VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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Blurpee69

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Honestly, a little disappointed by the Lena x Ed pairing again, canceling that was honestly a change for the better in my opinion. I thought it was nice to have just a wholesome relationship that exists outside of either MC's control. That while Lena can obviously help their business, that there existed a world outside of the Red String, or that better yet there be an example of a the Red String existing and a standard that Ian and Lena could work towards in the form of Molly and Ed. But Eva either had plans to return to it, or didn't purge it sufficiently from the early game to the point that enough people complained EK gave in and put the option back in.

Good for the people that have wanted that I guess.
 
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Blurpee69 said:
Honestly, a little disappointed by the Lena x Ed pairing again, canceling that was honestly a change for the better in my opinion. I thought it was nice to have just a wholesome relationship that exists outside of either MC's control. That while Lena can obviously help their business, that there existed a world outside of the Red String, or that better yet there be an example of a the Red String existing and a standard that Ian and Lena could work towards in the form of Molly and Ed. But Eva either had plans to return to it, or didn't purge it sufficiently from the early game to the point that enough people complained EK gave in and put the option back in.

Good for the people that have wanted that I guess.
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It's an option I have very little interest in myself. Ed is just another problematic male option where Lena really needs one that is less controversial. Ed's old, fat and her employer, we already have Seymour for that category, maybe minus the BMI part.
I would enjoy playing Lena more sexually liberal, but it's difficult when all of them come with baggage and none of them are just dudes. I feel like I either have to play her as chaste or as a deviant, there is no middle ground.
 
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Man, first Seymour, then a Stan and Robert tease. And now we revive Ed from the cemetery of discarded plotlines. What's up with Lena recently?

And if you do a Ed route, you develop it from the beginning, when Ed learned about her model career, slightly pushed her boundaries as an effect of it and just got closer with Lena over the course of the cafes restoration. Wouldn't be that hard of a rewrite to be honest, but I want Eva to move forward, not trying to fix what is already done.

If its implemented in chapter 13 forward, one of them has to magically make an aggressive move on the other one and suddenly ignore Mollys presence. The latter could be solved by having her die, but that would be drastic to put it mildly.

Ideally, Lena would get a normal decent love interest aside Ian and Holly, but that wasn't possible due to Evas incomprehensible writing choices ("Stan is supposed to be a nicer option", yeah hell no).
 
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Gicoo said:
Man, first Seymour, then a Stan and Robert tease. And now we revive Ed from the cemetery of discarded plotlines. What's up with Lena recently?

And if you do a Ed route, you develop it from the beginning, when Ed learned about her model career, slightly pushed her boundaries as an effect of it and just got closer with Lena over the course of the cafes restoration. Wouldn't be that hard of a rewrite to be honest, but I want Eva to move forward, not trying to fix what is already done.

If its implemented in chapter 13 forward, one of them has to magically make an aggressive move on the other one and suddenly ignore Mollys presence. The latter could be solved by having her die, but that would be drastic to put it mildly.

Ideally, Lena would get a normal decent love interest aside Ian and Holly, but that wasn't possible due to Evas incomprehensible writing choices ("Stan is supposed to be a nicer option", yeah hell no).
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Eva put lena on hoemaxing and bad decisions.:KEK:
 
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Can anyone tell what the background in this scene is? Eva Kiss usually uses backgrounds blurred, zoomed in, and flipped during scenes. If we know what the background is maybe we can guess with who it is or maybe it's a new background.
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The art for Lena looks beautiful tho:love:
 
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fatpussy123 said:
Can anyone tell what the background in this scene is? Eva Kiss usually uses backgrounds blurred, zoomed in, and flipped during scenes. If we know what the background is maybe we can guess with who it is or maybe it's a new background.
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Seems like either some wooden wall or floor to me, depending on camera angle here. Could be a sauna or smth.
 
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Gicoo said:
Man, first Seymour, then a Stan and Robert tease. And now we revive Ed from the cemetery of discarded plotlines. What's up with Lena recently?

And if you do a Ed route, you develop it from the beginning, when Ed learned about her model career, slightly pushed her boundaries as an effect of it and just got closer with Lena over the course of the cafes restoration. Wouldn't be that hard of a rewrite to be honest, but I want Eva to move forward, not trying to fix what is already done.

If its implemented in chapter 13 forward, one of them has to magically make an aggressive move on the other one and suddenly ignore Mollys presence. The latter could be solved by having her die, but that would be drastic to put it mildly.

Ideally, Lena would get a normal decent love interest aside Ian and Holly, but that wasn't possible due to Evas incomprehensible writing choices ("Stan is supposed to be a nicer option", yeah hell no).
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I see your point and I agree, that if EvaKiss decides to bring back Ed on a table, the earlier episodes should be lightly rewritten. Lena's slutmaxxing would not make sense. Like you said making it agressive move on next chapter kind of breaks the story. And yes Molly's presence should not be ignored.

Personally me, I'd see Lena x Ed playout in these scenarios:
1) Lena having major daddy issues and getting kindness from older guy makes hell fall for him.
2) Ed getting inspired by Lena and she becomes his muse. He paints her, subscribes to her stalkfap etc.
3) Molly dies and Lena "consoles" him.

I don't see Ed as Arthur 2.0 and if Eva decides to bring him back I hope it won't be another overly creepy old man. And if she won't, I hope we would get Ed dlc ^^
 
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MisterABC said:
I see your point and I agree, that if EvaKiss decides to bring back Ed on a table, the earlier episodes should be lightly rewritten. Lena's slutmaxxing would not make sense. Like you said making it agressive move on next chapter kind of breaks the story. And yes Molly's presence should not be ignored.

Personally me, I'd see Lena x Ed playout in these scenarios:
1) Lena having major daddy issues and getting kindness from older guy makes hell fall for him.
2) Ed getting inspired by Lena and she becomes his muse. He paints her, subscribes to her stalkfap etc.
3) Molly dies and Lena "consoles" him.

I don't see Ed as Arthur 2.0 and if Eva decides to bring him back I hope it won't be another overly creepy old man. And if she won't, I hope we would get Ed dlc ^^
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4) Molly become cuckquean and Ed is free to fuck Lena whenever he wants :cool: - no drama, no jelly. Go Go Ed!
 
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3b) Lena "consoles" him about his failing business or wife stuff. Seymour helps Lena with money (because sugar daddy)>Lena helps Ed with money (because aww, sweet old ex-boss man who just lost business or wife>??>profit.
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