't really all that creative.

 

[dolfe67]

Too late, already did. And to be fair, some arch types can be decent, yet at the same time we ALREADY had theses to a degree with her first game. Adding a variety or atleast some measure of originality can actually do wonders. But to have every game have the same arch type, over and over again, while maintaining the constant porn portrayal of certain things isn't really all that creative.

Archetypes exist for a reason, you can't reinvent the wheel every time

 

[SerHawkes]

Archetypes exist for a reason, you can't reinvent the wheel every time

You can though, in place of some original creativity.

 

[Osodrac13]

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Because Jeremy is the worst written and managed. But by all means, try to make it out that the only reason I am complaining about Jeremy is that he is black. -Good job, good effort there kiddo- Can we get a big round of applause for his guy here folks?

Ian has some little to few hiccups and could do with some better writing I'll admit, Axel has issues as well (mainly that he is a possible rapist and is coincidentally involved with apparently everything), Mike has no issues other than if you let Lena chase after him, as to which is entirely optional and doesn't affect the story that much.

How Jeremy is the most flawed and gets the least amount of punishment compared to say Ian. Jeremy fucks around, get caught lying, and what are the consequences? Either you stay mum and have Lena tell him to talk it out with Louise or they break up. Now, does that talk ever happen or get mentioned? Not at all. It's glossed over in place of the imfamous drinking game and of course if we decide to not take part, of course Jeremy rather than play it safe and smart (drunk or buzzed) he decides to be the horn dog dumbass and sticks to the stereotypical black guy player kink in all of porn.

Ian on the other hand: If you just so happen to kiss Holly while also being interested in Lena, oh yeah Lena grills you and goes overtop with her rage. Chase after Cindy and get caught by your "bro" Jeremy? Oh yeah the dumbass has the audacity to say "we need to come clean to Wade" if he too just so happens to still be with Louise. Like excuse me hypocrite who is fucking Alison and is still trying to hook up with Ivy while you still kinda in a relationship with another girl...

Nah, you just don't like his archetype. I for example dislike Stan a lot. You can't change archetypes, the whole point of them is that the characters follow a certain model.

You are also comparing Jeremy, an NPC, to Ian, an actual playable character. Ian is a blank slate on which you can project different characteristics, hence the whole point system with Lust/Love and Charisma/Intellect or whatever. Ian goes through a bunch of situations where you have to make choices for him and decide what to do.

Jeremy on the other hand is an archetype and an NPC. He just follows a set "motion".

 

[AFSRS]

This is taking too long.. my Stan is tired of beating the meat

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Because Jeremy is the worst written and managed. But by all means, try to make it out that the only reason I am complaining about Jeremy is that he is black. -Good job, good effort there kiddo- Can we get a big round of applause for his guy here folks?

Ian has some little to few hiccups and could do with some better writing I'll admit, Axel has issues as well (mainly that he is a possible rapist and is coincidentally involved with apparently everything), Mike has no issues other than if you let Lena chase after him, as to which is entirely optional and doesn't affect the story that much.

How Jeremy is the most flawed and gets the least amount of punishment compared to say Ian. Jeremy fucks around, get caught lying, and what are the consequences? Either you stay mum and have Lena tell him to talk it out with Louise or they break up. Now, does that talk ever happen or get mentioned? Not at all. It's glossed over in place of the imfamous drinking game and of course if we decide to not take part, of course Jeremy rather than play it safe and smart (drunk or buzzed) he decides to be the horn dog dumbass and sticks to the stereotypical black guy player kink in all of porn.

Ian on the other hand: If you just so happen to kiss Holly while also being interested in Lena, oh yeah Lena grills you and goes overtop with her rage. Chase after Cindy and get caught by your "bro" Jeremy? Oh yeah the dumbass has the audacity to say "we need to come clean to Wade" if he too just so happens to still be with Louise. Like excuse me hypocrite who is fucking Alison and is still trying to hook up with Ivy while you still kinda in a relationship with another girl...

Jeremy's personality is fine imo, 'playboy/fuckboy who cheats and sleep around' is hardly a black-exclusive stereotype.

If 'Mr. Steal Yo Girl' trope is given to Jeremy instead of Axel, then I'll agree wholeheartedly with you. To be fair, Lena can get intimate with Jeremy even if she's with Ian, though that's more of a testament to her personality than Jeremy's.

 

[SerHawkes]

Jeremy's personality is fine imo, 'a wannabe playboy/fuckboy who cheats and sleep around'

Fixed it for you.

 

[TB-11]

I had a period of depression, great disappointments, but I never had thoughts of suicide

I deleted the rest of your post... cause it's more of the extreme outlier of people with depressions or other psychical disorders.
Specially depression is NOT "just a period" - it can be, of course. But I live with a person who is diagnosed with depression and the dumbest thing to say is "it will go away" or tips like "just go for a walk more frequently to get your head free" - that NOT how this shit works.
You can walk around smiling all day long, be the kindest und sunniest charakter in the world and still you lack the drive to do something after work for example. Life just feels like an endless meat grinder and in the morning you put on your mask, function like society wants and in the evening you take this mask off and just stare into this abyss of nothingness.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

I deleted the rest of your post... cause it's more of the extreme outlier of people with depressions or other psychical disorders.
Specially depression is NOT "just a period" - it can be, of course. But I live with a person who is diagnosed with depression and the dumbest thing to say is "it will go away" or tips like "just go for a walk more frequently to get your head free" - that NOT how this shit works.
You can walk around smiling all day long, be the kindest und sunniest charakter in the world and still you lack the drive to do something after work for example. Life just feels like an endless meat grinder and in the morning you put on your mask, function like society wants and in the evening you take this mask off and just stare into this abyss of nothingness.

I don't think you need to delete his post, just simply reply and state your opinion.

 

[Bishop Robert]

Protect Stan at all costs.

 

[TB-11]

I don't think you need to delete his post, just simply reply and state your opinion.

I just wanted to answer to this part which I quoted - as things like "take a gun and shoot a bunch of random people" are extremely rare compared to the amount of people with depression, anxiety and so on...

 

[RoboticCatDogHybrid]

Wish Eva was more consistent with her update my fellow brosters. It says weekly updates but it's like whenever she feels like it now. Wanted to read a new update on her status of this project by now my bros. Last one was on the 26th of Sep.

 

[SerHawkes]

Ah gotta love morons who don't realize how the abandoned tag works on F95, but sure, let's all embrace the ignorance of some white knights here.

How adorable to think you know all around here and how things work. It's cute. Sadly, considering how there are some bits of communication here as well as knowledge on what Eva is doing and such knowledge to the staff around these parts, it won't be getting the abandon tag anytime soon. Despite your small energy there bro.

Eva is working on completing both sides of Lena and Ian's story for Chapter 10, when she originally planned to do releases seperate, but got some push back against it. So yeah, it's taking a bit longer to do things. What, your rather have a half assed update that is broke and don't work so you can rage about it being broke?

 

[Kaparzo]

How adorable to think you know all around here and how things work. It's cute. Sadly, considering how there are some bits of communication here as well as knowledge on what Eva is doing and such knowledge to the staff around these parts, it won't be getting the abandon tag anytime soon. Despite your small energy there bro.

I'll see you at the end of this month, cutie

 

[mangegin]

Hi, how can I make Holly cheat on Ian with the guy Ivy recommended her?

Seem like she lost interest after being in relationship with Ian after book fair?

 

[SerHawkes]

Hi, how can I make Holly cheat on Ian with the guy Ivy recommended her?

Seem like she lost interest after being in relationship with Ian after book fair?

You don't. You have to show no interest well before that, in terms of going to Cinder's party for Wade for that to work, and have Lena support Ivy's idea behind it. (Why would you though, allowing that wholesome girl be in the arms of some rando when she could be in bed and making sweet, tender, wholesome love with Lena...)

 

[_Zebra_]

Wish Eva was more consistent with her update my fellow brosters. It says weekly updates but it's like whenever she feels like it now. Wanted to read a new update on her status of this project by now my bros. Last one was on the 26th of Sep.

Well she is quite consistent, just not the way you are expecting her to be. She is constantly releasing the 'weekly' updated 3+ days later than you expect her to do.

Probably we'll get an update tomorrow. Hopefully, we'll find out who is that mystery character from last month.