VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Doppelgang]

I was exploring the images of the game, to see if EV had put something new in this final version of chapter 11, there is no new scene, but among the images of Lena, I found this new outfit, it's name is "Lena_poldedance" maybe in the next chapter Lena will accompany Ivy in the club to do pole dance

In this chapter, Ivy tells Lena that there is a free bartending position, but the fact that this costume exists makes me think that maybe Ivy lied to Lena, and when Lena goes to the club to work as a bartender, it turns out that the free position will be a pole dancer, maybe is that, or maybe Lena will really work as a bartender, and then Ivy can give her the option to also go to dance in exchange for more money and it will be the player's choice whether to do it or not

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Interesting observation! Though as others have mentioned, it’s hard to tell where it’s meant to be used. From memory I think it’s more daring than Lena’s previous pole outfit. But comparing to Ivy’s outfit at Blazer, it’s pretty bland. So it would probably make sense both in a “Lena decides to use a more revealing outfit at pole lessons” scenario, and one where she agrees to pole dance at the club, as long as she’s decently clothed.

Either way Eva seemingly has something planned that demands that Lena actually works there, rather than just goes there to party again. And that’s intriguing. I highly doubt the plan is just to have her meet Mike, Jeremy or someone else. Because of that, I guess a pole dancing performance isn’t unlikely already in the Epilogue. If so, hopefully not as something Ivy just tricks her to do, as that sounds like a lazy solution writing wise.

 

[mommysboiii]

Yes, but your post ended with it hinting towards always being "bimbo path starting" which it is not always as can be seen in this case. Ian and Alison are much in love by this point and just experiment here.

just experiment



you better watch out for that BBC and lust MR. BBC is coming for her
she accidentaly turning into a bimbo

 

[Cricco]

Nah, her torch so big that Ian could've been dodging her since d1 and she'll still bring him to her apartment to let him cry on her shoulder about his ex and also a quick creampie With girls like that not impossible she might get weird once they officially get together, but after last update and her only going bimbo if she's wanting Ian to notice her i'd say it's more likely she might end up guarding the door while Ian is fucking Cherry

 

[Night Hacker]

I was replaying this game again from the start and I seriously think they need to rename it "Hypocrisy", LOL... like when Ian covers for Jeremy and doesn't tell Alison and friends that he has a girlfriend.... but then when Jeremy arrives late (from Louise's) he rats out to everyone that Ian is sleeping with Lena! (at that point I scrolled back, and said "fuck him!" and told the girls about Louise).

But wait, there's more... I have each character basically sleeping with anyone that breathes in this play through (I plan to do a more loyal one as well). So, after Lena sleeps with Mike, Ian, Robert, blows Jeremy, teases Stan and makes out with a few females she knows. And after she finds out that Ian slept with Holly what did she say? "Ian was just chasing after sex"... ummm... and she was on a religious experience?! Shortly after she gets a phone call from simp Ian apologizing again, she goes home and proceeds to exchange nude pics with Jeremy... LMAO... seriously, be honest about this game, rename it "Hypocrisy".

I don't mind most of this, but I was half expecting that if she slept with every guy she could, especially MIKE who has a girlfriend and fools around with Jeremy, same comment, she wouldn't be too critical with Ian, especially when I avoided calling them a couple, but just went as far as the hooking up route.

Anyhow... still replaying it... just... some better writing is in order I think. I've been impressed with the images in the replay, I feel like some were redone (I forget now).

And man, I can't stand Wade, P-P-Perry or Jeremy. I want to do a "bro" route, but those clowns make it difficult.

 

[Arridell]

Smbd can explain how to date Emma and Hollly?

 

[ffive]

So, after Lena sleeps with Mike, Ian, Robert, blows Jeremy, teases Stan and makes out with a few females she knows. And after she finds out that Ian slept with Holly what did she say? "Ian was just chasing after sex"... ummm... and she was on a religious experience?!

Lena who just casually hooks up with random guys can still think a dude who hooked up with a girl he knew had feelings for him only to dump her on the next day, is a piece of shit. There's no hypocrisy here. It's not like Lena is doing what Ian has done.

 

[Night Hacker]

Still playing... Ian the simp is feeling guilty about the situation. He tells Holly that it was all his fault, that he should have told Holly.... this after Holly has told him at least 5 times that SHE ALREADY KNEW. Some how it was his fault that Holly invited him to the book fair with plans to have him sleep with her.

LMFAO... wow..

Lena who just casually hooks up with random guys can still think a dude who hooked up with a girl he knew had feelings for him only to dump her on the next day, is a piece of shit. There's no hypocrisy here. It's not like Lena is doing what Ian has done.

LMAO... Lena literally accused Ian of "chasing after sex", which is my main point... she has slept with more people than Ian has, both men AND women, two with girlfriends. She's a hypocrite. While it's a nice game... the writing leaves MUCH to be desired.

Also, lets not forget that Holly and Ian knew each other first, and Lena knew ahead of time about how much Holly liked Ian, yet she slept with him anyhow... *cough*hypocrite*cough*.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

If I am correct than It just basic porno trope "If she goes black She going to change appearance/tattoos/tan etc." or simply "She belongs to the streets" type shit, also Sexually liberated(dominated by Ian).

She hasn't started entering twerk competitions, wearing fake braids or getting her "nails did" at all black beauty salons for embarrassingly misguided street-cred yet, so we're probably a ways off. Once she starts posting Peoplegrams in loud-patterned yoga pants while persistently insisting she's a "badd bitch fr" in her comments box, you know we've crossed that trope.

 

[ffive]

LMAO... Lena literally accused Ian of "chasing after sex", which is my main point... she has slept with more people than Ian has, both men AND women, two with girlfriends. She's a hypocrite. While it's a nice game... the writing leaves MUCH to be desired.

It is in the context of difference between taking advantage of feelings of an introverted girl just to sleep with her, versus casual sex with no feelings involved. I think if you can't tell this difference then you aren't really in position to comment on quality of the writing. It just makes it look like a walking case of Dunning-Kruger effect.

Additionally, even if it was a case of hypocrisy, then it's just that. Characters in the story can be hypocrites, it doesn't mean the writing is bad, just that a character has a flaw.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

I was replaying this game again from the start and I seriously think they need to rename it "Hypocrisy", LOL... like when Ian covers for Jeremy and doesn't tell Alison and friends that he has a girlfriend.... but then when Jeremy arrives late (from Louise's) he rats out to everyone that Ian is sleeping with Lena! (at that point I scrolled back, and said "fuck him!" and told the girls about Louise).

But wait, there's more... I have each character basically sleeping with anyone that breathes in this play through (I plan to do a more loyal one as well). So, after Lena sleeps with Mike, Ian, Robert, blows Jeremy, teases Stan and makes out with a few females she knows. And after she finds out that Ian slept with Holly what did she say? "Ian was just chasing after sex"... ummm... and she was on a religious experience?! Shortly after she gets a phone call from simp Ian apologizing again, she goes home and proceeds to exchange nude pics with Jeremy... LMAO... seriously, be honest about this game, rename it "Hypocrisy".

I don't mind most of this, but I was half expecting that if she slept with every guy she could, especially MIKE who has a girlfriend and fools around with Jeremy, same comment, she wouldn't be too critical with Ian, especially when I avoided calling them a couple, but just went as far as the hooking up route.

Anyhow... still replaying it... just... some better writing is in order I think. I've been impressed with the images in the replay, I feel like some were redone (I forget now).

And man, I can't stand Wade, P-P-Perry or Jeremy. I want to do a "bro" route, but those clowns make it difficult.

Yeah it is like that especially with Lena on her various paths. I've been exploring the different paths and its like, run Ian run. One path I did and she is doing the wonderful falling in love stuff and then she is all about Jeremy's cock and then treats Ian like shit and dumps him. I'm like wtf? A few days ago you were confessing how much you wanted him and just pulled some Axel type shit...

In saying that, I think some of the problem is the complexity. So many paths, relationships, and interactions, the story can become disjointed at times. This game is huge, I don't know how Eva keeps it all together at times.

Also I think Ian is the 'good' story if you will, while Lena is the 'dark' story. The girl is messed up with all this stuff going on effecting her life, and her behaviour can be understandably erratic and lead to bad decisions like Robert, Jeremy and Mike. Let's not forget Seymour, her mother and so on. In light of her own behaviour on some of these different paths, Axel and Cherry's betrayal holds less and less water to the point she seems to be delusional over the incident.

Its truly an amazing work Eva has put together, but I just wonder if the scale might be a bit too large. I hope not, its too much fun exploring the world she has created for the most part.

 

[Davkin]

After finishing Ch10, Ch11 title (wounds) shows up, but the next screen is the "to be continued" screen. I'm playing the "OurRedString-v11.0-pc" version.

How to fix this?

 

[Justjorge]

No Mac version still?

 

[Sissycuck111]

Eva is the fkng GOAT!

 

[Kraken0254]

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Yes, with Ian being better than Jeremy. And her going blond did not surprise me per se, I just mentioned it to add to another users list, how it can happen.

I heard from someone if Alison go blonde she is not dating Ian. But still the threesome was like one time thing, these should not affect there relationship, but who knows we have like more chapters coming Then we will see what happens with Ian and Alison.

Ohh i also heard there will be like 20 chapters.

 

[Kraken0254]

Can anybody tell me how people generate AI photo whith realistic photo of adult content, they look totally real some people use any actress photo and generate it with AI and make them look sexy, I want to learn it too, so I can generate some Alison photos. Please can anyone tell me.

 

[uhhhok]

is there a gallery unlocker for this
??

 

[MF_DOOM]

It is in the context of difference between taking advantage of feelings of an introverted girl just to sleep with her, versus casual sex with no feelings involved. I think if you can't tell this difference then you aren't really in position to comment on quality of the writing. It just makes it look like a walking case of Dunning-Kruger effect.

Additionally, even if it was a case of hypocrisy, then it's just that. Characters in the story can be hypocrites, it doesn't mean the writing is bad, just that a character has a flaw.

There is no way you actually believe that.
You're lying.

 

[MF_DOOM]

In saying that, I think some of the problem is the complexity. So many paths, relationships, and interactions, the story can become disjointed at times. This game is huge, I don't know how Eva keeps it all together at times.

You might be right about that, maybe she just hoped we wouldnt notice the duplicity in those times and just rolled with it to save some development time.

 

[Mythos079]

Can anybody tell me how people generate AI photo whith realistic photo of adult content, they look totally real some people use any actress photo and generate it with AI and make them look sexy, I want to learn it too, so I can generate some Alison photos. Please can anyone tell me.

I know nothing about how to generate AI images, but I think this ORS Build Your Scene Tool can help you generate new Alison scenes.

 

[Xupuzulla]

It is in the context of difference between taking advantage of feelings of an introverted girl just to sleep with her, versus casual sex with no feelings involved. I think if you can't tell this difference then you aren't really in position to comment on quality of the writing. It just makes it look like a walking case of Dunning-Kruger effect.

Additionally, even if it was a case of hypocrisy, then it's just that. Characters in the story can be hypocrites, it doesn't mean the writing is bad, just that a character has a flaw.

The problem is,Ian is the only one getting fucked by the hypocrisy of others.
Lena can fuck half of the city without consequences.