Hey, that’s the same lust stat as Perry, the infamous "sitting at home masturbating to porn all day" seven. A bit surprised, Agnes, but I’m not judging.
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
Give the old cougar some space, she probably sits at home masturbating quite a lot too
granny action for who Ian of lena
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Agnes has only made a brief appearance in the story so far, and she's not directly involved with the main plot. And that's probably a good thing. This wicked woman is only trouble. Her zodiac sign is Sagittarius.
.seymour found his match.Too old to be a cougar. She'd be a sabretooth.Give the old cougar some space, she probably sits at home masturbating quite a lot too
I agree that it's not going to happen. Until the end-of-game wrap-up summary, any scenes we see where MCs aren't there in person for the start of it will either be shown through an unexpected walk-in or through text, photos and video. That's the way it's been throughout both this and GGGB and I just don't see Eva breaking that MC POV mechanic. I personally wouldn't want her to either. It's just the way narration works, where either a story jumps to multiple viewpoints throughout, sticks to one (or in this case two) viewpoints, or has a narrator throughout the story to fill in the parts the main-perspective characters don't. Changing styles up like that throughout a story is jarring to the viewer/reader and evidence of an inexperienced author, no matter the format. (Exceptions for creative geniuses who know the rules and break them successfully for an intended effect. Eva is very good at designing erotic games and creates some of the few that I don't lose interest in due to poor art or storytelling. But I don't think she, let alone any video-game writer, is close to that level).
I have a better idea since you are so desperate you could try this at home on your pc and do it yourself
Not really. There are scenes not involving the protagonist in GGGB that are shown through the narration of the other characters of said events. I'm sure this way of portrayal will also be used here. What I'm hoping is Eva to deviate a little bit with this formula on some major events, to show the events from the perspective of other characters. One way the author can do this is by having the protagonist be really worried of the current state of a particular individual and would be wondering what is happening to that individual right now. And, as if answering the protagonist, the game shows what is happening to that individual with the narrator maybe talking about the scene unfolding as well as talking about the protagonist and how this could affect them.
When do those scenes happen? The only instances I remember dealing with material outside of Ashley's perspective is when people use their phones to show her videos of others without them being aware.
But the narrators are Ian and Lena. It's a story with two first-person narrators, and there's no external third-person narrator to talk about a scene unfolding elsewhere. So that would involve completely changing the rules of how the story's told halfway through.
An example would be if you decide to corrupt Iris with his dad, Arthur. During sex, he tells Ashley how he slowly made Iris "open up" with him and how they are now fucking without constraints. And the scene didn't feel out of place because it connects with the current event of the game.
I don't remember that happening in GGGB, except for in the summary at the end, which is Kosher to writing standards in some good film, books, games, ect. If it did happen at some other points, though I don't remember any, I'd chalk it up to Eva's inexperience as a writer at that point. Now where would this ORS narrator come from who hasn't said a word from Chapter 1 to Chapter 9 so far? If they were there the whole time, fine. As is, what you're suggesting doesn't sound like quality writing standards, which is what I explained in my post.
That is different from what you expressed previously. It's still Ashley's perspective, hearing Arthur recount the story. If pics/vid were used, it would also be from Ashley's imagination. Story still told by her POV.
BlandChili asked for a scene where other characters from GGGB were narrating an event that occurred.
And like I said, I was hoping that Eva would deviate a little from the formula, not just having videos showing the scenes or people narrating the events that occurred but actually having perspective from those other characters. I have even given example where it can work in which the narration wouldn't feel random or out of place given that it is directly tied to the events prior of the scene.
Even if Ashley was there to listen to Arthur, it was still Arthur's perspective that was shown given how the scene showed Arthur and Iris having sex, even having Iris's dialogue prop up to the scene. Because it would be very underwhelming if, for example, the AxelxCindy scenes would only be shown through videos. I guess it would suffice if Cindy narrates the events to Ian, similar to how Arthur narrated the events to Ashley, maybe having Cindy express how she fucked up and the like. It could also happen with Axel bragging about what happened. What is ideal, however, is if we get to see the events in real time and this allows for events in which the protagonists are not in the know but the players get to see them. This adds more dynamic to the characters and narration would not be constraint with just having other characters recounting the events (it would also fuel the cheating kink because the protagonists are not aware).
