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Yeah like the time when I accurately predicted Chapter 11 release. Y'all cried your eyes out when I said it will be late November/early December release.you have the wildest takes mate
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Yeah like the time when I accurately predicted Chapter 11 release. Y'all cried your eyes out when I said it will be late November/early December release.you have the wildest takes mate
OH NO!True, but they have a point about the consistency being gone. We are in a third year currently of the 5+ months development c
Yeah, 6+ months is a new norm now. Get used to it.
This game getting abandoned would be a tragedy like Demon BoyI'm not saying it will; the update should be around the corner. I'm just replying to the other person saying it would take another 2 or 3 months, which would be insane wait time. Honestly, the next "weekly update" should be announcing the release of the game... I hope...
Don't want to see this game abandoned.
ask eva if we will have pregnancy ending or no but I am sure will have because many time in sex ask you if you want raw or with comIs this have pregnancy? ending or whatever...
Most likely will have; both judging by the previous game and the fact that one of the side character's story is heavily focused around the male main character cumming inside her.Is this have pregnancy? ending or whatever...
Calling Holly a Mary Sue is a major disservice to how terrible Mary Sues/Gary Stus are. Holly got cucked, couldn't pole dance perfectly on first try, doesn't have Ivy worshipping her feet, doesn't make Ian and/or Lena fall in love with her on first sight, doesn't create a perfect second book immediately after the first, etc.Holly is a big mary sue so im not surprised shes Evakiss favourite or self insert.
The perfect writer girl whos cute but humble,who has fans who love her,the awkward girl that somehow becomes a friend with the two MCs because fuck logic.
How is it illogical? Hollys awkwardness makes it less likely that she gets partners, true, but both Ian and Lena can muster up a solid reasons why they bother to hang out with her.the awkward girl that somehow becomes a friend with the two MCs because fuck logic.
She literally overcomes most of your points and we are only 10 chapters in,lmaoCalling Holly a Mary Sue is a major disservice to how terrible Mary Sues/Gary Stus are. Holly got cucked, couldn't pole dance perfectly on first try, doesn't have Ivy worshipping her feet, doesn't make Ian and/or Lena fall in love with her on first sight, doesn't create a perfect second book immediately after the first, etc.
Not exactly a good Mary Sue material, is she?
Overcoming shortcomings is character development, something Mary Sue explicitly lacks because she's perfect from get-go.She literally overcomes most of your points and we are only 10 chapters in,lmao
Furthermore, Holly still has several more shortcomings to overcome. Her confidence is building in herself, but she still isn't near Lena or Ivy whom she is trying to emulate as an example. She will still wilt under sufficient scrutiny, rather than stand up for herself.Overcoming shortcomings is character development, something Mary Sue explicitly lacks because she's perfect from get-go.
sigh* as much as I hate fanfic'ing story ideas before any chance is present, here is my take.Ok back to Holly being a slut, when do you think she'll hook up with the bouncer? I give it 2 chapters.
Unrelated but, what was the deal with the bouncer in that scene with Lena and Holly? Do we find out why he didn't let her in initially.sigh* as much as I hate fanfic'ing story ideas before any chance is present, here is my take.
Holly follows Lena/Ivy's sluttiness nature. L/I asks whats going on in Holly's life/any boyfriend right now? Something something me and Ivy likes black guys...Holly says "I want to experiment, know any black guy besides the one pump chump?", "Hey, what about that bouncer you seem to talk to at the club?" Something something profit.
Eh, I wanna say anything related to Marcel (the bouncer) is gonna be towards the end of the game. He doesn't seem like an important character 10 chapters into the game and is just there for being an NPC. I wish but I'm not holding my breath.
Man...you know what makes meUnrelated but, what was the deal with the bouncer in that scene with Lena and Holly? Do we find out why he didn't let her in initially.