VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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PrinceRV

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Gicoo said:
Lena: Curios how the Axel NTR route plays out. If Lena and Ian aren't sleeping around with others, that route can be deliciously devastating for Ian. It isn't that impressive if Lena fools around with half a dozen guys, but if she is not on stalkfap and an intellectual musician, losing to Axel is even more powerful.

Cindy: The only spicy route in the whole game, really. While Wade is so purposely irrelevant (and may just end up as pro gamer in his own little world), I wonder how the rest of the characters react if Ian and her go official.

Holly: Fooling around with naive Holly while having Alison or Emma at the same time is neat. It was adorable to have a vanilla date with boardgames and sharing a beer, while sexting with Emma behind her back. Or her sending pics while Ian was fucking Alison. Having her as Ians officially tidy girlfriend while fooling around with other girls could be hilarious. Though I assume Emma ends her fling with Ian in this case, just as Alison did.

Mikes route and Lena potentially already impregnated by him, if only to see Gillians (assumable his girlfriend) reaction. Or Ians if he finds out that Mike stole both of his women.

I wonder if Gillian becomes a late game choice if Ian is still hung up on her. Maybe she doubles down or Ian is desperate enough to crawl beg to her. It could go in every direction, really.

Alison: Being impregnated can end up tantalizing, especially when she isn't the first choice and Ian went for Cindy or Lena. Opens up a lot of potential for catfights and claiming ownership. I never got the whole Alison is secretly a yandere just because she is passive agressive and condescending, but her character is so stale and boring, it would heat things up, which is why I'd be all for it.

Ivy: It won't happen, but purifying (opposite of corruption in this context) her in a prude girl and seeing her in a wedding dress happily married with Ian would be wonderful (a bit like the Jack ending in GGGB). Otherwise I expect her to be a reward for chad Ian in the endgame.

Minerva: Curious if the affair lasts even if Ian has a girlfriend. Especially if its Holly, who Minerva actually likes. Also, the route seems to go two ways, either putting her in her place or being nicer to her and being a bit more of a bottom.
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Thank you for such a detailed response. Looks like you're quite a psychologist, since you're mostly focused on complicated relationships, conflicting emotions, breaking social rules, and not on fetishes. It's much more fun to get into characters' heads and not just focus on their clothes and body parts. Mad respect.

What are your thoughts about Axel route? Any interesting ideas about future scenes? Specific scenes or situations? "Collaborations" with other characters like Billy, Seymour, Ivy, Cherry? We got a few hints that there's going to be scenes with Alex trying to steal Cindy, what about the others?
 
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What are your thoughts about Axel route? Any interesting ideas about future scenes? Specific scenes or situations? "Collaborations" with other characters like Billy, Seymour, Ivy, Cherry?
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Like all routes, the Axel path has to solve the Seymour issue, an issue that threatens every single relationship of Lenas. While Seymour and Axel are most likely to colaborate and support each other, it is still iffy for Axel to share. I wonder if there is a chance to have a low key evil vs evil scenario if submissive (or very sly) Lena pleads one of them to get rid of the other. But if Seymour is content with just watching like in the photo shoot, Axel may be cool with some older patron occasionally supervising them, until Axel takes over Seymours place in a few decades. May also depend if the Seymour is Lenas father theory is true. Or if Seymour and Axel have a closer relationship than suggested (currently Seymour just seem to met him by chance and Axel is just making useage of a professional business relationship). Finally, we don't know what Seymours endgame is.
Highlights of the Axel route should be an utterly devastated, cucked Ian. If it is combined with other loser flags (publishing a shit book, working as a delivery boy, still hung on on Gillian, jerking of to Jeremy/Allison and underperforming in the threesome), I would cheerish a return of GGGBs cucking as portraited with Eric and even the return of suicides. Suicide is a feature EvaKiss should consider implementing in the game once again. Currently leading the deadpool is Lenas father, then Molly, and next the young bachelors Stan, Perry, Wade and finally Ian.

In regards to future scenes in general, the current affairs could be used as tools for the characters to get back at their rivals. Ivy and Lena can make fun of Minerva, but if their are interested in Ian and if he has an affair with Minerva, that can come back to bite Lena and Ivy in the ass. Or Lena being dismissive in that one single interaction with Cindy can gain some meaning if the two of them compete for Ians favor.

I have no idea what Billy is supposed to be. Is he meant to be some Tyrone with rap videos and pool parties or have bit more class? Could he stand up to Seymour and be another way for Lena to earn money, will he open up the stalkfap-webcam-pornstar route just like in GGGB or is he a deadend?

Cherry became uninteresting after her reveal of being the reason for Lenas breakup. There is no sign of her returning to Axel, no possibility of cheating Lena with Ian or another threesome. She can develop something with Perry, which likely results in a beta pairing like Perry/Emma and they highlight the painting gallery a bit like with GGGBs Dave to squeeze in the ongoing theme of the game, but there is little chemistry with Ian, she is too much of a side character and no ones first choice. She wasn't to Axel, isn't even that close of a friend to Allison (no rivalry either), and Perry has a safer choice with Emma. Though it is hilarious how Cherry has such a low esteem that Perry of all people can score with her.

I know people are screaming for more Ivy scenes, but she is designed to be that nearly unobtainable late game reward for Jeremy and Ian. Getting her in the early game would take away too much of the challenge and devalue her.
 
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Gicoo said:
I know people are screaming for more Ivy scenes, but she is designed to be that nearly unobtainable late game reward for Jeremy and Ian. Getting her in the early game would take away too much of the challenge and devalue her.
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Early? Aren't we finishing the first half of the story this year? I have a feeling that this game is not much about getting girls, but keeping them close. It looks like we're getting 10 chapters of cheating, corruption and others challenges to good girls and boys' relationships.
 
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PrinceRV said:
Hey everyone! What a lovely community you have here. I'm just a littled bored and very excited about the future update of ORS, so please share your predictions and hopes about future scenes. What would you like to see? Which kinks/fetishes you would really enjoy to experience in this game? In what scenes? Let's chat if you're interested!
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What I'm most interested in seeing:
1. Holly's path. More precisely, all his options. I want to see the difference between Ian/Holly and Ivy teaching Holly.
2. Ian/Cindy. A further development of Ian/Cindy/Wade love triangle problem.
3. How Lena will deal with Seymour's blackmail if she refused him.
4. Development of the eskimo brothers path. Threesome Ian / Emma / Jeremy.
5. Ivy sex scene with a guy.

Ravenboy said:
I have this crazy idea, which may sound really perverted and frankly - could be too much for this forum (hopefully mods won't ban me for saying this) - but I would really like to see Ivy have sex with a guy. Anyone with a penis really. And that penis would go into her vagina.
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Episode 12. Eva Kiss status report #20.
I heard your wishes and in the next Episode Ivy will finally get a sex scene. A penis will enter her vagina. To do this, I added a new character to the game, which you already know a lot. Meet Jasmine from GGGB. :KEK:
 
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Firraxa said:
Is 25 november is a late novemer, and is 15 December is start of Desemer?
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Me: debating whether its glass half full or half empty
Also me: Its past Nov 16, therefor closer to the end of 30. Wheres the update Eva? REEEEE
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Alright boys seen you on Dec 1, 12:00am and 1 second to see the conclusion of "could be out by the end of November/start of December"
 
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Pede rasta 1 said:
Does anyone know how to open the option that Lena looks like a bunny for Mike?
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Lena needs Mike to ask to stay, which won't happen if she is with Ian. Later, she has to buy the costume (or given from Robert, no idea if that works) and has to ask Mike to take her luggage.
 
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Hi everyone, this will be the last status report before Chapter's 10 release.
Finally, the writing is all but done. All that's left is finishing up one last scene, and then play-testing and revising the text. As I mentioned before, this will be the most content-packed update to date, surpassing Chapter's 7 script, the longest so far, by more than 10.000 lines. Of course, the length of each individual play through will depend on previous choices, and you can't access all the content in a single run, but there should be plenty of content for those who like to replay the game and experience all the different paths.
This coming week I will also finish all the illustrations and assets. I'm waiting on my colorist to send me one last batch to edit. This chapter has 125 new, full screen illustrations. Adding up all possible variations and cosmetic add-ons, there's +500 new images, not counting UI elements or character sprites. Oh, and also there's 4 new music tracks to score lewd and action scenes.
I'm still hesitant to give a definitive release date, since I'm not entirely sure how long it'll take so put everything together and make sure the game works as intended. I'm aching to release the new chapter, so I'll do it as soon as it's ready. I don't want to have it completed and waiting because I set a conservative date, or to be forced to publish it before it's polished because I was too eager and compromised to a date that's too soon. If everything goes smoothly, the Alpha should be ready during this next weekend, and if it doesn't, my hope is to launch December 1st at the latest.
I'll keep you posted on the process during this week; this is the last status update but I want to post several teasers as a countdown for the Alpha release. We're almost ready!
 
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Hi everyone, this will be the last status report before Chapter's 10 release.
Finally, the writing is all but done. All that's left is finishing up one last scene, and then play-testing and revising the text. As I mentioned before, this will be the most content-packed update to date, surpassing Chapter's 7 script, the longest so far, by more than 10.000 lines. Of course, the length of each individual play through will depend on previous choices, and you can't access all the content in a single run, but there should be plenty of content for those who like to replay the game and experience all the different paths.
This coming week I will also finish all the illustrations and assets. I'm waiting on my colorist to send me one last batch to edit. This chapter has 125 new, full screen illustrations. Adding up all possible variations and cosmetic add-ons, there's +500 new images, not counting UI elements or character sprites. Oh, and also there's 4 new music tracks to score lewd and action scenes.
I'm still hesitant to give a definitive release date, since I'm not entirely sure how long it'll take so put everything together and make sure the game works as intended. I'm aching to release the new chapter, so I'll do it as soon as it's ready. I don't want to have it completed and waiting because I set a conservative date, or to be forced to publish it before it's polished because I was too eager and compromised to a date that's too soon. If everything goes smoothly, the Alpha should be ready during this next weekend, and if it doesn't, my hope is to launch December 1st at the latest.
I'll keep you posted on the process during this week; this is the last status update but I want to post several teasers as a countdown for the Alpha release. We're almost ready!
Hi everyone, this will be the last status report before Chapter's 10 release.
Finally, the writing is all but done. All that's left is finishing up one last scene, and then play-testing and revising the text. As I mentioned before, this will be the most content-packed update to date, surpassing Chapter's 7 script, the longest so far, by more than 10.000 lines. Of course, the length of each individual play through will depend on previous choices, and you can't access all the content in a single run, but there should be plenty of content for those who like to replay the game and experience all the different paths.
This coming week I will also finish all the illustrations and assets. I'm waiting on my colorist to send me one last batch to edit. This chapter has 125 new, full screen illustrations. Adding up all possible variations and cosmetic add-ons, there's +500 new images, not counting UI elements or character sprites. Oh, and also there's 4 new music tracks to score lewd and action scenes.
I'm still hesitant to give a definitive release date, since I'm not entirely sure how long it'll take so put everything together and make sure the game works as intended. I'm aching to release the new chapter, so I'll do it as soon as it's ready. I don't want to have it completed and waiting because I set a conservative date, or to be forced to publish it before it's polished because I was too eager and compromised to a date that's too soon. If everything goes smoothly, the Alpha should be ready during this next weekend, and if it doesn't, my hope is to launch December 1st at the latest.
I'll keep you posted on the process during this week; this is the last status update but I want to post several teasers as a countdown for the Alpha release. We're almost ready!
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Ladies and gentlemen...we made it! It's been a hell of long, hard, mad year, but here we are.
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Are there heroes who are expected to upload the alpha or beta releases? I would pay 5€ for chapter 10, but 10-20€ for a single chapter is a bit of a tall order.
 
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