VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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LoneWaker59

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A few things I didn't like about this latest update:

> It seems the game is going in the same direction as the end of GGGB, fetish after fetish (mainly BBC + Cuck);
> Marcel's scene is TOO FORCED, but I understand that EvaKiss needs to please the Patreons who put him at the top;
> Fan service went through the roof in this episode with so many GGGB characters appearing, even Jack appeared.
> Introducing this character with only 5 episodes to go... For me she's the most beautiful character in the game, I hope it's not just a cameo lol
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Xupuzulla said:
Dont worry,the people who dont have a deranged hateboner for the game can tell this was a good epilogue.
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What I found more disappointing, not only on the epilogue but the whole chapter, it's the recycling of scenes: Lena/Louise threesome with Ian or Mike, Lena's selfie with Jeremy or Marcel's dick and post bartending sex with Ian or Mark (I don't know if I'm missing any other). I understand the development takes long enough even with this recycling but it cheapens the characters and their plots that they are basically interchangeable.

It's also the second time that Cindy's interactions with Axel are not affected at all (at least as far as it is shown in the game so far) by Ian's choices regarding Cindy. The first time was Cindy's second photoshooting with Axel, she poses for the same kind of photos no matter if Ian encouraged her to get naked on the first photoshooting or not. I hope that doesn't mean Ian won't be able to influence Cindy's story.
 
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Xupuzulla said:
I dont think Ian is boring per se but this epilogue proves Lena is the best MC by far and is not even close.
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It's funny how I like the progression in this epilogue than the whole chapter 11. But the chapter has the most Holly content in a while but in my multiple play through Holly route was my least preferred so probably that's why I like this epilogue more than the chapter itself :LOL:
 
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LoneWaker59 said:
A few things I didn't like about this latest update:

> It seems the game is going in the same direction as the end of GGGB, fetish after fetish (mainly BBC + Cuck);
> Marcel's scene is TOO FORCED, but I understand that EvaKiss needs to please the Patreons who put him at the top;
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Is it really forced though?. I only played the epilogue with one of my saves, but I didn't encounter any BBC or cuck content. I had to watch the scenes in the gallery. It's not my cup of tea, specially the cuck part, but I don't see what's wrong with the content being there for those who might enjoy it. Specially when you have to make a conscious effort with your choices to be able to get that content at all.
 
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| Vee | said:
fatpussy123 this is responses of Lena in Chad Ian playthrough and IanxLena are not couple but dating and both are in love with eachother.

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Thanks for posting these(y)

As I've said before the one clear way to resolve this conflict is through sex. Ian, Lena, and Cindy threesome coming next chapter, mark down your calendars:HideThePain:
 
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"I've also added two new narrative scenes that weren't present in the Beta, nothing major, but it sheds light on a new plot point in the Seymour route as well as detail a bit more of Ian and Lena's relationship. "

No new erotic scene?
 
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fatpussy123

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Kuckuck21 said:
I don't think this epilogue is terrible but there are several moments that don't make sense based on previous choices and actions.

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Those inconsistencies with previous choices and moments in the story are where the epilogue drops the ball. These are also the reasons why I don't think it is particularly good despite not being terrible either.

One other thing I realized though was how short Lena's part in chapter 11 was. According to Eva, this epilogue was of the same length or at least close to it yet it still seemed relatively short (as should be expected by an epilogue not however by the main chapter).
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I think 1 and 3 are oversights that may be fixed in the beta and final releases if theyre reported. 2 Just is. Cindy is always jealous of Lena even absent of Axel's influence as seen at Lena's concert. Lena picks up on Cindy's cattyness and responds in kind. I'm guessing this is just a limitation of the story and there isnt room for a Lena and Cindy friendship when so much of Cindy's story revolves around Axel.
 
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I'm a big fan of IanxCindy but I like this, I like a little bit drama, misunderstandings between them... it makes everything more interesting.
 
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Xupuzulla said:
I dont think Ian is boring per se but this epilogue proves Lena is the best MC by far and is not even close.
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Yes ,Lena might be the better mc but Ian is way better than Alex as an MC . Ian is more relaxed and flexible than Alex and an all rounder
 
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