VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[GokutheG]

Okay, so I know I went overboard thinking of these. Just got on a roll and kept going.

First, a bunch of general "get the game started" questions. Less about any specific people or situations but interesting for what backstory stuff we could learn:

Never have I ever told a secret I wasn’t supposed to share.
Never have I ever flirted just to get something I wanted.
Never have I ever lied to my friends.
Never have I ever been jealous of someone else’s success.
Never have I ever had a crush on a teacher.
Never have I ever broken a promise.
Never have I ever broken someone's heart.
Never have I ever pretended to agree with someone to avoid an argument.
Never have I ever done something just to impress someone else.

Okay, and then the good stuff:

Never have I ever gone skinny dipping. (and whaddaya know, here we are at the beach...)

Never have I ever kissed my best friend. (Lena/Ivy, Lena/Holly)

Never have I ever been in love. (depending on how you play Lena or Ian, could be others also)

Never have I ever made out in a public place. (Ian/Cindy, Ian/Lena, Lena/Stan, Ian/Holly just yesterday in the ocean...)

Never have I ever snooped through someone's phone. (Lena with Louise's phone)

Never have I ever snooped through someone's socials. (so many options here but of course the important one is Perry/Axel )

Never have I ever told someone "I love you" without meaning it. (oof, this could get rough...)

Never have I ever stayed in a relationship that I really wasn’t feeling. (oof, same)

Never have I ever dated more than one person at once. (and also)

Never have I ever had a friend with benefits. (Ian/various, Lena/various, Holly/various)

Never have I ever had sex with someone I just met. (Lena/Mike, Lena/Jack, Holly/Robert, Ian/Cherry)

Never have I ever sent a dirty text message. (Perry would have to say this because I would guess everyone else has )

Never have I ever surprised someone coming out of a shower so they dropped their towel. (Lena/Perry )

Never have I ever fantasized about getting back with an ex. (Ian/Gillian, Lena/Axel)

Never have I ever cheated in a video game. (Bad Wade! )

Never have I ever kissed more than one person in 24 hours. (I mean, isn't this what ORS is in recent chapters?)

Never have I ever had a dirty dream about an unexpected person. (Eva could pull crazy things out of her hat with this, like the Holly/Marcel tease that's been sitting there for several chapters. But also other potentially forecasted things like Lena/Emma, Lena/Stan, Ian/Ivy, etc. It could also be what starts things rolling on Lena/Ian/Holly, or Lena/Ian/Emma...)

(Speaking of...) Never have I ever had a threesome (Ian/Lena/Louise, Ian/Jeremy/Alison, Lena/Holly/Ivy, Lena/Louise/Mike)

Never have I ever given/gotten a sexy massage. (Ian/Emma just the previous afternoon!)

Never have I ever fallen out of love. (Wade/Cindy, Ian or Lena with various)

Never have I ever used or responded to a pick-up line. (Ian/Cherry, Ian/Jess, Lena/Mike, Lena/Jack)

Never have I ever been strongly attracted to someone who was dating someone else. (Ian/Cindy, Lena/Mike, Lena/Jeremy, Ian/Minerva - she's married, not dating, but...)

So, Wade would have a giant smirk on his face as he becomes the embodiment of chaos and says this one...
Never have I ever had a crush on someone in this room! (Ian/Lena, Ian/Holly, Lena/Holly, Lena/Emma, Emma/Ian, Perry/Emma - whew!)

Yeah this game seem like it's being set up to give background information on characters aswell as stirring up drama for future chapters. Imagine if Perry says never have I ever cheated with a friend's s/o.

Or been paid for sex etc.

 

[Ray_D]

I throught you Ian fanboys said Ian doenst care about Gillian anymore

I'm not a fan of ian, it's just that his goals align better with me. To be honest I just want an excuse to beat up jeremy or axel.

 

[iamtheman000]

Honestly Ian is just boring as hell as a character

 

[Lunix00]

Honestly Ian is just boring as hell as a character

I understand that this is how those who are more interested in the corruption of a character like Lena think, rather than enjoying a slightly more complex story.
Ian is a well written character.

 

[GokutheG]

I understand that this is how those who are more interested in the corruption of a character like Lena think, rather than enjoying a slightly more complex story.
Ian is a well written character.

As someone who isn't into corruption I must also say that Ian is boring. His friends are uninteresting at best and annoying/unneeded at worst. Besides the whole drama with writing his book while working at the magazine early in the game nothing about him as a person grabs my attention. Since Lena's story already involves being cheated on something interested could have been done with his backstory(like a rejected proposal) instead of cheating ex #2.

 

[ffive]

Since Lena's story already involves being cheated on something interested could have been done with his backstory(like a rejected proposal) instead of cheating ex #2.

The point of having the same backstory is to give Lena and Ian common ground of shared experiences. It's kind of funny that it is Ian who's boring because "he's got the same backstory as Lena" and not Lena who is boring because "she's got the same backstory as Ian".

 

[SlowGoesSlow]

The point of having the same backstory is to give Lena and Ian common ground of shared experiences. It's kind of funny that it is Ian who's boring because "he's got the same backstory as Lena" and not Lena who is boring because "she's got the same backstory as Ian".

Ian needs a corruption route so he can catch up, I guess. Himbo Ian when

 

[ffive]

Ian needs a corruption route so he can catch up, I guess. Himbo Ian when

Ian already has corruption arc, except people don't even notice it because being a total horndog with zero feels is considered a default for a guy, rather than getting corrupted from his starting vulnerable, romantic self.

 

[Blurpee69]

Ian needs a corruption route so he can catch up, I guess. Himbo Ian when

That is literally what his chad variable is for? His latest interactions with Allison, Cherry, and Emma, and every interaction with Minerva, can all be degrading which is a far cry from where he started as a character. Additionally he can disregard relationships with pretty much every other woman to flirt with Ivy and Louise this chapter. He starts treating woman like objects, which is, for most people, kind of a shit thing to do.

I guess his corruption isn't as obvious to some because a man having sex with every oriface that's in front of him isn't considered "slutty."

But if you want Ian to be a himbo you honestly kind of can. Have him not answer intelligently, and not use words so good when writing his book. Focus on the gym and MMA so everyone comments on his improving physique. Bam! Psuedo himbofication.

 

[Warscared]

Step 1: Go find a person that you don't know very well, but know for a fact is in a relationship with someone else.
Step 2: Grab that persons ass, and I mean really play the fucking bongos on those cheeks.
Step 3: Report your findings to the classroom.

ok give me 2 hours, there is a very expensive disco whose ratio is like 3 women to every 1 man
and the door keeper is a friend... and i know 5 of the bartender girls!

*8 hours later*

so i hit on 10 girls... my balls hurt...
i fucked 4 of the 5 bartenders
(and got kicked in the balls by the last one... they all date... the same 2 guys...
one of them is one of the bouncer at the door that hates my guts...)
i fucked them in the bottle closet... so i even got a few shoots out of it!
the danger part was that... there were bottles that could go into your ass fairly fast...
i fucked the other 5 girls i went up to in the toillets...
they all seemed to be with their boyfriends... i assume no girl under 25 is married...
but 3 of them had rings like wedding rings or engagement or relationship rings so...

my experience may diverge from others...
i was in a safe place with plenty of friends and people i know!
half of my test subjects were previously known to me...
i knew they are promiscous and i had assumed they sort of fancied me by how they have flirted with me before!
the surprising part was actually the kick to the balls...
although that might have been cause i can only fuck 1 at the time so...
she might have fucked me as well if i had went to her 1st!

but the main reason why my experience may diverge from others is that...

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i look like this... so it might not work for everyone... when i was younger at least!

never have I ever sleeped with my friends gf

*drinks* ---
Seriously?
*IT´S LIKE THE 1ST 5 THINGS YOU DO WHEN YOU MAKE A FRIEND!
why make a friend that does not have the social skills to have a girlfriend anyway?
clearly he is stunted and immature if he doesn´t have a girlfriend or wife!

never have i ever slept with my enemy girlfriend
*drinks*

never have i ever slept with nemeis sister
*drinks* fuck she was what? 5 to 7 years... in jail?
but i´ll accept anything under 18...

never have i ever slept with an adversary´s mother
*chugs the bottle
continues to throw up...
fuck i think i need another bottle to finish this challenge!

*at a highschool class reunion
never have i ever fucked someone at this table, take one for every body you nailed...
*proceeds to drink 22 shoots
*there are 20 people at the table... half of them are dudes!
wtf dude!
hey... each hole counts and if we go by personalities there is not a single bitch in this table that doesn´t have at least 2 faces...

never have i ever cheated on my girlfriend/boyfriend with her/his best friend
*sips on a very tall glass
*everyone looks at you
*OH COME ON... ITS LIKE ONE OF THE 1ST 10 THINGS YOU DO WHEN YOU GET A GIRLFRIEND!

never have i ever...
GO FUCK YOURSELFS THIS GAME IS CLEARLY RIGGED!
PEACE... I AM OUT! ASSHOLES!

 

[lucadiadis]

ok give me 2 hours, there is a very expensive disco whose ratio is like 3 women to every 1 man
and the door keeper is a friend... and i know 5 of the bartender girls!

*8 hours later*

so i hit on 10 girls... my balls hurt...
i fucked 4 of the 5 bartenders
(and got kicked in the balls by the last one... they all date... the same 2 guys...
one of them is one of the bouncer at the door that hates my guts...)
i fucked them in the bottle closet... so i even got a few shoots out of it!
the danger part was that... there were bottles that could go into your ass fairly fast...
i fucked the other 5 girls i went up to in the toillets...
they all seemed to be with their boyfriends... i assume no girl under 25 is married...
but 3 of them had rings like wedding rings or engagement or relationship rings so...

my experience may diverge from others...
i was in a safe place with plenty of friends and people i know!
half of my test subjects were previously known to me...
i knew they are promiscous and i had assumed they sort of fancied me by how they have flirted with me before!
the surprising part was actually the kick to the balls...
although that might have been cause i can only fuck 1 at the time so...
she might have fucked me as well if i had went to her 1st!

but the main reason why my experience may diverge from others is that...

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i look like this... so it might not work for everyone... when i was younger at least!


*drinks* ---
Seriously?
*IT´S LIKE THE 1ST 5 THINGS YOU DO WHEN YOU MAKE A FRIEND!
why make a friend that does not have the social skills to have a girlfriend anyway?
clearly he is stunted and immature if he doesn´t have a girlfriend or wife!

never have i ever slept with my enemy girlfriend
*drinks*

never have i ever slept with nemeis sister
*drinks* fuck she was what? 5 to 7 years... in jail?
but i´ll accept anything under 18...

never have i ever slept with an adversary´s mother
*chugs the bottle
continues to throw up...
fuck i think i need another bottle to finish this challenge!

*at a highschool class reunion
never have i ever fucked someone at this table, take one for every body you nailed...
*proceeds to drink 22 shoots
*there are 20 people at the table... half of them are dudes!
wtf dude!
hey... each hole counts and if we go by personalities there is not a single bitch in this table that doesn´t have at least 2 faces...

never have i ever cheated on my girlfriend/boyfriend with her/his best friend
*sips on a very tall glass
*everyone looks at you
*OH COME ON... ITS LIKE ONE OF THE 1ST 10 THINGS YOU DO WHEN YOU GET A GIRLFRIEND!

never have i ever...
GO FUCK YOURSELFS THIS GAME IS CLEARLY RIGGED!
PEACE... I AM OUT! ASSHOLES!

Options:
"Appease Warscared "
"Restrain Warscared "
"Stay away from Warscared "

 

[seaoflove]

One thing I dislike is that many of Holly's hookups are just a pic or 2. It feels like entire scenes are missing / left to the imagination.

Robert, Clark & Mark: She fucks 3 guys but there aren't 10 pictures between them of the sex scenes.

It would be nice if Eva goes back at some point and has another scene with Holly telling her sex stories to Ivy / Lena. Then illustrates them in a flashback.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

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Works keep progressing between art and writing. I've been focusing more on the latter, and I'm moving into the final scenes of the episode. They will tie up some important branches that will finally define the relationships between several characters, and I'm hoping I can move the plot forward to a new status quo as different plotlines get resolved.
This time I don't have any insights to share, but I want to ask for your collaboration. In one of my previous posts you mentioned you'd like to see the gang play some sort of social game, and "Never have I ever" sounds like just the thing that can work mechanicaly and be fun in this chapter's context. I'm thinking on the best way to tackle it, and what kind of questions could the player and the cast ask, especially depending on the various permutations they can have based on their development.
I'd like to ask for your ideas, to find inspiration or outright use them during this scene. So, if you have any, please write them down on the comments!

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Eva Kiss:
> Ask to some skilled writer for help - No, how dare are you!
> Ask the crowd of horny perverts on her Patreon - Yeah, it's a great idea, what can possibly go wrong?

 

[BlandChili]

One thing I dislike is that many of Holly's hookups are just a pic or 2. It feels like entire scenes are missing / left to the imagination.

Robert, Clark & Mark: She fucks 3 guys but there aren't 10 pictures between them of the sex scenes.

It would be nice if Eva goes back at some point and has another scene with Holly telling her sex stories to Ivy / Lena. Then illustrates them in a flashback.

I disagree. Holly is, despite what people like to say, not a main character. There shouldn't be shifts to third party perspectives or added "magical" context through other means such as flashbacks.

 

[Ray_D]

Eva Kiss:
> Ask to some skilled writer for help - No, how dare are you!
> Ask the crowd of horny perverts on her Patreon - Yeah, it's a great idea, what can possibly go wrong?

Evakiss: Think Geralt think, why pay a competent writer, when I can use the mob of perverts who donate to me every month.

 

[Xupuzulla]

do you think holly ever tought about big black fat cocks???

Shes the type of girl who will remember her encounter with Marcel and bit her lips while blushing.

 

[mommysboiii]

One thing I dislike is that many of Holly's hookups are just a pic or 2. It feels like entire scenes are missing / left to the imagination.

Robert, Clark & Mark: She fucks 3 guys but there aren't 10 pictures between them of the sex scenes.

It would be nice if Eva goes back at some point and has another scene with Holly telling her sex stories to Ivy / Lena. Then illustrates them in a flashback.

holly has such a slut arc I love it kinda turning into gillian

know we only need a relationship with slutty holly and soyboy ian

 

[mommysboiii]

Eva Kiss:
> Ask to some skilled writer for help - No, how dare are you!
> Ask the crowd of horny perverts on her Patreon - Yeah, it's a great idea, what can possibly go wrong?

dude I am a great writer

 

[Gicoo]

Migh as well just steal it from other VNs like Nothing is Forever.

Never have I ever got drunk playing this game.
Never have I ever bought something in an adult store.
Never have I ever used a dating app.
Never have I ever sent a nude pic to someone.
Never have I ever faked an orgasm.
Never have I ever pretended an emergency to escape a date.
Never have I ever flirted with someone just to get a free drink.
Never have I ever told someone I had a boyfriend just because I wasn't interested in them.
Never have I ever done it more than three times in the same day.
Never have I ever secretly touched someones genitals in a public place.
Never have I ever skinny dipped.
Never have I ever slept with someone on a first date.
Never have I ever cheated on someone.
Never have I ever been submissive in the bedroom.
Never have I ever let someone else control when I can orgasm.
Never have I ever cum on someones face or mouth.
Never have I ever had anal sex.
Never have I ever flashed my breasts in a public place.
Never have I ever fantasized about or had sex with someone of the same gender.
Never have I ever fantasized about sleeping with someone from this group (that I'm not in a relationship with).
Never have I ever dominated someone during sex.
Never have I ever secretly slept with someone I shouldn't have.
Never have I ever had a threesome.
Never have I ever lied today during this game.

 

[TakashiLeaked]

I genuinely, from the bottom of my heart, don't care about Cindy or minerva and what does they do or who they are with, I just want Emma and Holly, nuthin else