- Sep 28, 2019
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The author initially wanted to move straight to Billy's event, but then those who didn't choose Billy would get the same as those who didn't choose Seymour. NothingI understand this is alpha, but man it felt like there were a lot of unfinished scenes. Scenes would either start or stop in weird places, some conversations felt really stilted. I don't know if that's a programming error, or if EK was really rushing and just... didn't complete the scenes. The Ian Cuck route is a perfect example of what I'm talking about. Lena is thinking to herself how she has Ian wrapped around her finger, hard cut to him eating her ass, and then it just kind of skips to the next day. Like... there was some series time skips there. In fact almost all the sex scenes don't show the normal aftercare (cuddling) EK usually puts in.
Also, this is the first time since the beginning that I'm looking more forward to an Ian section than a Lena section. I didn't particularly care about the Seymour trip, I don't particularly care about Billy's event (although it may have potential), and I'm incredibly disappointed that the slutty Holly scene was done completely independent from Lena. In fact the only two scenes so far that were interesting was Jeremy's and the Throuple. Robert actually had an interesting one, but no one cares about Robert so... eh?
Meanwhile Ian has several potentially fun interactions with Allison / Cherry / Emma and even Cindy. Plus we're most likely to see the fallout of Wade and Perry drama from Ian's perspective.