Ugh. Didn't play the Robert route.. cause he's Robert. But you see this with Jeremy and Holly too. At least (arguably) with Robert it's not damaging any other friendships, but you can't say the same about the other too. Really hope Eva does some rewriting on all this between now and the Final chapter 8 release. Most narrative criticisms so far have just been player preferences, but Lena's reaction here is honestly just a glaring plot-hole.
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what are the scenes in this update?
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Those are choices you can make to guide the character as you choose. Not the defined character. Though the only plausible explanation for her train-of-though reactions after some of these scenarios is that she's purposefully written as a sociopath. I'm pretty sure that wasn't Eva's intent, so there are some immersion-breaking writing flaws here. Hopefully it'll be edited after alpha.
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It ain't a bug, bud. Click on Ignore, then Rollback, then Rollback, then Reload, then Open, then Console, then BBC and so on...
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Fuck me 6:3. Really don't see Lena having sex while mom is in hospital. So Ian can make a come back.
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Yes she's damaged & should visit a therapist in future chapter.
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I'm still waiting out hope for the Catfight between Lena and Alison, you just know something's gonna happen when they meet.
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It's part of the game Mike. Try reading what Ian says then pick the options.
I understand the "it's her story" perspective and usually agree with it. But in this case, honestly, it's just really bad writing and a glaring plothole. Lena at least needs some internal dialogue early in this chapter acknowledging what she's done herself when
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From a certain point of view there is no real defined character in a game like this, because as much as the characters are made in a certain way, we also partly define them through our choices. For example, in older chapters we were able to choose whether Lena would say that her passion was writing songs, modeling, making money or just having fun.
In this kind of multiple-choice visual novel, a problem that the author can easily run into is creating paths where the characters' behaviours might feel less coherent to the reader. The wider the range of choices, the higher that risk is...
Although in Our Red String, I feel the presence of this problem significantly less than in Good Girl Gone Bad.
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Imo the reason Lena lost it with Ian-holly situation is because Holly is their mutual friend and Lena has created some kind of bond with her even if it's not romantic cause she doesn't mind when Ian sleeps with other people, yeah her reaction might be bit over the top but every character has their flows and it may be also because her history with Axel is repeating again although not similar but still close enough.
What I don't understand is why some people are so hell bent on portraying only Lena in bad light when Ian is rowing in the same boat fucking Emma and Cindy betraying his Best friends. Agree, Lena is not perfect but Ian is no saint either, he's much worse tbh.
What I don't understand is why some people are so hell bent on portraying only Lena in bad light when Ian is rowing in the same boat fucking Emma and Cindy betraying his Best friends. Agree, Lena is not perfect but Ian is no saint either, he's much worse tbh.
Really nice update, apart from the drug bug with Perry and Emma that destroys the game, but being an alpha it is expected. Plus it is an Alpha after all, but great update nonetheless!