VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Geralt From Rivia]

Okay, I was quite a lot. I'm not a radical simp of anyone. I am a guy who is interested in the game and where the story will lead. But I understand people's irritation and support the dissatisfaction.
Game has interesting characters - Ivy and Emma, who are not given much attention.
In return, Robert (the leg dildo for sex in the early game) continues to receive content. Why?
Stan is useless and he is a reflection of the people who see themselves in him. And don't tell me he's a fan favorite and came in "second place." This is a group of people who are interested in creepy Stan to amuse their fragile it. They don't interested in the game and story.
Jeremy is just an interracial fetish for now, although he may get a development arc.
Gillian - why was it necessary to return her if Eva, apparently, doesn't understand what to do with her. She can write for her a good redemption arc.
This game and many of the characters deserve better, but Eva makes the wrong decisions time and time again.
You may not like SerHawkes' harsh speech, he is an emotional guy, but he is right.

 

[Xupuzulla]

"Im not a simp of anyone"
"Female characters i like=GOOD"
"Characters i dont like=VERY BAD"
LMAO at least be honest with yourself,bro.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Game has interesting characters - Ivy and Emma, who are not given much attention.

Emma got enough attention for someone so fat and communist.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

"Im not a simp of anyone"
"Female characters i like=GOOD"
"Characters i dont like=VERY BAD"
LMAO at least be honest with yourself,bro.

You're distorted everything I wrote to suit your ideas.
These characters are simply NPCs, without their own personality, who display stereotypical type of people. To fill the game with kinky content and satisfy certain groups of people.
This is not called "good writing". This is called "fan service".
Fan service is a bad sign. Its purpose is to distract the audience from existing problems in the games.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Emma got enough attention for someone so fat and communist.

I listened to your point of view. Now go to the field.

 

[MF_DOOM]

I never derail the thread crying about Holly or asking for more content for Stan

Thats a lie, especially that last part.

 

[bauman]

It doesn't make sense to correlate ORS with GGGB. Mind you, GGGB is not some mindless sick fetish game either because THERE is a good Ashley path where you can end up be married with Eric, Dave, Jess, or even Jack. You want ORS to be realistic, play it that way! There is paths where Lena being lovey dovey with either Ian or Holly. There is a choice where Lena tells her friends what her desire is and we have so many options to choose (sex with a girl, exhibitionism, dominated, bbc, etc).

ORS correlates with GGGB quite nicely. It mirrors the previous game development problems and offers similar situations, characters, and fetishes. The narrative is more focused, and the sex scenes have been more vanilla so far, but the similarities are more than the differences. Early on, Eva Kiss wrote how ORS would be a more in-depth GGGB, expanding on half-baked themes from the first game, like corruption, social media, power, temptation, lust, love, etc. It was the original plan behind the game.

 

[Da¥e]

Yeah it's disappointing as fuck to see how only 11 chapters in Ian and Ivy are just fucking now starting to hang out and actually flirt, even though in the OOG we had Ivy kiss Ian on the cheek, to then have a flirty moment, to the shitty current state. Eva's fucked up big time and continues to cater to the fetishists than actually stay true to her story. Sure, fetishists are nice once in a fucking while, but to have them in over and over again while glossing over your own story or even neglect certain characters, specially ones who have had zero content? Yeah, EK gets F on that regard.


"Down the line..." So likely fucking never. Way to completely fucking screw over the fans who have been waiting since the first release EK. Round of a fucking applause. Welp, looks likely I'll be drop kicking this game then and going nuclear on her discord then.

Just accept that EvaKiss games are not your cup of tea and leave.

 

[| Vee |]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

 

[Chartog]

Why a slut like Ivy would have the dates with Ian?LMAO
Like i said,your headcanon and reality are different.

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

 

[Socrambus]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

It depends on how they are done and also on your expectations. Four might be enough or 8 might not be. At this point it's just a number, not all the chapters are the same lenght or the same "content density".

 

[| Vee |]

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

Ivy is like "Massage" you don't know how much you need it, until you get it!

 

[Xupuzulla]

Ivy is only needed to push Holly into more content. We don't need her for much else

Tell that to the people who think Ivy and Ian should be married and having babies by now.

 

[Reaurt]

It depends on how they are done and also on your expectations. Four might be enough or 8 might not be. At this point it's just a number, not all the chapters are the same lenght or the same "content density".

Agreed. Chapters also tend to vary depending on to what degree the chapter is setting up the premise for situations or letting said situations play out. If it's a lot of the former, the chapters can feel pretty boring, as it can seem like nothing is actually happening, just a lot of possibilities or rehashing. There's only so much edging I can take!

Just occurs to me, Eva's been working at ORS for 3+ years now. She hasn't done herself any favors with the difficult premise of the game and her own standards, but burnout is practically inevitable if you work on one single project for 3+ years.

 

[lucadiadis]

There are thousands of games on here in which the girl goes from innocent to super-slut within a day or two. So if you like those kind of games you have plenty to choose from. Please leave us enjoyers of a somewhat realistic corruption a handful of games as well. I really hope Eva doesn't go overboard and instead continues with her slowburn and comparatively natural writing

Well I am not a big fan overnight corruption either, however in medio stat virtus.

 

[Socrambus]

Agreed. Chapters also tend to vary depending on to what degree the chapter is setting up the premise for situations or letting said situations play out. If it's a lot of the former, the chapters can feel pretty boring, as it can seem like nothing is actually happening, just a lot of possibilities or rehashing. There's only so much edging I can take!

Just occurs to me, Eva's been working at ORS for 3+ years now. She hasn't done herself any favors with the difficult premise of the game and her own standards, but burnout is practically inevitable if you work on one single project for 3+ years.

And to develop something while receiving all kinds of feedback that you can't completely ignore because your monthly paid depends on keeping some of those people happy enough to subscribe. That has to be crazy, I've been on some long developments (2+ years counting post release updates) and you end up tired and annoyed. And I only had to keep maybe 4 or 5 guys happy with my work!.

 

[SerHawkes]

Serious question! What do you guys think, are 4 chapter's(if 16 total) enough to finish the game without being feel like it is rushed?

Depends on how much she adds to the chapters and focuses on the story. If the chapter is full of progression and forwards the story instead of mainly focusing on appeasement, then maybe. But we won't know till Chapter 12 drops to see how much is there.

 

[jduk]

More slowburn stuff while we are still waiting for Lena's first DP or full cuckold scene after eleven chapters => thanks but no thanks.

cuckold ian coming sooner or later

 

[jduk]

Pure NTR is unlikely, as Alison is smitten by Ian to the point of obession.
Closest you can get is underperforming and asking her to share herself with Jeremy for your own desire. Date her, arrange a threesome with Jeremy, get limp and choose the sad smiley (=cuck) option to demand a second threesome. She is a bit confused by it, but does it to make Ian happy.

Which isn't Netorare but Netorase and totally different if you ask all NTR connosouirs:

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perfect, though Alison likes Jeremy's cock too imo

 

[nevt2050ptr]

I think that ending ORS on 15/16 makes sense considering state of game as of ch.11. Both Ian and Lena can have 8/10 in main stats, and 4,5 chapters to go is good way to max those. For Ian book constest is ending, and mma tournament is starting so it's not like he has lot things to do now. Lena will have music contest soon, and need to resolve Seymor situation, wchich regardless of choices kinda feels for me like a drag.

Even when I think about Ian's main love interests there's feeling that there is not a lot more to say :
- Ian and Lena are now fully in love and commited; They need to resolve things staded above and start living together
- Ian and Cherry are now ready to start their relationship
- Ian and Cindy after she decided to take a break from Wade probably by ch.13 will start date Ian openly
- Ian and Emma; This is the only main Li where we don't how if it will end as simple hookup or something more
- Alison is ready for Ian from ch.1 so there's nothing else to add
- Holly is now a lot more sociable person and just waiting for Ian to fully commit
As of additional Li only bad Jess have chance to have more advanced relations with Ian. Gillian, good Jess, Nat and Ivy will probably get one scene like Louise or nothing at all.

Most of chapter 13 will take place at beach house, which I think will be cumulative point of the story. Relations like Ian/Lena/Holly throuple, Ian/Cindy affair, Ian/Emma will be resolved. Ian will move out of Perry's apartament (in Cherry route he states that he's ready to find his own place) on his own or will be forced because of his close relations to Emma/Cindy. After that EK will start to wrap things up.

In the end Perry will be finally free to give Wade priceless relationship advice after Cindy dumps him, and of course to fantasize about his one true love .