VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[SearingFive]

But Axel will get found out eventually. It happened with Lena, it probably happened with girls he swooned before her, and it will happen with Cindy. Ian will have the last laugh.

So, basically just a good-looking version of Stan.

Axel's harem.

 

[SearingFive]

I never said is the main reason through,i do believe is a important factor.
I dont understand why you guys are so pressed to admit him being a photographer is important to Cindy,you are trying to downgrade her whole model arc to just a blonde bimbo who gets wet when the blonde chad is around.

Cindy got roped in because Axel used the word "Free". If he were to charge her for the sessions she'd have thought about it twice and we all know how much she loves free stuff. Axel being a photographer gained him a massive advantage, his free deal didn't come out as shady as we're to believe. Also, being handsome is an icing for him to get girls without any effort. Emma, Alison and others go primal mode when he's near them.

 

[| Vee |]

But Axel will get found out eventually. It happened with Lena, it probably happened with girls he swooned before her, and it will happen with Cindy. Ian will have the last laugh...

Cherry disagrees.

 

[yuvce]

Cherry disagrees.

Not necessarily. She mentions to Ian after her art exhibition she could see just how hung up Axel is on Lena when they run into her after Ivy's party. The insinuation she gave was that it was best she stay away from him.

 

[yuvce]

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Axel's harem.

Cursed images.

 

[| Vee |]

Not necessarily. She mentions to Ian after her art exhibition she could see just how hung up Axel is on Lena when they run into her after Ivy's party. The insinuation she gave was that it was best she stay away from him.

Doesn't she still indirectly implies that she misses Axel or something along the these lines? IIIRC, I read someone's post can't remember whom.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Cindy got roped in because Axel used the word "Free". If he were to charge her for the sessions she'd have thought about it twice and we all know how much she loves free stuff. Axel being a photographer gained him a massive advantage, his free deal didn't come out as shady as we're to believe. Also, being handsome is an icing for him to get girls without any effort. Emma, Alison and others go primal mode when he's near them.

We are going in circles,you guys admit him being a photographer is a bonus and a massive advantage and the go "BUT HIS LOOKS!"

 

[| Vee |]

We are going in circles,you guys admit him being a photographer is a bonus and a massive advantage and the go "BUT HIS LOOKS!"

NO! We admit him being a desperate photographer. With only looks as a bonus.

 

[yuvce]

Doesn't she still indirectly implies that she misses Axel or something along the these lines? IIIRC, I read someone's post can't remember whom.

I would think that her bubble was burst after seeing how Axel behaves around Lena.

 

[SearingFive]

We are going in circles,you guys admit him being a photographer is a bonus and a massive advantage and the go "BUT HIS LOOKS!"

I did say on most of the posts about Axel's photography and the advantage he got out of it. He still has ill intent with the girls working for him. He just comes off as a less shady character because he has photography skills to back it up with.

 

[SearingFive]

Doesn't she still indirectly implies that she misses Axel or something along the these lines? IIIRC, I read someone's post can't remember whom.

i "Sounds like you got the last bit of closure you needed that night."
            ch "Yes... It makes me feel stupid how painful it's been. It should've been easy to let go after all that's happened."
            $ fcherry = "n"
            ch "But I feel that wound is finally turning into a scar."
            $ fian = "smile"
            i "I'm happy to hear you say those words."

She is trying to move on finally.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I think It's actually fine like that. Jack is famous, rich, well-built and handsome, just the type to charm a lass out of her panties in the club.
My problem with the scene was the cringe dirty talk from Lena. She said something like "put this alpha male cock in me". Jesus, if some girl would say it to me during sex I would lose my erection immediately, pull my pants up and walk away.

As you said earlier, part of the audience for this game is IRL Stans, for them this type of writing makes them horny. It’s not surprising that Eva follows the lead of this audience, but how little they need to be happy. "Alpha male cock", LMAO.

I believe Jack scene was initially added for single Lena than EK thought "Why limit him to only single Lena". Hence, all this lena_jack_dating variable, etc.

The only good cameo mechanic is Natasha, so far all we have is teasing for two episodes. Nothing is rushed, the writing is quite realistic and believable in what is happening. Ian can flirt with her for now, but no "jump on my dick right now, Ian" bullshit. It would kill all the interest.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I did say on most of the posts about Axel's photography and the advantage he got out of it. He still has ill intent with the girls working for him. He just comes off as a less shady character because he has photography skills to back it up with.

So.........im right and Cindy is falling for it hook,line and sinker?
I dont understand why are we arguing you guys literally agree the photography is important which it was my original point what the fuck

 

[SearingFive]

As you said earlier, part of the audience for this game is IRL Stans, for them this type of writing makes them horny. It’s not surprising that Eva follows the lead of this audience, but how little they need to be happy. "Alpha male cock", LMAO.

The only good cameo mechanic is Natasha, so far all we have is teasing for two episodes. Nothing is rushed, the writing is quite realistic and believable in what is happening. Ian can flirt with her for now, but no "jump on my dick right now, Ian" bullshit. It would kill all the interest.

Bruh, who even gets horny with those lines. I'd reevaluate my life if I got hard from "Alpha male cock".
Yup, Natasha is the perfect study on how a cameo should be done in ORS. Meanwhile "Alpha male cock"

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Futhermore, it was well noted above about Axel and the description matches exactly. Axel is a very unprofessional photographer in his behavior with models, he simply uses his skills to get into girls' panties. As is the case with Cindy. Such photographers exist, there are even those who fuck their models, but among photographers this is generally considered unacceptable, since they cast a shadow on the profession. In general, Axel is the same creepy guy as Stan, only with good looks and the charisma of pick-up girls. Just like Stan, with a set of psychological complexes, but unlike Stan, he is in good physical shape and his narcissism allows for direct aggression.

 

[SearingFive]

So.........im right and Cindy is falling for it hook,line and sinker?
I dont understand why are we arguing you guys literally agree the photography is important which it was my original point what the fuck

 

[ffive]

Ian can flirt with her for now, but no "jump on my dick right now, Ian" bullshit. It would kill all the interest.

Pfff as if. I don't see people decrying Alison or Cherry as "killing all interest" because they can jump on Ian's dick right off the bat. No one would complain if Nat was the same, it's apparently only a problem if Lena does it.

 

[lorkdubo]

Futhermore, it was well noted above about Axel and the description matches exactly. Axel is a very unprofessional photographer in his behavior with models, he simply uses his skills to get into girls' panties. As is the case with Cindy. Such photographers exist, there are even those who fuck their models, but among photographers this is generally considered unacceptable, since they cast a shadow on the profession. In general, Axel is the same creepy guy as Stan, only with good looks and the charisma of pick-up girls. Just like Stan, with a set of psychological complexes, but unlike Stan, he is in good physical shape and his narcissism allows for direct aggression.

It's quite obvious that if Cindy goes the Axel way, she is going to feature quite a few blacked videos. So, a Jessica 2.0.
Unprofessional photographers tend to introduce or sway the girls to the porn/escort industry. Cindy is naive enough that think she is going to be a supermodel. Well, it is what it is I guess. You either strike a god-tier professional photographer that shields you from everything and you're genuine talent (which we know Axel is not) or you are spoon feed by having peak connections in the industry that get you immunity from the infinity of people that want to have you as a stool and fuck you in the ass.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Bruh, who even gets horny with those lines. I'd reevaluate my life if I got hard from "Alpha male cock".
Yup, Natasha is the perfect study on how a cameo should be done in ORS. Meanwhile "Alpha male cock"

Meahwhile, some brigade here from "alpha male cock":

 

[lorkdubo]

Pfff as if. I don't see people decrying Alison or Cherry as "killing all interest" because they can jump on Ian's dick right off the bat. No one would complain if Nat was the same, it's apparently only a problem if Lena does it.

It's more of a spiral of degradation. I recently watched Forrest Gump again and Jenny is such a prime example. She learned her lesson and did everything to set her life straight and wanted redemption when she was on the brink of death.
Either way, she is a good example of moral degradation and Cindy is going in that direction. The same as Jessica in GGGB.