VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[MF_DOOM]

And again, no one shovelled them eggs down your throat.

It would take a special kind of stoopid to keep going back to a restaurant with a shitty Chef don’t you think?

Unless of course you just like the attention being a Karen brings you.

But the thing is, I didnt say the whole plate is full of shit, I said originally if she will keep adding drama it will end up being sub par.
It's just like cooking eggs Benedict, slightly overcooked is ok, but if you cook it some more it's just a boiled egg and it's not worth eating anymore and thats what I dont want.
I love the game overall, some parts of it are better, some worse and if she keeps adding more crap to it, like obvious unnecessary drama, It's going to turn into shit.

 

[KristopheH]

Eva never claimed to be a Rowling or a Shakespeare but if you think you can write, code and draw better then go for it.

Eva is a better writer than Rowling. Her side characters don't all have racist names, for one thing.

I love the game overall

I find that hard to believe, since it seems like every one of your posts is either whining about the game or simping for Seymour

 

[SerHawkes]

Eva is a better writer than Rowling.

Doubtful, given how the HP series were compelling and intriguing, where as EK has turned into a over dramatic/fetish dev. The current story for ORS is below average and isn't that intriguing or eye catching. It's constant drama, drama, fetish, lack of content for a girl ten chapters fucking in, DRAMA, DRAMA, cuck content, small black cock fetishists, DRAMMMMMMMMMAAAAAA...

Besides, there isn't anything against complaining about a game that one may still enjoy parts of. No shame in that.

 

[KristopheH]

the HP series were compelling and intriguing

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Eva is a better writer than Rowling. Her side characters don't all have racist names, for one thing.

> Racist names.

 

[kolram]

You both noticeably care about what each other is saying. Don't you guys get tired of the bickering?

I think “care” might be putting it a bit strong. I mean does one really “care”about nails on a chalkboard?

Or Tinnitus?

 

[SerHawkes]

> Racist names.
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Harry Potter
Hermione Granger
Ronald Weasley
Luna Lovegood
Albus Dumbledor...

-Que this post getting flagged and taken down for CLEARLY 'racist' names-



Backin on topic...

Gotta set the tone for this relationship.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Harry Potter
Hermione Granger
Ronald Weasley
Luna Lovegood
Albus Dumbledor...

-Que this post getting flagged and taken down for CLEARLY 'racist' names-



Backin on topic...
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Gotta set the tone for this relationship.

Back on topic:I have a bad feeling that there will be little or no content with Emma in Ep 11.
Usually her scenes skip one episode, last episode we had Ian/Emma and this episode will focus on Holly.

 

[SerHawkes]

Back on topic:I have a bad feeling that there will be little or no content with Emma in Ep 11.
Usually her scenes skip one episode, last episode we had Ian/Emma and this episode will focus on Holly.

Maybe... there is the possible threesome that Emma may be part of. But solo wise, might be right.

 

[Abazzaba]

Harry Potter
Hermione Granger
Ronald Weasley
Luna Lovegood
Albus Dumbledor...

The only Chinese character in the series is 1 step away from being literally Ching Chong

 

[kolram]

The only Chinese character in the series is 1 step away from being literally Ching Chong

Chang is a Korean surname , Cho as a first name not so much although it is used as a female name in Japan.

If we are going to talk about racism best not to assume that any oriental character is Chinese by default.

 

[JoeSte91]

The only Chinese character in the series is 1 step away from being literally Ching Chong

 

[MF_DOOM]

Eva is a better writer than Rowling. Her side characters don't all have racist names, for one thing.

I find that hard to believe, since it seems like every one of your posts is either whining about the game or simping for Seymour

Racist names? LOL

Anyway...I love this game because it has a story and a good art style(in my opinion).
Unlike most porn VN's it's fresh and It's not about some boy with a landlady or a hot roommate or generic shit like that.
Does it have flaws? Sure. Is it a little bit of an after school special? Yes.
And, this game will always have a special place in my heart because it's the first good VN I played and thanks to it I discovered some other good VNs

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Maybe... there is the possible threesome that Emma may be part of. But solo wise, might be right.

For now I'm sure about two possibilities:
Ian/Lena/Emma MFF.
And Ian/Emma/Jeremy MFM for eskimo bros route.

 

[WatsonJohn]

Robert and Louise need some massive development. They are so uninteresting and irrelevant to the narrative that they can disappear and the story would flow just fine. I dunno, make a surprise reveal that Robert secretly pegs Seymour every weekend and actually has more power than what he likes to reveal. Maybe him being insecure and needy is just an act for his masterplan. He's just so fucking bland that a slice of white bread being eaten by Lena is more interesting than her eating him.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Louise need some massive development

Louis already got a massive "development"; Have you seen Jeremy's big [REDACTED] cock?

 

[JoeSte91]

Louis already got a massive "development"; Have you seen Jeremy's big [REDACTED] cock?

I'd be down for a mod that puts a black bar over Jeremy's cock every time it's on screen.

I dunno, make a surprise reveal that Robert secretly pegs Seymour every weekend and actually has more power than what he likes to reveal. Maybe him being insecure and needy is just an act for his masterplan.

On the one hand, Robert pretty much serves his purpose as an early game fuck boy for some easy sex scenes, and I think it's natural that he gets overshadowed once real villains begin to take stage.

On the other though, having Lena's job security and success depend on fucking Robert to keep her job that comes back to reward/bite her, is such an hilariously scummy brick joke that I want it.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Robert and Louise need some massive development. They are so uninteresting and irrelevant to the narrative that they can disappear and the story would flow just fine. I dunno, make a surprise reveal that Robert secretly pegs Seymour every weekend and actually has more power than what he likes to reveal. Maybe him being insecure and needy is just an act for his masterplan. He's just so fucking bland that a slice of white bread being eaten by Lena is more interesting than her eating him.

Robert is definitely the most irrelevant character in the game, even Eva said something about moving along and leaving him behind.

 

[BloodyMares]

Robert and Louise need some massive development. They are so uninteresting and irrelevant to the narrative that they can disappear and the story would flow just fine. I dunno, make a surprise reveal that Robert secretly pegs Seymour every weekend and actually has more power than what he likes to reveal. Maybe him being insecure and needy is just an act for his masterplan. He's just so fucking bland that a slice of white bread being eaten by Lena is more interesting than her eating him.

Sad thing is, Louise didn't start this way and had potential to be an interesting character. Or at least a character you can like even if she can be boring / occasionally moody. But right now she's completely insufferable. I was hoping they could be good friends but it seems like she's destined to be a pathetic ever-whining simp-girl with only purpose is to tempt Lena into dominating and breaking her completely. And it's not like Louise doesn't have a ground to stand on either. Her simping is a bit ridiculous but she's completely right in pointing out that Lena always ignores her, if they rarely hang out, it's always with Ivy also being present there. Like, girl, you know your friends can't stand each other, why are you always tempting fate by bringing them into the same room. Is it so hard to dedicate at least one day to have a wholesome day with Louise and maybe some other person (who is not Ivy or Stan)?

 

[JohnnyKiss]

I'd be down for a mod that puts a black bar over Jeremy's cock every time it's on screen

I agree.

Something like this.