VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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Blizzard2255

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Those Stan dialogues in the prologue were cringe as fuck. I wish eva didn't go all trope-y on his character. Great to see some off-screen development for Cindy. There is a good chance that Cindy steals most of Lena's work in the pure Ian-Lena low corruption routes. It would also be fun to explore the Ian-Cindy path in the next release. Finally, Gillian is back. Excited to see how eva would develop her relationship with Ian.
 
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This prologue was indeed underwhelming. But not necessarily for its amount of content, more so because of the writing.

I can't speak for Stan since I thankfully acted nothing more than neutral towards him and the whole Wade/Cindy Situation bothers me given that, at least at the very moment, there doesn't seem much difference between helping and not helping.

The worst thing though in my opinion is the way Holly and Lena interact. In Chapter 10 they fucked and then shared a passionate kiss (for me) with clearly reciprocating feelings, just so now Lena can ask Holly whether or not she is into someone specific for example the guy from work.
Like wtf?!? Did they just completely forget about what happened before? They are attracted to each other and have shown that but in the prologue, they just act as if nothing happened, as if the other person has no idea and as if you have to hide your own feelings.
I would understand it if someone else were around but that isn't the case.
The way it is written right now makes it seem as though Eva doesn't want the story to continue and relationships to form. Everything is supposed to move in circles. Great :rolleyes:
What makes it even worse is the fact that they talk about their kiss and all of that afterward. So in other words their minds went blank for a second so that Lena can ask the above-mentioned stupid question and then they remembered what actually happened. I can't with this writing. It has gone downhill for a while now but this is a new peak for me.

Well, I simply hope the actual chapter will have better writing although I don't have too much hope.

PS: I'm curious though. Does anyone think Ivy will be part of the beach holiday with Cindy maybe absent due to the photoshoot? If so this could lead to even more drama with Ivy going for Wade as revenge on Cindy for taking her spot.
 
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Geralt_From_Rivia said:
I knew this would happen. This Chekhov gun was laid at the very beginning of the game.
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dude gillian is so perfect look at that face its so sweet she can cheat 10 times more on ian I will take her back perfect waifu material I was debating between alison,cindy and holly which was already difficult but now gillian is on top
 
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I think it is funny how all girls can turn into a slut in this game. Even Holly. If you don't date her or date her, but let her do as she pleases she turns into a porn model as well. taking naked pics for money like all other sluts.
 
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vvvhhhhnnn said:
I like it, setting up potentially good things - Gillian, Cindy, the beach holiday..
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More is Ivy-Ian beach fun times...

Wait a minute... Who the fuck am I kidding... This is Eva we're talking about. That all will get shafted all to hell.
 
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vvvhhhhnnn said:
I like it, setting up potentially good things - Gillian, Cindy, the beach holiday..
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yeah wildcats cindy wil be WILD cant wait for that on ian/cindy route and the possiblity of a angry ivy that has her claws against cindy would be 10/10 too evil mean ivy would be very dangerous and mean for cindy

cindy has a huge ego so I hope there will be competition at the photoshots that can push cindy in a more daring position because she hates losing(she always wants to be the best and the eyecatcher in the room) maybe ivy/wildcats guys use that against her
 
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Agree. This is a very common cliché - "the ex is back."
But poorly implemented. Ian can solve this problem in the early game by using a Willn point and deleting her photos.
In another game, you know what I'm talking about, this scenario move was implemented better, not perfectly, but better - we had a backstory, motivation for actions and character presentation.
In ORS we have nothing. I can't understand why it is needed, except for the drama.
Eva just has to reveal the backstory in Chapter 11 or else I'll say "poor writing"
 
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I was hoping Gillian would come back ever since Chapter 1! My dream route would be for the Lena-Ian FWB route to have Ian reconnect with Gillian and start having feelings again, only for Lena to add her to her redhead harem with Holly and Louise :love:
 
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