VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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prpa said:
He may be a little prick yes, but i don't see how he can be worse than Seymour, especially if you play LenaxIan, after Lena rejects him, he intentionally fucks her every job opportunity, wants to buy coffee shop so he can force her to whore herself for him, etc., Seymour is just evil.
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Hi and not in this theatre, chummer!:)
Even on my IanxLena playthrough, she has a great working relationship with Seymour, impressed him early and what happens in your playthrough does not happen in mine. He even helps out Lena with health care bills and Ed/Molly´s Cafe, something he absolutely does not have to do and would not cross the mind of someone truly gone.

And that is one reason the game is so good. We have options and the story plays out quite differently depending on our choices. For instance, Perry can become someone we want to strangle at earliest opportunity or a loyal good friend, if we make the effort to help him with either Cherry or Emma.
 
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Turret said:
Hi and not in this theatre, chummer!:)
Even on my IanxLena playthrough, she has a great working relationship with Seymour, impressed him early and what happens in your playthrough does not happen in mine. He even helps out Lena with health care bills and Ed/Molly´s Cafe, something he absolutely does not have to do and would not cross the mind of someone truly gone.

And that is one reason the game is so good. We have options and the story plays out quite differently depending on our choices. For instance, Perry can become someone we want to strangle at earliest opportunity or a loyal good friend, if we make the effort to help him with either Cherry or Emma.
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Don't know what to tell you, everything still happens regardless if they have working relationship or not, he still blacklisted her, got her fired, etc., she just doesn't know about it, he still have ulterior motives and is still the same evil piece of shit.
 
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prpa said:
He may be a little prick, but i don't see how he can be worse than Seymour, especially if you play LenaxIan, after Lena rejects him, he intentionally fucks her every job opportunity, gets her fired, blackmails her, etc., so he can force her to whore herself for him, Seymour is just evil.
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Turret said:
Hi and not in this theatre, chummer!:)
Even on my IanxLena playthrough, she has a great working relationship with Seymour, impressed him early and what happens in your playthrough does not happen in mine. He even helps out Lena with health care bills and Ed/Molly´s Cafe, something he absolutely does not have to do and would not cross the mind of someone truly gone.

And that is one reason the game is so good. We have options and the story plays out quite differently depending on our choices. For instance, Perry can become someone we want to strangle at earliest opportunity or a loyal good friend, if we make the effort to help him with either Cherry or Emma.
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Seymour fucks Lena's job way before contacting her for the contract dinner. It doesn't matter if Lena impressed Seymour or not. The helping part only happens if Lena signed the contract.
 
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SearingFive said:
Seymour fucks Lena's job way before contacting her for the contract dinner. It doesn't matter if Lena impressed Seymour or not. The helping part only happens if Lena signed the contract.
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You are right, he tried to do everything in his power to ensure she would be dependant on him and his money.

He can act all sweet and gentlemanly as he wishes after that (which is all an act anyways), he is still horrible excuse for a human being.
 
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dolfe67 said:
Yes and your answer was "merely told so and barely see it onscreen" so that means you need further (visual) proof she's a slut
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No, it doesn't. Its clear from the text alone that Ivy is the biggest slut. That it isn't shown ingame could be a flaw, but its not relevant to the topic I responded to.
 
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A couple of mistakes / little bugs I noticed in Chap. 13 (or the end of Chap. 12):

In Perry's parents' beach house, when Ian goes back to his room and leaves Lena and Wade alone downstairs. No matter which previous choice ('Yes', he wants to go to sleep, or 'No', he doesn't), he ends up going to the room ('No' leading to Lena telling him to go). I noticed that, after that, while he's going upstairs and getting the choice to spy on Perry and Emma, the background doesn't change, so you keep seeing Lena and Wade when you should be seeing a flight of stairs and perhaps the door to Perry and Emma's room. So Ian moves around with Lena and Wade in the background, and they only disappear when Ian gets into his room.

LENA (to EMMA): "[...] I already told you my reasons... Wich reminds me..."
'Wich' should be 'Which'.
 
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Ivy is the biggest slut supposedly, but I learned that people's words means nothing, actions is what truly matters, you actions speak louder than words... So, her sluttiness should be aimed at Ian/Lena or with another character present, I have no interest in seeing scenes in which lis fuck unimportant characters.
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She was trying to make Lena feel better!
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Yes.
varpep said:
Jesus dined with prostitutes...
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irrelevant to the game.
 
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Gicoo said:
No, it doesn't. Its clear from the text alone that Ivy is the biggest slut. That it isn't shown ingame could be a flaw, but its not relevant to the topic I responded to.
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You are absolutelly wrong - Lena is the biggest slut/whore of all! Ivy may also be a slut/whore but she will at best be on second place,the first place it's for Lena who only needed to take Ivy's advice about Stalkfap and trying to have fun instead been in another relationship and then you can see how quickly Lena start to surpass Ivy that also shows Lena how impressed and proud of her she is.
Here are just a few examples: Lena decide to have fun with Robert and on next day even Louise says to her that she is out of control because she just slept with one guy while need to go on a date with another(Ian); Lena shows interest to Mike and then she happens sometimes to preffer call him then Robert while still having Robert on a leash knowing he loves her; after going to Axel's apartment for the photoshoot she decide to let him kiss her and then fuck her; Seeing Jeremy alone in Louise's room she decide to take that oportunity to surprise Jeremy and have fun with him,first sucking him and then asking him to fuck her; at Ivy's birthday party she even blow Mark in the toilets and a bit later she let him shoot her with his camera while he fucks her.... and all of that are only a small portion of all the time Lena's been acting like the biggest slut/whore :devilish:

Louise: Lena you are out of control
Ivy: You slut,you fucked him
Lena: Ivy was right,i'm definitely a size queen
 
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LoveWhores said:
You are absolutelly wrong - Lena is the biggest slut/whore of all! Ivy may also be a slut/whore but she will at best be on second place,the first place it's for Lena who only needed to take Ivy's advice about Stalkfap and trying to have fun instead been in another relationship and then you can see how quickly Lena start to surpass Ivy that also shows Lena how impressed and proud of her she is.
Here are just a few examples: Lena decide to have fun with Robert and on next day even Louise says to her that she is out of control because she just slept with one guy while need to go on a date with another(Ian); Lena shows interest to Mike and then she happens sometimes to preffer call him then Robert while still having Robert on a leash knowing he loves her; after going to Axel's apartment for the photoshoot she decide to let him kiss her and then fuck her; Seeing Jeremy alone in Louise's room she decide to take that oportunity to surprise Jeremy and have fun with him,first sucking him and then asking him to fuck her; at Ivy's birthday party she even blow Mark in the toilets and a bit later she let him shoot her with his camera while he fucks her.... and all of that are only a small portion of all the time Lena's been acting like the biggest slut/whore :devilish:

Louise: Lena you are out of control
Ivy: You slut,you fucked him
Lena: Ivy was right,i'm definitely a size queen
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Lena was definitely wild in college... Affair with professor, abortion.(n):cautious::HideThePain::FacePalm:
 
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Hungover00 said:
Abortion? I'm pretty sure I asked that during Never Have I Ever and no one responded. Is there some specific trigger for that?
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Yes, although I remember someone mentioned that you should pick up lust choices. In my bad girl route, I haven't done the beach part yet, so I'm not sure which answers/choices you have to specifically choose.
 
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