VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[SerHawkes]

If her interrogation of Ian about Jeremy is anything to go by, she's warming back up to the idea of fucking the latter (despite confirming that she lost interest in him after finding out about Louise, and expected him to do the same)

Ian's got his work cut out to beat Jeremy to the punch.

Yeah, if you support his dumbass or are neutral. Though in this case, I don't. Dude is a lying snake of a friend who cares only about getting laid and doesn't do you a solid in telling that your ex is back in town. Total Dick Move. So yeah, I threw is ass under the bus so it's unlikely she will be warming up to him in any manner.

In a surprise move by Eva the final boss is not Axel but Perry

Nah... Final Boss will be Holly.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Lena doesnt need a bikini top all she needs is a thong and a sunglasses just like this View attachment 2779656
The perfect summer outfits

Living up to the username.

Speaking of Ivy and Perry's stutter, who else found the interaction between Ivy and Perry kind of sweet when Ivy found out he had a legit speech impediment? I thought that was kind of a touching moment for Ivy.

yes! I hope there's a possible IvyxPerry route or a reform Ivy route.

She seems amused by him the same way an influencer thot would be with a poodle. Like a "dog-mom", but with her very own soyjack.

IVY: "So Cute! He thinks he's people!"

 

[mrdhrrflu]

I'm running in this error in the scene photoshoot with Cindy at Axel's house.
Is there a console command to fix this?

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/JDMOD/scripts/story/chapter9_cindy.rpyc", line 1194, in script
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/ast.py", line 1408, in execute
show_imspec(self.imspec, atl=getattr(self, "atl", None))
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/ast.py", line 1371, in show_imspec
renpy.config.show(name,
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/exports.py", line 712, in show
sls.add(layer, img, key, zorder, behind, at_list=at_list, name=name, atl=atl, default_transform=default_transform, transient=transient)
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/core.py", line 1165, in add
thing.visit_all(lambda d : None)
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
[Previous line repeated 2 more times]
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/core.py", line 572, in visit_all
for d in self.visit():
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/layout.py", line 1494, in visit
self.update(self.last_st, self.last_at)
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/layout.py", line 1505, in update
raw_child, redraw = self.function(st, at, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/layout.py", line 1596, in condition_switch_show
return condition_switch_pick(switch), None
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/display/layout.py", line 1587, in condition_switch_pick
if renpy.python.py_eval_bytecode(code):
File "/Volumes/Macbook/Mega/renpy-8.0.3-sdk/renpy/python.py", line 1085, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "<none>", line 1, in <module>
NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

macOS-10.16-x86_64-i386-64bit x86_64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Our Red String v11_Alpha
Tue Jul 18 17:28:04 2023

 

[Abazzaba]

Living up to the username.


She seems amused by him the same way an influencer thot would be with a poodle. Like a "dog-mom", but with her very own soyjack.

IVY: "So Cute! He thinks he's people!"
View attachment 2781621

Needs the shocked pikachu face

 

[vgbestly]

Living up to the username.


She seems amused by him the same way an influencer thot would be with a poodle. Like a "dog-mom", but with her very own soyjack.

IVY: "So Cute! He thinks he's people!"
View attachment 2781621

I understood that Archer reference. Also...

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I understood that Archer reference. Also... View attachment 2781886

Archer reference?

 

[vgbestly]

Archer reference?

Hehe, he thinks he's people.


ahh forget it

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

This got fixed in the beta version.

 

[Lorenz1]

So, any new cindy content in this version?

 

[Gicoo]

So, any new cindy content in this version?

Very good seks scene.
No real progress in their relationships, but tiny bit of potential conflicts with Lena/Alison/Axel.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Cant wait for the epilogue,my boy Stan is going to get some action on friday.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Revisited this after a few months.......

lol.

16 grand a month.

lol. nuff said.

 

[SerHawkes]

Cant wait for the epilogue,my boy Stan is going to get some action on friday.

Yeaaaaaahhhh... Not happening. More like him beating off into a fan to get a facial.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Yeaaaaaahhhh... Not happening. More like him beating off into a fan to get a facial.

I'd rather see Stan get action than Jeremy any day of the week though..... at least Stan is MILDLY considerate at times of ian.

 

[SerHawkes]

I'd rather see Stan get action than Jeremy any day of the week though..... at least Stan is MILDLY considerate at times of ian.

Oh yeah... totally considerate to Ian...

Stan, if Lena and Ian are a thing.
Stan: I'm better than that guy Ian, Lena. I can treat you the way you deserve to be treated!
Lena: -Spits out coffee and laughs her ass off-

 

[MF_DOOM]

I'd rather see Stan get action than Jeremy any day of the week though..... at least Stan is MILDLY considerate at times of ian.

It's very considered to peep on someone while they have sex.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

It's very considered to peep on someone while they have sex.

Extremely! I would consider any friend getting their voyeuristic kicks from me the highest form of flattery!

Oh yeah... totally considerate to Ian...

Stan, if Lena and Ian are a thing.
Stan: I'm better than that guy Ian, Lena. I can treat you the way you deserve to be treated!
Lena: -Spits out coffee and laughs her ass off-

Yeah but we both know that's kinda like telling an olympic athlete they need to lose weight, there's no teeth to the remark.

 

[SerHawkes]

Extremely! I would consider any friend getting their voyeuristic kicks from me the highest form of flattery!


Yeah but we both know that's kinda like telling an olympic athlete they need to lose weight, there's no teeth to the remark.

Dude literally gives Ian the stink eye after being introduce to Stan after he asks if Lena and Ian are a thing, then comes up with his whole confession when he knows Ian and Lena are a thing, making out like he's SUPER BETTER than our guy Ian whose been balls deep in Lena and knows how to take care of her. It's a laugh and makes Stan even more cringe worthy. I say let the guy die of a heartattack already and let Holly move in with Louise and Lena.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Dude literally gives Ian the stink eye after being introduce to Stan after he asks if Lena and Ian are a thing, then comes up with his whole confession when he knows Ian and Lena are a thing, making out like he's SUPER BETTER than our guy Ian whose been balls deep in Lena and knows how to take care of her. It's a laugh and makes Stan even more cringe worthy. I say let the guy die of a heartattack already and let Holly move in with Louise and Lena.

Ok i admit it, that was a poor battle to fight, I just wanted to get a shot in at jeremy because hes my least favorite character. But yeah Stan is kinda a limp noodle.

 

[BloodyMares]

- The more nuanced teasing/loving Lena/Ian route was really well handled now, even allowing them to switch positions of dominance, plus it was written with more care, showing it was just kinky play & experimenting between an emotionally healthy couple. 1. Lena didn't automatically turn into super-bitch after a little teasing. 2. The user isn't locked into an extreme situation and can choose just light play, or even turn the tables a bit on who has the assertive role. 3. The writing took into account the situation where Lena and Ian have been a loving couple from the start [An Ian that's not hitting every pussy in sight and a Lena that's not a cock carousel]. She shows actual appropriate concern when he feels awkward about the play, as a couple who care for each other naturally would. Impressive & believable. Ethical slut route achieved. I haven't actually ever seen another game handle it this well. Curious what @BloodyMares thoughts are on those changes.

I'd say it's a collective victory and we dodged a huge bullet. From my understanding, Eva did intend to cut corners in writing and make Lena automatically turn into a bitch on the cucking path (she kind of still is in the no-sex route). But after I reported it initially (after the prologue), this Ch 11 scene was soon written to address it. It's still not ideal in the no-sex route (because Lena might not have any sex either, so she denies herself sex just as much), but overall the role-playing is handled with much better care, especially with an after-play consolatory deepthroating.

And the cherry on top is, you don't know to what extent Lena was telling the truth in her story or if she altered some details to intentionally make it more kinky (or conversely downplayed it if Ian isn't into it as much) or she did those things with someone else. So, it could just be her fantasy that never happened in reality or she was in fact even wilder in her younger days. We can never know for certain because Lena never references this story in her POV.