VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[☆Jonathan Wick♤]

not sure you want to be like axel he comes off as a loser

I was not referring to the fact that Ian should have the same aggressive and manipulative personality that Axel seems to have, but to the fact that I wish Ian could at some point in the plot get to leave a strong first impression on women at the time. to see him for the first time just like Cindy and Alison did when they first saw Axel.

In addition to the fact that the vast majority of Ian's possible love interests in the game except for Holly (who has a crush on him) always tend to highlight Ian as a nerd/geeks, and how dorky, awkward and cute he usually is, In other words, they rarely perceive him as a strong, attractive and hot man with a personality and an imposing presence.

It is more until the same Ian is depressed when realizing that he cannot be compared with Axel after finding out that he is last was the ex-boyfriend of Lena.

 

[JamieSadistic]

I don't like Axel for two reasons, charisma aside
He's one of those entitled guys who never had a problem getting what he wanted.
He's also got a face like a puckered and bleached bunghole.
The entitlement is character depth so I understand it, and because it's written that way, it's supposed to be polarizing. Some like him, other's don't. I don't.
Also, I'm weird I guess because I don't really give a shit about Ian X Lena relationship. I try to make Lena completely promiscuous and then I make Ian chase after Cindy. Lena fucks everyone except Robert and Axel (Robert is kinda pathetic and Axel for the afforementioned reasons.

Anyway, I know I should use the search function, but I don't feel like it and since I'm already typing, anyone have any update information?

 

[JamieSadistic]

I was not referring to the fact that Ian should have the same aggressive and manipulative personality that Axel seems to have, but to the fact that I wish Ian could at some point in the plot get to leave a strong first impression on women at the time. to see him for the first time just like Cindy and Alison did when they first saw Axel.

In addition to the fact that the vast majority of Ian's possible love interests in the game except for Holly (who has a crush on him) always tend to highlight Ian as a nerd/geeks, and how dorky, awkward and cute he usually is, In other words, they rarely perceive him as a strong, attractive and hot man with a personality and an imposing presence.

It is more until the same Ian is depressed when realizing that he cannot be compared with Axel after finding out that he is last was the ex-boyfriend of Lena.

I believe you're going to get your wish, my friend. If we take into account the gym training and the upcoming fight tournament, I think Ian will have a chance to become quite the imposing presence if the tournament goes well. Also, I wanna fight Jeremy.

 

[jduk]

Well I think Ian and Louise could become a good couple in the future, if Eva gives us that possibility of course.

Ian and Louise idea is amazing +1

 

[jduk]

Ian doesn't have the genetics to be as alpha as Axel... Sure he can get stronger and more muscular but he won't become any taller or change his baby face lol... I think Ian can try to balance the game with his writing and artistic skills, not in pure exterior image battle... Axel is significantly taller, has stronger jaw line, hunter eyes and has a bigger dick too. However Ian is more interesting and more relatable character to the average person out there... Axel is way too ideal to be relatable, and he is kind of an asshole who is used to get what he wants easily...

 

[FugginDamaged]

Ian doesn't have the genetics to be as alpha as Axel... Sure he can get stronger and more muscular but he won't become any taller or change his baby face lol... I think Ian can try to balance the game with his writing and artistic skills, not in pure exterior image battle... Axel is significantly taller, has stronger jaw line, hunter eyes and has a bigger dick too. However Ian is more interesting and more relatable character to the average person out there... Axel is way too ideal to be relatable, and he is kind of an asshole who is used to get what he wants easily...

I think this is the big difference between them, Ian has to work with charisma, wits, and the others stats to get what he wants but Axel is used to getting what he wants so of course when he doesn't get at first his reaction is not the best (the scene at the restaurant) but he is probably working harder and sneakier to get what he wants, for example, if you go celebrate wade's birthday and decide to help wade instead of Cindy, you can see axel leave at the same time with a smile.

 

[Tierra_Azul]

Also, don't underestimate "babyfaced" men. Guys like Leonardo Di Caprio or Justin Beiber where considred the standard of male beauty during their heydays.

 

[Ninja of Death]

Also, don't underestimate "babyfaced" men. Guys like Leonardo Di Caprio or Justin Beiber where considred the standard of male beauty during their heydays.

Well, Bieber only to young teen and preteen girls...

 

[BigTyson]

I am really curious about what the Ian's next interaction with Cindy will be like? I mean in the last update she has seemingly gone full throttle with Wade because she feels guilty but can we tempt her again I wonder

 

[BlandChili]

please no more lesbian scenes, there are several that the game has.

No such thing

Game ain't complete until we have the Lena lesbian redhead harem ending!

 

[jduk]

I think this is the big difference between them, Ian has to work with charisma, wits, and the others stats to get what he wants but Axel is used to getting what he wants so of course when he doesn't get at first his reaction is not the best (the scene at the restaurant) but he is probably working harder and sneakier to get what he wants, for example, if you go celebrate wade's birthday and decide to help wade instead of Cindy, you can see axel leave at the same time with a smile.

Sneaky bastard...

 

[JamieSadistic]

I think this is the big difference between them, Ian has to work with charisma, wits, and the others stats to get what he wants but Axel is used to getting what he wants so of course when he doesn't get at first his reaction is not the best (the scene at the restaurant) but he is probably working harder and sneakier to get what he wants, for example, if you go celebrate wade's birthday and decide to help wade instead of Cindy, you can see axel leave at the same time with a smile.

and THAT is why I never choose to go after Wade. No way I'm letting that asshat anywhere near Cindy with exception of the one solo photoshoot she had with him. I betrayed my high school friend for a piece of that, so at this point, it's go big or go home.

 

[ccav999]

I feel Seymour will have highest total stat points. He's the real "Last Boss" in whole game.

 

[BigSexy57]

Can somebody explain what's the logic of picking cards for writing a book by Ian? I guess it must have a "right combination" to write the only one version of "good book" in game, and all other combinations are just "wrong" and leads to a "bad book", or what?

What are the key events (replics in dialogs) which need to be done in game to have in v0.8 the event where Lena do Jeremy? Instead of i previously get Lena x Holy x Ivy event.

Just look at how many illustrations she produces and branches she has to follow up at each update!

Curently 2 branches. No matter what a player previously was choosing in dialogs - that would just cause if a player was able too see one scene or another, or just see a scene or not see a scene. But speaking about all the influence of previosly made choices in total - in the end of v0.8 a player could actually see one of two alternative scenes:
1. drunk party event_1 with Lena x Ivy x Jeremy and his redhead gf
2. drunk party event_2 with Lena x Ivy x Holy

 

[Ninja of Death]

Can somebody explain what's the logic of picking cards for writing a book by Ian? I guess it must have a "right combination" to write the only one version of "good book" in game, and all other combinations are just "wrong" and leads to a "bad book", or what?

That would be very bad to happen. Having to pick just the right combination.

 

[lcvargas]

I feel Seymour will have highest total stat points. He's the real "Last Boss" in whole game.

He'll have a lower athletic for sure, and maybe the first ten in Charisma or Wits.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

Can somebody explain what's the logic of picking cards for writing a book by Ian? I guess it must have a "right combination" to write the only one version of "good book" in game, and all other combinations are just "wrong" and leads to a "bad book", or what?

The obvious reason is to give you the player a choice in what kind of story you want Ian to write. Combinations might matter somewhat but I think your wits stat and how much you work on the book will be the biggest factors in it being a success or not. There's also a slim possibility that if you get in good with Seymour he'll push Ian's book regardless if it's great or not.

 

[BigSexy57]

There's also a slim possibility that if you get in good with Seymour he'll push Ian's book regardless if it's great or not.

Me good with SayMore? Hmm, me hope that Ian could do nothing that good to please him. In terms of this game, where Good usually means Sex. And if Lena's "promotion actions" would be enough to make it so...

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The obvious reason is to give you the player a choice in what kind of story you want Ian to write.

The obvious reason is to give you the player a choice in what kind of story you want Ian to write.

That already happening all the time in this game. Just like the game in pool inside this game. It also provided to a player 3 variations of shots, where 2 was wrong and 1 was right. The same logic with choosing 1 Lena's "right" picture for exibition. When i see 3 cards of writing a book - something makes me think about a pool and picture for exibition.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

What? No StanxPerry? They'd be the best couple.

A sad mutual jack with bored, tired expressions on their faces and a game of ookie cookie while they're playing video-games and eating cheetos, Roy Orbison's "Only The Lonely" playing in the background, for the most depressing sex scene in video-game history.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Lol, Axel has the stats of a god... Too much imo. Charisma 9? No way... I would accept 9 in athletics but not in other aspects...

I think Eva got bedazzled by her own creation there. Sometimes two IRL stats, looks & *confidence, fool some into thinking other stats are high, especially to those of the opposite sex. Axel probably represents the male ideal in her mind, at least as far as desirability is concerned, if not moral character.

*also partially derived from looks, but not consistently.

All I know is when I'm in shape, my worst jokes are somehow magically funnier to women.