VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[yellowteeth]

So you're still developing the mod. Any reason why the link is removed from OP?

I've played 1500 hours of Factorio

 

[ffive]

I this point Evakiss is not even hiding who his favourite male side character is

That's no secret, we always knew it's Robert. Even Lena likes him so much she'll break up with Ian if you beat him up.

 

[Ravnen]

She said she's aiming to finish the writing by the end of the month and then once she receives the new art, ensemble the thing and deliver asap. So at some point during October or more likely November if (when) something is delayed.

ahh sorry meant 12.3 as far as I can see its available to paying patreons but not public yet..

 

[Ravnen]

I would bet money on last week of December or early January.

My bad meant 12.3 when it will be public for none paying patreons..

 

[BlandChili]

What Blurpee said.
Ashley and Eva are very friendly from their first meeting, hugging, sharing nudes, details about their boyfriends, its a typical best friends relationship.
ORS lesbian pairings are all established early on: Lenca can cuddle with Louise and watch her during sex, she can check out Ivy in their very first scene and the two of them fooled around as teenagers. She adores Hollys book and can masturbate thinking about her etc.

If there were several hints throughout the game that Lena is sexually attracted to Cindy, it would make sense, but there isn't. There isn't a line about jealousy, acknowledging Cindys beauty, worries that Axel claims her because she is attractive etc. Instead her comments and thoughts are ranging from neutrality to annoyance to condescending and spitefulness.

I suppose its possible to rush a developement that late in the game, considering that we also have Ian/Louise and Lena/Wade. But even there there were the occasional line a few chapters before about Ian/Lena acknowledging their attractiveness.
Most pairings are usually proper foreshadowed, which is why they make sense. Lena/Cindy isn't.

Iris didn't have any indications of bi-curiosity, that I can recall, until asked to take part in a lesbian threesome in GGGB.

That said, Iris was, if anything, the character most steeped in porn-logic safe for Ash. So I'm not expecting something like that will be the same case with any female characters in ORS necessarily, but I don't think any lesbian pairings should just be dismissed as a whole just because the interactions haven't happened yet.

Something not having any build-up yet doesn't mean it cannot recieve build-up soon, we don't have to jump directly to "Cindy having her tongue wiggling around inside Lena" right away. There was nothing indicating Emma's romantic interest in Ian until it came this past chapter, though you could perhaps read her feminization content as being indicative of a desire for romance sprouting in her.

 

[Prevat]

I'm not a big fan of how Eva writes and handles lesbian relationships.

 

[ffive]

There was nothing indicating Emma's romantic interest in Ian until it came this past chapter, though you could perhaps read her feminization content as being indicative of a desire for romance sprouting in her.

Speaking of Emma, i wonder if in scenario of her and Perry getting together there's going to be option for Ian (or Lena!) to play a wrecking ball.

 

[Socrambus]

Iris didn't have any indications of bi-curiosity, that I can recall, until asked to take part in a lesbian threesome in GGGB.

That said, Iris was, if anything, the character most steeped in porn-logic safe for Ash. So I'm not expecting something like that will be the same case with any female characters in ORS necessarily, but I don't think any lesbian pairings should just be dismissed as a whole just because the interactions haven'g happened yet.

Something not having any build-up yet doesn't mean it cannot recieve build-up soon, we don't have to jump directly to "Cindy having her tongue wiggling around inside Lena" right away. There was nothing indicating Emma's romantic interest in Ian until it came this past chapter, though you could perhaps read her feminization content as being indicative of a desire for romance sprouting in her.

Deep down all women are at least bi-curious and love to be dominated in bed, whether they know it or not. They just haven't found the right person or situation yet. That's an universal truth in Eva's universe.

Speaking of Emma, i wonder if in scenario of her and Perry getting together there's going to be option for Ian (or Lena!) to play a wrecking ball.

Kind of redundant existing Wade and Cindy. Also, I love Emma as much as the next guy, but making Ian go for her after seeing Perry's hairy ass and balls plowing her?. No fucking way .

 

[BlandChili]

Deep down all women are at least bi-curious and love to be dominated in bed, whether they know it or not. They just haven't found the right person or situation yet. That's an universal truth in Eva's universe.

Unfortunately. I wouldn't mind a more concrete female dom, even if Eva decided to write her character as more playful as opposed to malicious.

Speaking of Emma, i wonder if in scenario of her and Perry getting together there's going to be option for Ian (or Lena!) to play a wrecking ball.

Never say never, though Ian has to go out of his way really to facilitate the pairing so I am unsure. I wouldn't put it past Eva to make a Perry harem route just to screw with us, he gets Emma, Cherry and player-dependently Lena.

 

[Socrambus]

Unfortunately. I wouldn't mind a more concrete female dom, even if Eva decided to write her character as more playful as opposed to malicious.

Minerva seemed the easiest option but it didn't go that way. Although she only seems interested in chad Ian, maybe Ivy and/or Lena in certain paths like Ian cuck.

 

[BlandChili]

Minerva seemed the easiest option but it didn't go that way. Although she only seems interested in chad Ian, maybe Ivy and/or Lena in certain paths like Ian cuck.

The issue with Minerva is that she's ancient and while quite a few people like the mommy dom type, not everyone is into women in her age bracket. Issue with Lena is she's the playable character, when I mentioned having "a dom option" it was from the perspective that this option could be for either Ian or Lena.

Ivy could have worked but as with everything Eva seems to be gearing her in a submissive direction, at least for Ian, with how he can impress her by winning their "fight."
Can Ian retain her interest without that even?

 

[Socrambus]

Ivy could have worked but as with everything Eva seems to be gearing her in a submissive direction, at least for Ian, with how he can impress her by winning their "fight."
Can Ian retain her interest without that even?

I don't think so, but I was thinking in some scenario where she's not really interested in him but she dominates him during a threesome to assert dominance over Lena or Holly. That's why I mentioned some path similar to Ian cuck.

 

[problematic toy]

Oh my fucking God I'm so annoyed. I've spent what must be literal years now persuing the Lena X Holly path and finally, FINALLY they're admitting their feelings, they're coming out, they're going official or however you want to phrase it; and its all shown from fucking Ian's POV!

 

[FactualAligator]

Nah, wen is too busy with his jiujitsu grindset to worry about such things.

While you were all out there sucking and fucking, Wen studied the blade.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Chapter 13 Status Report

After finishing the prologue, I’ve continued making progress with writing the new chapter and working on the art. The illustrations for the next release are already in the hands of the colourist, and new backgrounds have been commissioned. I’m also working on illustrations for future releases, but right now, the focus is on finishing Seymour’s section. As for that, I think I’m over 50% done. Let me share with you some of the behind-the-scenes process:


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I'm sharing this excerpt because it’s simply a reflection on the events that took place in the last chapter. These kinds of passages are common and necessary as they provide coherence to the events and the character’s psychological and emotional response to them. In practice, it’s just a summary of the current state of the plot, but they involve a significant level of complexity. In this case, Lena reflects on her relationship with Ian and the events that took place in the last chapter. The key is to consider all the variables that need to be included and write an internal monologue that is coherent and highlights the essential points of the character’s thoughts and emotions, while avoiding excessive length or repetition. What makes it even more challenging is finding a way to weave the different segments into the same scene, allowing one reflection to lead naturally into the next, and then bringing them back together so the scene and the train of thought continue smoothly. It’s also crucial to choose the right moment to introduce these reflections, think about what needs to be reinforced, and determine how the character should react to each possible event. What I find especially challenging is that I can’t write any scene in a linear or straightforward way. I have to keep every possible outcome in mind, decide what information to provide, how to write it concisely and appropriately, and ensure all the loose ends are tied up so the scene makes sense in all its possible variations. This makes it impossible to write a scene from start to finish in one go, as my mind has to constantly cycle through parallel and interconnected possibilities. That’s why writing a section like this can take me an entire day, sometimes even longer.


In any case, I'm aiming to finish writing by the end of this month, and once the new art is delivered to me I will put this shorter update together and release it as soon as I can, while already making progress on the one to come after this one. As always, I'll keep you posted!

Update content that non-Seymour route players will recieve:

 

[BlandChili]

Did I miss something, or does v12.3.FULL/EPILOGUE actually provide almost no new content?

It wasn't meant to, supposedly. It's the final version of the alpha and beta releases of 12.3 with a bit of added dialogue.

 

[Ray_D]

Chapter 13 Status Report

After finishing the prologue, I’ve continued making progress with writing the new chapter and working on the art. The illustrations for the next release are already in the hands of the colourist, and new backgrounds have been commissioned. I’m also working on illustrations for future releases, but right now, the focus is on finishing Seymour’s section. As for that, I think I’m over 50% done. Let me share with you some of the behind-the-scenes process:


View attachment 4039386

I'm sharing this excerpt because it’s simply a reflection on the events that took place in the last chapter. These kinds of passages are common and necessary as they provide coherence to the events and the character’s psychological and emotional response to them. In practice, it’s just a summary of the current state of the plot, but they involve a significant level of complexity. In this case, Lena reflects on her relationship with Ian and the events that took place in the last chapter. The key is to consider all the variables that need to be included and write an internal monologue that is coherent and highlights the essential points of the character’s thoughts and emotions, while avoiding excessive length or repetition. What makes it even more challenging is finding a way to weave the different segments into the same scene, allowing one reflection to lead naturally into the next, and then bringing them back together so the scene and the train of thought continue smoothly. It’s also crucial to choose the right moment to introduce these reflections, think about what needs to be reinforced, and determine how the character should react to each possible event. What I find especially challenging is that I can’t write any scene in a linear or straightforward way. I have to keep every possible outcome in mind, decide what information to provide, how to write it concisely and appropriately, and ensure all the loose ends are tied up so the scene makes sense in all its possible variations. This makes it impossible to write a scene from start to finish in one go, as my mind has to constantly cycle through parallel and interconnected possibilities. That’s why writing a section like this can take me an entire day, sometimes even longer.


In any case, I'm aiming to finish writing by the end of this month, and once the new art is delivered to me I will put this shorter update together and release it as soon as I can, while already making progress on the one to come after this one. As always, I'll keep you posted!

Eva looking at players who did not decide to choose the seymour route.

 

[jimul18]

She said this Seymour update is 50% finished,zero chance it takes her 3 months to finish it....
Seems to me like this is going to be a "small" update,really curious what content is going to be there for the people who hate Seymour and dont want to do his route lmao

I think late October, early November is likely since it is essentially only one scene. As for the Dubai stuff, any extremely dark scenario is almost certainly never going to happen. It has been over 4 years and what have we got. One FFM and MFM threesome, a bit of anal, 0 DP or group stuff....sorry to disappoint but any depravity like the real life stories out of Dubai will be impossible also due to fear of getting banned on Patreon.

 

[Ray_D]

Can someone summarize ?

You: eva I did not choose the seymour route with lena, what content awaits me?
Eva: nothing.
You: what do you mean nothing and what am I supposed to do?
Eva: see you next year.
You: wait.

 

[Arata20]

You: eva I did not choose the seymour route with lena, what content awaits me?
Eva: nothing.
You: what do you mean nothing and what am I supposed to do?
Eva: see you next year.
You: wait.

Corrected.

See you in two years, summer 2026.