VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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jimul18

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For me the Update was kind of hit an miss, like most recent ones. In terms of quantity the update was the bare minimum, fatpussy123 some of the 11 scenes barely qualify as that, also if you talk about the entire chapter, several are just reused content from earlier (e.g. "Lena admires her pictures" 1 and 2).
fatpussy123 said:
Saying this update didnt have your desired content is fine, especially for Cindy, Minerva, Alison, and Cherry fans, but saying there was little to no content is just false. Without including still images/nudes, according to the gallery, this update has 11 scenes.
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In terms of quality there was some really good stuff here, both in the Emma camp as well as Lena and Holly, although parts again are just reused images without even the courtesy of flipping or resizing it. Although a lot of opportunities where missed
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About story progression the beach event is fun but imho leading nowhere at least for Ian,
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The biggest win for me was on Lena's side, even though the chapter was supposed to be about Ian:
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jimul18 said:
About story progression the beach event is fun but imho leading nowhere at least for Ian
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Ian gets to voice his opinion on the Holly Trinity, potentially either enabling it, shutting it down or breaking up over the idea. Similarly, he (or Lena) can decide whether to continue or stop things, given other interests and/or cheating.

I'd say this can be pretty big, as far as progression goes.
 
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Yeah, and people here wanted to pair him with Emma/Cherry, as if they wished them the worst outcome in their lives. No psychologist is curing that kind of trauma.
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Thats the worst outcome for Cherry through,shes way too good for him :LOL:

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I genuinely felt sad for Wade during his "confession"... If anyone deserves a redemption arc it's him and if it happens i think it's best he forgets about Cindy and find someone whom he can connect with.
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I hope so too this is the beggining for better things for Wade,she just needs a new girl,maybe someone from the beach house?
 
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I myself like any content with Ian and Minerva, love their relationship wish there was more content with her in it. I always like the taboo aspects of games especially when it's a MILF cheating on her cuck of a husband.
 
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jimul18 said:
For me the Update was kind of hit an miss, like most recent ones. In terms of quantity the update was the bare minimum, fatpussy123 some of the 11 scenes barely qualify as that, also if you talk about the entire chapter, several are just reused content from earlier (e.g. "Lena admires her pictures" 1 and 2).


In terms of quality there was some really good stuff here, both in the Emma camp as well as Lena and Holly, although parts again are just reused images without even the courtesy of flipping or resizing it. Although a lot of opportunities where missed
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About story progression the beach event is fun but imho leading nowhere at least for Ian,
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The biggest win for me was on Lena's side, even though the chapter was supposed to be about Ian:
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I get your point about smaller scenes being included in the 11 scenes, but the other updates also had smaller scenes, I even counted scenes like poledancing as part of my point. If anyone wants to do a super indepth analysis looking at which chapter had the most amount of proper sex scene be my guest. But just comparing the scene count, this update is not different from previous updates and also arguably has more variation because of branching.

Also about reused art. This has been something that has become more common over the last few chapters, I dont think EK will change on that. But I would argue that this chapter had its prominent moments use new art (Axel car ride, Axel bedroom, Emma rimjob, Holly ocean fuck, Emma sunscreen, Lena titfuck, and all the nudes sent to Ian). The places where art was reused were for smaller scenes or transisition scenes, like Emma blowing Ian for 5 seconds or Lenas handjob on the cuck route. If EK continues to reuse art, Id rather it be like this than have whole scenes reused, like she did in chapter 11, which I think was the worst offender.
 
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Xupuzulla said:
What place would be the best for Axel and his new babygirl Cindy to go vacations together for the first time?:unsure:
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Apologies for the delay...the thread stoppage, then regular life got in the way...
but as I said before, Axel and Cindy...on a yacht....perhaps with other dom/sub matches
(maybe Seymour/Lena?*) ..... but of course the overall dom...and owner/supplier of the yacht would be Agnes...
Vacation destination? I suppose the Canary Islands or Tenerife....if Cindy needed to be told something.

But so often the destination is unimportant...it is the journey that matters. I believe the question came up of how Cindy would be handled. I really do not know...but her stature and nature...combined with that of Axel's and Agnes' implies a rather thick stainless steel bar (rounded at the ends) and a large dewar of liquid nitrogen. If that occurs, the destination could, of course, no longer be the Canary Islands. It could still be Tenerife, but Algeria would be more convenient and just as suitable (as would anywhere else on the Barbary Coast).

*I think it would be more erotic to keep Lena and Cindy on separate encounter paths. I think we disagree on this point, but that is, of course, why game trees branch. This also allows me to sample your desires as a snack and for you to sample mine should you wish.
 
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JoJoPool said:
I genuinely felt sad for Wade during his "confession"... If anyone deserves a redemption arc it's him and if it happens i think it's best he forgets about Cindy and find someone whom he can connect with.
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Wade was the architect of his own downfall. Several years with Cindy, and he still doesn't really get her. Regardless of who was right or wrong, he should have known that prioritising his own desires over hers, was only going to have one ending. Cindy is a woman who likes a lot of attention from her man, and sitting around playing video games all day is not the way to give it. She likes having fun, clubbing and partying, which Wade apparently hates, which also begs the question why did he get together with her? These are things most couples work out fairly quickly after they start hanging out, it's not that difficult really, just a bit of basic communication is required.

I don't feel bad for Wade at all, because finding out that him and Cindy have nothing in common whatsoever, is actually doing him a big favour. He just needs to hit the gym, work off that belly, and before he knows it, there'll be gamer girls all over him. And who knows maybe even Ivy will want a turn ( she's expressed an interest on several occasions) ?
 
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I liked the update but I found a couple of writing inconsistencies during my playthrough (I only played it once with a chad Ian and Lena only messing around with Ian and girls save):
  • When Lena is checking messages she reacts to Eli's interest refusing it because she's in love with Ian (caused by my previous decission) but just after that she chats with Ivy and openly shows interest in continuing to "have fun" with her.
  • Also during my chat with Emma she goes from encouraging my Ian to get into a more serious commitment with Lena to inmediately after that showing her interest in entering into a less casual relationship with Ian herself.
I'm not sure if any or both of the scenes' writing are intended as such or if they are just alpha version inconsistencies that will be polished on future releases but it felt pretty weird to me.
 
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ffive said:
You seem to be under impression that a person who's had more than few sexual partners can't be possibly interested in books, or put up with a shitty job, or have good manners, or be devastated after discovering her most serious boyfriend to date has been cheating on her to the point where she'd shy away from getting close with anyone for a few months.

You're simply mistaken.
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Not a person with more than a few partners. But a person with wild background, a person who lived her youth to the fullest, a person who rarely stayed at home, a person with a lot of stories she embarrassed to tell even to her cuck bf.

ok-ok.
First you were basically saying I'm wrong coz we know nothing except her break up with bf, now cause all that character inconsistency is perfectly normal in our anime world where everything is possible and that everything is possible at the very same moment. You can be witty, charismatic, slutty, sporty, good, evil, lawful chaotic neutral furry shemale barbarian mage as a head of thieves guild if you click
Screenshot from 2024-04-27 17-34-38.png at the start of your stupid life, or if you never met normal ppl and you unable to grasp the concept of time and that ppl don't change their personality every fucking day.

An infantry vet won't faint when shown a corpse, a free spirited and sexual woman won't make a shocked face when asked about sex life by a close friend [unless she is a porn star and that bullshit was written in the script].
Because you know EXPERIENCE... That weird thing determining the difference between shocking and normal.

"Well, anything was better than staying home... Hanging out and partying seemed like a good way to evade myself."
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I bet she did it to read nerdy books, play acoustic guitar and write sophisticated poems in a more comfortable environment. Or I'm just overthinking and all that parties were actually DnD sessions. That would make at least some sense.

I also hope Lena is not into painting and that easel sits there just because she thinks her room is too big and needs more furniture to put her modeled works or clothes on.

ffive said:
You can leave this sort of wild speculations off the next time. Not only are they wrong, they contribute nothing.
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That's one of two obvious conclusions from `we know nothing about the character`. You're either fappernotreader or you're just posting random bullshit to argue with random ppl.
My mistake was to choose the more polite one, which I sincerely admit. Fortunately there won't be next time coz u'll be permanently ignored.
 
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I seriously wished it hit him and gave him a concussion maybe that will teach him some manners...
The only achievement Perry has made is somehow making himself even worse than Robert and Stan
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Imagine if he got a concussion and spent the entire update in the hospital leaving us the fuck alone in his summer house
 
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So if I’m going for a route that has Cherry and Emma,
Is there a way to avoid the convo where Ian and Wade tell Perry he should just go for Emma already?
There isn’t an option to tell him to stop pursuing her which is really dumb
 
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